2025屆高三上學期“三診一?！泵自\斷測試英語試題云南昆明市2025屆高三“三診一模"摸底診斷測試英語試題

第二節(jié)(滿分25分)

67.閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。

InthebeautifultownRiverviewsurroundedbyrollinghills,livedtwobrothers,JackandTom.

Theywereasdifferentasnightandday-Jack,theolderbytwoyears,wasakeenreaderwithapreferenceforquietmomentsspentinacademicbooks,hisnoseoftenburiedinthepagesofhistoricaltextsorscientificparedwithhim,Tomwastotallydifferent,fullofenergyandenthusiasm,alwayslongingfortheoutdoors.Hefoundjoythatcamefromplayingsoccerandbasketball.Thedifferencesbetweenthemoftenledtoarguments,creatingagapthatseemedimpossibletobridge.

Onesummer,theirparents,hopingtomendthegrowingdividebetweenthem,decidedtosendthemonacampingtripinthenearbyBlueRidgeMountains.Theythoughtthatthefreshmountainair,coupledwithoutdooractivities,wouldbringthemcloser.

Unwillingly,thetwobrotherspackedtheirbags,eachsecretlyhopingthattheotherwouldgiveupatthelastminute.Butneitherdid,andsoonenough,theyfoundthemselvessettingupcampunderacanopy(頂篷)oftwinklingstars,thecoolnightbreezewhisperingthroughthetrees.

Thefirstfewdaysweretense.Theyquarreledoverinsignificantmatters-whoshouldcarrythewaterbottle,whogottochoosethemusicduringmeals,andwhoseturnitwastogatherfirewood.Theirunpleasantquarrelechoedthroughthequietforest,breakingthepeacethatenvelopedthem.Eachdisagreementseemedtowidenthecrackbetweenthemuntiloneeveningwhenthingstookadramaticturn.

Asuddenstormrolledin.Thewindhowledthroughthetrees,andrainbegantopour.Inthedisorderofsecuringthetentandgatheringsuppliestopreventthemfromgettingwet,Tomslippedonamuddypathandhurthisanklebadly.Strugglingwithextremepain,heknewthathehadtoturntoCampsitemedicaltent.

注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150左右;

2.請按如下格式在答題卡上相應位置作答。

Paragraph1:Noticinghisbrotherinsuchasituation,Jack’sheartsoftenedimmediately.

Paragraph2:AsTomhealed,thebrothersworkedtogethertocompletethecampingtrip.

云南昆明市2025屆高三“三診一?！泵自\斷測試英語試題

第二節(jié)(滿分25分)

67.閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。

InthebeautifultownRiverviewsurroundedbyrollinghills(非謂語動詞做后置定語),livedtwobrothers,JackandTom(倒裝句).

Theywereasdifferentasnightandday-Jack,theolderbytwoyears,wasakeenreaderwithapreferenceforquietmoments(介詞短語做后置定語)spentinacademicbooks(非謂語動詞做后置定語),hisnoseoftenburiedinthepagesofhistoricaltextsorscientificjournals(獨立主格).Comparedwithhim(過去分詞做比較狀語),Tomwastotallydifferent,fullofenergyandenthusiasm(adj短語做補語),alwayslongingfortheoutdoors(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作).Hefoundjoythatcamefromplayingsoccerandbasketball(定從).Thedifferencesbetweenthemoftenledtoarguments,creatingagapthatseemedimpossibletobridge(定從).

Onesummer,theirparents,hopingtomendthegrowingdividebetweenthem(非謂語動詞做后置定語),decidedtosendthemonacampingtripinthenearbyBlueRidgeMountains.Theythoughtthatthefreshmountainair,coupledwithoutdooractivities(過去分詞做后置定語),wouldbringthemcloser(賓從).

Unwillingly,thetwobrotherspackedtheirbags,eachsecretlyhopingthattheotherwouldgiveupatthelastminute(賓從)(獨立主格).Butneitherdid,andsoonenough,theyfoundthemselvessettingupcampunderacanopy(頂篷)oftwinklingstars,thecoolnightbreezewhisperingthroughthetrees(獨立主格，環(huán)境描寫).

