第一章應(yīng)用文寫作

主題

第一章應(yīng)用文寫作

語境

熱點話題預(yù)測一校園生活

【真題引領(lǐng)】

(2024.新課標(biāo)I&n卷)假定你是李華，上周五你們班在公園上了一堂美術(shù)課。請你給英國朋友

Chris寫一封郵件分享這次經(jīng)歷，內(nèi)容包括:

(1)你完成的作品;

⑵你的感想。

注意:寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個左右。

DearChris,

PmwritingtosharewithyouanartclassIhadinaparklast

Friday.

Yours,

LiHua

【參考范文】

DearChris,

PmwritingtosharewithyouanartclassIhadinaparklastFriday.Youcannotimaginehow

meaningfulandinterestingitwas!

Weweretaskedtodraworpaintsomethingthatimpressedusmost.Inspiredbythefantastic

scenery,!decidedtocreateawatercolorpaintingofthesmallbridgeoverthepark'spond,surroundedby

bloomingflowers.

Theentireexperiencewasincrediblyrefreshing.Beingsurroundedbynaturenotonlysparkedmy

creativitybutalsoofferedamuch-neededbreakfromtheusualhustleandbustleofschoollife.Ifelta

deepsenseofpeaceasIpainted.

Inaword,itwasnotjustanartclass;itwasamomentofconnectionwithnaturethatItrulycherished.

Howhaveyourclassesbeenlately?Iwouldlovetohearaboutthem.

Takecareandwritebacksoon!

Yours,

LiHua

【詞句積累】

1.詞匯積累

決定:decide一determine

整個的:entire—whole

提供:ofler^provide

總之:inaword一inshort

2.句式升級

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句inspiredbythefantasticscenery,Idecidedtocreateawatercolorpaintingofthesmallbridgeover

thepark'spond,surroundedbybloomingflowers.

復(fù)合句:BecauseIwasinspiredbythefantasticscenery,Idecidedtocreateawatercolorpaintingofthe

smallbridgeoverthepark'spond,whichwassurroundedbybloomingflowers.

【高分佳句】

①Weweretaskedtodraworpaintsomethingthatimpressedusmost.（that引導(dǎo)定語從句）

②IfeltadeepsenseofpeaceasIpainted.（as引導(dǎo)時間狀語從句）

【模擬提升】

假定你是李華，即將參加以“MyDreamUniversity”為主題的校英語演講比賽。請給你的外國好

友Jack寫封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

1.征求備賽意見；

2.表示感謝。

注意:寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個左右。

DearJack,

Yours,

LiHua

【參考范文】

DearJack,

Howareyourecently?I'mgoingtoparticipateinanEnglishspeechcompetitionwiththethemeof

“MyDreamUniversity”.Withtimegoingby,Pmgettingincreasinglynervous,soPmwritingtoaskfor

youradvice.

Knowingthatyouhavetakenpartinmanycompetitions,I'dappreciateitifyoucouldgivemesome

practicalsuggestions.Forexample,howcanIadjustmymindset,improvemycontentsandholdthe

attentionfromaudience?

Itrulybelievethatwithyourhelp,Filhaveabetterperformance.Thanksalotfromthebottomofmy

heart.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yours,

LiHua

【詞句積累】

1.詞匯積累

最近:recently一lately

比賽:competition一contest

參力口:participatein一takepartin

幫助:help一assistance

2.句式升級

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句:PmgoingtoparticipateinanEnglishspeechcompetitionwiththethemeof"MyDreamUniversity^^.

復(fù)合句:PmgoingtoparticipateinanEnglishspeechcompetitionwhosethemeis"MyDreamUniversity^^.

