1、How to polish your composition,東廈中學(xué) 魏?jiǎn)磋?話題24 新聞報(bào)道Making the news,have a nose for 對(duì)敏感 keep up with 跟上 work experience 工作經(jīng)驗(yàn) take a photograph 拍照 be eager to do 渴望做 make interviews 做采訪 tell the truth 說(shuō)出真相,editor (n.)編輯 journalist/ reporter (n.) 記者 accurate (adj.)精確的 fundamental (adj.)基本的 publish (v.)出版

2、 occupation (n.) 工作 interview (n./ v.) 面試/采訪,editor (n.)編輯 journalist/ reporter (n.) 記者 accurate (adj.)精確的 fundamental (adj.)基本的 publish (v.)出版 occupation (n.) 工作 interview (n./ v.) 面試/采訪 have a nose for 對(duì)敏感 keep up with 跟上 work experience 工作經(jīng)驗(yàn) take a photograph 拍照 be eager to do 渴望做 make interviews

3、 做采訪 tell the truth 說(shuō)出真相,editor,reporter,accurate (adj.)精確的 work experience 工作經(jīng)驗(yàn),interview (n./ v.) 面試/采訪 have a nose for 對(duì)敏感 keep up with 跟上 work experience 工作經(jīng)驗(yàn) make interviews 做采訪 tell the truth 說(shuō)出真相,Editors / Reporters Wanted Our newspaper is looking for 10 student reporters and 8 student editor

4、s to record school life and edit related articles for students. If you are interested, please send an application letter to us.,A Letter of Application 報(bào)社編輯/記者,Dear Sir or Madam， Im Li Hua. I have learned that you are looking for student editors and reporters, but I want to apply to this position. O

5、ne of the reasons is that I want to make a contribute to our school. Besides, this position is not only a platform to improve my communication skills, but also a wonderfully chance for me to put something what I have learnt into practice. I am a outgoing and imaginative teenager, so I can get along

6、well with others and have a nose for news. Comparing with other students, I have abundant experience in making interviews, that can help me deal with problems more effective. I believe I can do well. Please write to me as soon as possible. Yours, Li Hua,Task 1 Correction,How to polish your compositi

7、on,Step 1 Correcting,Step 2 Improving,Step3 Polishing,Dear Sir or Madam， Im Li Hua. I have learned that you are looking for student editors and reporters, but I want to apply to this position. One of the reasons is that I want to make a contribute to our school. Besides, this position is not only a

8、platform to improve my communication skills, but also a wonderfully chance for me to put something what I have learnt into practice.,for,contribution,wonderful,Task 1 Correction,此處也可去掉what 或把what改為that,and/so,連詞,介詞,名詞,形容詞,從句,I am a outgoing and imaginative teenager, so I can get along well with othe

9、rs and have a nose for news. Comparing with other students, I have abundant experience in making interviews, that can help me deal with problems more effective. I believe I can do well. Please write to me as soon as possible. Yours, Li Hua,an,Compared,Task 1 Correction,which,effectively,it,冠詞,非謂語(yǔ),副詞

10、,關(guān)系代詞,代詞,Dear Sir or Madam， Im Li Hua. I have learned that you are looking for student editors and reporters, but I want to apply to this position. One of the reasons is that I want to make a contribute to our school. Besides, this position is not only a platform to improve my communication skills,

11、but also a wonderfully chance for me to put something what I have learnt into practice. I am a outgoing and imaginative teenager, so I can get along well with others and keep up with the latest news. Comparing with other students, I have abundant experience in making interviews, that can help me dea

12、l with problems more effective. I believe I can do well. Please write to me as soon as possible. Yours, Li Hua,Task 1 Correction,for,which,Compared,contribution,and,wonderful,that,an,effectively,it,Requirements,假設(shè)你是育才中學(xué)的李華，得知英語(yǔ)周報(bào)招聘記者和編輯，你有意應(yīng)聘，請(qǐng)按下列要求給報(bào)社寫(xiě)一封申請(qǐng)信。要點(diǎn)包括： 1.自我介紹，并表明你想應(yīng)聘的職位； 2.陳述應(yīng)聘的目的； 3.表明自

