高三上學(xué)期期末英語試題山東省煙臺市2024-2025學(xué)年高三上學(xué)期期末學(xué)業(yè)水平考試英語試題

第二節(jié)（滿分25分）

閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。

“Unbelievable,"Jadescreamedwhileexamininghercamerathat,secondsbefore,hadbeenaccidentallydroppedintotheseawaterbyher.Itwasherfather’sfavourite.Shehadbroughtittoherclassbeachbarbecuetorecordmemorablemomentswithherhighschoolclassmates.Jadeheldthecameraclosetoherchestbeforedryingitwithatowel.Shepressedthepowerbuttonseveraltimes.Noresponse.

Tearsofsadnesswellingupinhereyes,Jadegatheredherbelongings,determinedtoleave.“Jade,whereareyougoing”Herpuzzledclassmatescalledbehindher,butsheignoredthem.Withoutsayinggoodbye,sheranawayfromthebarbecue.Shewantedtotakethecameratotherepairmanimmediately.UncleLee,thetrustyrepairmanforallthingsdigital,couldonlyshakehishead,giveheraresignedlookandsay,“It’sbeyondrepair."

ThecamerawasagiftfromJade’smothertoherfatheronhisfortiethbirthday.Sincethen,ithadbeenhiscompanionforallevents,bigandsmall.Ithadbeeninstrumentalincapturingallthesignificantmilestonesintheirfamily.Numerousadvanceddigitalcamerashadcomeontothemarketbuthisfatherhadnointentionofreplacingthetreasure.Butthistimeshehadsecretlytakenitoutandruinedit!Herfatherwouldgetcrosswithherandprobablynevertrustherwithhisbelongingsagain.Thinkingofthis,Jadeputbackthedisabledcameraquietlyinherfather’sdrawerinthehopethatherfatherwouldn’tfindoutthetruth.

Jaderemaineddisturbedforafewdays.ThencamethedaywhenherfatherwentforhiscamerabecauseJade’syoungersisterwouldbegraduatingfromkindergartenandhewaspreparingfortheceremony.

“What’swrongwithmycameraItwasingoodconditionlastSaturday.Maybeit’stoooldtowork,”Jade’sfathersaidindisbelief,havingtriedturningitonseveraltimesandfailed.“Takeiteasy,dear.Perhapsit’shightimetochangeforanadvancedone,"Jade’smothercomfortedhimsmilingly.“ButIcan’tpartwiththisbigtreasure.”Herfatherresponded.

注意：

（1）續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個左右；

（2）請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

Paragraph1:Hearingthis,Jadegathereduphercourage.

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Paragraph2:Thenextday,whenJadecamehome,shesawanewsmartphoneonherdesk.

第二節(jié)（滿分25分）

閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。

“Unbelievable,"Jadescreamedwhileexamininghercamera(狀從的省略形式，非謂語動詞做伴隨動作)that,secondsbefore,hadbeenaccidentallydroppedintotheseawaterbyher(定從).Itwasherfather’sfavourite.Shehadbroughtittoherclassbeachbarbecuetorecordmemorablemoments(非謂語動詞做目的狀語)withherhighschoolclassmates(介詞短語做狀語).Jadeheldthecameraclosetoherchestbeforedryingitwithatowel(介短狀語).Shepressedthepowerbuttonseveraltimes.Noresponse.

Tearsofsadnesswellingupinhereyes(獨立主格),Jadegatheredherbelongings,determinedtoleave(adj短語做補語).“Jade,whereareyougoing”Herpuzzledclassmatescalledbehindher,butsheignoredthem.Withoutsayinggoodbye(介短狀語),sheranawayfromthebarbecue.Shewantedtotakethecameratotherepairmanimmediately.UncleLee,thetrustyrepairmanforallthingsdigital,couldonlyshakehishead,giveheraresignedlookandsay,“It’sbeyondrepair."

ThecamerawasagiftfromJade’smothertoherfather(介短定語)onhisfortiethbirthday.Sincethen,ithadbeenhiscompanionforallevents,bigandsmall(adj做補語).Ithadbeeninstrumentalincapturingallthesignificantmilestonesintheirfamily(介詞短語做主語，it形式主語).Numerousadvanceddigitalcamerashadcomeontothemarketbuthisfatherhadnointentionofreplacingthetreasure.Butthistimeshehadsecretlytakenitoutandruinedit!Herfatherwouldgetcrosswithherandprobablynevertrustherwithhisbelongingsagain.Thinkingofthis(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作),Jadeputbackthedisabledcameraquietlyinherfather’sdrawerinthehopethatherfatherwouldn’tfindoutthetruth(同位從).

