Non-finiteVerbsinwriting非謂語動(dòng)詞在寫作中的應(yīng)用1Teachinggoal:Mastertheuseofnon-finiteverbsinwriting.Teachingimportantpoint:Threeformsofnon-finiteverbs.Teachingimportantdifficultpoint:Howtousenon-finiteverbstomakesentences.2Formsofnon-finiteverbsV-ingV-edtoVEg.workworkingworkedtowork3Revision.Do1--15on22.《總復(fù)習(xí)目標(biāo)》4Revion.1.Theyarrivedattheschool.Theyfeltthehappyatmosphere.

2.Iamgivenanotherchance.Iwillsucceed.3.HewantstoimprovehisEnglish.Hestudiesharder.Arrivingattheschool,theyfeltthehappyatmosphere.Givenanotherchance,Iwillsucceed.ToimprovehisEnglish,hestudiesharder.Jointhesentenceswithnon-finitiveverbs.5OnNationalDay,Ihadverybadluck.WhenIwokeup,Ifounditwastoolateforschool.AndIfoundthealarmclockwasturnedoff.Ihurrieddownstairsandfoundmybikewhichwasbrokenwasstolen.IfeltexhaustedwhenIarrivedatschool.Aftertheschoolguardtoldme,IknewitwasholidayforNationalDay.ThenwhenIcamebackhome,IrealizedIhadleftmykeysinthedoorandIfoundmyhousewasbrokeninto.Readthepassagealoud.6OnNationalDay,Ihadverybadluck.______(wake)up,Ifounditwastoolateforschoolandthealarmclock______(turn)off.Ihurrieddownstairsandfoundmy_______(break)bike_____(lose).SoIhadtoruntoschool._________(exhaust),Iarrivedatschool.______(tell)bytheschoolguard,IknewitwasholidayforNationalDay.Thenwhen_______(come)backhome,IrealizedIhadmademykeys_____(leave)inthedoorandIfoundmyhouse____________(breakinto).WakingturnedbrokenlostExhaustedToldcomingleftbrokenintoReadagainandcompare.7用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)改寫和美化句子1.因?yàn)樵谶@國家沒有朋友，她覺得要想找到工作是不可能的。用連詞becauseBecauseshehadnofriendinthecountry,shefounditimpossibletofindajob.用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)Havingnofriendinthecountry,shefounditimpossibletofindajob.82.這本用簡易英語寫成的書很容易讀懂用定語從句Thebook,

iseasytounderstand.用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)Thebook,

iseasytounderstand用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)改寫和美化句子whichwaswritteninsimpleEnglish,writteninsimpleEnglish,93.他們是來自于幾個(gè)國家的游客。用定語從句Theyarevisitorswhocomefromseveralcountries.用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)Theyarevisitorscomingfromseveralcountries.用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)改寫和美化句子104.發(fā)現(xiàn)他好朋友沮喪，他竭盡所能讓他朋友開心。用并列句Hefoundhisbestfriendfrustratedandhedideverythinghecouldtomakehimhappy.用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)Findinghisbestfriendfrustrated,hedideverythinghecouldtomakehimhappy.用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)改寫和美化句子11

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Itishightimewetookpartinsomeactivities.②Wewanttomakeourselvesmorehealthy.

Itishightimewetookpartinsomeactivitiestomakeourselvesmorehealthy.4.用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)合并下列句子用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)改寫和美化句子12Nowadays,somestudentsoftencheatinexams.Itispopularamongstudentswhoarelazyanddon’tworkhardattheirlessons.Theycheatfortheywanttogethighermarkssothattheycanbepraisedorevenadmired.Also,somestudentswhoworkhardattheirlessonswillcheatinexamsbecausetheyareafraidoffailinginexams.用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)美化文章13Nowadays,somestudentsoftencheatinexams.Itispopularamongstudentswhoarelazyanddon’tworkhardattheirlessons.Nowadays,cheatinginexamsispopularamongstudentswhoarelazyanddon’tworkhardattheirlessons.用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)美化文章↓14Theycheatfortheywanttogethighermarkssothattheycanbepraisedorevenadmired.Theycheattogethighermarkssothattheycanbepraisedorevenadmired.用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)美化文章↓15Also,somestudentswhoworkhardattheirlessons

willcheatinexamsbecausetheyareafraidoffailinginexams.Beingafraidoffailinginexams,somestudentswhoworkhardattheirlessonswillalsocheatinexams.用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)美化文章↓16Nowadays,cheatinginexamsispopularamongstudentswhoarelazyanddon’tworkhardattheirlessons.Theycheattogethighermarkssothattheycanbepraisedorevenadmired.Beingafraidoffailinginexams,somestudentswhoworkhardattheirlessons

willalsocheatinexams.用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)美化后的文章17建議有足夠的睡眠是必要的。原因1.它能有效的改善我們的課堂學(xué)習(xí)。2.保持健康的身體是進(jìn)一步學(xué)習(xí)及工作的基礎(chǔ)。要求：1.用2-3句話表達(dá)表格內(nèi)容

