1、大學(xué)英語四級測試作文評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)2分：條理不清，思路紊亂，語言支離破碎或大部分句子均有錯誤，且多數(shù)為嚴(yán)重錯誤。5分：基本切題，表達(dá)思想不夠清楚，連貫性差，有較多的嚴(yán)重語言錯誤。8分：基本切題，表達(dá)思想比較清楚，文章尚連貫，但語言錯誤較多，其中有少量的嚴(yán)重錯誤。大學(xué)英語四級測試作文評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)11分：切題，表達(dá)思想清楚，文字連貫，但有少量語言錯誤。14分：切題，表達(dá)思想清楚，文字通順，連貫性較好，基本上無語言錯誤。字?jǐn)?shù)不夠扣分。（各段已給出的主題句均不得計入）段落不夠扣分。評分樣卷 (1)Women in the Modern World Women are playing an increasingl

2、y important part in society today. In today, many women have a work. They worked as well as men playing an important part in factories. There are many women in govener also. They lead other people comtral, and make out plans. There are many women scientist also. They event new things to improve our

3、life.評分樣卷 (1) With the changes in their social role, womens position in the family has been improved as well. In ancient, womens position in family is pity. They had to looks after their children, did every how husband ordered her to do. But now it is changed. They are equal to her husband. They hav

4、e the right of speaking of idea, discussion things with her husband, do what she wants to do.評分樣卷 (1) In spite of these changes, the liberation of woman has not been completely realized. We also should realize, womens likerty are limited. For example, many factories want men become its workers but t

5、he chance of women is less than men. Everyone should do their best to change this condition. Im sure, the liberation of women would be increased.5分基本切題，表達(dá)不夠清楚，連貫性差，有較多嚴(yán)重錯誤。評分樣卷（2） Women are playing an increasing important part in society today. More and more women go to work to earn money instead of

6、 keeping the house or looking after the children. Women have entered many fields of society including scientific field. As we know, many women sports teams have won the worlds champion such as Chinese Womens Volleyball Team.評分樣卷（2） With the changes in their social role, womans position in the family

7、 has been improved as well. Husbands are not the masters of wives in many places. Husbands and wife are equal now. They join together to overcome difficulties and share happiness.評分樣卷（2） In spite of these changes, the liberation of women has not been completely realized. Also in some places, women a

8、re considered being “things” belong to men. They have little chance to find jobs. They dont get equal pay for equal job. This is a problem must be solved not only by society but also by women themselves.11分切題，思想表達(dá)清楚，連貫。有個別句子結(jié)構(gòu)錯誤及少量其他語言方面的錯誤評分樣卷（3） Women are playing an increasingly important part in

9、society today. Many women today are playing an important part at works that was thought only could be done by the men before. For example, some women are not secretary in the office, instead , they become manager of a company.評分樣卷（3） With the changes in their social role, womans position in the fami

10、ly has been improved as well. In the world today, more and more women have their own jobs. They get their own salary, and become more independent from their husband. With the economic situation improved, their family position is improving.評分樣卷（3） In spite of these changes, the liberation of woman ha

11、s not been completely realized. Many husbands only want his wife to stay at home, and do some works or do some shopping. They only want their wife to be a housewife, but not a manager of a company.8分基本切題，思想表達(dá)尚清楚，基本連貫，有個別嚴(yán)重的語言錯誤及用詞不當(dāng)，但可以理解。評分樣卷（4） Women are playing an increasingly important part in s

12、ociety today. In many countries, more and more women are acting as workers, farmers, scientists and even leaders. We can say that almost all jobs which men can do are done perfectly by women. Women are no longer looked down upon by society.評分樣卷（4） With the changes in their social role, womens positi

13、on in the family has been improved as well. Husband and wife are now equal in the family. They cope with problems of daily life together, and share happiness with each other. Also, you can hardly find out that in todays families, women are being busy with dinners, whereas men are comfortably sitting

14、 in armchairs, reading newspapers.評分樣卷（4） In spite of these changes, the liberation of woman has not been completely realized. A number of men still jealously guard their rights, and regard women as incapable creature. Few women are allowed to attend important international meeting dominated by men.