Jaderemaineddisturbedforafewdays.Thencametheday(倒裝句)whenherfatherwentforhiscamera(定從)becauseJade’syoungersisterwouldbegraduatingfromkindergartenandhewaspreparingfortheceremony(狀從).

“What’swrongwithmycameraItwasingoodconditionlastSaturday.Maybeit’stoooldtowork,”Jade’sfathersaidindisbelief(介短狀語，情緒描寫),havingtriedturningitonseveraltimesandfailed(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作).“Takeiteasy,dear.Perhapsit’shightimetochangeforanadvancedone,"Jade’smothercomfortedhimsmilingly.“ButIcan’tpartwiththisbigtreasure.”Herfatherresponded.

注意：

（1）續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個左右；

（2）請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

Hearingthis,Jadegathereduphercourage.

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Thenextday,whenJadecamehome,shesawanewsmartphoneonherdesk.

1.按高考英語讀后續(xù)寫要求分析

分析角度內(nèi)容原文反應(yīng)句

人物刻畫Jade的內(nèi)心掙扎，父親對相機的情感，母親的安慰"Jadeheldthecameraclosetoherchest"“Herfatherwouldgetcrosswithherandprobablynevertrustherwithhisbelongingsagain."

情感層次從失落、焦慮到?jīng)Q定面對，最終的勇氣釋放"Tearsofsadnesswellingupinhereyes""Jadegatheredherbelongings,determinedtoleave."

關(guān)鍵情節(jié)點相機損壞，父親和母親的反應(yīng)，Jade的內(nèi)心掙扎"Jadegatheredherbelongings,determinedtoleave.""ThecamerawasagiftfromJade’smothertoherfather."

語言特色表達緊張和沖突的詞匯，如“resignedlook”，“beyondrepair”"It’sbeyondrepair.""Jaderemaineddisturbedforafewdays."

關(guān)鍵詞分析“camera",“repairman”,“beyondrepair",“treasure”"Itwasbeyondrepair.""Ithadbeenhiscompanionforallevents,bigandsmall."

心理描寫Jade的內(nèi)疚和不安，父親的失望"Tearsofsadnesswellingupinhereyes""Thinkingofthis,Jadeputbackthedisabledcameraquietly."

動作描寫Jade跑向修理店，修理師的反應(yīng)，父親的嘗試修理相機"Jaderanawayfromthebarbecue.""Jadegatheredherbelongings."

環(huán)境描寫海灘聚會和修理店"Herpuzzledclassmatescalledbehindher.""UncleLee,thetrustyrepairman."

隱含主題責(zé)任感與勇氣面對錯誤，家庭關(guān)系中的信任"Butthistimeshehadsecretlytakenitoutandruinedit!"

情感轉(zhuǎn)折Jade決定面對父親，父親卻反應(yīng)意外，最后母親的安慰"Hearingthis,Jadegathereduphercourage."

空間轉(zhuǎn)換從海灘到修理店，再到家中"Jadegatheredherbelongings,determinedtoleave.""Thenextday,whenJadecamehome..."

時間過渡幾天的內(nèi)心掙扎，最后一次決定"Jaderemaineddisturbedforafewdays."

2.續(xù)寫思路與布局

續(xù)寫構(gòu)思

思路:續(xù)寫應(yīng)關(guān)注Jade決定面對父親的情感轉(zhuǎn)折。她的內(nèi)疚與父親的失望形成強烈對比。故事的轉(zhuǎn)折在于Jade最終獲得了勇氣，嘗試向父親坦白。在處理內(nèi)心沖突時，父親的反應(yīng)也應(yīng)該有一定的意外感。

布局:

第一段:通過Jade的內(nèi)心變化來描寫她如何下定決心面對父親，嘗試彌補自己的錯誤。

第二段:展示父親的反應(yīng)與母親的寬容，最終父親可能選擇理解和寬容，這為Jade帶來一份寬慰。

續(xù)寫要注意承接原文的事項

承接原文情感:續(xù)寫需要從Jade內(nèi)心的矛盾和不安開始，最終找到勇氣面對父親的失望。

動作的合理性:Jade的行為應(yīng)符合她的情感變化，首先是內(nèi)心的掙扎，接著是她的決定與父親的反應(yīng)。

巧妙設(shè)計續(xù)寫內(nèi)容

情感遞進:Jade的情感從內(nèi)疚轉(zhuǎn)為勇氣，再到父親的意外反應(yīng)，逐步推動情節(jié)發(fā)展。

沖突和解決:在沖突中，Jade的內(nèi)疚和父親的失望構(gòu)成了故事的主要沖突點，解決沖突的方式是父親的理解與母親的寬慰。

3.StoryMountain思維導(dǎo)圖

續(xù)寫時的關(guān)鍵點：

原文沖突:Jade的相機損壞，內(nèi)心的不安，父親的失望。

情感轉(zhuǎn)折:Jade決定面對父親，最終解開誤會。

解決方案:父親對相機的情感雖受影響，但他依舊選擇原諒Jade，家庭關(guān)系并未破裂。

4.情緒、動作、環(huán)境描寫英文例句

情緒描寫動作描寫環(huán)境描寫

Shefeltherheartracingwithguilt.Jadegatheredherbelongingshastily.Thewavescrashedagainsttheshore.

Asenseoffearcreptoverher.Herhandstrembledasshereachedforthecamera.Thewarmsunmadethebeachseeminviting.

Shewasoverwhelmedbyafeelingofdread.Jadewipedthecamerawithatowelnervously.Thebustlingsoundofthebeachmadeherfeelmorealone.

Tearsoffrustrationwelledupinhereyes.Sheturnedandranawayfromthebarbecue.Thesaltyairfilledthebeachassheleft.

Herheartsankatthethoughtofdisappointingherfather.ShecarefullyhandedthecameratoUncleLee.Therepairshopwasquiet,withonlythesoundofafanwhirring.

常見單詞的高級替換詞：

原詞替換詞場景總結(jié)

sadnessdespair,sorrow,grief,dismay強調(diào)情緒的深度與強烈

guiltremorse,regret內(nèi)心的沖突和責(zé)任感

couragebravery,resolve面對挑戰(zhàn)與困境時的決心

repairfix,mend,restore與物品修復(fù)相關(guān)的情境

5.高中語法現(xiàn)象分析

常見搭配與語法現(xiàn)象

虛擬語氣

例句:"IfIhadknown,Iwouldhavetoldhim."

搭配:If+過去完成時,主語+wouldhave+過去分詞

過去完成時

例句:"Thecamerahadbeenhiscompanionforallevents."

搭配:had+過去分詞用于描述過去某一時間之前的狀態(tài)

情態(tài)動詞的否定

例句:"Itcouldn’tbefixed."

搭配:couldn’t+動詞原形表示無法發(fā)生的可能性

生詞短語分析:

詞語詞性近義詞反義詞例句

guilt名詞remorse,shameinnocence"Jadefeltdeepguiltaboutruiningthecamera."

repair動詞fix,mendbreak"UncleLeecouldn’trepairthecamera."

resigned形容詞accepting,defeatedhopeful"Hegaveheraresignedlook."

PossibleAnswers:

Version1

Paragraph1:Hearingthis(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作),Jadegathereduphercourage.Shehadbeencarryingtheweightofhermistakefordays,andtheguiltweighedheavilyonherheart.(情緒描寫)Yet,sheknewthatconfrontingherfather(非謂語動詞短語做主語)wastheonlywaytoalleviateherownburden(非謂語動詞短語做后置定語)(賓從).Withtremblinghands(介短狀語描寫神態(tài)),shepickedupthebrokencameraandwalkedintothelivingroom,whereherfatherwassitting(定從).Shehesitatedforamomentbeforespeaking(情緒；動作描寫)."Dad,Ineedtotellyousomethingimportant,"shesaidsoftly,tryingtosteadyhervoice(非謂語動詞短語做伴隨動作).Thelookofconfusiononhisfaceonlymadeherfeelworse,butshecontinued,"Iwastheonewhobrokeyourcamera(定從)."Herheartpoundedasshewaitedforhisresponse(狀從),unsureofwhattoexpect(adj做補語及賓從).

Paragraph2:Thenextday,whenJadecamehome,shesawanewsmartphoneonherdesk.Herheartsank(心情描寫)assherealizedherfatherhadreplacedthecamera(賓從).However,insteadofanger,hesmiledwarmlyandsaid,"Iknowitwasanaccident(賓從),Jade.Icanseehowmuchthishasbeenbotheringyou(賓從)."Heplacedthephonegentlyinherhands,andforthefirsttimeindays,Jadefeltawaveofreliefwashoverher.Herfather’sforgivenesswasmorethanshehadhopedfor(比較),anditwasclearthattheirrelationshiphadgrownstronger(主從，it形式主語)becauseofthisincident.Theburdenofguiltthathadonceconsumedher(定從)wasnowreplacedwithasenseofpeace.