2.2-3句話要有連貫性necessaryaneffectivewaytoimproveourlearningintheclass.thebasisforourfurtherstudyandwork.高考臨近，保持良好的心態(tài)有助于減輕焦慮，還能增強(qiáng)克服困難的勇氣。Havingatry18翻譯:高考臨近，保持良好的心態(tài)有助于減輕焦慮，還能增強(qiáng)克服困難的勇氣。①高考臨近。(NationalCollegeEntranceExamination)②保持良好的心態(tài)很重要。(havearightattitude)③它有助于減輕焦慮（relax）和勇敢地克服困難。Step2：分別翻譯這幾個(gè)簡單句①NationalCollegeEntranceExaminationiscoming.②Itisimportanttohavearightattitude.③Ithelpsustorelaxandovercomedifficultiesbravely.HavingatryStep1：拆分成幾個(gè)簡單句(中文)19Step3：合并句子

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relaxandovercomedifficultiesbravely.①NationalCollegeEntranceExaminationiscoming.②Itisimportanttohavearightattitude.③Ithelpsustorelaxandovercomedifficultiesbravely.Sentence1:Havingatry20Step3：合并句子

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relaxandovercomedifficultiesbravely.①CollegeEntranceExaminationiscoming.②Itisimportanttohavearightattitude.③Ithelpsustorelaxandovercomedifficultiesbravely.Sentence2:Tip:Trytousedifferentwaystoexpress.Havingatry21建議有足夠的睡眠是必要的。原因1.它能有效的改善我們的課堂學(xué)習(xí)。2.保持健康的身體是進(jìn)一步學(xué)習(xí)及工作的基礎(chǔ)。要求：1.用2-3句話表達(dá)表格內(nèi)容

2.2-3句話要有連貫性（2011高考模擬）Havingatrynecessaryaneffectivewaytoimproveourlearningintheclass.thebasisforourfurtherstudyandwork.222026/1/623建議有足夠的睡眠是必要的。原因1.它能有效的改善我們的課堂學(xué)習(xí)。2.保持健康的身體是進(jìn)一步學(xué)習(xí)及工作的基礎(chǔ)。HavingatryItisnecessarytohaveenoughsleep.Havingenough

sleepisnecessary.Itwillbeaneffectivewaytoimproveourlearningintheclass.

Keepinghealthyisthebasisforourfurtherstudyandwork.ToKeephealthyisthebasisforourfurtherstudyandwork.24

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Besides,doingexerciseregularlyisofgreatbenefittoourhealth.Lastbutnotleast,itisveryimportanttokeepabalanceddiet.26二.使用非謂語動(dòng)詞使句子簡潔高檔三.巧用倒裝增強(qiáng)句子表現(xiàn)力四.嘗試多

樣化表達(dá)方式一.使用較高級(jí)詞匯使文章增加吸引力①強(qiáng)調(diào)句②With短語復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)③定語從句④名詞性從句(主賓表同從句)⑤各種狀語從句⑥被動(dòng)語態(tài)27書面表達(dá)評(píng)分檔次情景作文共分6檔給分第1檔1820分第2檔1517分第3檔1214分第4檔611分第5檔15分第6檔0分2808北京高考：假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三一班的學(xué)生李華，為校刊英語園地寫一篇題為“OurSpringOuting”的英文稿件。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，敘述上周你們班從準(zhǔn)備春游到春游結(jié)束的完整過程。注意：詞數(shù)不少于60。提示詞：游樂園amusementpark垃圾箱bin

討論爬山撿拾別人的垃圾投放垃圾29常用語：1.LastFridayleftmeadeepimpression,whichIwillneverforget.Lastweek,I/mybrotherhadanunforgettableexperience.2.Inordertoimproveourabilitiesoffacingdanger,ourschoolorganizedanactivity.按時(shí)間順序描寫3.Earlyinthemorning,wemetattheschoolgateandwentto…bybus.

OneSundaymorning,myclassmatesandIwenttotheparkforanpicnic.4Afterdoing…,wewenttodo….

5.Havingdone…,we……..6.Andthen,we…..30結(jié)尾語：

Iwastired,butIwashappythatIdidagooddeed.Ihavelearnedagreatdealthroughtheactivity.Itisanunforgettableday/experience評(píng)論語/感慨Ithinktheactivityisbothnecessaryandmeaningful.Itnotonlymakesusawareof

theimportanceofself-protection/helpingothers/protectingourenvironmentbutalsodevelopourabilitiesofdealingwiththings/communicatingwithothers.2.Theactivitycandevelop/promoteoursenseofsocialresponsibility.31.心情語

Wewereinhighspirit.