Thefirstfewdaysweretense.Theyquarreledoverinsignificantmatters-whoshouldcarrythewaterbottle,whogottochoosethemusicduringmeals,andwhoseturnitwastogatherfirewood(同位語從句，AB&C).Theirunpleasantquarrelechoedthroughthequietforest(環(huán)境描寫),breakingthepeace(現(xiàn)在分詞短語做結(jié)果狀語)thatenvelopedthem(定從).Eachdisagreementseemedtowidenthecrackbetweenthem(狀態(tài)描寫)untiloneeveningwhenthingstookadramaticturn(定從).

Asuddenstormrolledin(環(huán)境描寫).Thewindhowledthroughthetrees,andrainbegantopour.Inthedisorderofsecuringthetentandgatheringsuppliestopreventthemfromgettingwet(介詞短語狀語),Tomslippedonamuddypathandhurthisanklebadly(核心轉(zhuǎn)折點).Strugglingwithextremepain(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作),heknewthathehadtoturntoCampsitemedicaltent(賓從).

注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡上相應位置作答。

Paragraph1:Noticinghisbrotherinsuchasituation,Jack’sheartsoftenedimmediately.

Paragraph2:AsTomhealed,thebrothersworkedtogethertocompletethecampingtrip.

1.續(xù)寫類型分類與構(gòu)思分析

分析角度內(nèi)容

續(xù)寫類型情感成長類（兄弟關(guān)系、理解與和解）

構(gòu)思思路1.通過外部事件（暴風雨與受傷）促使人物成長。2.通過情感沖突和轉(zhuǎn)折點推動情節(jié)。

3.結(jié)尾強調(diào)成長、理解與和解。

布局與框架第一段：Jack對弟弟受傷的反應，情感轉(zhuǎn)變，開始照顧Tom。

第二段：Tom逐漸恢復，兄弟關(guān)系改善，共同完成露營。

實施要點1.注意承接原文（如描寫他們的矛盾、爭吵）。

2.巧妙設(shè)置轉(zhuǎn)折（如Jack的內(nèi)心變化）。

3.強化情感遞進（從冷漠到關(guān)心）。

承接原文要點1.矛盾點：之前關(guān)系緊張，爭吵不斷。

2.關(guān)鍵事件：Tom受傷，無法獨自行動。

3.情感轉(zhuǎn)折：Jack主動照顧Tom。

巧妙設(shè)計續(xù)寫1.環(huán)境渲染（暴風雨、森林中的困境）。

2.心理描寫（Jack的內(nèi)心掙扎與改變）。

3.人物互動（對話與行動體現(xiàn)關(guān)系緩和）。

2.故事山（StoryMountain）分析

起因→沖突→高潮→轉(zhuǎn)折→結(jié)局

分析角度內(nèi)容原文反應句

人物刻畫Jack從冷漠到關(guān)心，Tom從固執(zhí)到理解。"Theyquarreledoverinsignificantmatters."

情感層次起初：相互厭煩→沖突：暴風雨受傷→轉(zhuǎn)折：關(guān)心→結(jié)尾：和解"Jack’sheartsoftenedimmediately."

關(guān)鍵情節(jié)點1.爭吵不斷→2.暴風雨來襲→3.Tom受傷→4.Jack照顧Tom→5.關(guān)系緩和"Tomslippedonamuddypathandhurthisanklebadly."

語言特色對比修辭（兄弟性格差異）、心理描寫、動作描寫增強氛圍"Unwillingly,thetwobrotherspackedtheirbags..."

關(guān)鍵詞分析爭吵（argue,quarrel）、受傷（injured,wounded）、關(guān)心（care,concern）"Thedifferencesbetweenthemoftenledtoarguments."

心理描寫1.Jack開始不情愿，后來變得主動。

2.Tom對哥哥的態(tài)度變化。"Jack’sheartsoftenedimmediately."

動作描寫1.Tom滑倒受傷。

2.Jack幫忙扶起并包扎傷口。"Tomslippedonamuddypath..."

環(huán)境描寫1.暴風雨來襲。

2.森林氛圍，夜晚寒冷。"Thewindhowledthroughthetrees,andrainbegantopour."

隱含主題1.兄弟情誼的成長。

2.困境中的相互支持。"AsTomhealed,thebrothersworkedtogethertocompletethecampingtrip."

情感轉(zhuǎn)折從冷漠到關(guān)心，從對抗到理解。"Jack’sheartsoftenedimmediately."

