1、.精銳教育學科教師輔導講義學 號：年 ：高三課 時 數： 3學 姓名： 科目：英 學科教 ：授 型C 表、 片作文學 C 用 作文學 T 作文能力提升授 日期及 段教學內容一. 專題知識梳理知識點 1：圖表作文一 . 表作文考 形式：1. 是以 表格 形式 ,將 的數據或被 明的事物直接用表格形式體 出來,即 表。2. 是以 形 形式表示數據 化的曲 ；表示數據的大小或數量之 的差異的條形 ；表示 體內部 構 化的扇形 。二 . 表作文常用的寫作模板參考模板一：As is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/percentage in the t

2、able(graph/picture/pie/chart), _ (作文 目的 ) has been on rise/ decrease (goes up /increases / drops / decreases),significantly /dramatically /steadily rising /decreasing from _ in _ to _ in _. From the sharp/marked decline/ rise inthe chart, it goes without saying that _.There are at least two good rea

3、sons accounting for _. On the one hand, _. On the other hand,_ is due to the fact that _. In addition, _ is參考模板二：Accordingto the graph, _ ( 表 果 ). The _ amount rises from_ to_ while_ climbs from _ to _（數據）, both of which demand our prompt attention. As a citizen/student,my suggestions to _ ( 點出主 ） a

4、re listed as follows.To begin with, _ ( 建 一 ). _（ 點） . In addition, _ ( 建 二 ). _（ 點） . Thirdly,_ ( 建 三 ). _ （ 點） .In a word, only if we pay much attention to our everyday behavior and take actions to _(重申主題 ), can we make contributions to _.( 美好生活的向往 )三 . 表寫作常用句型及短 .1.The data from the pie chart sho

5、ws that _ ranks firstHowever, the least proportion goes to_ at only 9%型）at 58% , whichis followedby_ at 33% .（ 表數據 文章第一段可能遇到的 典句2. The graph/chart/table above shows 3. From the above graph/chart, it can be seen that.4.As (正如 ) is shown in the graph, .5.It has been shown from the table thatFacts1.The

6、re was a great /slight increase /rise in2.There has been a sudden/slow/rapid fall/drop in3.The rate dropped slightly from 38%in to 31% in4.By comparison with, it decreased/increased/fell from to 5. Statistics show a 20% rise/reduction in traffic accidents compared with last year.6. The population ow

7、ning mobile phones increased by 10% in 1999.Reasons:1.The reason why/for is that2.One may think of the change as a result of 3.The change in largely resultsfrom the fact that4.This brings out the important fact that5. . is the key factor (因素 ) in6.There are several causes for this significant growth

8、 in .First, .Second, ：1. in a word ,/ in short, （ 而言之） / generally speaking（ 的來 ）2.In summary, it is important3.From what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion(得出 ） that 4.Obviously/Apparently很明 地） , if we want to , it is necessary提出建 ：1.There is no doubt that(毫無疑 ) attentionmust be p

9、aid to2.I suggest (建 )the government take effective measures to3.Personally , I think( 就我來看 ) the “ golden week” should remain, for 渡 ：常用 折， 比及比 的 ： While, but, on the contrary, however, compare with, in contrast to ,as as, the same as, be similar to, more than, less than常用描寫 化的 ：表示上升的 increase, ris

10、e, go up,表示下降的 reduce, drop, go down, fall,表示平 及其他 remain, slowly, slightly, gradually, sharply, rapidly, the number of 及,from比 ，to倍數句型等。知識點 2：圖片作文一 . 片作文考 ：以一 或多 片（如 12年高考兩 ）的形式考 ，常要求 要描述 片內容， 合生活 或自己的 就 片的主 或所反映的 象及 點 自己的感想。.二 . 片作文常用的寫作思路一般采用三段式：第一段，描述 片， 系 片所反 的某種社會 象，亮出自己 點；As is vividly shown

11、in the picture, （描述 片內容） . It s a common phenomenon that（ 合 象） . As far as I m concerned,（亮I出自己 點） My reasons are listed as follows:第二段，分析自己的理由；To begin with, （理由 1）； What s more,（理由 2）； Finally, （理由 3）。 It s high time for（就 片所反 象 行呼吁）。As for （ 而言），they ought to; Andfor（ 其它人而言），it s essentialto。第三段，