15、 Thats really the problems we should solve immediately.14分切題，文章通順，語言規(guī)范。句法有一定變化，用詞適當(dāng)。有個別小錯，但不影響理解。檢查語法1. 動詞 時態(tài)，語態(tài)是否正確2. 名詞 單數(shù)、復(fù)數(shù)、可數(shù)、不可數(shù)，專有名詞大小寫3. 主謂一致 分清主句和從句，使各自的主謂一致4. 形容詞、副詞 用法是否正確，比較級與最高級是否得當(dāng)5. 介詞、連詞 搭配是否正確6. 其他關(guān)聯(lián)詞 用法是否正確7. 單詞拼寫 8. 標(biāo)點符號Model ( developed one ) (1) There has never been an agreement

16、 as to the issue of smoking. (2) Recently, however, more and more people begin to pay attention to this question, and some even write to the government calling for policies to stop smoking. (3) They have realized that smoking does great harm to the health of smokers and non smokers as well.表示列舉的方法 n

17、First of all/Above all, secondly, moreovernIn the first place, in the second place, furthermore/whats morenTo begin(start) with, secondly, in additionnFor one thing, for another thing, for still another thing表示舉例說明的過渡語nFor example, for instance, for one thing, to illustrate, as an illustration, a ca

18、se in point, nLets take as an example. Take for example.n is a typical example of n is a typical/proper case in point.表示遞進(jìn)關(guān)系的過渡語nIn addition, furthermore, moreover, besides, also, whats morenNot only, but also, similarly, nAnother isn is anothern is also a factor. 表示對比對照的過渡語nIn contrast, by contrast

19、, on the other hand,in comparison, on the contrary, unlike, like, contrary to, whereas, while, conversely, ndiffer/vary greatly/vastly fromnDifferent from 表示因果關(guān)系的過渡語nBecause of, on account of, due to, owing to, thanks to, for, because, since, as, for this reasonnTherefore, so, as a result, consequen

20、tly, in consequence, accordingly, hence, thusnThe reasons why/for are/lie inn results inn result from表示結(jié)論的過渡語nTo sum up, to conclude, to summarizenIn sum, in summary, in conclusion, in all, in a word, in short, in briefnSo, therefore, thusnWe can come to the conclusion that nA conclusion can be reac

21、hed that 表示轉(zhuǎn)折的過渡語nThough, although, however, nevertheless, nonetheless, even thoughnLets look at the other side of the coin.nAs everything has two sides, we should not neglect the other side of the coin.nJust as there are two sides of a coin,. 歸納總結(jié)概括全文，得出結(jié)論 nAll in allnIn a word nAs for me nIn my op

22、inionnPersonally, I think /believenAs far as I am concerned作文模板（A or B）模板模板1：n Depending on personal experience , personality type and emotional concern , we find that some people hold the idea of A while others prefer B . From my point of view , it is more advisable to choose A rather than B . My a

23、rguments for this point are listed as follows .nThe main reason for my propensity for A is that _就理由進(jìn)行解釋。就理由進(jìn)行解釋。nAnther reason can be seen is that _就理由進(jìn)行解釋。就理由進(jìn)行解釋。For example _.nThe argument I support in the first paragraph is also in a position of advantage because _.nAlthough I agree that there

24、may be a couple of advantages to B . I feel that the disadvantages are more obvious . Such as _.nIn a word _.模板模板2 n From my point of view , it is advisable to choose A rather than B . My arguments for this point are listed as follows .n The main reason for my propensity for _is that _.n nThere is a

25、nother factor that deserves some words here _.n In a word _. While it is true that argument I disagree with hold a little bit of water , I think_. Agree or disagree n模板模板1： nNowadays , some may hold the opinion that_. But others have a negative attitude . As far as I am concerned , I agree that _. M

26、y arguments for this point are listed as follows . nI agree with the statement that _without reservation since _.n Anther reason why I agree with the above statement is that I believe that_.nIn a word , _ .Take into account of all these factors ,we may reach the conclusion that_. 模板模板2：n There may b

27、e one or two disadvantages to _, however , I believe that there are far more advantages . My argument for this point are listed as follows .nFirst of all , perhaps one disadvantage to _is that _.For instance , _. Anther drawback to _involves the possibility that _. For example, _. Even though there

