LettersofApplicationxx聯(lián)考高中英語應用文講評2020年浙江省五校聯(lián)考應用文

假如你是李華，寒假在倫敦學習，得知倫敦市政府在社區(qū)招募防疫志愿者。請你用英文寫一封電子郵件應聘，內(nèi)容包括：1.寫信目的；2.個人優(yōu)勢；3.能做的事情。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右2.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。審題與構思體裁：應聘信寫信對象：DearSir/Madam,時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時為主要能根據(jù)體裁很快反應出“應聘信”常用的表達，如:“Knowingthatyouarerecruiting...,Iamwritingtoapplyforthejob.”以及“Thankyouforconsideringmyapplication.”雖然是倫敦市政府在招募志愿者，但閱讀信件應是某位工作人員。不建議使用“DearLondonGovernment,”或“Towhomitmayconcern,”2020年浙江省五校聯(lián)考應用文

假如你是李華，寒假在倫敦學習，得知倫敦市政府在社區(qū)招募防疫志愿者。請你用英文寫一封電子郵件應聘，內(nèi)容包括：1.寫信目的；2.個人優(yōu)勢；3.能做的事情。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右2.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。審題與構思分段與要點：Para.1自我介紹；背景信息；寫信目的李華，中國人，寒假在倫敦學習；政府招募防疫志愿者；寫信應聘Para.2個人優(yōu)勢；能做的事情時間，經(jīng)驗，語言，性格等；發(fā)口罩，量體溫，做好登記，做好宣傳等Para.3套句希望能考慮我；感謝“感謝”不是要點，但出于交際原則，以示禮貌，最好出現(xiàn)對要點一定要進行具體拓展，且緊密圍繞“抗疫志愿者”的主題常見問題要點3缺失，或?qū)⒁c2和要點3融合HavingpreciousworkingexperienceasavolunteerduringtheoutbreakinChina,Iamabletodealwithanysituation.Besides,IcanspeakfluentEnglishandalwayswillingtohelppeopleinneed.Iamreadyforanythingyouwantmetodo.Iamwarm-heartedandIamwillingtohelpothers,suchasdeliveringmedicines,performingfirstaidandsoon.要點1背景信息不到位Hearingthatyouarelookingforvolunteers,Iamwritingtoapplyforit.TIP：建議按順序?qū)⒁c清晰獨立地表達出來，更有利于閱卷老師踩點給分TIP：題目中提到的背景信息也是要點，此處缺少了“寫信人身份”及“抗疫志愿者”的信息，導致寫信目的不夠清晰內(nèi)容不合理1.HavingpreviousexperienceasavolunteerduringthepeakofoutbreakinChina,Iamabletodealwithanysituation.2.Imajorinnursery,soIcanperformfirstaidonpatientswhoareindanger.3.IfIcanbethevolunteer,Iwilldonatesomemasksandsupplies.中國疫情正是在寒假爆發(fā)，根據(jù)題目信息，李華寒假已在英國。根據(jù)題目信息，李華應聘的是社區(qū)志愿者，“能做的事情”不應該涉及到照顧危重病患。因為使用了條件狀語從句，這句話給人感覺“若不讓我當志愿者，我就不捐贈口罩”的意味。常見問題語氣不合適WereIchosen,I’dspreadoutmasksandothernecessities.I’dappreciateitifyoucouldgrantmethisopportunitytojoinyou.Ibelievethiswillmakemestandoutamongotherapplicants.“抗疫志愿者”本身有一定風險，所以在組織語言時不用顯得過于客氣，或是流露出過強的競爭意識。常見問題套句不熟練LearningthatyouareeagerforcommunityvolunteerstofightagainstCOVID-19,Iamwritingtoaskforpermissiontojoininit.IhopeIcanmeetwithyourneeds.HopeIcandoyouafavor.常見問題應聘信必然涉及到“招聘”與“應聘”的表達，建議同學們將這些表達固定下來，此處可用“recruit/inneedof”“applyfor”應聘信結尾通常要表示“謝謝您考慮我的申請”，此處可用“Thankyouforconsideringmyapplication.”Para.1自我介紹；背景信息；寫信目的Knowingthatyouarelookingfor

volunteerstohelpcontainthespreadofthevirus,Iamwritingtoapplyforthejob/position.Knowingthatthegovernmentisrecruitingvolunteerstopreventthespreadoftheepidemic,Iamwritingtorecommendmyselfforthefollowingreasons.Knowingthatthegovernmentisinneedofvolunteerstoshield/defendcommunitiesagainstthevirus,Iwouldliketosignupforthis.Para.3套句Thankyouforyourtime.Thankyoufortakingmyapplicationintoconsideration.Ihopemyapplicationwillmeetwithyourapproval.