12、得出 。In conclusion, it s sb s duty to do sth.三 . 片作文常用表達1. 描述 片：In the picture, ; As we can see in the picture, ; As is vividly shown in the picture,2. 引入 象When it comes to ; It is common that ; Recentlyphenomenonthe has aroused wide concern that3. 呈 點In my opinion, ; In my view, ; As far as I m conc

13、erned, ; From my point of view, ; Iview/opinion that ; My opinion is that ; I think/believe/consider thatollows;Myreasons. are listed aThe following are my reasons.二. 專題精講1. 表作文最近學校在高中學生中做了一次”有 向 ” (To whom do you go when in trouble)的 活 ， 果如 所示。 你 要描述 果，并 合自己 的 ， 想法 和理由。參考范文A survey has been conduct

14、ed among senior high students on the topic “ Towhom do you go when introuble.The” data from the pie chartshows that “ classmatesand friendsranks”firstat 58%, whichisfollowed by“ their own” at 33%. However,theleast proportion goes to“ parents and teachers” at only 9%.As far as I am concerned , I mnot

15、 among the majoritythat tends to ask friends for help. I am more.willing to go to parents and teachers and I thinkmy peers should also consider going to them when in trouble.Firstly, parents and teachers may know more about you than yourselves. Since theyhave a more objectiveand all-aroundperspectiv

16、eon you , they arebound togive you usefuladvice. What smore, parents andteachers are experienced adults who musthave sufferedmanyworriesand hardships . They must haveaccumulated much experiencewhich canbroaden your horizonswhen you deal with matters. Last but notleast, by havingconstant communicatio

17、nswithyour parents and teachers, you are sure to strengthen therelationship with them despite the generation gap. In a word, to go to adults when in trouble may helpyoumore when you are in difficulty.For the reasons above, Iwant to callonmypeersto communicatemore oftenwith their parents andteachers.

18、2. 圖片作文簡要描述圖片內容，結合生活實際，就圖片的主題談談自己的感想。參考范文：As is vividly shown in the picture, when a young girl was riding a bike, almost all her family memberswere around, protecting herin case anything unexpected should happen, which did annoy the girl as she reallywanted to manage it herself.It s a common phenom

19、enon that parents care too much about their children.Asfar as I m concerned, I don t think it wise for parents to overprotect their children. My reasons are listed asfollows :To begin with , too much love from parents will spoil a child andmakes it hard for children togetalong with others because a

20、spoilt child is usually self-centered and unconfident.What s more, if parents takepains to pave way for theirchildren. Chances are that they will be at a loss as to how to deal with a toughproblem in future, which will cause them to be eliminated from the fierce competition. Finally, overprotectionw

21、ill prevent children fromfurther developing theiroverall ability, thushaving a negative effect ontheirall-round development.It s high time for parents and children tothink over this situation.As for parents， they ought togive children more space to try, to succeed and even to face up to the failure.

22、 And for children,it s essential tobe independent of their parents.In conclusion , it s parents duty to show love for their children; however, they shouldfindthe balancebetween holding and letting-go.三專題過關檢測 1：以下餅圖是關于高三學生填報高考志愿不同依據的人數比例。請簡要描述該圖，選擇其中你填報志愿的依據，并簡述理由。簡要寫出文章提綱：檢測 2:Directions:Write an En

23、glish composition in over 120 words according to the instructionsgiven below inChinese.請簡要描述圖片內容，并聯(lián)想生活實際談談你的感想。簡要寫出文章提綱：四學法提煉圖表作文寫作：第一點：圖表作文與平時所熟悉的夾敘夾議文差別不大，主要是在開頭部分注意下就可以，中間依然是論證部分，可按照夾敘夾議文寫作的格式進行。第二點：寫作步驟：（1）注意審題（ 2）列提綱（可參考自己學過的作文結構模板）（3）進行句式運用，成文，注意長短句結合，多用所學短語（ 4）檢查（注意時態(tài)和人稱，句式表達是否出現連詞錯誤）圖片作文寫作：在

