1、考研英語作文：瘋狂背誦30篇（09）Directions 9Study the following picture carefully and write an essay in which you should:1. describe the picture,2. point out the reasons for this phenomenon, and3. give possible solutions.You should write 160200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.審題：這篇文章的提綱是圖畫作文另一種非常典型的提綱，在描述圖畫后分別給出該現(xiàn)

2、象（或問題）的原因及其解決辦法。這里在提綱中雖沒有出現(xiàn)interpret the meaning（闡釋含義）的字樣，實際上這個步驟是不可少的，但可以做得極為簡潔。Sample:In this picture we are surprised to see a group of fat children who want to lose weight at a dieting center. We can’t help asking such a question: why are there so many over?weighted young children in prese

3、nt society?In my belief, many reasons contribute to this undesirable result, but three of them play the dominant role. In the first place, with the development of national economy, people’s living level becomes higher and higher. Grandparents and parents devote all their love to the young chil

4、dren, who consequently often take in much more nutrition than necessary. In the second place, more and more young boys and girls are even addicted to foreign snacks, which contain too much fat and thus do great harm to the heart and the vessels. Last but by no means the least, pressure from teachers

5、, parents and the whole society often leaves little time for small children to take part in physical exercises.To solve this worrying problem, all of us should take immediate and effective measures. First, a balanced and healthy diet is often the most important factor in the making of a strong body.

6、 In this aspect, teachers and parents should do their jobs. Second, exercises should become part of their daily life—once children get used to sports, they will find it not only beneficial but also interesting.All of us have realized the children are the future of our nation, and we should als

7、o realize that healthy minds always dwell in healthy bodies. To fulfill this goal, all of us should work hard.點評：該文章仍然是四個段落。第一段非常引人注目，只用了一句話便完成了對圖畫的描寫，還加入了表達作者心情的部分（be surprised to see）。段落中的第二句話非常關(guān)鍵，是將圖畫總結(jié)為一個大家都該來關(guān)注的社會問題——兒童的肥胖問題。第二句話的作用相當(dāng)于對畫圖人意圖的測度，只不過由于提綱的要求，這里沒有單獨成段，而是放到了第一段。第二段與第三段嚴(yán)格

8、按照提綱來寫，分別寫原因和解決辦法，段落的首句都是非常精彩的模板句。第二段首句的寫法請大家用心揣摩——既顯得全面（句子的前半部分），又不失重點（句子的后半部分）。該段之后分為三點來寫，第一點兩句話由淺入深，脈絡(luò)清晰。先寫隨著國民經(jīng)濟的發(fā)展，人民生活水平提高了——這句話是常常用到的經(jīng)典句子，大家應(yīng)熟練掌握。然后寫祖父母和父母將愛都傾注在孩子們身上，導(dǎo)致孩子們常常營養(yǎng)過剩。該句中大家應(yīng)首先掌握非限制性定語從句的寫法，該從句的拓展性非常好，能避免連寫句（run?on sentence）這樣的常見錯誤。之后大家應(yīng)學(xué)習(xí)詞組devote.to.和more t

9、han necessary的用法。第二點講越來越多的孩子沉溺于洋快餐。注意句中be addicted to和非限制性定語從句的用法。句中有一個難詞thus（副詞），這里表示結(jié)果。第三點講述了孩子缺乏鍛煉的原因——該句使用了特殊的句型結(jié)構(gòu)，有助于我們拓展思路，注意學(xué)習(xí)leave little/no time for someone to do something的結(jié)構(gòu)。第三段分兩點來說解決問題的辦法。第一點說平衡健康的飲食是至關(guān)重要的，這句話中的making是個閃光點，表示造就的過程;。后面一句中的do one?s jobs等于take on one?s responsi

10、bility。第二點中使用了破折號，后面是時間狀語從句，注意get used to(習(xí)慣于)和not only.but also.的用法。句子中出現(xiàn)了part的用法，注意這里不能加冠詞，否則不僅不能加分，還要扣分。再舉一例，大家細(xì)細(xì)體會：Learn the phrase by heart until it becomes part of you.這是表達效果很強的用法，文中的句子表示體育鍛煉應(yīng)成為他們?nèi)粘Ｉ畹囊徊糠?，意思是成為了一種習(xí)慣。上面這句話表示將該詞組熟記以至于永遠(yuǎn)熟練掌握。最后一段使用了強勢的推導(dǎo)方式，先找到對方（讀者）認(rèn)同的基本觀點（孩子是國家的未來），而后推導(dǎo)出文中的重要觀點（健康的心靈存在于健康的體魄）。第二句將目的狀語放在句首，我們要做的工作放