Unit1TeenagerLife

單元話題滿分范文必背

一、建議信

1.（2023春糊北?高一荊州中學(xué)校聯(lián)考期中）假定你是李華，上周你收到了英國朋友Mike的郵件。他剛剛

進(jìn)入高中，在學(xué)習(xí)和生活中遇到了很多困難和壓力，希望你能給他建議。請你給他回一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

1.學(xué)習(xí)和生活方面的建議；

2.安慰和鼓勵。

注意：

1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；

2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

DearMike,

Yoursincerely,

LiHua

【答案】DearMike,

Howisitgoing?Learningfromyourmailthatyouarestressedoutintheseniorhighschool,I'mwritingto

giveyousomesuggestions.

Ifsquitenormaltofeeldepressedwhenyoubeginthenewlifeintheseniorhighschool.Themostimportant

thingistobepositiveandoptimistic.Thedifficultiesinlearningandtroublesinlifewillgoawayifyouare

confidentandbraveenough.Inaddition,takinganactivepartintheextracurricularactivitiesisalsohelpful.You

canplayfootball,jogorjointhemusicclub.Theseactivitiesarenotonlygoodforyourphysicalandmental

health,butalsoofferyouthechancetomakenewfriends.Lastbutnotleast,don'thesitatetoaskforhelpwhen

youareintrouble.

Nothingistoodifficultforastrongmind.Ibelieveyoucanquicklyadjusttoyourseniorhighschoollife.

Hopetheadviceabovemightbeofhelp.Lookingforwardtoyourgoodnews.

Yoursincerely,

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給英國朋友Mike回一封郵件，就他進(jìn)入高中后在學(xué)習(xí)和生

活中遇到的困難和壓力給他建議。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

建議：suggestion一advice

止匕夕卜：inaddition一additionally

重要的：importantTsignificant

適應(yīng)：adjustto一adaptto

2.句式拓展

陳述句變倒裝句

原句：Theseactivitiesarenotonlygoodforyourphysicalandmentalhealth,butalsoofferyouthechanceto

makenewfriends.

拓展句：Notonlyaretheseactivitiesgoodforyourphysicalandmentalhealth,butalsoofferyouthechanceto

makenewfriends.

【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1]Thedifficultiesinlearningandtroublesinlifewillgoawayifyouareconfidentandbrave

enough.（運(yùn)用了if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句）

【高分句型2】Theseactivitiesarenotonlygoodforyourphysicalandmentalhealth,butalsoofferyouthe

chancetomakenewfriends.（運(yùn)用了notonly...butalso…句型）

2.（2022秋.江蘇鹽城.高一鹽城市第一中學(xué)校聯(lián)考階段練習(xí)）假設(shè)你是第一中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，你的加拿大

筆友Daniel來信向你求助。他最近和媽媽鬧矛盾，因?yàn)閶寢尣蛔屗^多上網(wǎng)。他對此很不理解。請你給他

寫一封回信，要點(diǎn)如下：

1.建議他向媽媽道歉；

2.說明過多上網(wǎng)的危害；

3.列舉一些健康的休閑方式。

注意：1.詞數(shù)不少于80；

2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

DearDaniel,

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】DearDaniel,

I'mverysorrytohearthataconflictoccurredbetweenyouandyourmotherbecauseofyourInternet

addiction.

Inmyopinion,youshouldapologizetoyourmother.AlthoughtheInternetplaysanimportantroleinmodern

life,wecan'tignoreitsharm.ManystudentsspendmuchtimeontheInternet,whichmayresultinpoorhealth

andaffecttheirstudy.Worsestill,studentsmayalsohavelessmunicationwiththerealworld.

You'dbettertakesomeexercisetokeepfitordosomereadingforfun.Onlyinthiswaycanyouliveand

studyhappilyandhealthily.

Yours

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生給加拿大筆友Daniel寫封回信，就筆友的困惑給出一些意見

和建議。

【詳解】詞匯積累

因?yàn)椋篵ecauseof一dueto

扮演重要角色：playanimportantrole一playacrucialpart

忽略：ignore一neglect

保持健康：keepfit^keephealthy

2.句式拓展

句式轉(zhuǎn)換

原句：I'mverysorrytohearthataconflictoccurredbetweenyouandyourmotherbecauseofyourInternet

addiction.