【高分佳句】

?Knowingthatyouhavetakenpartinmanycompetitions,I'dappreciateitifyoucouldgivemesome

practicalsuggestions.（that引導(dǎo)賓語從句;固定句型'Tdappreciateitif...”,it作形式賓語）

②Itrulybelievethatwithyourhelp,Illhaveabetterperformance.（that弓I導(dǎo)賓語從句）

熱點話題預(yù)測二中國文化

【真題引領(lǐng)】

（2023?全國甲卷改編）

你們學(xué)校正舉辦主題為“用英文講中國故事”的征文活動。請你以一位中國歷史人物為題寫一

篇短文投稿，內(nèi)容包括：

1.人物簡介及事跡；

2.意義或啟示。

注意:寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個左右。

TheHistoricalFigureinChina

【參考范文】

TheHistoricalFigureinChina

InthelongspanoftheChinesehistory,theexistenceoftheoutstandingConfuciusislikeashining

pearl.

LivinginthelateSpringandAutumnperiod,Confuciuswasveryknowledgeableinhistwenties.In

ordertospreadhisthought,hetravelledfromonestatetoanother.Althoughhesufferedalot,henever

gaveupandfoundedthefirstprivateschoolinhistory.HismajorsayingswererecordedinTheAnalects

ofConfucius,whichstillhasasignificantinfluenceonChinesepeopletoday.

IsincerelyhopethatthroughadeeperunderstandingofConfuciusandhisConfucianism,wecan

maketheworldfilledwithmorelovejusticeandpeace.

【詞句積累】

1.詞匯積累

人物:person—figure

重要的:important—significant

2.句式升級

復(fù)合句變高級表達

原句：Althoughhesufferedalot,henevergaveupandfoundedthefirstprivateschoolinhistory.

高級表達:Inspiteoftheconsiderablesufferinghewassubjectedto,hisresolveremainedunshaken,

leadinghimtofoundthefirstprivateschoolinhistoricalrecords.

【高分佳句】

?LivinginthelateSpringandAutumnperiod,Confuciuswasveryknowledgeableinhistwenties.

（現(xiàn)在分詞短語作狀語）

②HismajorsayingswererecordedinTheAnalectsofConfucius,whichstillhasasignificantinfluence

onChinesepeopletoday.

（which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句）

【模擬提升】

（2025?四川遂寧三模）

“21stCenturyTeens”英文報正在就“越來越多的外國人愛上中國傳統(tǒng)文化”這一現(xiàn)象舉辦征文

活動，請你寫一篇英語短文投稿，內(nèi)容要點如下：

1.分析原因；

2.你的看法。

注意:寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個左右。

【參考范文】

Nowadays,moreandmoreforeignersarebecomingincreasinglyinterestedinChinesetraditional

culture.Thereasonswhythereexiststhisphenomenoncanbelistedasfollows.

Foronething,Chinahasalonghistoryandevolvescolorfulanduniqueculturesinitsdevelopment,

whichmakesitmoreattractive.Foranother,it'sourcountry'sbeingstrongerthathasmadethecultural

aspectofourcountrymoreappealingandcharming.

Inmyview,everyoneofusshouldtakeresponsibilitytospreadourexcellenttraditionalcultureto

theworld.Onlyinthiswaycanourcountrygofurtherandbemorestableonthewaytorealizingthe

ChineseDream.

【詞句積累】

1.詞匯積累

在某人看來:inone'sview一inone'sopinion

實現(xiàn):realize一etrue

吸引人的:attractive-appealing

特另U:unique一special

2.句式升級

簡單句變高級表達

原句:Nowadays,moreandmoreforeignersarebecomingincreasinglyinterestedinChinesetraditional

culture.

高級表達:Nowadays,anincreasingnumberofforeignersaredevelopingagrowinginterestinChinese

traditionalculture.

