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閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。ItwasNewYear’sDay.Imadearesolutiontofindmystray(走失的)dog,PuppyRocky.Inthemorning,Icouldhearicyrainknockingthewindows.IsaidaquickprayerforPuppyRocky.Hewasouttheresomewhereinthestorm,andIcouldjustfeelit.Sure,ithadbeenthreemonthssincehe’dgonemissing,butIstillhadfaith.Itwastheseasonformiracles(奇跡).Thatfall,PuppyRocky,mysweetdog,haddisappearedfrommyparents’houseinCalifornia.HehadbeenstayingwiththemwhileIwasbetweenapartments.Atthetime,IlivedandworkedinNewYorkCity.IwasstayingwithfriendsuntilIsignedmylease(租約)onanewplace.PuppyRockyhadgottenoutofmyparents’housetwodaysbeforeIwassettoflybackhometopickhimup.MymomandIspentthatentirevisitsearchingforhim.Momwasthefamily’sresident“realist”,whichmeantshespentawholelotoftimetryingtopreparemefortheworst.“He’seitherbeenhitbyacarorbeentakeninbysomeonewhofoundhim,”shesaid.Irolledmyeyes.Momalwayssupportedme,butthistimeshedoubted.Shecouldhavedonewithalittlemorefaith!Besides,thoughIcouldn’texplainit,IbelievedI’dseemyPuppyRockyagain.Hisbarksneverfadedaway.He’dbeenhomelesswhenIfirstmethim,anaughtylittledogthathadsurvivedallonhisown.Ifanydogcoulddotheimpossible,itwasmyPuppyRocky.EvenafterIreturnedtoNewYorkCitywithouthimandtheweeksstretchedintomonths,deepdownIhadthisfeelingthatwe’dbereunited.Now,homeagainfortheholidays,Iwasdeterminedtopickupmysearch.IgrabbedPuppyRocky’scarrier,loadeditintothecar,andthenaskedmymomtodrivemetotheshelterforthehomelessdogs,hopinghe’dbeenfound.“Dave,youhavetoberealistic,”mymomsaidasweheadedtothegarage.“He’sbeengonetoolong.You’renotgoingtofindhim.”注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答?!癉on’tyoubelieveinNewYearmiracles?”Iasked.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________WhenIsteppedintothelastroomoftheshelter,afamiliarbarkcameintomyears.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文本分析角色:_____________________________視角:第________人稱時(shí)空線:fromNewYear’sDaymorning__________________________________________NewYear’sDay(headingtotheshelter)theshelter請(qǐng)?jiān)谖恼轮袑⒖赡艿木€索都找出來(lái)。HowdidDaveshowhisdeterminationtofindPuppyRocky?:_____________________________WhydidPuppyRockystaywithDave'sparents?:_____________________________WhenandhowdidPuppyRockydisappear?:_____________________________WhatdidDave'smomthinkaboutfindingPuppyRocky?:_____________________________WhydidDavehavefaithinfindingPuppyRocky?:_____________________________HowlonghadPuppyRockybeenmissingwhenitwasNewYear’sDay?:_____________________________WhatdidDaveandhismomdoduringDave'svisitafterPuppyRockydisappeared?:_____________________________WheredidDaveplantogotofindPuppyRockyonNewYear’sDay?:_____________________________情節(jié)線:元旦當(dāng)天,戴夫下定決心尋找走失的狗狗PuppyRocky,盡管下著冰雨仍充滿信心→______________→______________→______________→元旦假期回家,戴夫決定重啟尋找計(jì)劃,準(zhǔn)備去流浪狗收容所,媽媽再次勸說(shuō)他現(xiàn)實(shí)些→(續(xù)寫)戴夫反問(wèn)媽媽是否相信新年奇跡→(續(xù)寫)戴夫走進(jìn)收容所最后一個(gè)房間時(shí),聽(tīng)到了熟悉的叫聲。