1、,話題寫作（六） 情感表達(dá),第一篇教材考點(diǎn)梳理,【話題點(diǎn)睛】話題來源于學(xué)生日常生活中對(duì)某件事情的經(jīng)歷及感受,常見的情感類表達(dá)有愛、快樂、微笑、幸福、痛苦和煩惱等。,【參考諺語】 1. A smile makes you ten years younger.笑一笑,十年少。 2. Joy and sorrow are next-door neighbors.悲喜常相伴。 3. Laughter is the best medicine.笑是最好的藥。 4. Worry kills more men than work. 憂慮比勞累更傷人。,【相關(guān)短語】 hanks for 因感謝; make n

2、ew friends 結(jié)交新朋友; look after/take care of 照顧; keep in touch 保持聯(lián)系; be friendly to 對(duì)友好; bring back 帶回,【亮點(diǎn)句型】 學(xué)校的感受 1. Id like to thank you for giving me unselfish love and help. 2. You always encouraged me to study harder. 3. Although you were very strict with me, I understood what you said in the end

3、. 4. Im so thankful to you for your kind help that Ill work harder and try to do better in the future.,家庭的感受 1. Id like to show my thanks to you for your devotion to me these years. 2. Im sure my parents will get on well with each other soon. 3. We should have good habits and try our best to take ex

4、ercise every day. 4. Ill spend more time staying and communicating with you. 5. When I failed an exam and felt stressed, you were the one to encourage me. 6. I believe if we do so, we can have a happy life.,.根據(jù)漢語意思完成句子。 1. 在我去上學(xué)和回來的路上,你們總是和我在一起。 to and from school, you were always with me. 2. 我將會(huì)盡我最

5、大的努力去理解你,并且為你做我所能做的。 Ill to understand you and do what I can for you.,On my way,try my best,3. 我擔(dān)心他們,并且非常害怕失去我的家。 Im them and losing my family very much. 4. 堅(jiān)持你的夢(mèng)想,你一定能做到的! your dream and you can make it! 5. 父親鼓勵(lì)我,并在必要時(shí)給我?guī)椭?Father me and gave me a when necessary.,worried about,afraid of,Stick to,en

6、couraged,hand,.用括號(hào)內(nèi)所給提示,將下列句子譯成英語。 1. 自我出生起,父母就一直無微不至地照顧我。(take good care of) . 2. 我們應(yīng)該學(xué)會(huì)與家人好好相處。(get along well with) .,Since I was born, my parents have taken good care of me.,We should learn to get along well with our family.,3. 學(xué)生不應(yīng)該被允許花太多時(shí)間玩電腦游戲。(be allowed to do) . 4. 他們總是因?yàn)橐恍┎槐匾氖虑闋幊场?(becaus

7、e of) . 5. 沒有老師的幫助,我就不會(huì)通過這次考試。(without) .,The students shouldnt be allowed to spend much time playing computer games.,They always argue with each other because of some unnecessary things.,Without the teachers help, I couldnt pass the exam.,2019天水“你養(yǎng)我長大,我陪你變老?！备改赣H一直在為我們的成長默默付出,成長要學(xué)會(huì)感受愛、回報(bào)愛。今天你即將畢業(yè),是向

8、父母表達(dá)感激的好機(jī)會(huì)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下所給要點(diǎn),寫一篇英語短文。 要求(1)給我生命,一直照顧我成長; (2)努力工作,為我提供良好的生活和教育條件; (3)擁有愛心,教我學(xué)會(huì); (4)今天,我要為你們(自主發(fā)揮,至少兩點(diǎn))。 注意事項(xiàng)(1)詞數(shù):80左右,開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù); (2)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地名、校名、人名等信息。,You bring me up. I will be with you in your life. You are important persons in the process of my growth._ _,【思路點(diǎn)撥】 1.要點(diǎn)提煉:主題是表達(dá)你對(duì)父母的感激,