13、己的優(yōu)勢(shì),希望得到回復(fù)。,self-introduction& the position,The reasons,My advantages,Task 1 Correction,Dear Sir or Madam， Im Li Hua. I have learned that you are looking for student editors and reporters, but I want to apply to this position. One of the reasons is that I want to make a contribute to our school. Be

14、sides, this position is not only a platform for me to improve my communication skills, but also a wonderfully chance for me to put something what I have learnt into practice. I am a outgoing and creative teenager, so I can get along well with others and keep up with the latest news. Comparing with o

15、ther students, I have abundant experience in making interviews, that can help me deal with problems more effective. I believe I can do well. Please write to me as soon as possible. Yours, Li Hua,Task 1 Correction,for,which,Compared,contribution,and,wonderful,that,an,effectively,it,Dear Sir or Madam，

16、 Im Li Hua. I have learned that you are looking for student editors and reporters, and I want to apply for this position. One of the reasons is that I want to make a contribution to our school. Besides, this position is not only a platform to improve my communication skills, but also a wonderful cha

17、nce for me to put what I have learnt into practice. I am an outgoing and imaginative teenager, so I can get along well with others and have a nose for news. Compared with other students, I have abundant experience in making interviews, which can help me deal with problems more effectively. I believe

18、 I can do it well. Please write to me as soon as possible. Yours, Li Hua,指代不明,內(nèi)容與本次應(yīng)聘職位無(wú)關(guān),內(nèi)容不符,語(yǔ)言不得體，應(yīng)婉轉(zhuǎn),I would be grateful if you could give me the chance.,Para.1 自我介紹，并表明你想應(yīng)聘的職位；,自我介紹不具體：a student from Yu Cai Middle School.,Para.2 陳述應(yīng)聘的目的；,Para.3 表明自己的優(yōu)勢(shì),希望得到回復(fù)。,How to polish your composition,Ste

19、p 1 Correcting,Step 2 Improving,Step3 Polishing,advanced words/ phrases 高級(jí)詞匯/短語(yǔ) useful sentence patterns 有用的句型,advanced words/ phrases 高級(jí)詞匯/短語(yǔ) useful sentence patterns 有用的句型,Dear Sir or Madam， Im Li Hua. I have learned that you are looking for student reporters, and I want to apply for this position

20、. One of the reasons is that I want to enrich my knowledge. Besides, this position is not only a platform for me to improve my communication skills, but also a wonderful chance for me to put what I have learnt into practice.,Corrected Version,Group work- underline some useful expressions,申請(qǐng),其中一個(gè)原因是,

21、不僅,而且,學(xué)以致用,I have advantages to be a member of you. I am an outgoing teenager, so that I can get along well with others and have a nose for news. Compared with other students, I have abundant experience in making interviews, which can help me deal with problems more effectively. I believe I can do i

22、t well. I would be grateful if you could give me the chance. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Lihua,Group work- find out some useful expressions,與相處得好,與相比,處理,對(duì)敏感,豐富的經(jīng)驗(yàn),如果你能給我這個(gè)機(jī)會(huì)，我將不勝感激。,apply for 申請(qǐng) apply to 運(yùn)用 improve my communication skills 提高交際技巧 enrich my knowledge 豐富知識(shí) put what I have lea

23、rnt into practice 學(xué)以致用 outgoing 外向的 independent 獨(dú)立的 get along well with 與相處得好 abundant experience 豐富的經(jīng)驗(yàn) deal with 處理 not only but also. 不僅而且 Compared with ， 與相比 One of the reasons is that 其中一個(gè)原因是.,Useful expressions,One of the reasons is that 其中一個(gè)原因是Para2 2. Not only . but also. 不僅. 而且 Para2&Para3 3

24、. （主句），which （定語(yǔ)從句） Para2&Para3 4. Compared with, （主句） 與. 相比， Para3,Useful expressions,+ 表從,Compared with other students, I have abundant experience in doing voluntary work, which can help me deal with problems more effectively.,Not only 放句首，前倒后不倒,but also后面加完整句子,This position is not only a platform

