1、,話題寫作(二) 計劃愿望,第一篇教材考點梳理,【話題點睛】 該話題主要涉及假期計劃、活動計劃、人生目標等。 主要涉及的要點: 1.讀書、旅游、度假等活動的安排; 2.課外活動、學校郊游、運動會等活動的時間、地點、人物、活動內容與形式等; 3.職業(yè)規(guī)劃以及實現(xiàn)人生目標的具體措施等。,學校將舉辦英語寫作比賽。請根據所給提示,以“My Life in 20 Years”為題,寫一篇參賽短文,分享你對未來的憧憬。,注意 (1)詞數:80左右(開頭已給出,不計入總詞數); (2)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名、校名等信息; (3)文章必須包含所提供的主要信息,并作適當發(fā)揮。 My Life in 20 Year

2、s Im always working hard for a bright future. I imagine_,【思路點撥】 1.要點提煉:主題是對未來生活的暢想,包括以下要點: (1)自己20年后的家庭以及為家庭所做的事情; (2)自己20年后的工作及理由; (3)自己20年后會和朋友們在一起做的事情; (4)概括自己對未來生活的看法。 2.確定時態(tài):一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時。 3.確定人稱:第一人稱單數和復數。,【寫作架構】,【基礎寫作】 .寫主干句(根據所給提示補全下列各句。) 1.我會擁有比現(xiàn)在更好的生活。(better life) I will have a now. 2.不管我多么

3、忙,我都會精心照顧父母。(take care of) I will my parents how busy I will be.,better life than,take good care of no matter,3.我們會談論過去的學校生活并且分享想法和快樂。(talk about) We willthe past school life and . 4.運動能夠讓我們保持健康。(keep sb.+adj.) Sports canus . 5.我準備接受新的挑戰(zhàn)。(be ready to) Itake on new .,talk about,share our ideas and ha

4、ppiness,keep healthy and fit,am ready to challenges,.句子升格(按括號中的要求改寫句子。) 1.I like meeting interesting things and people. I will get a higher salary.(用not onlybut also合并為一句) _ _ 2.I will have a group of workmates. They are easy to work with. (改為含有定語從句的句子) _,Not only do I like meeting interesting thing

5、s and people but also I will get a higher salary.,I will have a group of workmates who are easy to work with.,3.I will meet my friends. They are just like a good memory book for me.(用because 連接兩個句子) _ _,I will meet my friends because they are just like a good memory book for me.,【連句成文】 My Life in 20

6、 Years Im always working hard for a bright future. I imagine I will have a better life than now. In 20 years, I will have a better family. I will take good care of my parents no matter how busy I will be. And I will have two children and they are cute and lovely. Of course, I will have a big house,

7、and my family will live together at my house.The best job for me will be a TV reporter. Thats because I must work hard and I am ready to take on new challenges. I will have a group of workmates who are easy to work with.,Whenever I am free, I will meet my friends because they are just like a good me

8、mory book for me. We will talk about the past school life and share our ideas and happiness. We will often go abroad for vacation. I believe I will have a great time during the vacation. Every day after work, I will usually take some exercise with my friends. After all, sports can keep us healthy an

9、d fit. I think my life in 20 years will be exciting and wonderful. And I am working hard to make it come true.,【參考諺語】 1.Time and tide wait for no man. 歲月不待人。 2.Never do things by halves.做事不要半途而廢。 3.A good beginning is half done. 良好的開端是成功的一半。 4.Never give up!永不放棄!,【相關短語】 give away 贈送,分發(fā); make new fri

10、ends 結交新朋友; sharewith與分享 look forward to 期盼,期待; have a better future 有一個更美好的未來; be friendly to 對友好; take up/on the challenge 接受挑戰(zhàn),【亮點句型】 導入主題句 1.We are glad to tell you that we are going to visit 2.Today is Earth Day. We are going to plant some trees in the park. 3.We are going to have a three-day h

11、oliday. Why dont we go to?,文章發(fā)展、過渡句 1.First of all, we must obey the rules of the museum/gallery. 2.There will be a lot of art works/exhibitions. Well see them first. 3.Then, wellin the morning. 4.After that/In the afternoon,/At last welltogether.,文章結尾句 1.Please wear comfortable shoes or you will fe

12、el tired/uncomfortable during the trip. 2.Dont forget to take 3.We hope you will have a nice day/you will enjoy the trip.,A 暑期將至,我們都應該制訂合理的假期計劃。請你根據以下要點提示,以“My Summer Vacation Plan”為題,用英語寫一篇短文。 要點提示 (1)放松自己:聽音樂,看電影,鍛煉身體等; (2)陪伴家人:旅行,散步,與父母交流等; (3)做志愿者:看望老人,贈送禮物,為他們唱歌等; (4)努力學習:閱讀書籍,復習知識,為以后的學習做準備等;

13、(5)個人觀點:,要求 (1)詞數:110左右(短文首句已給出,不計入總詞數); (2)要點提示均須涉及,可適當增加內容; (3)字跡工整,卷面整潔,文意連貫,語言流暢; (4)不用真實姓名、校名、地名。,參考詞匯 relax myself, spend time with, volunteer, review, prepare for My Summer Vacation Plan With the summer vacation coming, I will make a plan for it. First,_ _ _ _,One possible version: My Summer

14、Vacation Plan With the summer vacation coming, I will make a plan for it. First, Id like to spare some time to relax myself by listening to music, watching movies as well as exercising to keep fit. Besides, I plan to spend more time with my dear family. For example, we can travel somewhere interesti

15、ng together. Taking a walk and communicating with my parents are also advisable choices. At the same time, Im going to volunteer in the old peoples home. I will buy some gifts and sing for them.,Last but not least, its quite important for me to keep studying hard. I must prepare myself well for the

16、study in senior high school. I think reviewing what Ive learned in junior middle school and reading more can help me with that. As far as Im concerned, the summer vacation is a precious time to do something meaningful. Therefore, Im sure to make the best of it and make my plan come true.,B2019泰州 為豐富

17、初三學生課余生活,上周末你校組織了一次社會實踐活動。請根據以下內容提示,用英語寫一篇短文,介紹此次活動,并談談自己的感想。 活動內容 (1)上午游覽人民公園:欣賞美景、歌舞聯(lián)歡、拍照留念; (2)下午參觀市民廣場:觀看圖片展,了解祖國和家鄉(xiāng)70年巨變。 你的感想 (1)師生情深,感謝老師和同學的幫助; (2)倍受鼓舞,決心勤奮學習報效祖國; (3)(考生自己發(fā)揮),要求 (1)詞數:100左右。開頭已給出,不計入總詞數。 (2)所寫內容必須包括內容提示中所提供的信息,并可作適當的發(fā)揮。 (3)不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名、地名等相關信息。 參考詞匯 市民廣場 Civic Square In ord

18、er to enrich Junior 3 students after-school life, our school organized a social practice activity last weekend. All the teachers and students of our grade took part in it._ _ _,One possible version: In order to enrich Junior 3 students after-school life, our school organized a social practice activity last weekend. All the teachers and students of our grade took part in it. We were all happy to have a chance to know more about our city. Everyon