空間轉(zhuǎn)換帳篷→森林小路→醫(yī)療帳篷→營地"Strugglingwithextremepain,heknewthathehadtoturntoCampsitemedicaltent."

時間過渡風暴前→風暴中→風暴后"Asuddenstormrolledin."

3.續(xù)寫常用語料

推薦的動作、心理、環(huán)境描寫

（1）動作描寫（8個）

Herushedforward,grabbinghisbrother’sarm.

Hishandstrembledslightlyashehelpedhisbrotherstand.

Jackkneltdown,examiningTom’sswollenankle.

Hegrittedhisteethandliftedhisbrotherontohisback.

Hewrappedabandagetightlyaroundthewound.

Tomwincedinpainbutnoddedinappreciation.

Jackclearedhisthroat,hesitatingbeforespeaking.

Theywalkedsidebyside,theirstepsfinallyinsync.

（2）心理描寫（8個）

Jackhesitated,tornbetweenoldresentmentandnewconcern.

Asenseofguiltwashedoverhim.

Hecouldn’tignorethetightknotinhischest.

Tombithislip,ashamedoftheirpastfights.

RelieffloodedthroughJackwhenTommanagedaweaksmile.

Hefeltawarmthspreadthroughhimastheyworkedtogether.

Jackrealizedhowmuchhehadtakenhisbrotherforgranted.

Tommethisbrother’sgaze,understandingfinallydawning.

（3）環(huán)境描寫（8個）

Darkcloudsgathered,swallowingthelasttracesofsunlight.

Thewindhowled,rattlingtheirfragiletent.

Raindropspoundedagainsttheground,soakingtheirsupplies.

Lightningflashedacrossthesky,illuminatingtheworriedfaces.

Theforestfloorturnedintoaslipperymessofmudandleaves.

Coldairbitattheirskin,makingthemshiver.

Thestormpassed,leavingtheworldfreshandsilent.

Morningsunlightfilteredthroughthetrees,castingagoldenglow.

高級詞匯替換

基礎(chǔ)詞匯高級表達同義詞

HelpAssist,aidSupport

AngryFurious,outragedResentful

TiredExhausted,drainedFatigued

HappyOverjoyed,elatedThrilled

DifficultChallenging,demandingArduous

4.高分語法點與搭配

（1）語法現(xiàn)象

語法點示例句

虛擬語氣Ifhehadn’thelped,hisbrothermightnothavemadeit.

現(xiàn)在分詞短語Seeinghisbrotherinpain,Jackactedinstantly.

強調(diào)句ItwasinthatmomentthatJacktrulyunderstoodhisbrother.

非謂語動詞（todo）Jackkneltdowntoexaminethewound.

定語從句Theforest,whichhadoncefeltvastandlonely,nowseemedsmaller.

（2）可積累的語料

短語例句

MakeamendsJackwantedtomakeamendsfortheirpastfights.

CometotermswithTomfinallycametotermswithhisbrother’scare.

TensionmeltedawayAstheyworkedtogether,thetensionmeltedaway.

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Noticinghisbrotherinsuchasituation,Jack’sheartsoftenedimmediately.Withouhesitation(without介詞短語做狀語),herushedtoTom’sside,helpinghimsitup(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作).“Areyouokay"heasked,concernwrittenalloverhisface(獨立主格).Theraincontinuedtopour,soakingthemtothebone(非謂語動詞短語做伴隨動作)(環(huán)境描寫).JackquicklywrappedhisjacketaroundTom’sshoulders,hispreviousfrustrationsforgotten(獨立主格).“Weneedtogetyoutothemedicaltent,”Jacksaidfirmly.ThoughTomhesitated(狀從),henodded,realizing(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作)hehadnootherchoice(賓從).Jackbentdown,allowingTomtoleanonhim(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作)astheyslowlymadetheirwaybacktothecampsite(狀從).EverystepwaspainfulforTom,butJack’sunwaveringsupportgavehimstrength(轉(zhuǎn)折對比描寫).Forthefirsttimeinalongwhile,Tomfeltgratefulforhisbrother’spresence.