24、描述圖片內容時一定要注意分析圖片所反應的社會現象，并用一定的過度語將圖片內容與社會現象結合起來，注意挖掘圖片背后所隱含的意思。.一. 專題知識梳理知識點 1：書信寫作常用句型一 . 信件開頭常用語1. 寫信給他人Im writing to tell you about the discussion (the lecture/ meeting/ activity) we (our class/ our school) held yesterday.Im writing to ask if you can come next week.2. 回信給他人Your letter came to me

25、this morning.I have received your letter of July 20th.Thank you for your letter.二 . 信件常用結束語1. Please remember me to your whole family.2. Wish you a pleasant journey.3. Wish you success. /Wish you the best of health.4. Looking forward to your next visit to China.5. Looking forward to the pleasure of

26、meeting you.6. Looking forward to your early reply.7. Expecting to hear from you as soon as possible.8. Hoping to hear from you soon.9. Your early reply will be highly appreciated.10. With best regards to your family.11. With love and good wishes.12. Best wishes/regards!知識點 2：申請信寫作要求及妙語模板一 . 寫作點撥：申請

27、信類型很多包括求職信（如申請做志愿者），報考申請信，留學申請信等；寫申請信應注意語言言簡意賅，語氣誠懇禮貌，避免夸張。申請信一般包括：申請原因、具備條件 /闡述想法、懇請申請單位考慮自己的申請，表示謝意，期盼回復。具體為：第一段引入事件，說明寫信目的。第二段介紹關于自己的一些具體內容。第三段提出請求，表示感謝盼復。二 . 詞句模板：1. 好詞集錦considerable，confident ， suitable， extremely ， pleased， grateful ， especially ，opportunity ， position ，.apply for ， be good at

28、，allow ， would like to ， offer ，o consideration.2. 說明應聘原因常用語A. I learned from sb./the newspaper that your company wanted to .B. I was told that .C. I have just read in the newspaper that your company needs a .D. I am writing to inquire opportunities for .E. I am writing to you to inquire if

29、there would be any position available for me to work as a.F. I am writing to apply for the job.G. I have learned from your advertisement that a .is wanted in your company.3. 介紹個人優(yōu)勢常用語A. Now I would like to introduce myself to you.B. My name is Tom aged 16/who is a 16-year-old boy.C. I graduated from

30、.in 2012.D. I like/am fond of swimming, singing and dancing in my spare time.E. I work hard and I can get along /on well with others.F. I am good at English and especially my spoken English is fairly good.G. I master English and I talk to foreigners in English freely.H. I am currently studying .I. I

31、 would be interested in .J. My main specialization is.4. 表示感謝及請求常用語A. Thank you for your consideration of my application.B. If you agree with me, Ill work hard and try to be a.C. I am available for interview.D. I am looking forward to hearing from you.E. If you agree with me, please write to me or p

32、hone me. My telephone number is.F. I am writing to you in the hope that I may obtain an opportunity to .G. I would like to apply the position that your company offers to me.H. Thank you for considering my application and I am looking forward to your early reply.J. I greatly appreciate any of your fa

33、vorable consideration of my application.K. I would be very grateful if you could consider my application and could send me about.L. Apart from doing sth., I may as well work as .5. 參考模板Model One:Dear.,I am extremely pleased to see (報紙、廣告）for the position （職位） . And Im writing to apply for（職位） .I am

34、confident that I am suitable for （職位） . On one hand,（原因） . On the other hand,（原因） .I shall be much honored if you will offer me the opportunity to （嘗試） . I am looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.YOUR SINCERELY,Model Two:Dear.I write this letter to apply for the position that y

35、ou have advertised in (報紙） of 發(fā)布時間） .I am from. As a/an, I have been. Besides, I won in. If you consider me appropriate for the job, please call me at.I will appreciate it very much if you could give me an early reply./Thank you for considering my application andI am looking forward to meting you.YO

36、URS SINCERELY知 點 3：建 信一 . 建 信的格式：第一部分，自我介 ；第二部分，描述事情的狀況和存在的 第三部分，提出你的建 第四部分，希望二 . 常用表達1. 常用于提出建 的句子A. I m writing to express my views on/concerning the topic ofB. You have asked for some advice concerning and I will try to give you my suggestions.C. I would like to suggestthatD. I am writing in repl

37、y toE. In my opinion, I would sayF. Probably you should/ You d better / You might as well / You are supposed toG. I suggest that the present system under which marks are being given for reading be modified.H. I, therefo re, propose thatI. I think/believe it would be better/very helpful / beneficial

38、if youJ. It is desirable that 是可取的.K. I would like to suggest/ recommend that Why notL. It would help to This wouldM. Perhaps there could be2. 常用于建 信 尾的句子A. I hope that you may consider doingB. I would be ready to further discuss this decision.C. I trust you will take my suggestions into account.D.

