讀后續(xù)寫山東省德州市20242025學(xué)年高二上學(xué)期11月期中英語試題文章分析語料整理（情感、動作、主題升華）三、手把手練技巧四、情境仿寫（報名參加演講比賽，上臺忘詞，堅持完成）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使其構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Iwasinlovewithacting,andI’devenstudiedmethodactingfordevelopingdeeplyemotional,intenseroles.WhenItriedoutfortheschoolplay,TheTwelveDancingPrincesses,IwasconfidentI’dgetoneofthebestparts.ButMr.Ellison,thedirector,didn’toffermeanyrole.Insteadheencouragedmetojointhestagecrew.Ioftenfeltthatmyparentspaidmoreattentiontomyacademicallygiftedoldersister,Diana.Therefore,afewweekslater,whenMomtoldmethatshe’dboughtticketsforthewholefamily,IstartedtowonderifIshouldhavebeenhonestaboutbeingonthestagecrew.ButIcouldn’ttellthemthetruth.Plus,Iwasn’tconvincedIwouldbebehindthescenesontheopeningday.OnceSusan,PrincessSix,missedrehearsal(彩排)foradentistappointment,andIvolunteeredtostandinandreadforher.Ihadn’trehearsedthedances,butIfollowedalongandimprovised(即興創(chuàng)作)andInailedherlines.Afterrehearsal,Mr.Ellisonsaid,“Youwereveryenthusiasticoutthere.”O(jiān)ntheperformanceday,Iwokeupearly,feelingsothrilled.Thespotlightsandcurtainsthesetcrewputuptransformedthegymintoarealtheater.Mr.Ellisonaskedustoarrivebysix,andtoldwhoeverwewerebringingtoeearlyforgoodseats.Icheered,andsodidtheactors.Dianadroppedmyfamilyoffattentosix.Actually,thestagecrewdidn’thavetobethereuntil6:30,butIwasexcited,andIstillhadn’ttoldmyparentsIwouldn’tbeonstage.Theycouldfigureitoutwhentheysawtheshow,andI’ddealwithitthen.ThenMr.EllisoncameinandannouncedthatChristy,PrincessEleven,injuredherankleduringtherehearsalyesterdayandcouldn’ttakethestage.Hemuttered,“WhereamIsupposedtofindanewprincess?”注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。GatheringallmycourageIraisedmyhand.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Maybenoonenoticed“mymistakes”,Ithoughtsecretly.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________一、文章分析原文情境線索作者熱愛表演卻未在學(xué)校劇中獲得角色，加入舞臺劇組。后因PrincessEleven腳踝受傷，作者主動請纓替補演出，過程中雖有失誤但最終獲得認可。未能獲得角色→加入舞臺劇組→替補演出→表演失誤→獲得導(dǎo)演和家人認可→堅定追夢信念語料整理類別英語句子翻譯核心功能情感描寫句Iwokeupearly,feelingsothrilled.我醒得很早，感覺興奮極了。通過“情緒+身體反應(yīng)”的結(jié)合，生動傳遞人物內(nèi)心狀態(tài)（興奮、緊張、愧疚、溫暖）EllisondecidedtoletmereplaceChristy,andIcouldn’tcontainmyexcitement.埃里森決定讓我代替克里斯蒂，我抑制不住自己的興奮。Aswetookthestage,myheartraced.當我們登上舞臺時，我的心狂跳不止。Theirfaceslitupwithpride.他們的臉上洋溢著自豪的神情。Whenthefinalcurtainfell,Ifeltawaveofguiltwashovermefornotperformingperfectly.當最后一幕落下時，因為表演得不夠完美，我感到一陣愧疚涌上心頭。Theirwarmthenvelopedme,andinthatmoment,IrealizedIhadtheirsupport.他們的溫暖包圍著我，在那一刻，我意識到我得到了他們的支持。動作與決心句Gatheringallmycourage,Iraisedmyhand.鼓起所有勇氣，我舉起了手。用動作體現(xiàn)勇氣，用轉(zhuǎn)折和形容詞強化堅持與決心Eachmistakefeltlikeaweightonmychest,butIpushedthrough,determinedtogiveitmyall.每一個錯誤都像一塊重物壓在我的胸口，但我還是堅持了下來，決心全力以赴。主題升華句Withnewfounddetermination,Idecidedtokeeppursuingmydreamofacting,feelingmoreconnectedtomyfamilyandmypassionthaneverbefore.