25、 for me to improve my communication skills, but also a wonderful chance for me to put what I have learnt into practice.,Not only is the position,it is,Requirements,假設(shè)你是育才中學(xué)的李華，得知英語(yǔ)周報(bào)招聘記者和編輯，你有意應(yīng)聘，請(qǐng)按下列要求給報(bào)社寫(xiě)一封申請(qǐng)信。要點(diǎn)包括： 1.自我介紹，并表明你想應(yīng)聘的職位； 2.陳述應(yīng)聘的目的； 3.表明自己的優(yōu)勢(shì),希望得到回復(fù)。,self-introduction& the position,Th

26、e reasons,My advantages,Task 2 Improvement,Reasons,improve my ability （writing/communication/social,broaden my horizon,Being is my dream,gain some social experience,interesting /funny/ helpful,enrich my knowledge,enrich my life,make some friends,Task 2 Improvement,Advantages,outgoing communicate wit

27、h others,have a good command of English and writing,the sense of responsibility,have a good nose for,abundant experience deal with problems,honest & independent,cautious /serious,team spirit cooperate with others,Task 2 Improvement,Make some sentences by using the following phrases.,How to polish yo

28、ur composition,advanced words/ phrases useful sentence patterns,Step 1 Correcting,Step 2 Improving,Step3 Polishing,conjunction 連詞 useful sentence structure 主題句&結(jié)構(gòu),Task 3 Group Work Paraphrasing & Polishing the Sentences,Conjunction 表?xiàng)l件：if, as long as, unless 表目的；in order that，in order to do 常用句型：As

29、we all know；What is known to all is that There is no doubt that.；There is no denying that. ； 非謂語(yǔ)做狀語(yǔ)，主句,Step 1. Polish the sentences,e.g. A）I have learnt that you are looking for student reporters. B）I want to apply for this position., Step One 合并句子，用非謂語(yǔ)做狀語(yǔ),I have learnt that you are looking for stud

30、ent reporters，I want to apply for this position.,Task 3 Group Work Paraphrasing & Polishing the Sentences, Step Two 用高級(jí)短語(yǔ)詞匯替換,Having learnt the news,Having learnt the news that you are looking for student reporters，I want to apply for this position.,cant wait to,學(xué)生佳句賞析：Knowing the new that you are l

31、ooking for student reporters, I am so interested in it that I cant wait to apply for this position.,Group 1-4 I can broaden my horizon. I can improve my English by communicating with others.,Task 3 Group WorkParaphrasing & Polishing the sentences,Group 5-8 I have some related experience. I can stand

32、 out among others.,Group 9-12 A) I will spare no effort to do it well. B) I hope you can give me the chance.,學(xué)生習(xí)作提升,Task 3 Group WorkParaphrasing & Polishing the sentences,Step 2. Polish the passage,the second one,Topic sentences 表明申請(qǐng)意圖的主題句： I am writing to apply for. 引出原因段落的主題句： The reason why . ar

33、e as follows. I do for the following reasons. 引出優(yōu)勢(shì)介紹的主題句： Please allow me to introduce myself. I have my own advantages to be a member of. 表達(dá)希望獲準(zhǔn)的主題: I would appreciate it if you could give me the chance. I hope I am lucky enough to be a member of ,Task 3 Group WorkParaphrasing & Polishing the sente

34、nces,Step 2. Polish the passage,Dear Sir or Madam， Im Li Hua, a student from Yu Cai Middle School. Having learned that you are looking for student reporters, I cant wait to apply for this position. One of the reasons is that I want to enrich my life. Besides, not only is this position a platform to

35、improve my communication skills, but also a wonderful chance for me to put what I have learnt into practice. I have my advantages to be a member of your team. I am an outgoing teenager, so I can get along well with others and have a nose for news. Compared with others, I have abundant experience in making interviews, which can help me deal with problems more effectively. I believe I can do it well. I would be grateful if yo