39、I look forward to hearing from you about what you plan to do on this matter.E. I hope could take this suggestions into consideration.F. I d like to make this proposal, and trust that it will meet with your sympathetic consideration.3. 參考模板Model One:Dear _,You have asked me for my advice with regard

40、to （關于）_ , and I will try to make some practicalsuggestions here.In my opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions: _（建 的內容）.I hope you will find these proposals （提 ） useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details.Yours sincerely,Li Ming.Model Two:Dear,I

41、 am writing to make some suggestions as to / I am writing to express my views concerningWithregard to , and I will try to make some constructive suggestions here.In my opinion, you would be wise to / I would like to suggest first that With the help ofBesides/In addition/What smore/ Furthermore, if y

42、ou , you would be able toFinally/ Last but not least/, you may consider This wayI sincerely hope that you will take my suggestions into consideration, and your prompt迅速的 attention tomy suggestions would be highly appreciated./ I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be readyto discu

43、ss this matter with you to further details.Yours sincerely,Li Hua二. 專題精講1. 申 信Directions: Write an English composition in 120 - 150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.假如你是啟明中學（Ming Qi Middle School）的李明，想申 成 “ 共 ”的暑期志愿者。根據以下啟事，寫一封申 信（信中不能提到真 姓名和學校）。志 愿 者 招 募 共 是由民 起的 心公益 ，主要致力

44、于 困地區(qū)兒童相關的援助 目。我 期待你的加入！ 位 1：網 （webpage editor） 位 2：影像制作（cameraman） 位 3： 管理 （forum administrator ） 位 4：活 （event organizer）有意者 來信告知：1) 你個人的基本情況；2) 你所申 的 位和申 的理由；參考范文：I am Li Ming from Ming Qi Middle School. Recently I have learned from your webpage that“ Aigongxian”is a public organization whose majo

45、r work involved programs relevant to helping children in poverty-stricken areas. Almost at the same time, word came to our school that you were recruiting some volunteers during thissummer vacation. I d like to join you without the slightest hesitation, and my reasons are as follows.To begin with, I

46、 prefer to apply for the post of a cameraman. Not only am I fond of taking photos, but I alsohave professional skills. I believe that people willhave a clearer knowledge of the livingconditions of thechildren there through my photos.Apart from what I have mentioned above, I believe that my photos wi

47、ll appeal to more people to realize thelack of education in remote areas as well as the increasingly large gap between urban cities and countries.Consequently, there will be more kind people to join you to improve the children s living conditionsIn a nutshell, I am eager to do my part as a volunteer

48、 of you. Poverty has become a social phenomenon andno easy way is at hand to tackle it. However, it highs time that everyone volunteered to help poor children.Combined effortswillmake a great difference.I hope that you willaccept me as a cameraman in theorganization. (232 words)2. 建議信假如你是一位大學畢業(yè)生，請以李

49、明的署名給報紙編輯寫一封信。信中要包括以下內容：1） 目前大學畢業(yè)生就業(yè)中存在的問題；2） 你對這些問題的看法和建議。參考范文：Dear Editor,I m a college graduate. Now I am writing to talk about the employment issue of college graduate. I think,besides the financial crisis, there are other reasons why college graduates find it hard to get a job.College students

50、aim too high. All they want are“ good ” jobs offering good salary, comfortable workingconditionsand high social status. Consequently, most college graduates are unwillingto accept jobs theyconsider not“ good ” enough. Another reason is that there is a big gap between the majors some students study incollege and the demands of those vacant positions.Solution to the problem requires efforts of both the society and the stud