Lookingforwardtoyourfavorablereply.好句欣賞Para.2個人優(yōu)勢【總起】IbelieveIamtheverypersonyouarelookingfor.IthinkIamqualifiedforthejob/amequaltothejobforthefollowingreasons.【語言優(yōu)勢】EquippedwithagoodcommandofEnglish,Icancommunicatewithnativeseasily.好句欣賞Para.2個人優(yōu)勢【經(jīng)驗優(yōu)勢】Iamanexperiencedvolunteer.Ihavepreviousexperienceinvolunteering.【時間優(yōu)勢】aflexibleschedule,toworklonghours【性格優(yōu)勢】beingcooperativeandhard-working好句欣賞Para.2能做的事情【句型】TherearevariousthingsIcando,rangingfrom...to...【發(fā)口罩】togiveout/handout/distributemasks【測體溫】totake/measureone'stemperature【做登記】toregisterthosewithabnormaltemperatures【做宣傳】tohelpeducatepeopleandletthemknowthedangerofCOVID-19好句欣賞Para.1①要點全面(身份，背景，目的)；②熟練掌握相關表達；③使用了復雜的語法結構的詞匯Para.2①要點全面(優(yōu)勢,能做的事情)；②結構緊湊(總分;連接成分)③使用了復雜的語法結構的詞匯Para.3①要點全面(感謝；套句)；②套句熟練考場佳作DearSirorMadam,IamLiHua,aChinesestudentcurrentlystudyinginLondon.Knowingthatvolunteersarewantedtofightagainstthevirus,Iamwritingtoapplytobeoneofthem.Asawarm-heartedboy,Iamalwayswillingtohelppeopleinneed.Besides,mygoodcommandofEnglishandabundantrelevantexperiencemakemewellsuitedtothejob.Ifchosenasavolunteer,Iwillusemymedicalknowledgetoappealtolocalpeopletoraiseawarenessofself-protection,suchaswashinghandsregularlyandwearingmaskswhengoingout.Thankyoufortakingmyapplicationintoconsideration.Yours,LiHua參考范文

假設你的名字叫李華，今年18歲，想利用暑假打工，你在報紙上看到了某咖啡廳的招聘懂英語的服務員的廣告。請根據(jù)廣告要求（Part-timewaiter/Waitress；Agerange16-20；Previousexperiencenecessary等）寫一封求職信。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。同類作文鞏固練習1體裁--求職信

時態(tài)--一般現(xiàn)在時，一般將來時

寫信對象--咖啡廳老板Para.1寫信目的（求職）信息來源：報紙廣告所求職位：兼職的，咖啡廳的，服務員Para.2滿足要求/陳述優(yōu)勢年齡18歲；擅長英語；有相關經(jīng)驗；工作態(tài)度端正；性格好Para.3套句希望求職能夠成功審題與構思DearSir/Madam,Learningfromtheadvertisementinthenewspaperthatyourcafeisinneedofpart-timewaiters,Iamwritingtoapplyfortheposition.IbelieveIamqualifiedfortheposition.Iam18yearsoldandIhaveagoodcommandofEnglish,whichwillsurelyliveuptoyourexpectation.WhatisequallyimportantisthatIhavesufficientpreviousexperienceworkinginourschoolcafe.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldgivemethechancetofillinthejobvacancy.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua同類作文鞏固練習1范文

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應聘信）假如你是李華，你校英語協(xié)會招聘志愿者，接待來訪的國外大學生，請你寫信應聘，內(nèi)容包括：1.口語能力；2.相關經(jīng)驗；3.應聘目的。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；