1、如何提高學(xué)生英語寫作能力,一. 審題到位,二. 語言豐富,各類從句、強(qiáng)調(diào)句、倒裝句、分詞,2017年1月高考作文題：,假設(shè)你是明啟中學(xué)的學(xué)生王磊，你的好友李宏今年暑假將赴英國參加為期兩個月的海外交流活動。如果選擇主辦方安排的住宿，他需要額外支付較高的費(fèi)用。但他也可以通過為當(dāng)?shù)厣鐓^(qū)養(yǎng)老院提供每月三十小時的義工服務(wù)，獲得在養(yǎng)老院免費(fèi)住宿的機(jī)會。李宏通過郵件向你征求意見，寫一封回信，內(nèi)容須包括： 1.你對此事的明確態(tài)度； 2.你的理由。,Im glad to hear that you have access to participate in an overseas communication a

2、ctivity in Britain which will last two months. I suggest that you should choose working as a volunteer thirty hours every month for the local community aging hospital to gain a chance to stay in it for free. My reasons are as follows. Not only can you enhance your social experiences, but also you ca

3、n reduce your costs. Contrary to the accommodation arranged by the host, you can save a lot of money. Undoubtedly, the cost must have been high if you choose it. Staying in the aging hospital, the contrast couldnt be greater. On one hand, only by working as a volunteer can you gain a free stay. It s

4、ounds great! Your arrival will add colors to the atmosphere there. On the other hand, during our spare time we will also spend time helping others in our society teaches us to be a warm -hearted person. Your arrival will also reduce the burdens there. As an old saying goes, “we can gain both things

5、at the same time”, so why not choose it? I hope that you will take my advice, best wishes that you will have a good time there, it is a golden chance that you will gain in summer vacation. In short, enjoy yourself. (18分),*審題,假如你是啟明中學(xué)的王磊，你的學(xué)校最近準(zhǔn)備引進(jìn)一個機(jī)器人充當(dāng)食堂服務(wù)員或者圖書管理員的工作，并在學(xué)校的貼吧上向同學(xué)們征求意見。你在貼吧上回復(fù)向?qū)W校提出意

6、見。 1.明確提出你的觀點(diǎn)； 2.通過比較，說明你這樣選擇的理由。 （可從工作效率和服務(wù)范圍等作比較）,（2018年1月高考）,通過比較,*審題（2018年1月靜安一模）,你是王華，臨近寒假，你的好朋友劉偉寫信向你咨詢他的寒假計劃。目前有三個備選方案，一. 去美國某高中參加冬令營; 二. 應(yīng)征某歷史博物館臨時講解員；三. 提前學(xué)習(xí)下學(xué)期的高中課程。請給劉偉寫回信，談?wù)勀愕目捶āＰ胖斜仨毎ǎ?1. 你建議的方案； 2. 你如此建議的理由； 3. 你對于執(zhí)行此方案的建議。,*用好插入語,There are people, I am sure, who will say that the wate

7、r is too cold.,His words, to some extent, are right.,The question, from my point of view, deserves thinking over.,4. What he did yesterday was dissatisfactory.,1. There are people who will say that the water is too cold.,2. His words are right.,3. The question deserves thinking over.,What he did yes

8、terday, by no means, was satisfactory.,There is little, if any, hope of winning.,5. There is little hope of winning.,*用好副詞,Obviously, comparing all the candidates, I dare to say he is the best choice.,Tourism, frankly, may promote the mutual understanding among nations.,2. Comparing all the candidat

9、es, I dare to say he is the best choice.,1. Tourism may promote the mutual understanding among nations.,Most researchers believe that, in theory, mobile phones are absolutely safe.,in theory,absolutely,3. Technological changes will lead to unemploy- ment.,Technological changes will inevitably lead t

10、o unemployment.,*用好否定,1. The mayor is very satisfied in her work.,2. When I hear of the birds song, I always think of the springtime.,The mayor is never dissatisfied in her work.,I never hear of the birds song without thinking of the springtime.,3. It is possible to master a foreign language within

11、a short period of time if you use a good study method.,It is not impossible to master a foreign language within a short period of time if you use a good study method.,*用好排比,1. From my observation, many people today spend their time receiving more and more education, working more and more hours, and

12、making more and more money.,2. A leader who has respect for other people at all levels of an organization, for the work they do, and for their abilities, desires and needs, will find that respect is returned.,3. I am in favor of equal rights for women. I think women should especially have the right

13、to compete with men for jobs on equal termsThey should get the same pay as men for the same job. They should also have equal opportunities for promotion.,I am in favor of equal rights for women, especially the right to compete with men for jobs on equal terms, the right to get the same pay as men fo

14、r the same job, and the right to have equal opportunities for promotion.,一. 審題到位,二. 語言豐富,三. 示范有效,目前，某某學(xué)校正在開展推選“校園形象大使”(image ambassador on campus) 活動。假定你是該校的一名學(xué)生，請以書信的形式向校長推薦一位同學(xué)或者進(jìn)行自薦，并結(jié)合具體事例闡明推薦的理由。,開頭段： 1. From my perspective, the most suitable person is my roommate, Sophia, who has really taught

15、 me what the word “excellence” means. 2. Hearing the activity of selecting an image ambassador on campus, Id like to recommend my classmate, Sophia, who is our spiritual leader. 3. From my perspective, Jack is significantly better than any other candidate in our school. 4. My recommendation is a top

16、 student in my class named Jack, who enjoys a good reputation among all the students of our school.,中間段： 1. He has so many admirable personal qualities that there is no better suitable person for this great honor in my heart. 2. As is known to all, the image ambassador on campus is the symbol of the

17、 whole school students. 3. Therefore, its necessary for him or her to get good marks in both studying and sports. 4. Another reason, which is also very important, is that he has charming appearance and elegant behavior.,具體事例： 1. Moreover, it was her warm heart that had left me a deep impression. The

18、re was once a classmate of hers who had trouble in getting along with others. He was so frustrated that nearly tried to commit suicide. Fortunately, thanks to Sophias company and patience, he was inspired to walk out of the darkness. He told me that she seemed to be an angel to him who delighted his whole world. 2. My confidence is based on his previous experience of participating in Model United Nations. Representing China, Ling once served as an ambassador to discuss international affairs.