拓展句：I'mverysorrytohearthataconflictoccurredbetweenyouandyourmotherbecauseyouareaddictedto

theInternet.

【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]ManystudentsspendmuchtimeontheInternet,whichmayresultinpoorhealthandaffect

theirstudy.（運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）

[高分句型2]Onlyinthiswaycanyouliveandstudyhappilyandhealthily.（運(yùn)用了部分倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)）

3.（2023秋?北京豐臺?高一統(tǒng)考期中）假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高一學(xué)生李華。你的英國朋友Jim在給你的郵件

中提到最近他的學(xué)習(xí)壓力很大，他為此感到苦惱。請你給Jim回信，內(nèi)容包括：

1.表示理解和關(guān)心；

2.你的建議及理由；

3.你的祝愿。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右。

2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

DearJim,

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】Onepossibleversion:

DearJim,

I'msorrytolearnthatyou'vebeenunderalotofpressurelately.Itisnaturaltofeelpressuredwhenyou

attendanewschool.Herearesomesuggestionsthatcanhelpyoudealwithstress.

First,trytobuildupyourconfidence.Studyisalongtermprocessandconfidenceplaysanimportantrolein

it.Sonevergiveupnomatterwhathappens.Second,youshouldfindyourownstrengthsandweaknesses,and

seekhelpfrombothteachersandclassmateswhenfacingdifficultiesandstress.Lastbutnotleast,doingmore

physicalexercisecankeepyoufitaswellasrelaxyourself.Ihopeyouwillgetoutofyourtroublesoon.

Ibelieveitwillallworkout.Cheerup!LetmeknowifIcanhelpfurther.

Yours,

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高一學(xué)生李華。你的英國朋友Jim在給你的郵件中

提到最近他的學(xué)習(xí)壓力很大，他為此感到苦惱。請你給Jim回信。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

彳艮大壓力：underalotofpressure一bestressed

建議：suggestion一advice

健康的：fit—healthy

擺脫：getoutoJgetridof

2.句式拓展

合并簡單句

原句：First,trytobuildupyourconfidence.Studyisalongtermprocessandconfidenceplaysanimportantrolein

it.

拓展句：First,trytobuildupyourconfidencebecausestudyisalongtermprocessandconfidenceplaysan

importantroleinit.

【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]I'msorrytolearnthatyou^ebeenunderalotofpressurelately.(SfflTthat引導(dǎo)賓語從

句）

[高分句型2]Lastbutnotleast,doingmorephysicalexercisecankeepyoufitaswellasrelaxyourself.（運(yùn)用了

動名詞作主語）

4.（2023春?云南玉溪?高一云南省玉溪第一中學(xué)校考階段練習(xí)）假如你是李華，你的英國朋友Linda最近

在中國學(xué)習(xí)。她在郵件中向你訴說了她的困擾：不適應(yīng)新的學(xué)習(xí)環(huán)境，想家，感到焦慮。請你給她寫一封

郵件。內(nèi)容包括：

1.給予安慰；

2.提出建議。

注意：

1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；

2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

參考詞匯：homesick想家的

DearLinda,

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

【答案］Onepossibleversion:

DearLinda,

I'msorrytolearnthatyouarehavingahardtimelivingawayfromhome.HereareafewtipsIthinkcan

improveyourcondition.

First,trytochangesomeofyourhabitssothatyoucangetusedtothenewenvironmentassoonaspossible.

YouwillfindChinesefoodandtraditionswonderfulifyougivethematry.Second,whynottakeastepoutand

makemorenewfriends?Whafsmore,youcanalwaystalkwithyourfamilyonvideophonewhenyoumissthem,

whichwillhelprelievethehomesickness.

Ihopeyouwillfindtheseideasusefulandfeelbettersoon.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求學(xué)生就英國朋友Linda在中國學(xué)習(xí)時(shí)遇到的不適應(yīng)新學(xué)習(xí)環(huán)境、

想家、感到焦慮等問題，寫一封電子郵件，給予她安慰并對她遇到的問題提出相應(yīng)的建議。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

提升：improve—promote

適應(yīng)：getusedto一adaptto

環(huán)境：environment一surrounding

困難的：hard-important

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：YouwillfindChinesefoodandtraditionswonderfulifyougivethematry.