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AsTomhealed,thebrothersworkedtogethertocompletethecampingtrip.Jacktookchargeofgatheringfirewood,whileTomhelpedpreparemeals(狀從).Theiroldargumentsseemeddistant(狀態(tài)描寫為),replacedbylaughterandsharedexperiences(過去分詞短語做結(jié)果狀語).Sittingbythecampfireoneevening(現(xiàn)在分詞短語做伴隨動作),TomglancedatJack.“Thanks…foreverything,"hesaidsoftly.Jacksmiled,givinghisbrotheraplayfulnudge(現(xiàn)在分詞短語做伴隨動作).“You’renotthatbad,youknow.”Thewarmthofthefiremirroredthewarmthgrowingbetweenthem(環(huán)境情感描述).Thetripthathadstartedasaburden(定從)hadbecomesomethingmeaningful(轉(zhuǎn)變描寫).Bythetimetheypackedup(狀從),theywerenolongerjusttwoindividuals—theywerebrothers(遞進句式),boundbysomethingdeeperthanwords(過去分詞短語做結(jié)果狀語).

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Noticinghisbrotherinsuchasituation,Jack’sheartsoftenedimmediately.ThepastconflictssuddenlyseemedinsignificantcomparedtoTom’spain.(心理描寫)Withoutthinkingtwice(with復合狀語),Jackcrouchedbesidehim,hishandstrembling(獨立主格)asheexaminedTom’sankle(狀從對原文的銜接).“Weneedtogetyououtoftherain,"hemuttered,hisvoicefirmbutgentle(獨立主格).Ignoringthecoldseepingthroughhisclothes(現(xiàn)在分詞短語做伴隨動作),hewrappedanarmaroundTom’swaistandhelpedhimstand.Tomwinced(vi退縮)butallowedJacktoguidehimback.Thestormragedaroundthem,butJackrefusedtoletgo(環(huán)境描寫和心理展示).Witheachstep,theirbondstrengthened—unspokenbutundeniable(狀態(tài)描寫).

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AsTomhealed,thebrothersworkedtogethertocompletethecampingtrip.JackpatientlytaughtTomhowtoproperlysetupatent(賓從),whileTom,inreturn,sharedsurvivaltips(狀從)hehadpickedupfromadventurebooks(定從).Theylaughedatpastmisunderstandingsandfoundcommongroundinthesimplestofthings(變化描寫).Whenthefinaldayarrived(狀從),JacklookedatTomandsmirked.“Iguesscampingwasn’tsobadafterall(賓從),”hesaid.Tomchuckled,nodding(現(xiàn)在分詞做伴隨動作).“Notwithyouaround."Astheyleftthecampsite(狀從),thegapthatoncedividedthem(定從)haddisappeared,replacedbytrust,understanding,andanunbreakablebond(過去分詞短語做結(jié)果狀語).

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Noticinghisbrotherinsuchasituation,Jack’sheartsoftenedimmediately.Foryears,hehadseenTomasnothingbutarecklesstroublemaker(描寫兄弟情很好的積累),butinthatmoment,allhesaw(定從)washislittlebrotherinpain.“Holdon,”hemurmured,kneelingbesideTom(現(xiàn)在分詞短語做伴隨動作).Carefully,heinspectedtheswollenanklebeforetearingastripoffabricfromhisownshirttowraparoundit(救援類動作描寫).“Leanonme,"heinstructed.Thoughreluctantatfirst(讓步狀從),Tomobeyed,hisusualpridemeltinginthefaceofnecessity(不情愿感的描寫推薦！).Astheystumbledthroughtherain(狀從),Jacktightenedhisgrip,hisdeterminationunwavering(獨立主格).

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AsTomhealed,thebrothersworkedtogethertocompletethecampingtrip.Theyfoundthemselvesworkinginperfectharmony—Tomlightingthefire(獨立主格)whileJackcooked(狀從).Goneweretheconstantbickeringandsilenttreatments(倒裝句，強調(diào)).Onenight,underaskyfilledwithstars,Tombrokethesilence.“Ialwaysthoughtyoudidn’tcare,”headmitted.Jackscoffed.“You’remybrother.Ofcourse,Icare."Inthatmoment,bothunderstoodthatdespitetheirdifferences,theywouldalwayshaveeachother(賓從).Andthatwasenough.

高分語法解析與亮點詞匯

1.高中語法加分點

語法點例句解析

虛擬語氣Ifhehadn’thelped,hisbrothermightnothavemadeit.表達對過去情況的假設(shè)，提