高三下試卷作文編號(hào)：02Topic:科技創(chuàng)新活動(dòng)介紹信假定你是李華，你的英國(guó)筆友David對(duì)學(xué)校社團(tuán)活動(dòng)很感興趣。請(qǐng)你給他寫(xiě)一封信，介紹此次學(xué)?？萍紕?chuàng)意俱樂(lè)部舉辦的活動(dòng)，內(nèi)容包括：1.活動(dòng)過(guò)程；2.感受和收獲。Wednesday,September17,20252活動(dòng)過(guò)程敘述“時(shí)間軸法”Wednesday,September17,20253階段常用表達(dá)示例內(nèi)容分組階段bedividedintogroups;teamupwithWeweresplitinto5groupsof4,eachassignedatechtheme.創(chuàng)作階段brainstorm;solveproblemscollaborativelyFordays,wedebateddesignsandtestedprototypestogether.展示階段present;demonstrate;winapplauseEachgroupshowcasedtheirprojectwithslidesandlivedemos.頒獎(jiǎng)階段announcetheresults;awardprizesThetopgroupwona3Dprinterfortheirclass.DearAlex,Ourschool’sTechInnovationClubheldacoolactivity.I’mwritingtoshareitwithyou.First,weweredividedintoseveralgroupstocreateatechprojectwithinaweek.Weargued,solvedproblemstogether,andcelebratedeverygreatidea.Whenitwastimetoshare,eachgroupintroducedtheircreationswithshiningeyesandconfidentsmiles.Everyonecheeredasthejudgesannouncedthetopthreegroups,whowonprizesandgoldmedals.Thisactivityleftadeepimpressiononme.OnlythendidIrealizethatcreativitygrowsthroughchallenges.Ifyouwanttoknowmoredetails,pleasedon’thesitatetocontactme.Bestwishes,LiHua親愛(ài)的Alex：我們學(xué)校的科技創(chuàng)新俱樂(lè)部舉辦了一場(chǎng)很酷的活動(dòng)。我寫(xiě)這封信是為了和你分享這個(gè)活動(dòng)。首先，我們被分成幾個(gè)小組，在一周內(nèi)創(chuàng)建一個(gè)技術(shù)項(xiàng)目。我們爭(zhēng)論，一起解決問(wèn)題，并慶祝每一個(gè)偉大的想法。當(dāng)分享時(shí)間到來(lái)時(shí)，每個(gè)小組都帶著閃亮的眼睛和自信的微笑介紹自己的創(chuàng)意。當(dāng)評(píng)委宣布前三名小組時(shí)，所有人都?xì)g呼雀躍，他們贏得了獎(jiǎng)項(xiàng)和金牌。這個(gè)活動(dòng)給我留下了深刻的印象。直到那時(shí)我才意識(shí)到，創(chuàng)造力是通過(guò)挑戰(zhàn)而成長(zhǎng)的。如果你想了解更多細(xì)節(jié)，請(qǐng)隨時(shí)與我聯(lián)系。祝好，李華語(yǔ)言亮點(diǎn)積累（科技活動(dòng)主題）高頻動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)collaborateontechprojects（合作開(kāi)發(fā)科技項(xiàng)目）troubleshootproblems（解決問(wèn)題）pitchcreativeideas（展示創(chuàng)意）fosterinnovation（培養(yǎng)創(chuàng)新）高級(jí)句型倒裝句：Onlythroughteamworkdidweovercomethetechnicalchallenges.強(qiáng)調(diào)句：Itwastheprocessofdebatinganditeratingthattaughtmethevalueofpersistence.非謂語(yǔ)結(jié)構(gòu)：Holdingourprototypeinhand,wefeltasenseofpridelikeneverbefore.Wednesday,September17,20256實(shí)戰(zhàn)訓(xùn)練（高考真題改編）你校機(jī)器人社團(tuán)舉辦“AI創(chuàng)意大賽”，要求兩人一組設(shè)計(jì)智能裝置。