1、By Qiu Lingxin from Rugao Junior School,How to write a good article,Activity one: Enjoy a movie,2012年南通市中考書面表達(dá),假設(shè)某中學(xué)生英文報開展關(guān)于生活變化的征文活動,請你根據(jù)下表所提示要點，以changes in our life為題，用英語為該報寫一篇稿件，簡述社會家庭、學(xué)校以及個人生活中的若干變化，展望未來生活及如何為此努力。,Activity Two: Ways of writing,2012年南通市中考書面表達(dá),注意：1.表達(dá)中必須包含所給要點，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯。 2. 詞數(shù)

2、90左右。開頭已寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。 3. 表達(dá)中請勿提及真實校名和姓名。,Changes in our life With the rapid development of Chinas economy(經(jīng)濟(jì)),great changes have taken place in our life in the past years. _ _ _ _ _,2012年南通市中考書面表達(dá),一起來審題!,要點是什么？,Before writing,2012年南通市中考書面表達(dá),The article from a student,There were only paths, but now the

3、roads are wide. People could only go on foot in the past, now we can go by bus . In the past, there were old houses in our school, but now we can see new teaching buildings. I got Knowledge from books, now I can learn over the Internet. My dream life is to have a better life, there wont be much home

4、work. I want to be a scientist and Ill work hard for the better future.,書面表達(dá)得分_,評價：OK 1. 文章分段；2. 要點齊全； 3.人稱正確；4.時態(tài)正確。,14 分,診斷：描述單一,對策：豐富形式,_,_,_,_,Why?,_,小路 大路（或自擬一點內(nèi)容）,Hometown,Many paths have been turned into wide roads.,_ have been turned into _.,There were only paths, but now the roads are wide.

5、,There were only paths, but now the roads are wider.,While writing,（或自擬一點內(nèi)容）,life,People used to walk or ride bikes to work, but now they often take buses and many even drive their own cars.,聽收音機(jī) 看電視,穿舊衣服 穿漂亮?xí)r髦衣服,People used to _, but now they _.,步行、騎車 乘車、開車（或自擬一點內(nèi)容）,People could only go on foot in

6、the past, now we can go by bus .,Students sit in new teaching buildings instead of old houses.,舊校舍 新教學(xué)樓（或自擬一點內(nèi)容）,In the past, there were old houses in our school, but now we can see new teaching buildings.,School,In school, we use _ instead of_.,Students,There they not only learn from books but also

7、 over the Internet.,僅通過書本學(xué)習(xí) 通過網(wǎng)絡(luò)等學(xué)習(xí)（或自擬一點內(nèi)容）,僅個人學(xué)習(xí),小組合作,Some useful expressions used to but now instead of turn into not onlybut also,學(xué)會用關(guān)聯(lián)詞,有哪幾種表達(dá)法？,In my hometown, many paths have been turned into wide ones. People used to walk or ride bikes to work, but now they often take buses and many even dri

8、ve their own cars. Students sit in new teaching buildings instead of old houses. There they not only learn from books but also over the Internet. My dream is to have a better life, and Ill work hard for the better future.,書面表達(dá)得分_,17 分,書面表達(dá)評卷標(biāo)準(zhǔn)第五檔： （17-20分） 完成了試題規(guī)定的全部任務(wù)： 1）覆蓋所有要點內(nèi)容; 2）語言表達(dá)形式多樣，詞匯豐富;

9、3）有效地使用連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，過渡自然。,3）有效地使用連接成分，使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，過渡自然。,該滿分了吧,Useful expressions as a result it isfor to I hope so that,In my hometown, many paths have been turned into wide roads. People used to walk or ride bikes to work, but now they often take buses and many even drive their own cars. Students sit i

10、n new teaching buildings instead of old houses. There they not only learn from books but also over the Internet. My dream life is to have a better life, and Ill work hard for the better future.,I hope I will have a better life,I will study much harder now so that I can realize my dream,As a result,

11、it is easier for us to travel.,裝飾文句,朗讀并欣賞,With the rapid development of Chinas economy, great changes have taken place in our life in the past few years. In my hometown, many paths have been turned into wide roads. As a result, it is easier for us to travel. People used to walk or ride bikes to work

12、, but now they often take buses and many even drive their own cars. In schools, students sit in new teaching buildings instead of old houses. There they not only learn from books but also over the Internet. I hope we will live a better life in the future. I will study much harder now so that I can r

13、ealize my dream.,19-20分 Congratulations!,書面表達(dá)得分_,Writing ? Paragraphs?,過渡性詞語歸納,并列關(guān)系：and, or 轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系：but, 時間關(guān)系：when, 因果關(guān)系：so, as a result 目的: so that 列舉：for example , such as 總結(jié): in all, in a word,表示羅列增加 First, On one hand, besides for one thing for another,檢查： 人稱、時態(tài) 內(nèi)容要點 單詞拼寫、詞數(shù)和書寫 分段與否（以兩到三段為宜）,After

14、writing,統(tǒng)一修改符號，例如： 刪除 插入 替代,支你一招,總 結(jié),中考作文六步驟：,1. 審清題目； 2. 列出要點； 3. 連詞成句； 4. 豐富句子； 5. 裝飾文句； 6. 檢查修訂。,假設(shè)你是英文周刊English Weekly的特約記者，請一“A new town” 為題，寫一則80詞左右的簡訊，介紹我市的如皋港（Rugao New Town).內(nèi)容提示見下表：,要求：1、簡訊須包括表格中所有信息，要求語句通順、意思連貫； 2、表格中 “展望” 一欄，請用自己的2-3句話展開合理想象，作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮； 3、簡訊的標(biāo)題已在答題卡上給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。,Activity Three: Practice,記住要先審題,1) Correct structure (結(jié)構(gòu)合理) 2) Be different from others (與眾不同) 3) Correct grammar (語法正確) 4) Nice