1、高考英語 觀點(diǎn)對(duì)比類作文 寫作技巧,Teaching aims,1. To master the structure and useful sentences of the compositions about comparisions of different views. 2. To carry out self-evaluation and partner evaluation smoothly.,Step1 leading-in,Enjoy the song 春游歌 and have a discussion about whether the class,senior 3 stude

2、nts should have a spring outing.,提示詞句,* go spring outing * be for /be in favor of / approve of /agree with * be against/ disapprove of doing sth./ disagree with *be close to nature/have access to nature * breathe fresh air relax and refresh ourselves * do good to/ be good for/ be beneficial to/benef

3、it sb. *with college entrance examination drawing near * take up too much time cant afford the time * dont feel like playing / be not in the mood for playing (沒心情玩）,現(xiàn)在正是春暖花開的春游時(shí)節(jié)。你校學(xué)生以“高三學(xué)生要不要參加春游活動(dòng)”展開了討論。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下討論結(jié)果，寫一篇短文。,How to write a good composition,一.寫作基本步驟： 1. 仔細(xì)審題，列舉大綱。 圍繞要點(diǎn)，寫出句子。 添加過渡，確保連貫。

4、4. 先求正確， 再求靈活。 5認(rèn)真檢查，仔細(xì)修改。 6書寫工整，卷面整潔。,Step2 觀點(diǎn)對(duì)比類作文 寫作技巧講解,高考英語觀點(diǎn)對(duì)比類作文寫作 二. 審題注意： 1) 文體：議論文 2）時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。,Introduction (topic),Body (supporting ideas),Conclusion,三.The outline of the writing:,Conclusion paragraph,Introduction paragraph: bring out the topic,四.表示觀點(diǎn)對(duì)比類寫作套語,A. Introduction: Whether or no

5、t should .? We have had a heated discussion. We have had a heated discussion about whether. B.總起: Opinions are divided on this question. People hold/have different / opposite opinions/views on the question. On this question, opinions/views/attitudes vary/differ from person to person. Different stude

6、nts, however,have different views on this matter.,C.表達(dá)正方觀點(diǎn): of them hold the opinion/view that . of them are in favor of the idea that People who are for the idea think ,D.表達(dá)不同觀點(diǎn)之間的銜接: However, of them hold a different view. / of them hold the opposite opinion. People who are against it dont think s

7、o. However, every coin has two sides. Different from those., people think . On the other hand, people think . On the other hand， about_ students are against the idea.,E.結(jié)尾常用套語: In my opinion/In my view/ From my point of view/Personally, As far as Im concerned, In short/ In brief/ In a word/ In concl

8、usion,F. 表列舉說明的關(guān)聯(lián)詞: Firstly/ First of all/ To begin with/In the first place/ For one thing/ On the one hand/ Above all. In the second place/ On the other hand/For another Finally/ Last but not least/, . G.表示遞進(jìn)、強(qiáng)調(diào)的關(guān)聯(lián)詞 Besides/Apart from/ Whats more/ In addition/ Furthermore/ Moreover/Worse still/ To

9、make matters worse,Step 3 小試牛刀,Write the above composition within fifteen minutes, using what we have learned in the class.,Step 4 自評(píng),1. 要點(diǎn)是否齊全？ 2. 時(shí)態(tài)以及語態(tài)是否一致？ 3. 主謂是否一致？ 4. 標(biāo)點(diǎn)及大小寫是否正確？,Step 5 互評(píng),1. 要點(diǎn)是否齊全？結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理？ 2. 是否有精彩詞句？如有，請(qǐng)用波浪線劃出。 3. 是否有漢式英文？是否有可改善的字、詞、句？如有，如：時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)、主謂一致、行文邏輯、詞性等，請(qǐng)用直線劃出。 4. 卷面是

10、否整潔？字跡是否工整？,Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing? We have had a heated discussion. Opinions are divided on the question. Most students, about 65%, are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing. They think it good for their health to be close to nature and breath

11、e some fresh air and whats more, they can relax themselves for a while and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic. They think it will do good to their students. On the other hand, about 35% students are against the idea. They say that with college entrance examination drawing near, th

12、ey dont feel like going anywhere. Besides, they think going spring outing will take at least a day off. They cant afford the time. They think they should fix their attention on their studies,A、運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯或短語 B、增加形容詞或副詞 C、靈活運(yùn)用各種句型,Step6亮點(diǎn)點(diǎn)撥,Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing? We have

13、 had a heated discussion. Opinions are divided on the question. Most students, about 65%, are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing. They think it good for their health to be close to nature and breathe some fresh air and whats more, they can relax themselves for a while and re

14、st their brains so that they will be more energetic. They think it will do good to their students. On the other hand, about 35% students are against the idea. They say that with college entrance examination drawing near, they dont feel like going anywhere. Besides, they think going spring outing will take at least a day off. They cant afford the