你和搭檔發(fā)明了“智能分類(lèi)垃圾桶”，通過(guò)傳感器識(shí)別垃圾類(lèi)型并自動(dòng)開(kāi)蓋。決賽中你們的作品獲“最佳創(chuàng)新獎(jiǎng)”，你從中體會(huì)到“合作與創(chuàng)新的力量”。要求：按書(shū)信格式寫(xiě)給筆友Tom；包含比賽流程（分組、設(shè)計(jì)、展示）和個(gè)人收獲；使用至少1個(gè)強(qiáng)調(diào)句（如“Itwas...that...”）。Wednesday,September17,20257讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)續(xù)寫(xiě)任務(wù)開(kāi)頭句："WhenIsawthe'PASSED'message,Adria’swordssuddenlymadesense——everydropofsweathadbeenworthit."要求：描寫(xiě)頒獎(jiǎng)現(xiàn)場(chǎng)的場(chǎng)景（運(yùn)用聽(tīng)覺(jué)+視覺(jué)描寫(xiě)）；加入一個(gè)象征堅(jiān)持的道具（如磨損的運(yùn)動(dòng)鞋/記錄訓(xùn)練的筆記本）；以“傳承導(dǎo)師精神”結(jié)尾。Wednesday,September17,20258讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)翻譯練習(xí)Wednesday,September17,20259成為健身教練翻譯練習(xí)盡管成為健身教練的旅程充滿了挑戰(zhàn)和淚水，但她的話語(yǔ)成為了我進(jìn)步progress的指引之光guidinglight。每天早晨，我強(qiáng)迫自己起床，在空蕩蕩empty的街道上慢跑jog，呼出的氣息breath在寒冷的空氣中形成白霧clouds。晚上，我努力翻閱堆積如山的書(shū)籍和浩瀚的知識(shí)海洋。六個(gè)月后，我驚訝地發(fā)現(xiàn)自己已經(jīng)忘記了壓力，變得更加強(qiáng)壯和自信。最終，帶著一絲焦慮和興奮，我報(bào)名參加了教練考試trainerexam。Wednesday,September17,202510情節(jié)銜接“3關(guān)鍵”情感延續(xù)：?前文：訓(xùn)練艱辛→后文：通過(guò)考試后的感恩（如擁抱導(dǎo)師Adria）道具呼應(yīng)：?前文：導(dǎo)師的話語(yǔ)→后文：用導(dǎo)師的鼓勵(lì)激勵(lì)自己的學(xué)員主題深化：?個(gè)人成長(zhǎng)→傳遞正能量（如“Now,Ipourmypatienceintomytrainees...”）Wednesday,September17,202511描寫(xiě)層次“感官+比喻”層次示例內(nèi)容效果基礎(chǔ)描寫(xiě)Ijoggedeverymorning.平淡敘述感官升級(jí)Mybreathformedcloudsinthecoldair.視覺(jué)具象化，增強(qiáng)畫(huà)面感比喻修辭Mountainsofbooksandanoceanofknowledge.夸張比喻，突出學(xué)習(xí)量之大Wednesday,September17,202512成為健身教練Paragraph1Herwordsechoedinmymind.

Thoughthejourneytobecomingafitnesstrainerwasfullofchallengesandtears,herwordsbecametheguidinglightformyprogress.Eachmorning,Iforcedmyselfoutofbedtojogthroughemptystreets,mybreathformingcloudsinthecoldair.Atnight,Istruggledthroughmountainsofbooksandanoceanofknowledge.Sixmonthslater,IwassurprisedtofindthatIhadforgottenaboutstress,growingstrongerandmoreconfident.Finally,withabitofanxietyandexcitement,Isignedupforthetrainerexam.Wednesday,September17,202513成為健身教練Paragraph2Whenahuge“YOUPASSED”poppeduponthescreen,Icouldn’twaittofindAdria.TearswelledasIhuggedher,whispering,“Imadeit!”Then,Ihandedabunchofflowerstoexpressedmysinceregratitude.Itwasherencouragementthatgavemecourageandconfidence.Withoutherhelp,Icouldn’thavegottenthroughthetoughtimeinmylife.IcouldhardlybelievethatIfell