【高分佳句】

①Foronething,Chinahasalonghistoryandevolvescolorfulanduniqueculturesinitsdevelopment,

whichmakesitmoreattractive,（which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句）

②OnlyinthiswaycanourcountrygofurtherandbemorestableonthewaytorealizingtheChinese

Dream.（部分倒裝）

熱點話題預(yù)測三社團活動

【真題引領(lǐng)】

（2023?北京卷改編）

假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。你的英國好友Jim正在策劃一次以“綠色北京”為主題的社

團活動，他發(fā)來郵件詢問你的建議。請你用英文給他回復(fù)，內(nèi)容包括:

1.活動形式；

2.活動內(nèi)容。

注意:寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個左右。

DearJim,

Yours,

LiHua

【參考范文】

DearJim,

I'mgladtohearthatyou'replanningaclubactivitywiththethemeof"GreenBeijing^.Herearemy

suggestions:

Ithinkitwouldbegreattoorganizeacyclingtouraroundthecity,suchasvisitingsomeofthegreen

spacesandeco-friendlybuildingsinBeijing.Thisway,wecannotonlypromotetheideaofsustainable

transportation,butalsoenjoythebeautifulscenery.Duringthecyclingtour,wecanstopatsomeofthe

parksandgardensinBeijing,includingtheSummerPalaceandtheTempleofHeaven,wherewecan

learnabouttheirhistoryandtheeffortsmadetopreservetheseculturaltreasures.Wecanalsovisitsome

oftheeco-friendlybuildings,suchastheOlympicForestParkandtheNationalStadium,tolearnabout

theirdesignandconstruction.

Ihopethesesuggestionsarehelpful.Letmeknowifyouhaveanyotherideasorquestions.

Bestregards,

Yours,

LiHua

【詞句積累】

1.詞匯積累

安排:organize一arrange

游覽城市:aroundthecity一throughoutthecity

欣賞:enjoy—appreciate

了解:learnaboutsth一gaininsightsintosth

2.句式升級

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句:Wecanalsovisitsomeoftheeco-friendlybuildings.

復(fù)合句:Additionally,wehavethechancetovisitsomeoftheeco-friendlybuildings,whicharenotjust

structuresbutalsosymbolsofBeijing'sgreeninitiatives.

【高分佳句】

①Thisway,wecannotonlypromotetheideaofsustainabletransportation,butalsoenjoythebeautiful

scenery,（notonly...butalso...）

②Duringthecyclingtour,wecanstopatsomeoftheparksandgardensinBeijing,includingthe

SummerPalaceandtheTempleofHeaven,wherewecanlearnabouttheirhistoryandtheeffortsmadeto

preservetheseculturaltreasures.（where引導(dǎo)狀語從句）

【模擬提升】

（2025?河北省張家口市模擬）

假定你是李華，寒假期間，你參加了WWF舉辦的為期一周的野生動物保護冬令營。請你寫一篇

博客分享這段有意義的經(jīng)歷。

1.活動的時間、地點及內(nèi)容；

2?你對野生動物保護的看法和感悟。

注意:寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個左右。

參考詞匯:冬令營:wintercamp

AWeekIntheWild

Thiswinterholiday,insteadofcelebratingtheSpringFestivalwith

family,

【參考范文】

AWeekIntheWild

Thiswinterholiday,insteadofcelebratingtheSpringFestivalwithfamily,I,togetherwith30other

students,wenttoYunnanandtookpartintheWildlifeProtectionWinterCampheldbyWWF.

Wespentoneweekinthewildrainforestslearningaboutendangeredanimalsfromwildlife

professionalsandobservinghowdifferentspeciesofmonkeysadaptedthemselvestotheirnaturalhabitats.

Plus,variousactivitiestoprotectthemhadbeenorganized,suchaspickingupplasticsandputtingup

posters.Wewereamazedbythetirelesseffortsthatthelocalsweremaking.

Thecampnotonlyraisedourenvironmentalawareness,butalsodeepenedourunderstandingof

wildlifeprotection.Onlywhenwelearntoexistinharmonywithnaturecanweenjoyabetterfuture

together.

【詞句積累】

1.詞匯積累

①insteadof代替,而不是

?togetherwith和...——起

③takepartin參加，參與

④pickup拾起，挑選

⑤putup張貼

⑥inharmonywith與...和諧相處

2.句式升級

復(fù)合句變高級表達

原句:Wespentoneweekinthewildrainforestslearningaboutendangeredanimalsfromwildlife

professionalsandobservinghowdifferentspeciesofmonkeysadaptedthemselvestotheirnaturalhabitats.