帶著新的決心，我決定繼續(xù)追求我的演藝夢想，感覺比以往任何時候都更能與家人以及自己的熱愛產(chǎn)生聯(lián)結(jié)。將個人經(jīng)歷與“家庭支持”“夢想追求”結(jié)合，提升故事立意手把手練技巧：情感描寫句仿寫（聚焦“情緒+身體反應(yīng)”）（一）興奮類1.原句：Iwokeupearly,feelingsothrilled.仿寫語境：得知自己入選學(xué)?；@球隊仿寫句子：Ijumpedoutofbed,feelingmyheartdancingwithjoy.2.原句：EllisondecidedtoletmereplaceChristy,andIcouldn’tcontainmyexcitement.仿寫語境：老師宣布讓你主持班級聯(lián)歡會仿寫句子：TheteachersaidIcouldhosttheclassparty,andIfeltabigsmilespreadingacrossmyface.（二）緊張類3.原句：Aswetookthestage,myheartraced.仿寫語境：站在演講比賽的臺上仿寫句子：AsIstoodonthespeechstage,myhandsstartedshaking.（三）自豪類4.原句：Theirfaceslitupwithpride.仿寫語境：父母看到你獲得書法比賽獎狀仿寫句子：MomandDad’seyessparkledwithpridewhentheysawmycertificate.（四）愧疚類5.原句：Whenthefinalcurtainfell,Ifeltawaveofguiltwashovermefornotperformingperfectly.仿寫語境：因粗心搞砸了小組展示仿寫句子：Whenourgrouppresentationended,Ifeltaheavyguiltformycarelessmistakes.（五）溫暖類6.原句：Theirwarmthenvelopedme,andinthatmoment,IrealizedIhadtheirsupport.仿寫語境：朋友默默幫你解決了難題仿寫句子：Theirkindnesswrappedaroundme,andIknewtheywerealwaysthereforme.動作與決心句仿寫（聚焦“動作+態(tài)度”）（一）勇氣體現(xiàn)7.原句：Gatheringallmycourage,Iraisedmyhand.仿寫語境：課堂上鼓起勇氣回答難題仿寫句子：Takingadeepbreath,Istooduptoanswerthehardquestion.（二）堅持與擔當8.原句：Eachmistakefeltlikeaweightonmychest,butIpushedthrough,determinedtogiveitmyall.仿寫語境：跑步比賽中雖落后但不放棄仿寫句子：Eachstepfeltlikepullingaheavystone,butIkeptgoing,determinedtofinishtherace.9.主題升華句仿寫（聚焦“經(jīng)歷+感悟”）原句：Withnewfounddetermination,Idecidedtokeeppursuingmydreamofacting,feelingmoreconnectedtomyfamilyandmypassionthaneverbefore.仿寫語境：通過一次失敗的繪畫比賽，更加堅定學(xué)畫的決心仿寫句子：Withastrongerwill,Idecidedtokeeppracticingpainting,feelingclosertomydreamandthefriendswhoencouragedme.四、情境仿寫假設(shè)情境“你報名參加演講比賽，上臺前突然忘詞，但最終堅持完成”，要求用上述類別中的句子結(jié)構(gòu)仿寫片段。參考片段：Istoodbackstage,feelingmypalmssweat(情感描寫).Gatheringallmycourage,Iwalkedtothemicrophone(動作與決心).AsIopenedmymouth,mymindwentblank—butItookabreathandstartedfromthefirstsentenceIremembered(場景銜接).WhenIfinished,theaudienceclappedloudly.Theirsmilesenvelopedme,andIrealizedthattryingbravelywasmoreimportantthanbeingperfect(主題升華).【答案】Gatheringallmycourage,Iraisedmyhand.EllisondecidedtoletmereplaceChristy,andIcouldn’tcontainmyexcitement.Aswetookthestage,myheartraced.Ihadn’tpracticedChristy’sdancesteps,soIhadtofollowtheotheractorsasbestasIcould.Despitemyefforts,Istumbledonafewmovesandmixedupmylinesseveraltimes.Eachmistakefeltlikeaweightonmychest,butIpushedthrough,determinedtogiveitmyall.Maybenoonenoticed“mymistakes”,Ithoughtsecretly.Whenthefinalcurtainfell,Ifeltawaveofguiltwashovermefornotperformingperfectly.Buttomysurprise,Mr.Ellisoncameoverwithasmile.“Youhandledthatbeautifully,especiallywiththelastminutechanges,”hesaid,praisingmystagepresence.AsmyparentsandDianalearnedthatIhadonlysteppedinasatemporaryreplacement,theirfaceslitupwithpride.Theirwarmthenvelopedme,andinthatmoment,IrealizedIhad