Unit1TeenagelifeReadingforWritingHowtowritealetterofadviceTeachingObjectives1.Studytheorganizationandlanguagefeatures(語言特點(diǎn))ofaletterofadvice;2.Masterthemethodofwritingaletterofadvice.3.Practisewritingaletterofadvice.GameAddictionBullyingSmokingLackofsupportfromfamilyDepressionPeer-PressureTeenagersmaymeetlotsofproplemsinsideandoutsideschool.Haveyoueverhadsuchproplems?Whatdidorwillyoudo?Puppyloveletitgo/letitbe任他去，放下/順其自然turntoparentsaskteahersforhelpwritetoAgonyAunt/advisersself-regulate自我調(diào)節(jié)talktofriends知心姐姐12Step1.ReadingFastReading(Answers):1.WhoisSusanwritingtheletterto?2.Whatishis/herproblem?3.WhatareSusan'ssuggestions?First,talktohis/herfriendabouttheharmofspendingtoomuchtimeonlineandoncomputergames.Second,encouragehis/herfriendtotrynewhobbies.Lastly,discusstheproblemtogether.UnderstandthecontentAteengerwhose

realnameisanonymous(匿名).Maybehis/hersignature

isWorriedFriend.

WorriedFriendisveryworriedabouthisorherfriend,ChenLei,who

playscomputergamestoooftenandspendstoomuchtimeonline.GreetingCloseSignatureMainBody2).Get

the

structure(結(jié)構(gòu))oftheletter.DateStep2.Pre-writingA.Iknowwhattheproblemis.B.Iunderstandhowyoufeel.C.

Thisismyadviceandreason(s).D.Ithinkmyadvicewillhelp.3).StudytheorganisationFindandmarkthepartsoftheletterthatmatchthefollowingpoints.(IndividualWork)(同理心，拉近心理距離，建議更容易被接受，使交流更有效)A.Writethedateandgreetthereader.B.Showthereaderthatyouknowwhattheproblemis.D.Tellthereaderwhatyouthinkhe/sheshoulddoandexplainyourreasons.E.Tellthereaderwhatyouthinkwillhappen.F.Closeandsignature.C.Showthereaderthatyouunderstandhowhe/shefeels.Whatarethenecessarycontentsofaletterforadvice?（寫作模板）(Greeting)DearMrWorried，(Tellthereaderyouknowwhattheproblemis.)Ihavereceivedyourletteraskingmeforadviceabout

.(Tellthereaderyouknow/understandhowhe/shefeels.)Icanwellunderstandthatyouarefeeling

.(Tellthereaderwhatyouthinkhe/sheshoulddo.)Irecommendthatyoushould

.Besides,itisagoodideato

.Whynot

？(Tellthereaderwhatyouthinkwillhappen.)Iamsurethat

.(Closeandsigntheletter.)Allthebest.Yours，______Studythelanguagefeatures:WhatexpressionsdoesMsLuousetomakesuggestions?Circlethem.IrecommendthatIthinkyoushouldWhynotSomeusefulexpressionsforwritingA.Writethedateandgreetthereader.1.10November2019November10th20192.DearBob,Dearworriedfriend,Mydearfriend，DearMadam/SirB.Showthereaderthatyouknowwhattheproblemis.AfterIreadyourletter,Iamsorrytoknowthatyouhavetheproblemofhowtomakefriendsinhighschool.Iamgladtohearthatyouwanttojoininyourschoolfootballteam.Inyourletter,yousaidyouarenotgoodatcommunicatingwithothers.Americanstyle：月-日-年Britishstyle：日-月-年“月份”最好用全稱，如：

1.2May,20202.2ndMay,2020

3.

2May20204.

September21,20205.