高級表達:Duringourone-weekstayinthewildrainforests,wenotonlylearnedaboutendangered

animalsfromwildlifeprofessionalsbutalsoobservedthevariouswaysinwhichdifferentspeciesof

monkeysadaptedtotheirnaturalhabitats.

【高分佳句】

①Wewereamazedbythetirelesseffortsthatthelocalsweremaking.(that引導(dǎo)定語從句)

②Thecampnotonlyraisedourenvironmentalawareness,butalsodeepenedourunderstandingof

wildlifeprotection,(notonly...butalso...)

?Onlywhenwelearntoexistinharmonywithnaturecanweenjoyabetterfuturetogether.(Only置于

句首使用部分倒裝）

熱點話題預(yù)測四生活經(jīng)歷

【真題引領(lǐng)】

（2023?全國乙卷改編）

學(xué)校英文報組織同學(xué)們分享自己在假期中學(xué)到的新技能，請你以此為主題寫一篇短文投稿。內(nèi)

容包括：

1.簡要描述；

2.體驗和感受。

注意:寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個左右。

LearningaNewSkill

【參考范文】

LearningaNewSkill

Itisimportantforustomastersomebasiclivingskillstoprepareusforourfuturelife.ThatiswhyI

learnedhowtocookduringtheMayDayholiday.

Sincemymotherisskilledatcooking,Idecidedtolearnfromher.Earlyinthemorningwebought

someingredients,includingsomevegetables,meatandafishinthelocalmarket.Oncewegotbackhome,

Ibegantowashandcutthemcarefully.Undertheguidanceofmymother,Iturnedonthegascooker.I

firststir-friedtwovegetables.ThenIcookedmeatwithpotatoes.Themostdifficulttasktodowascook

fishwithtomatoes.However,Ifinallydidit.

ThemomentIputthedishesonthetable,myparentsgavemeathumbs-up.IfeltsoproudthatI

sharedhouseworkwithmyparents,whichalsoshowedIhadgrownup.

【詞句積累】

1.詞匯積累

學(xué)習(xí)：162111一11125161

擅長:begoodat一beskilledat

表揚某人:praisesb一givesbathumbs-up

2.句式升級

合并簡單句

原句:Ifirststir-friedtwovegetables.ThenIcookedmeatwithpotatoes.

合并后:Ifirststir-friedtwovegetables,thencookedmeatwithpotatoes.

【高分佳句】

①Itisimportantforustomastersomebasiclivingskillstoprepareusforourfuturelife.（It作形式主語）

②ThatiswhyIlearnedhowtocookduringtheMayDayholiday,（why引導(dǎo)表語從句）

（3）1feltsoproudthatIsharedhouseworkwithmyparents,whichalsoshowedIhadgrownup.（so...that...

引導(dǎo)結(jié)果狀語從句,which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句）

【模擬提升】

（2025220名校聯(lián)盟第二次聯(lián)考）

假定你是李華，上周末你參加了學(xué)校組織的市科技館研學(xué)活動。請你在校英文論壇發(fā)表一篇帖

子,分享此次經(jīng)歷，內(nèi)容包括：

1.活動過程；

2.個人感悟；

3.期待評論。

注意:寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個左右。

AnUnforgettableTechExplorationTour

【參考范文】

AnUnforgettableTechExplorationTour

LastweekendIparticipatedinafabuloustechexplorationtourinthecitysciencemuseumorganized

byourschool.

ItkickedoffwithanexhibitionofthehistoryofChinesescience,unfoldingtheawe-strikingwisdom

behind.Whatfollowedwasahands-onexperience,whichuncoveredthesecretsofscience.Withalecture

ontheprospectofscience,thetourwasbroughttoanend.Notonlydidthetourinstilmewithasenseof

prideinourscientificadvances,butitalsoplantedinmyheartaseedofscientificexploration.

Anybodywhosharesthesamefeeling?Anticipatingyourcomments!