復(fù)合句：WhatyouwillfindisthatChinesefoodandtraditionsarewonderfulifyougivethematry.

【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1]trytochangesomeofyourhabitssothatyoucangetusedtothenewenvironmentassoon

aspossible.（運(yùn)用了sothat引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語從句）

【高分句型2】Whafsmore,youcanalwaystalkwithyourfamilyonvideophonewhenyoumissthem,which

willhelprelievethehomesickness.（運(yùn)用了when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句和which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）

5.（2023春?江蘇連云港?高一統(tǒng)考期中）假如你是李華，你的英國筆友Chris來信說，近來他沉迷于網(wǎng)游，

導(dǎo)致成績急劇下滑，希望能得到你的幫助。請你給他寫封回信，內(nèi)容包括：

1.表示理解；

2.給予建議。

注意：

1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；

2.請按如下格式在答題紙的相應(yīng)位置作答。

DearChris,

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

【答案】DearChris,

I'mterriblysorrytolearnthatyou9resufferingfromtheaddictiontoonlinegames.Nevertheless,you'renot

alone.Justtakeiteasyandhereesmyadvice.

Cultivatingsomeotherhobbiesalwaysesfirstsincethegameshaveresultedinyourfailingtofinish

homeworkontime.Besides,makefriendsthroughfacetofacemunication,whichwillhelprelaxyourself.

Moreover,readthebooksyoulikeandshareyourideaswithyourteachersandclassmates.

Hopefully,myadvicewillbeofbenefittoyou.Bestwishes!

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

DearChris,

Knowingthatyouaretooaddictedtoonlinegames,IfeelsosorryandI'mwritingtogiveyouahelping

hand.

Iquiteunderstandyourdepression,sinceonlinegamesaresopopularamongteenagersfortheirrelaxation.

However,thereareotherways.First,youcanexercisewithyourparentstorelaxyourself.Besides,youcanplay

withyourfriendswhenatschool.Whafsmore,developingotherhabitssuchasdrawingtostayawayfromonline

games.

Ihopemyadvicewillbeofgreathelptoyou.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，假如你是李華，你的英國筆友Chris來信說，近來他沉迷于網(wǎng)游，導(dǎo)

致成績急劇下滑，希望能得到你的幫助。請你給他寫封回信，內(nèi)容包括：表示理解；給予建議。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

建議：advice^-suggestion

導(dǎo)致：resultin一leadto

止匕夕卜：Besides—Jnaddition

有益的：ofbenefit一beneficial

2.句式拓展

同義句轉(zhuǎn)換

原句：Cultivatingsomeotherhobbiesalwaysesfirstsincethegameshaveresultedinyourfailingtofinish

homeworkontime.

拓展句：Thatyoushouldcultivateotherhobbiesalwaysesfirstbecausethegameshaveresultedinyourfailingto

finishhomeworkontime.

【點(diǎn)睛"高分句型1]I'mterriblysorrytolearnthatyou'resufferingfromtheaddictiontoonlinegames.（運(yùn)用了

that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句）

[高分句型2]Besides,makefriendsthroughfacetofacemunication,whichwillhelprelaxyourself.（運(yùn)用了which

引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）

6.（2023秋?湖南婁底?高一統(tǒng)考期末）假如你是李華，有位喜歡宅在家里的名叫Chris的網(wǎng)友在網(wǎng)上吐槽，

覺得友誼可有可無。請你給他寫一封郵件，并建議如何做，內(nèi)容如下：

1.交朋友的好處；

2.應(yīng)交什么樣的人做朋友；

3.如何與朋友相處。

注意：

①詞數(shù)80詞左右；

②可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

【答案】DearChris,

Learningthatyouthinkitnotnecessarytomakefriends,I'mwritingtotalkaboutfriendshipwithyou.

Generallyspeaking,wecanbeehappierandwiserthroughfriendshipandsharejoyandsadnesswithtrue

friends.Togetsincerefriendship,we'dbettermakefriendswiththosewhoaren'tonlyhonestandkindbutalso

responsibleandenthusiastic.Atthesametime,itisstronglysuggestedthatweshouldbeloyaltofriendsandhelp

eachotherinneed.