Version2

Paragraph1:Hearingthis,Jadegathereduphercourage.Shehadspenttheentireweekendavoidingherfather,fearingtheworstpossibleoutcome(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作).Theguiltshefeltforbreakinghisbelovedcamera(定從)hadhauntedhereverymoment.Asshestoodinfrontofhim(狀從),shecouldfeelherpalmssweating,butsheknewshecouldnolongerkeeprunningfromthetruth(賓從)."Dad,there'ssomethingIneedtoconfess(賓從),"shebegan,hervoicebarelyaboveawhisper.(獨立主格)Shethenexplainedhowshehadaccidentallydroppedthecameraintotheseawater(賓從),feelingherheartraceasthewordslefthermouth(狀從).Herfather’sexpressionremainedunchanged,whichmadeherevenmoreanxious.

Paragraph2:Thenextday,whenJadecamehome,shesawanewsmartphoneonherdesk.Itwasnotthecamerashehadfearedlosing(定從),butshecouldstillfeelthestingofheractions.Herfatherstoodbyherside,hissmilereassuring."Iknowitwasanaccident,Jade,butdon'tworry,"hesaid,hisvoicefilledwithunderstanding(定獨立主格)."Thiscamerameantalottome,butfamilyisalwaysmoreimportant."Jade’sheartfilledwithgratitudeasshelookedatthenewphone(狀從).Sherealizedthatherfather’sforgivenesswasagiftshewouldnevertakeforgranted(定從),andfromthatdayforward,shepromisedherselfshewouldbemorecarefulwithhisbelongings(定從).

Version3

Paragraph1:Hearingthis,Jadegathereduphercourage.Theweightofguilthadbeentoomuchforhertobearoverthepastfewdays.Sheknewthatshehadmadeamistake(賓從),andnowitwastimetofacetheconsequences(todo做真正主語).Shepickedupthebrokencameraandwalkedintothelivingroom,whereherfatherwassitting(定從).Helookedupatherwithafrown(介短狀語)assheapproached(狀從)."Dad,Ineedtotellyousomething,"shesaid,hervoiceshakingwithuncertainty(獨立主格).Themomentsheconfessedtobreakingthecamera(themoment鏈接的狀從),herfather’seyessoftened."I’msorry,Dad.Ididn’tmeantohurtyou,"sheadded,hopinghewouldunderstand(非謂語動詞做伴隨動作+賓從).

Paragraph2:Thenextday,whenJadecamehome,shesawanewsmartphoneonherdesk.Shefeltasenseofrelief,butalsoatwingeofguilt.Herfatherhadforgivenher,buttheweightofhermistakestilllingered."Iknowyoudidn’tmeantobreakthecamera,Jade(賓從),"hesaidkindly."It’sokay.Whatmatters(主從)isthatyou’relearningfromthismistake(賓從)."Jadesmiledasshepickedupthephone(狀從).Shewasdeeplytouchedbyherfather’swordsandrealizedthathisloveandunderstandingmeantmoretoherthananyobjectevercould(賓從).

語法加分點分析

虛擬語氣

例句:"IwouldhavetoldhimifIhadknown."

搭配:If+過去完成時,主語+wouldhave+過去分詞

分析:用來表達后悔與未實現(xiàn)的虛擬情況。

過去完成時

例句:"Thecamerahadbeenhiscompanionforallevents."

搭配:had+過去分詞用來描述過去某一時間之前的狀態(tài)。

情態(tài)動詞的否定

例句:"Itcouldn’tbefixed."

搭配:couldn’t+動詞原形表示無法發(fā)生的可能性。

高級替換詞與亮點詞匯短語

原詞替換詞聯(lián)想詞例句

guiltremorse,shameregret,self-blame"Herguiltwasoverwhelming,butsheknewshehadtofaceit."

couragebravery,resolvedetermination"Withabraveheart,Jadeapproachedherfather."

forgivenessunderstanding,pardonmercy,compassion"Herfather’sforgivenesswasallsheneededtoheal."

sorrowsadness,griefheartache"Herheartwasfullofsorrowwhensheconfessed."

peacecalm,serenityrelief,contentment"Thepeaceshefeltafterherconfessionwaslikeaburdenlifted."

高中語法與詞匯亮點

條件句

例句:"IfIhadknown,Iwouldhavebeenmorecareful."

搭配:If+