情感線:I:determined&faithful→______________→______________→______________→determined(insistingongoingtotheshelter)(續(xù)寫)→(續(xù)寫)綜合以上信息,請(qǐng)用34句話概括文章大意。(中英各一個(gè))中文:__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________英文:_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8.句式:賓語(yǔ)從句;非謂語(yǔ);感嘆句;同位語(yǔ);完全倒裝句;比喻;夸張____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9.本文屬于人與他人/動(dòng)物:_____________________________情節(jié)構(gòu)造第一段提示句:“Don’tyoubelieveinNewYearmiracles?”Iasked.銜接句1——對(duì)前面媽媽勸戴夫現(xiàn)實(shí)些提問(wèn)“媽媽聽(tīng)到戴夫的話后反應(yīng)如何?”:WhatdidMomdoafterhearingDave'squestion?過(guò)渡句推演:銜接1→______________←銜接2銜接句2——對(duì)后面前往收容所提問(wèn)“戴夫在去收容所的路上狀態(tài)怎樣?”:WhatwasDavelikeonthewaytotheshelter?第二段提示句:WhenIsteppedintothelastroomoftheshelter,afamiliarbarkcameintomyears.銜接3——對(duì)“聽(tīng)到熟悉叫聲”提問(wèn)“戴夫聽(tīng)到叫聲后做了什么?”:WhatdidDavedoafterhearingthefamiliarbark?過(guò)渡句推演:銜接3→←主題主題:_______________段落構(gòu)思第一段:“Don’tyoubelieveinNewYearmiracles?”Iasked.→①________→②________→③________;英文:“Don’tyoubelieveinNewYearmiracles?”Iasked.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________第二段:WhenIsteppedintothelastroomoftheshelter,afamiliarbarkcameintomyears.→④________→⑤________→⑥________;英文:WhenIsteppedintothelastroomoftheshelter,afamiliarbarkcameintomyears.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________參考答案文本分析角色:Dave(主人公)、Mom(戴夫的媽媽)、PuppyRocky(戴夫走失的狗)視角:第一人稱時(shí)空線:fromNewYear’sDaymorningthatfall(PuppyRockydisappeared)Dave’svisitafterdisappearanceDavereturnedtoNewYorkCityNewYear’sDay(headingtotheshelter)theshelter請(qǐng)?jiān)谖恼轮袑⒖赡艿木€索都找出來(lái)。HowdidDaveshowhisdeterminationtofindPuppyRocky?:HemadeaNewYear'sresolutiontofindhim,prayedforhiminthemorning,grabbedthedog'scarrier,loadeditintothecarandaskedhismomtodrivehimtothehomelessdogshelter.WhydidPuppyRockystaywithDave'sparents?:BecauseDavewasbetweenapartmentsandlivedandworkedinNewYorkCityatthattime,stayingwithfriendsuntilsigningaleaseonanewplace.WhenandhowdidPuppyRockydisappear?:HedisappearedfromDave'sparents'houseinCaliforniathatfall,twodaysbeforeDavewassettoflybackhometopickhimup.WhatdidDave'smomthinkaboutfindingPuppyRocky?:Shewasarealist,preparingDavefortheworst(thinkingthedogwashitbyacarortakeninbyothers)anddoubtedDavecouldfindhimsincehehadbeengonetoolong.WhydidDavehavefaithinfindingPuppyRocky?:Hecouldn'texplainbutdeeplybelieved;PuppyRocky'sbarksneverfadedinhismind;thedogwashomelessbeforeandsurvivedonhisown,soDavethoughthecoulddotheimpossible.HowlonghadPuppyRockybeenmissingwhenitwasNewYear’sDay?:Threemonths.WhatdidDaveandhismomdoduringDave'svisitafterPuppyRockydisappeared?:Theyspenttheentirevisitsearchingforthedog.WheredidDaveplantogotofindPuppyRockyonNewYear’sDay?:Theshelterforthehomelessdogs.