9、同時(shí)也表達(dá)出你對(duì)父母的愛。注意語言表達(dá)要有情感,短文可以從以下幾個(gè)方面展開: (1)父母的付出,如照顧、幫助、鼓勵(lì)、教育等; (2)我對(duì)父母的回報(bào),如努力學(xué)習(xí)、希望父母永遠(yuǎn)幸福、健康等。 2.確定時(shí)態(tài):一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)(談?wù)摤F(xiàn)在父母對(duì)我的付出)和一般將來時(shí)(我將要對(duì)父母的回報(bào))。 3.確定人稱:第一人稱。,【寫作架構(gòu)】,【佳作欣賞】 You bring me up. I will be with you in your life. You are important persons in the process of my growth. You give me life and take care

10、 of me all the time. When I have problems with my study and life, you are always patient enough to help and encourage me. In order to let me live a pleasant life and receive a good education, you always work hard from morning to evening every day. You are also people who have hearts full of love. Yo

11、u are ready to help people in need. You teach me to be a kind person. In the past, I never said “I love you” to you. Today I will graduate, and I want to say it to you loudly. I will study harder to get better results. I hope you will be happy and healthy forever.,【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】 1. 本文表達(dá)對(duì)父母的感恩之情,處處流露著真情實(shí)感。文章

12、具體描述了在成長過程中,父母是如何對(duì)“我”付出的,體現(xiàn)了父母對(duì)子女無私的愛。在短文的結(jié)尾處,作者表達(dá)了要努力學(xué)習(xí)取得好的成績來回報(bào)父母的付出,首尾呼應(yīng)。 2. 文章中運(yùn)用了一些從句和短語,如when, who, take care of, in order to等,體現(xiàn)了作者扎實(shí)的基本功。,A 分享是一種行為方式,也是一種良好的品質(zhì)(quality)。人生處處充滿分享,懂得分享非常重要。分享快樂,快樂加倍;分擔(dān)煩惱,煩惱減半。 請(qǐng)根據(jù)以上觀點(diǎn),結(jié)合思維導(dǎo)圖所示,以“My Sharing Experience”為題,寫一篇100詞左右的短文。,要求 (1)短文須包括所有要點(diǎn)提示,語句通順,意思連

13、貫, 可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮; (2)題目和開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù); (3)文中不得出現(xiàn)個(gè)人真實(shí)姓名和校名。 參考詞匯be full of, cutin half, thanks to, overcome My Sharing Experience Sharing is a way of behavior as well as a good quality of people. _ _,One possible version: My Sharing Experience Sharing is a way of behavior as well as a good quality of people.

14、Life is full of sharing. I think its important to share happiness and sadness with others. When I was ten, I moved to a new district. Facing the strange surroundings, I felt lonely and upset. It was my neighbor, Tim, who helped me find pleasure again. He showed me around and introduced new friends t

15、o me. He also shared his favourite books, music and,learning methods with me. We soon became good friends. Thanks to his sharing, I began to share with others. As we know, when happiness is shared, it will be doubled; when a problem is shared, it is like cutting it in half. Sharing brings us pleasur

16、e, confidence and courage to overcome difficulties. Lets open our hearts to share with others in our future life!,B2019蘇州 假定你是蘇華,最近你的澳大利亞筆友Nathan犯了一些錯(cuò)誤,倍感懊惱,寫了一封郵件向你訴說。為幫助他排解困惑,請(qǐng)你根據(jù)他的郵件內(nèi)容并結(jié)合自身經(jīng)歷,用英語回信開導(dǎo)他。,注意 (1)詞數(shù):90左右,開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù); (2)回復(fù)須包括所有要點(diǎn),可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,使短文連貫、通順; (3)文中不得提及真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。,Dear Natha

17、n, Im sorry to know that you are not happy these days. _ _ I hope my experience can help you out. Best wishes, Su Hua,One possible version: Dear Nathan, Im sorry to know that you are not happy these days. You neednt worry too much. Its true that everyone makes mistakes. Take me, for example. One day, I spent so much time playing football with my friends that I forgot to do my homework. I said sorry to my teacher and finished it the next day. I found it important to achieve a