【詞句積累】

L詞匯積累

參力口:participatein一engagein/embarkon

極好的：fabulous^remarkable/extraordinary/incredible/amazing

以...開始:keckoffwith一commencewith/beginwith

2.句式升級

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句:ItkickedoffwithanexhibitionofthehistoryofChinesescience,unfoldingtheawe-striking

wisdombehind.

復(fù)合句:ThetourbeganwithanexhibitiondetailingthehistoryofChinesescience,whichnotonly

showcasedthecountry'sscientificmilestonesbutalsounfoldedtheawe-strikingwisdombehindits

progress.

【高分佳句】

①Whatfollowedwasahands-onexperience,whichuncoveredthesecretsofscience,（which弓I導(dǎo)非限制

性定語從句）

②Notonlydidthetourinstilmewithasenseofprideinourscientificadvances,butitalsoplantedinmy

heartaseedofscientificexploration.（notonly...butalso...,部分倒裝）

熱點話題預(yù)測五觀點態(tài)度

【真題引領(lǐng)】

（2023?新課標(biāo)，I&II卷）

假定你是李華，外教Ryan準(zhǔn)備將學(xué)生隨機分為兩人一組,讓大家課后練習(xí)口語，你認(rèn)為這樣分組

存在問題。請你給外教寫一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括；

1.說明問題；

2.提出建議。

注意:寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個左右。

DearRyan,

I'mLiHuafromClass3.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

【參考范文】

DearRyan,

I'mLiHuafromClass3.1thinkit'snotagoodideatorandomlypairupstudentsforthespoken

Englishtrainingafterclass.Thereasonsareasfollows.

Tobeginwith,randomlypairingupstudentsmayleadtounbalancedlanguageabilitieswithinthe

groups.Thiscanhindertheprogressofstudentsasthemoreadvancedonemaydominatetheconversation,

leavinglittleroomfortheotherstudentstoimprove.Besides,studentsmayfeeluncomfortableorless

motivatedifpairedwithsomeonewhotheydon'tgetalongwithorhavedifficultycommunicatingwith.

Mysuggestionistogroupstudentsbasedontheirlanguageabilitiesortoletstudentschoosetheir

ownpartners.Thisway,everyonecanfeelmorecomfortablepracticingandimprovingtheirspoken

Englishtogether.

Thankyouforconsideringmysuggestion.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

【詞句積累】

1.詞匯積累

首先:tobeginwith一firstofall

提高:improve一progress

建議:suggestion一advice

選擇:choose一select

2.句式升級

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句:Mysuggestionistogroupstudentsbasedontheirlanguageabilitiesortoletstudentschoosetheir

ownpartners.

拓展句:Mysuggestionisthatwearesupposedtogroupstudentsbasedontheirlanguageabilitiesortolet

studentschoosetheirownpartners.

【高分佳句】

①Thiscanhindertheprogressofstudentsasthemoreadvancedonemaydominatetheconversation,

leavinglittleroomfortheotherstudentstoimprove.（現(xiàn)在分詞短語作狀語）

?Besides,studentsmayfeeluncomfortableorlessmotivatedifpairedwithsomeonewhotheydon'tget

alongwithorhavedifficultycommunicatingwith.（if省略句,who引導(dǎo)定語從句）

【模擬提升】

（2025?江蘇省徐州市一模）

假如你是李華，你的美國朋友Mike來信說他暑假去上海旅游，但不知道參觀哪些景點，請你給他

回信，內(nèi)容包括：

1.表示歡迎；

2,為他做出旅游規(guī)劃建議。

注意:寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個左右。

DearMike,

Yours,

LiHua

【參考范文】

DearMike,

ThrilledtohearthatyoullvisitShanghaithissummerholiday,I'dliketomakesome

recommendationstoyou.