Isincerelyhopemyadvicewillbeofhelptoyou.

Yourstruly,

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語】本文是應(yīng)用文。要求考生講述友誼是什么并建議交什么樣的朋友。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

知道：learn—?know

總的來說：generallyspeaking一ingeneral

建議：suggest一advise

有幫助的：beofhelp—behelpful

2.句式拓展

同義句轉(zhuǎn)換

原句：Togetsincerefriendship,we'dbettermakefriendswiththosewhoaren'tonlyhonestandkindbutalso

responsibleandenthusiastic.

拓展句：Togaintruefriendship,weshouldlookforpeoplewhoarehonest,kind,responsible,andpassionate.

【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Learningthatyouthinkitnotnecessarytomakefriends,I'mwritingtotalkabout

friendshipwithyou.（由that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句）

【高分句型2]Togetsincerefriendship,we'dbettermakefriendswiththosewhoaren'tonlyhonestandkindbut

alsoresponsibleandenthusiastic.（由who引導(dǎo)的限制性定語從句）

7.（2023秋?四川德陽?高一統(tǒng)考期末）假如你是李華，你的英國筆友Peter寫信詢問你是否覺得上了高中時(shí)

間很緊，并問你是怎樣進(jìn)行時(shí)間管理的。請用英語寫封回信，內(nèi)容如下：

1.有同樣感覺；

2.分享自己的做法。

注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫

【答案】DearPeter,

Learningthatyouhavetroubleinmanagingyourtimeeffectively,Ifeelthesamewayasyou.AndI'm

writingtogiveyousomeusefulsuggestions.

Effectivetimemanagementcanhelpreduceyourstressandboostyourperformance.Thefirstthingyouneed

todoistoplanaheadbymakingadailytodolist.Beingorganizedalsohelpsalotwhenyouprepareforyour

lessonsandactivities.Mostimportantly,youmustlearntoprioritizeallyourtasksandsticktothegoalsyouhave

set.

Ihopeyou'llfindmysuggestionspracticalandhelpful.

Yours,

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語】本文是一篇應(yīng)用文寫作。假如你是李華，你的英國筆友Peter寫信詢問你是否覺得上了高中時(shí)間

很緊，并問你是怎樣進(jìn)行時(shí)間管理的。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

知道：learning-know

問題：trouble一problem

建議：suggestion一advice

有用的：helpfill—beneficial

2.句式拓展

同義句轉(zhuǎn)換

原句：Effectivetimemanagementcanhelpreduceyourstressandboostyourperformance.

拓展句：Notonlycaneffectivetimemanagementhelpreduceyourstress,butalsoboostyourperformance.

【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Learningthatyouhavetroubleinmanagingyourtimeeffectively,Ifeelthesamewayas

you.（that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句）

[高分句型2]Thefirstthingyouneedtodoistoplanaheadbymakingadailytodolist.（省略關(guān)系詞的定語從句）

8.（2023春?四川遂寧?高一射洪中學(xué)校考期中）假設(shè)你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，班里從外地轉(zhuǎn)來一名同學(xué)

李明，他一時(shí)無法融入新的班集體中，感到很苦惱。請根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)用英語給他寫封信：

1.歡迎他的到來；

2.幫他分析原因（至少兩點(diǎn)）；

3.給他提出建議（至少一條）；

4.表達(dá)你愿意幫助他的想法。

注意：詞數(shù)不少于80。

DearLiMing,

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】參考范文

DearLiMing,

MynameisLiHua,oneofyourclassmates.Weletothisnewclass.Fmwritingthislettertotellyou

somethingaboutit.

Itisnormalthatyoufeelunfortablenowbecauseyou'vejustenteredanewenvironmentwhereteachersand

classmatesarenewtoyou.Anotherreasonwhyyoufeeluneasycouldbethatyoustillneedsometimetoadaptto

thenewclassandmaybeyou'realittleshytomunicatewithothers.Inmyopinion,youcantalkwithpeople

aroundyou,andbebravetoaskthemquestionsthatyoudon'tknow.