Withexcitementfillingourheart,wesaidthanks/goodbyetosb.

Withourheartsfilledwithexcitement,we….Toourjoy/delight,wesaw…..景色：

1.Theviewwasbeautiful.2.Thesunwasshining.3.Gentlycamethesoftwind.4.Theweatherwasclear,thewindcalmandthesunshining32時(shí)間順序：要點(diǎn)：細(xì)節(jié)：適當(dāng)添加：時(shí)間順序：要點(diǎn)：細(xì)節(jié)：適當(dāng)添加：時(shí)間順序：要點(diǎn)：細(xì)節(jié)：適當(dāng)添加：時(shí)間順序：要點(diǎn)：細(xì)節(jié)：適當(dāng)添加：Earlyinthemorningsetoff…climb…爬山、天氣心情，景色…Whenwegottothetopof…到處垃圾情緒驚訝心情·…Finally或·fewhourslater,或·After..投放垃圾可回收,不可回收感受…Before

theSpringouting討論不同的想法心情·…33

好作文的要素：具體生動(dòng)Westartedourspringoutingonafineday.34上周我們班組織了一次春游。我們先召開了班會(huì)討論春游去哪兒。我們提出了很多不同的想法,例如去游樂園,去劃出和去爬山。Lastweekourclassorganizedaspringouting.Wefirstheldaclassmeeting,discussingwheretogoforourspringouting.Wecameupwithseveralchoices,suchasgoingtoanamusementpark,goingboatingandgoingmountainclimbing.Finally,wedecidedtogomountainclimbing.1.第二天，我們一大早兒就出發(fā)了。2.當(dāng)我們爬山的時(shí)候,我們享受著溫暖的陽光和欣賞著美麗的景色。3.沒過多久我們便來到了山頂。Thenextday,wesetoffearlyinthemorning.Whileclimbingthemountain,weenjoyedthewarmsunshineandabeautifulview.Itdidn’ttakeuslongtoarriveatthetopofthemountain.4.最后我們決定去爬山。35然而，當(dāng)我們到達(dá)山頂?shù)哪且豢涛覀凅@訝地發(fā)現(xiàn)這里到處都是游客留下的垃圾。我們毫不遲疑地開始撿垃圾。However,wewereshockedtoseelitterhereandthereleftbytouriststhemomentwereachedthere.Withoutanyhesitation,wesetouttopickupthelitteratonce.撿完所有垃圾后，我們把垃圾分別扔到附近的可回收和不可回收的垃圾桶里。雖然很累，但我們很有成就感。因?yàn)槲覀優(yōu)楸Ｗo(hù)環(huán)境盡了我們的綿薄之力。Havingcollectedalltherubbish,

weputtherubbishintothenearbyrecyclingbinandnon-recyclingbinrespectively.Tiredaswewere,wehadasenseofachievementbecausewedidoursmallparttoprotecttheenvironment.36最基本的范文LastThursday,we____aclassmeeting______wheretogoforourspringouting.We______upwithseveralchoices,suchas_____boating,_______amountain,and______toanamusementpark.Finallywedecided________mountainclimbing.Thenextday,wesetoffearlyinthemorning,while________themountain,we________thewarmsunshineandabeautifulview.However,whenwe________thetop,we____________toseelitterhereandthere,suchasbottlesandbananaspeels.Thenwestarted__________thelitter.Afterwards,weputtherubbishintothenearby________binand__________binrespectively.We______tiredbuthappy.hadtodiscusscamegoingclimbinggoingtogoclimbingenjoyedreachedwereshockedtopickuprecyclingnon-recyclingwere373839intothebindifferently.Wecallonawarenessonprotectingourenvironmentwhichisofgreatimportance.Thoughcleaninguptherubbishwasatoughtask,ourheartswerefilledwithjoyandwewillrememberthisoutingforever.19

GentlycomestheSpring.

Asthewindsoftlyblows,itbringsbackthevitalitytothegreatoutdoor.Studentsinourclasswereexcited,too,andeagertohaveaspringoutingintheweekendlastweek.Aheateddiscussionwasheld:Somestudentssuggestedwegoboating,someinsistedthatgoinghikingwasthebestidea,whilesomethoughttheamusementparkwasofmorefun.Finally,wedecidedtogohikinginthemountainsonasunnyday.Theflowerswerebloominghappilyandsent

theirwelcometous.

Withexcitementinourheart,weclimbedthemountaineasilyandreachedt