LocatedintheeastofChina,Shanghaiisacharmingcityknownforitsbeautifullandscapesand

warmhospitality.Therearemanyplacesofinterestthatareworthvisiting,suchastheHuangpuRiver,

theOrientalPearlTowerandsoon.Besides,Ihighlyrecommendthatyoutrysomelocalsnacks.Given

thehotweatherofShanghaiinsummer,takingsomemeasurestoprotectyourselffromthesunishighly

advisable.

Ifthere'sanythingspecificyou'dliketoknow,pleasefeelfreetocontactme.Illbemorethanhappy

tohelp.

Yours,

LiHua

【詞句積累】

1.詞匯積累

激動的:excited-thrilled

吸引人的:attractive一charming

因...而出名:befamousfbr一beknownfor

止匕夕卜:what，smore一besides

2.句式升級

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句:GiventhehotweatherofShanghaiinsummer,takingsomemeasurestoprotectyourselffromthe

sunishighlyadvisable.

復(fù)合句:GiventhehotweatherofShanghaiinsummer,itishighlyadvisablethatyoushouldtakesome

measurestoprotectyourselffromthesun.

【高分佳句】

?ThrilledtohearthatyoullvisitShanghaithissummerholiday,rdliketomakesomerecommendations

toyou.（形容詞短語作狀語,that引導(dǎo)賓語從句）

②Therearemanyplacesofinterestthatareworthvisiting,suchastheHuangpuRiver,theOrientalPearl

Towerandsoon.（that引導(dǎo)定語從句）

熱點話題預(yù)測六活動經(jīng)歷

【真題引領(lǐng)】

（2023?浙江1月卷）

上周末你參加了校學(xué)生會組織的“認(rèn)識我們身邊的植物”活動。請為校英文報寫篇報道,內(nèi)容包

括:

1.活動的過程；

2.收獲與感想。

注意:寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個左右。

GettingtoKnowthePlantsAroundUs

【參考范文】

GettingtoKnowthePlantsAroundUs

Lastweekend,Iparticipatedina"GettingtoKnowthePlantsAroundUs“activityorganisedbyour

Students*Union.

Theactivitybeganwithalecturebyalocalbotanist,whotaughtusaboutthedifferentcharacteristics

andusesofvariousplantspecies.Wethenwentonanaturalwalktoobserveandcollectsamplesof

differentplants.Throughouttheevent,Iwasstruckbytheincrediblevarietyofplantsthatexistinour

worldandlearnedaboutplantsthatareusedformedicalpurposes,aswellasthosethatprovidefoodand

shelterforanimals.Ialsogainedagreaterappreciationoftherolethatplantsplayinmaintainingthe

balanceofourecosystem.

Overall,itwasavaluableandenrichingexperience.

【詞句積累】

1.詞匯積累

參與:attend一participatein

觀察，調(diào)查:observe一survey

震驚:strike一astonish/surprise

2.句式升級

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Lastweekend,Iparticipatedina"GettingtoKnowthePlantsAroundUs“activityorganisedbyour

Students*Union.

復(fù)合句:Lastweekend,Iparticipatedina"GettingtoKnowthePlantsAroundUs“activity,whichwas

organisedbyourStudents*Union.

【高分佳句】

①Theactivitybeganwithalecturebyalocalbotanist,whotaughtusaboutthedifferentcharacteristics

andusesofvariousplantspecies.（who引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句）

?Throughouttheevent,Iwasstruckbytheincrediblevarietyofplantsthatexistinourworldand

learnedaboutplantsthatareusedformedicalpurposes,aswellasthosethatprovidefoodandshelterfor

animals.（that引導(dǎo)定語從句）

【模擬提升】

（2025?金麗衢十二校聯(lián)考）

10月16日是世界糧食日（WorldFoodDay）,你校為了提高學(xué)生珍惜糧食的意識舉辦了一系列活

動。假定你是校英語報的記者,請你為校英語報寫一篇活動報道。內(nèi)容要點包括：

1.活動過程；

2.活動反響。

注意:寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個左右。

WorldFoodDay

【參考范文】

WorldFoodDay

Recently,incelebrationofWorldFoodDay,ourschoolorganizedanimpactfuleventtoarousethe

public'sawarenessoffoodcrisis.