情節(jié)線:元旦當(dāng)天,戴夫下定決心尋找走失的狗狗PuppyRocky,盡管下著冰雨仍充滿信心→回憶秋天狗狗在加州父母家走失的經(jīng)過(guò),以及當(dāng)時(shí)自己因住所問(wèn)題未能及時(shí)接走狗狗的背景→戴夫那次回家探親時(shí)和媽媽全力尋找狗狗,媽媽持現(xiàn)實(shí)態(tài)度勸他做好最壞打算,但戴夫堅(jiān)信能找到→戴夫返回紐約后,幾個(gè)月過(guò)去仍未放棄希望→元旦假期回家,戴夫決定重啟尋找計(jì)劃,準(zhǔn)備去流浪狗收容所,媽媽再次勸說(shuō)他現(xiàn)實(shí)些→(續(xù)寫)戴夫反問(wèn)媽媽是否相信新年奇跡,堅(jiān)持前往收容所→(續(xù)寫)戴夫走進(jìn)收容所最后一個(gè)房間時(shí),聽(tīng)到了熟悉的叫聲。情感線:I:determined&faithful→recalling(anxious)→firminfaith(whenmomdoubted)→persistent→determined(insistingongoingtotheshelter)(續(xù)寫)→hopeful→excited&joyful(續(xù)寫)綜合以上信息,請(qǐng)用34句話概括文章大意。(中英各一個(gè))中文:戴夫的狗狗PuppyRocky在秋天走失,當(dāng)時(shí)戴夫因住所問(wèn)題將狗狗寄養(yǎng)在加州父母家,準(zhǔn)備接走前兩天狗狗走失。此后三個(gè)月,戴夫始終堅(jiān)信能找到狗狗,盡管媽媽作為現(xiàn)實(shí)主義者多次勸他做好最壞打算。元旦當(dāng)天,戴夫下定決心重啟尋找計(jì)劃,堅(jiān)持讓媽媽開(kāi)車帶他去流浪狗收容所。英文:Dave'sdogPuppyRockywentmissingthatfallwhenDavelefthimathisparents'homeinCaliforniaduetohousingissues,twodaysbeforeDavewastopickhimup.Forthefollowingthreemonths,Davefirmlybelievedhecouldfindthedog,thoughhismother,arealist,repeatedlyadvisedhimtopreparefortheworst.OnNewYear’sDay,Davemadeuphismindtorestartthesearchandinsistedhismotherdrivehimtothehomelessdogshelter.句式:賓語(yǔ)從句;非謂語(yǔ);感嘆句;同位語(yǔ);完全倒裝句;比喻;夸張storm.apartments.prayerforPuppyRockythathecouldbesafeinthestorm.非謂語(yǔ):HehadbeenstayingwiththemwhileIwasbetweenapartments.感嘆句:Ifanydogcoulddotheimpossible,itwasmyPuppyRocky!同位語(yǔ):Momwasthefamily’sresident“realist”worst.sonwhowaspracticalandpreparedfortheworst.it.句:OuttheresomewhereinthestormwasmypoorPuppyRocky,Icouldjustfeelit.heart.barkswerelikewarmechoesthatneverfadedawayinmyheart.夸張:Iwouldsearcheverycornerofthecityevenifittookmeawholeyeartofindhim.本文屬于人與他人/動(dòng)物:人與動(dòng)物(主人與走失的寵物狗)之間的情感羈絆,以及人與家人(戴夫與媽媽)之間的互動(dòng)。情節(jié)構(gòu)造第一段提示句:“Don’tyoubelieveinNewYearmiracles?”Iasked.銜接句1——對(duì)前面媽媽勸戴夫現(xiàn)實(shí)些提問(wèn)“媽媽聽(tīng)到戴夫的話后反應(yīng)如何?”:HowdidMomreactwhensheheardDave'squestion?過(guò)渡句推演:銜接1→媽媽雖無(wú)奈但仍妥協(xié)開(kāi)車前往,路上戴夫回憶狗狗過(guò)往加深信念←銜接2銜接句2——對(duì)后面前往收容所提問(wèn)“戴夫在去收容所的路上在想什么?”:WhatwasDavethinkingonthewaytotheshelter?第二段提示句:WhenIsteppedintothelastroomoftheshelter,afamiliarbarkcameintomyears.銜接3——對(duì)“聽(tīng)到熟悉叫聲”提問(wèn)“戴夫聽(tīng)到叫聲后的反應(yīng)是什么?”:WhatwasDave'sreactionwhenheheardthefamiliarbark?過(guò)渡句推演:銜接3→戴夫循聲尋找,確認(rèn)是PuppyRocky,母子倆都很激動(dòng)←主題主題:堅(jiān)定的信念能創(chuàng)造奇跡,主人對(duì)寵物的愛(ài)與不放棄終能換來(lái)重逢。段落構(gòu)思第一段:“Don’tyoubelieveinNewYearmiracles?”Iasked.→①媽媽嘆了口氣,無(wú)奈地?fù)u了搖頭,但還是打開(kāi)了車庫(kù)的門→②路上,我緊緊抱著狗狗的carriers,回憶起第一次遇見(jiàn)PuppyRocky時(shí)它小小的身影,更加堅(jiān)信今天能找到它→③到達(dá)收容所后,我迫不及待地跟著工作人員開(kāi)始逐個(gè)房間尋找,每走過(guò)一個(gè)房間,心里的期待就多一分;英文:“Don’tyou
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