28、may be one or two disadvantages to _, the advantages far outweigh them . The main reason for my propensity for _is that _. For example, _.n In a word , in spite of the fact that there may be a couple of disadvantages to _. I feel that advantages are more obvious _重復(fù)優(yōu)點重復(fù)優(yōu)點. Taking into account of all

29、 there factors , we may reach the conclusion that _.歷年題目解析n2001年1月n面試在求職過程中的作用n取得面試成功的因素：儀表、舉止談吐、能力、專業(yè)知識、自信、實事求是.n2001年6月:Suppose you are Zhang Ying. Write a letter to Xiao Wang, a schoolmate of yours who is going to visit you during the week-long holiday. 1. 表示歡迎2. 提出對度假安排的建議3. 提醒應(yīng)注意的事項n2002年1月假設(shè)你是

30、李明，請你就本校食堂的狀況給校長寫一封信，內(nèi)容應(yīng)涉及食堂的飯菜質(zhì)量、價格、環(huán)境、服務(wù)等，可以是表揚(yáng)，可以是批評建議，也可以兼而有之。n2002年6月(圖表作文)1.上圖所示為某校大學(xué)生平均每周使用計算機(jī)的時間: 1990年（2 hours）、1995年(4 hours)、2002年(14 hours)，請描述其變化；2. 請說明發(fā)生這些變化的原因（可從計算機(jī)的用途、價格或社會發(fā)展等方面加以說明）；3. 你認(rèn)為目前大學(xué)生在計算機(jī)使用中有什么困難或問題。n2003年1月: It Pays to Be HonestnYou should write at least 120 words accord

31、ing to the outline given below in Chinese.1. 當(dāng)前社會上存在許多不誠實的現(xiàn)象2. 誠實利人利已，做人應(yīng)該誠實n2003年6月: An Eye-Witness Account of a Traffic Accidentn 假設(shè)你在某日某時某地目擊一起車禍，就此寫一份見證書。見證書須包括以下幾點：1、車禍發(fā)生的時間及地點2、你所見到的車禍情況3、你對車禍原因的分析n2003年9月n1.簡單敘述一下這位同學(xué)生病（或受傷）的情況2.同學(xué)、老師和我是如何幫助他/她的3.人與人之間的這種相互關(guān)愛給我的感受是 The Day My Classmate Fell I

32、ll (or Got Injured)n2004年1月1建議報考的專業(yè)及理由2報考該專業(yè)的基本條件3應(yīng)當(dāng)如何備考A Letter in Reply to a Friendn2004年6月(歡迎辭)nDirections: you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition entitled A Brief Introduction to a Tourist Attraction. Your role: a tour guideYour audience: a group of foreign tourists Your introduction

33、should include:some welcoming wordsthe schedule for the daya description of the place the tourists will be visitingn2005年12月: A Campaign Speech1、你認(rèn)為自己具備是什么條件（能力，性格，愛好）可以勝任學(xué)生會主席工作？n2、 如果當(dāng)選你將會為本校同學(xué)做什么？n2006年6月nAn announcement for a voluntary program 1：校學(xué)生會組織一次暑假志愿活動，現(xiàn)招聘志愿者2：本次志愿者活動目的 內(nèi)容及安排3：報名條件和聯(lián)系方式n

34、2006年12月n1.許多人喜歡在除夕夜觀看春節(jié)晚會n2.但是有些人提出取消春節(jié)晚會n3.我的看法。2007年6月(announcement)n1、本社團(tuán)的主要活動內(nèi)容n 2、參加本社團(tuán)的好處n 3、如何加入本社團(tuán)2007年12月作文題nWhat electives to choose n1、各大學(xué)開設(shè)了各種各樣的選修課n2、學(xué)生因為各種原因選擇了不同的選修課n3、以你自己為例2008年作文預(yù)測1,極有可能出議論文2,準(zhǔn)備一下圖表作文3,最后準(zhǔn)備一下書信通知等應(yīng)用文寫作Letter Writing書信作文的寫作要求：n只要求寫正文body，而信頭heading，信內(nèi)地址inside address，稱呼salutation，信末客套話complimentary closing，簽名signature等都已給出。圖表作文常用詞nspiral upward / the demand for talents (fair ) spiraled upward / climbed drastically / soar / surge / on the rise / on the ascendance / wane / shrink / slump / fall off / drop