Toemphasizetheglobalfoodsecurityissues,theeventbeganwithinsightfulspeechesfromsome

distinguishedguests.Atthesametime,acaptivatingexhibitionvividlyillustratedglobalfood

challenges.Everyonepresentwasspurredbythepowerfulexhibits.Thehighlightoftheeventwasafund-

raisingceremonytosupportalocalcharity.

Needlesstosay,theactivitywassignificant.ltservedasapowerfulreminderofthecollectiveduty

webearinaddressingglobalfoodchallenges,fosteringasenseofcommitmentamongparticipants.

【詞句積累】

1.詞匯積累

慶祝:celebrate一incelebrationof

強調(diào):emphasize—stress

同時:meanwhile一atthesametime

重要的:significant一ofsignificance

2.句式升級

簡單句變復(fù)合句

原句:Toemphasizetheglobalfoodsecurityissues,theeventbeganwithinsightfulspeechesfromsome

distinguishedguests.

復(fù)合句:Theevent,whoseaimistoemphasizetheglobalfoodsecurityissues,beganwithinsightful

speechesfromsomedistinguishedguests.

【高分佳句】

?Toemphasizetheglobalfoodsecurityissues,theeventbeganwithinsightfulspeechesfromsome

distinguishedguests.（不定式短語作目的狀語）

②Itservedasapowerfulreminderofthecollectivedutywebearinaddressingglobalfoodchallenges,

fosteringasenseofcommitmentamongparticipants4省略了關(guān)系詞的定語從句，現(xiàn)在分詞短語作狀語）

第二章讀后續(xù)寫

主逅

第二章讀后續(xù)寫j五境

熱點話題預(yù)測一人與自我之生活與學(xué)習(xí)（一）

【寫作指導(dǎo)】

生活與學(xué)習(xí)的主題涵蓋了多個方面，包括學(xué)校課程、同學(xué)間的交往、學(xué)校和班級組織的課外活動或

比賽，如春游、野餐、聚會等。此外還包括學(xué)生的調(diào)研、預(yù)習(xí)、復(fù)習(xí)、討論、歸納等學(xué)習(xí)活動或教

師的教學(xué)方法等。

【詞匯積累】

campus校園lecturetheatre講堂

canteen餐廳laboratory/lab實驗室

dininghall食堂teachingbuilding教學(xué)樓

theStudents*Union

dormitory宿舍

學(xué)生會

club俱樂部achievement/result成績

competition競賽mark/grade/score分?jǐn)?shù)

schooldininghall

reward獎勵

學(xué)校食堂

graduationceremony

outing郊游

畢業(yè)典禮

holdasportsmeeting

part-timejob兼職

舉行運動會

voluntarylabor

physicalactivity體育活動

義務(wù)勞動

preparelessons備課putone'sheartinto

專心于

cheatintheexam

workout計算出

考試作弊

getfullmarksfor...

havelessons上課

在……方面獲得滿分

learn...byheartprepareforlessons

熟記，背誦……預(yù)習(xí)功課

passtheexamination

keep...inmind記住

通過考試

missalessonhaveagoodcommandof

缺一節(jié)課精通

workhardat努力做（學(xué)）concentrateon全神貫注于

makeprogressin...

stayawayfromschool曠課

在……方面取得進步

fail(in)thetest

haveapicnic/barbecue去野餐/燒烤

測驗不及格

socialpracticeextracurricularactivity

社會實踐課外活動

layasolidfoundationin在...方面打下堅實的winfirstprizeinmathscompetition獲得數(shù)學(xué)競賽一等

基礎(chǔ)獎

【佳句積累】

l.Withhisparents1unwaveringsupport,hewasabletoovercomeeverychallengethatcamehisway.

憑借父母堅定的支持，他能夠克服面臨的每一個挑戰(zhàn)。

2.Withaheartfullofgratitude,sheembarkedonanewchapterofherlife.