Ofcourse,youcanalwaysturntomeforhelpwheneveryouneedit.I'msurethatyouwillgetusedtothis

newplacesoon.

Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yours,

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。題目要求考生給一時(shí)無法融入新環(huán)境的轉(zhuǎn)學(xué)生寫信，對他的到來表示

歡迎，幫助他分析苦惱的原因，并給他提出解決苦惱的建議，最后表達(dá)自己愿意提供幫助的想法。

【詳解】L詞匯積累

正常的：normal一mon,typical

因?yàn)椋篵ecause—since,as,for,owingtothefactthat

適應(yīng)：adaptto一acmodateto,adjustto,getusedto

與...交流：municatewith一contact,keepintouchwith

在我看來：inmyopinion一fh）mmyperspective,inmyview,asfarasI'mconcerned

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Weletothisnewclass.Tmwritingthislettertotellyousomethingaboutit.

拓展句：Weletothisnewclass,aboutwhichI'mwritingthislettertotellyousomething.

[點(diǎn)睛]【高分句型11Itisnormalthatyoufeelunfortablenowbecauseyou'vejustenteredanewenvironment

whereteachersandclassmatesarenewtoyou.（運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的主語從句、because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句、

where引導(dǎo)的定語從句）

【高分句型2]Anotherreasonwhyyoufeeluneasycouldbethatyoustillneedsometimetoadapttothenew

classandmaybeyou'realittleshytomunicatewithothers.（運(yùn)用了why引導(dǎo)的定語從句、that引導(dǎo)的表語從

句）

【高分句型3]Ofcourse,youcanalwaysturntomeforhelpwheneveryouneedit.（運(yùn)用了whenever弓|導(dǎo)的

讓步狀語從句）

9.（2023秋?甘肅酒泉?高一統(tǒng)考期末）假定你是李華。你的英國筆友Jack剛剛升入高中，但他一時(shí)無法適

應(yīng)新的校園生活，寫信向你征求建議。請你就此問題給他回一封信，內(nèi)容包括：

1.不必過分焦慮；

2.制定合理的學(xué)習(xí)計(jì)劃；

3.多參加集體活動，結(jié)交新朋友。

注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

DearJack,

Yours,

LiHua

［答案］DearJack,

I'msorrytohearthatyouarehavingtroubleadjustingtoyourhighschoollife.Iquiteunderstandthatyou

areanxiousandfeelterrible.However,itismonthatmanystudentshavethesameproblemwhenattendinganew

school.I'mwritingtogiveyousomesuggestions.Ithinkyoucanmakeagoodplanforyourstudies.Thiswill

helpyougetusedtothenewstudyingenvironmentinashorttime.Ialsoremendthatyoumakesomenewfriends

andtakeanactivepartinclassactivities.I'msurethatyouwon'tfeellonelyandyourschoollifewillbeecolorful

andinteresting.Iwillbemorethanhappytoheargoodnewsfromyou.

Yburs,

LiHua

Possibleversion02:

DearJack,

Iamsorrytohearthatyou'rehavingtroubleadjustingtoyourhighschoollife.Manystudentshavethesame

problemwhentheyattendanewschool,sodon'tworryaboutittoomuch.I'mwritingtoofferyousomeuseful

advice.First,makeagoodplanforyourstudies.Ithinkitwillhelpyougetusedtothenewstudyingenvironment

inashorttime.Second,makesomenewfriendsandtakeanactivepartinclassactivities.Inthiswayyouwon't

feellonelyandyourschoollifewillbeecolourfulandinteresting.Ihopemysuggestionswillworkwellforyou.

Yours,

LiHua

【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生給美國筆友Jack回一封建議信，就如何適應(yīng)校園生活提出建

議。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

建議：suggestion—>advice/tip

適應(yīng)：adjustto一adaptto

有用的：useful-helpfill

參力口：takeanactivepartin—joinin

2.句式拓展

同義句轉(zhuǎn)換

原句：Manystudentshavethesameproblemwhentheyattendanewschool,sodon'tworryaboutittoomuch.

拓展句：Don'tworryabouttheproblemtoomuchbecausemanystudentshavethesameproblemwhenthey

attendanewschool.

【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]