September21st,2020避免月份用數(shù)字，如11/12/2020C.Showthereaderthatyouunderstandhowhe/shefeels.1.Iunderstandquitewellthatyouareanxiousandfeelterrible.2.Iknowthatyouareatalossaboutwhattochoose.3.Iunderstandthatyoualwaysfeellonelyafterschool.D.Tellthereaderwhatyouthinkhe/sheshoulddoandexplainyourreasons.1.Ifeelthatitwouldbebeneficialifyoutalkaboutitwithyourfriendbecauseitcanmakehimrealizetheproblem.2.Iwouldliketosuggest/recommendthat…3.IfIwereyou,Iwould…4.Youmayconsiderdoing…because….E.Tellthereaderwhatyouthinkwillhappen.Iamsurehe’lllistentoyou,sinceyouarehisgoodfriend.Ihopeyou’llsoongetaccustomedtothenewlifethere.Ibelieveeverythingwillbebettersoon.F.Closeandsignature1.Allthebest.Bestwishes.Bestregards.2.Yourssincerely,LiHuaLovinglyyours，LiHuaYours,LiHua

ChallengeyourselvesWearetheadvisers我們是大顧問!Step1Discussoneoftheproblems.Step2Draft(起草)yourletteraccordingtotheoutlineonPage19.Step3Exchangeandrevise(修改)yourdraftwithyourpartner.Step4Shareyourwriting.

Writealetterofadvicetoyourworriedclassmate.Consolidation&ExtentionWhilediscussing,doremembertouseexpressionsofwritingaletterofadvice!√Areallthepartsofaletterincludedandorganisedinagoodorder?√Doesthewritergivereasonsfortheadvice?√Doesthewriteruseproperexpressionstogivesuggestions?√Doesthewriterusecommasandstopscorrectly?√Isthehandwritingeasytoread?Thechecklistmayhelpyou...(GroupWork)Focuson:format,contents,structure,expressions,grammar,etc.

(IndividualWork)Homework:1.Consolidatethebasicstructureandlanguagefeaturesofaletterofadvice.2.Chooseoneofthethreeteenagersandcompletetheletterofadvice.14September202x,Dearworriedclassmate，

I'msorrytohearthatyouareworriedaboutkeepingupwiththeotherstudentsinyourstudy,feelinganxiousandlackofconfidence.However,thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.Irecommendyoutocalmdownandadjustyourself,because

beingworriedandanxiousisnotgoodforyourhealth.Besides,youshouldbelieveinyourself.Asweallknow,confidenceisakeytosuccess.Confidencemakesyouhappyandcreative.What'smore,whynotmadeaworkablestudyplan.Bydoingthis,youwillcatchupwithothersstepbystep.

Inordernottomakethingsworse,youhadbettertalktoyourfriends,parentsandteachers,whowillofferyousomehelpfulsuggestions.Inmyopinion,alittlestresscanbebeneficial.Youneedtoworrytoomuch.Atlast,Iwillbegladifyoufindmysuggestionsuseful/helpful.Bestwishes!MissWang10June202XDearXuTing,Youwrotethatyoualwayfeellonelyafterschoolbecauseyourparentsworkinanothercity.Iunderstandhowyoufeel.Itiscommonforteenagerstofeellonelywhentheyliveawayfromtheirparents.Ithinkyoumightaswellparticipateinafter-classactivitiesorclubs,whichwillhelpyouliveabusyandactivelifeandmakemorefriends.Moreover,Joiningavolunteergroupisagoodoptionforyou.Becauseit'sagoldenoppotunitytoexperiencelifeandyouwillrealizemanypeoplearoundusarealsointroubleandneedyourhelp.Soyouarenotalone.Helpingotherpeoplemakesusfeelbetter.Furthermore,youhadbetterkeepintouchwithyourparentsthroughInternet,suchasWechat.Youcantalkwithyourparentsfacetofaceonline,soyouwillnotfeellonely.I'msurethatyou'llmakenewfriendsandleadamoreactiveandoptimisticlife.Idohopethesemethodswillhelpdriveawayyourloneliness.Bestwishes,SusanLuolearnhowtowritealetterofadvice.建議信寫作注意事項(xiàng)1、表明寫信的原因、建議的內(nèi)容、提出建議的理由，其中提出的理