心懷感激之情，她踏上了人生的新篇章。

3.Lookingback,hewishedhehadpursuedhisdreamswithmoredetermination.

回首往事，他多希望曾經(jīng)更加有決心地追求夢想。

4.Despitefacingnumerouschallenges,theymanagedtofindjoyinthesimplestofmoments.

盡管面臨許多挑戰(zhàn)，他們還是設(shè)法從最簡單的瞬間找到了快樂。

5.Ifitweren'tfortheirconstantsupportandencouragement,shewouldhavegivenuponherdreams.

要不是因為他們的不斷支持和鼓勵，她早就放棄了自己的夢想。

6.Walkingthroughthebustlingstreetsofthecity,shefeltasenseofbelonging.

漫步在繁華的城市街道上,她感到一種歸屬感。

7.Witheachpassingday,hebecamemorecontentwiththesimplepleasuresinlife.

每經(jīng)過一天，他對生活中簡單的樂趣變得更加滿足。

8.Ifonlyshehadtakenthatchance,herlifemighthavebeendifferent.

要是她曾經(jīng)抓住那個機會，她的人生或許會不同。

9.Despitethesetbacks,hecontinuedtobelieveinthepowerofperseverance.

盡管遭遇挫折，他仍然相信堅持的力量。

10.ltwasasiftimestoodstillwhenthecaptivatingparadepassedthroughthestreets,theonlookers

attractedbyitsvibrantcolorsandenergeticperformances.

當(dāng)令人驚嘆的游行隊伍穿過街道時，時間仿佛靜止了,圍觀者被其鮮艷的色彩和充滿活力的表演吸引。

11.Withaburstofjoyfullaughterandapplausefillingtheair,itwasevidentthattheentertainment

programhadsuccessfullycapturedtheheartsoftheaudience.

空氣中充滿了陣陣歡樂的笑聲和掌聲怨明顯娛樂節(jié)目成功地俘獲了觀眾的心。

【真題引領(lǐng)】

（2024?浙江1月卷）

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。

Evaspentthefirstweekofhighschooltryingtokeepherheadabovewater.Oneofthemajor

headachesforherwasfindingherwayinthehugeschoolbuilding.ltwasasix-storybuilding.Oneach

floor,hallwaysstretchedinfourdirections,leadingtoclassrooms,laboratories,andteachers1

offices.Somewhereinthebuilding,therewasalsoalibrary,acafeteria,andagym.

Havingapoorsenseofdirection,Evafounditimpossibletogetaroundinsuchahugebuilding.All

thedifferenthallwaysandroomsweretoomuchtothinkabout,letalonecommittomemory.Shedecided

thatshewouldmemorizewhereherclasseswereandthenpretendthattherestoftheplacedidn'texist.

InherfirstP.E.class,EvawasshockedwhenCoachPittannouncedthateveryonehadtorunone

milearoundthetrackoutside.Shesearchedthefacesofherclassmatesforsignsofpanic.Therewas

nothingshefearedmorethanhavingtorunawholemile.ToEva,“amile^wasusedtodescribelong

distances.ltwastenmilesfromherhometohergrandfather's,andthatalwaysseemedlikealongway,

eveninacar!

WhenCoachPittblewhiswhistle（哨子），Evafiguredshewouldbeleftinthedust.However,while

someofherclassmatesedgedahead,othersactuallyfellbehind.66Ifsjustthebeginning,,9shethought/Tll

comeinlastforsure."

SoonEvabegantobreathehard,withherheartpoundingandlegsshaking.Feelingdesperate,Eva

startedusingamindtrickonherselfShestoppedthinkingabouttheword“mile”.Instead,shefocusedon

reachingtheshadowcastonthetrackbyanoaktreeupahead.Thensheconcentratedonjoggingtothe

spotwherethetrackcurved（拐彎）.Afterthat,shetriedtoseeifshecouldcompleteherfirstlap.Onelap

turnedintotwo,thenthree,thenfour.

注意:續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。

WhenCoachPittsaid“Nicework!"toheratthefinishline,Ev