由要合情合理，具有說服力。2、語氣要誠懇/委婉，注意禮貌當(dāng)先。3、內(nèi)容簡明扼要、目的明確。4、建議的角度要多樣化，避免重復(fù)，而且要注意建議之間的銜接。5、基本時(shí)態(tài)多用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)。

1、常用句型A.建議信開頭時(shí)常用句式（呼應(yīng)材料，表明寫作意圖）AfterIreadyourletterinthenewspaper,Iamsorrytoknowthat...However,thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.Herearesometipstohelpyou./Herearefewsuggestions.Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewson/concerning...Iamwritingtosharesomeadvice/opinionwithyou.Iamwritingtoyouwiththepurposeof...Iknowyouhavetroublein...afterreadingyourletter.I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceon...I’msorry(that)youarehavingtrouble/difficultyin...Youhaveaskedforsomeadviceconcerning...andIwilltrytogiveyoumysuggestions.10.Learning/Knowingthatyouhavetroubleinmakingfriends，Iamwritingtogiveyousomesuggestions/offeryousomeadvice.得知你在交友方面有困難，我寫這封信的目的是給你一些建議/忠告。11.I’mverygladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinese.Hereareafewsuggestions.很高興收到你詢問我關(guān)于如何學(xué)習(xí)漢語的建議的來信，下面是我的一些建議。12.Now,I’dliketosharemystudytipswithyou.現(xiàn)在，我想和你分享我的學(xué)習(xí)秘訣。13.Thefollowingaremysuggestions./Mysuggestionsareasfollows.

我的建議如下。B.提出建議時(shí)的常用句式First(ly),Secondly,Thirdly,Lastbutnotleast（最后但并不是最不重要的）IfIwereyou,Iwould...Inmyopinion,itwouldbewiseto...Inmyopinion,thebestwaytosolvetheproblemis...Inmyopinion,you’dbetter...Istronglybelievethat...Isuggestthatyoushould...Mytipsareasfollows...Onlyinthiswaycanwe...Tosolvetheproblem,weshould...Whynotdosth?/Whydon’tyoudosth?1.Youhadbetter/mightaswell(不妨)/aresupposedto/oughtto...2.Whydon'tyou...?It'sbetterto...3.Howabout...?Whatabout...?4.I'dliketosuggest...5.Itmightbeagoodideato...6.Myadvice/suggestionis...7.Isuggestyou(should)dosth.8.Iadviseyou(not)todo9.advise/suggestdoingsth.1.Reasonsareasfollows.3.Itiscommonfor...tofeel..when...4.Itwillbebeneficial/harmfultoyou.5.Itwillalsohelpyourealizethat...(givereasons):1.Itisnotunusualforsb.todosth.2.Reasonsareasfollows.3.Itiscommonfor...tofeel..when...4.Itwillbebeneficial/harmfultoyou.5.Itwillalsohelpyourealizethat...6.Iamsure...7.Idohopemysuggestionswillbenefityou.8.Iexpectmyadvicewillhelpyououtoftrouble.9.Ibelieveyouwillfindtheseproposals/suggestionspractical/useful/helpful/beneficial.10.Allthebest,Bestregards,Bestwishes,Yourssincerely,YourstrulyTransitionwords:(過渡詞銜接詞)firstly,firstofall,firstandformostsecondly,moreover,furthermore,additionally,inaddition,apartfromthat,lastly,lastbutnotleasthowever,nevertheless,whereas;thus,therefore,hence2、中段常用句式Whynottakepartinsomeextra-curricularactivities？Istronglyrecommend/suggest/advisethatyou(should)listentoEnglisheveryday.You’dbettertakeexerciseregularlysothatyoucanbuild