1、從應(yīng)用文到原有模板從應(yīng)用文到原有模板的改進(jìn)的改進(jìn)原有模板的問(wèn)題第1頁(yè)/共60頁(yè)應(yīng)用文應(yīng)用文1.格式傳統(tǒng)式 非傳統(tǒng)式第2頁(yè)/共60頁(yè)Dear Wang little girl: From see you one eye, I shit love you.your eyes close,I die;your eyes open ,I come back to live.Your eyes close and open again and again ,I die again and again. Maybe you do not know me ,no matter.one see clock e

2、motion is pop. I think I should introduce myself to you I call Li old big. Toyear 25.My home four mouth people:papa,mama,I and DD.I beat letter very fast,because I am a computer high hand. I even act as black guest. I do early fuck every day, so that I can have strong body to protect you. Please com

3、e to eat and sleep with me, or I will cut my hair to be a monk, and find a place where many monks live in to over my life.your old big第3頁(yè)/共60頁(yè)Dear Wang little girl: From see you one eye, I shit love you.your eyes close,I die;your eyes open ,I come back to live.Your eyes close and open again and agai

4、n ,I die again and again. Maybe you do not know me ,no matter.one see clock emotion is pop. I think I should introduce myself to youI call Li old big. Toyear 25.My home four mouth people:papa,mama,I and DD.I beat letter very fast,because I am a computer high hand. I even act as black guest. I do ear

5、ly fuck every day, so that I can have strong body to protect you.Please come to eat and sleep with me, or I will cut my hair to be a monk, and find aplace where many monks live in to over my life. your old big第4頁(yè)/共60頁(yè)注意注意當(dāng)LiMing出現(xiàn)在右下角時(shí)，推薦采用傳統(tǒng)式當(dāng)LiMing出現(xiàn)在左下角時(shí)，推薦采用現(xiàn)代式每段縮進(jìn)開頭，落款在右下方每段靠左頂格，段與段之間空行第5頁(yè)/共60頁(yè)

6、結(jié)束語(yǔ)結(jié)束語(yǔ) 如 Jim Green 同學(xué)常寫的 Best wishesYours sincerely上級(jí)或長(zhǎng)者 ： Yours respectfully親屬或摯友 ： Yours affectionately第6頁(yè)/共60頁(yè)正文的內(nèi)容正文的內(nèi)容 投訴投訴信信提出抱怨表示遺憾闡述問(wèn)題發(fā)生經(jīng)過(guò)分析后果建議措施第7頁(yè)/共60頁(yè)正文的內(nèi)容正文的內(nèi)容 求職求職信信申請(qǐng)崗位自我介紹申請(qǐng)以及適合原因希望考慮第8頁(yè)/共60頁(yè)正文的內(nèi)容正文的內(nèi)容 感謝感謝信信表示感謝感謝的事由再次表達(dá)感謝第9頁(yè)/共60頁(yè)有什么共同點(diǎn)嗎？有什么共同點(diǎn)嗎？提出問(wèn)題分析問(wèn)題解決問(wèn)題介紹我是誰(shuí)，我干什么寫這封信描述寫信的具體事件，或

7、因果，或利弊針對(duì)第二部分內(nèi)容提出相應(yīng)的解決方案第10頁(yè)/共60頁(yè)信件要生活化一些信件要生活化一些1.格式上的套話2.事件分析的生活化例如：學(xué)校食堂不利于和諧社會(huì)的建設(shè)？可以是可以第11頁(yè)/共60頁(yè)正文正文Dear XXXX： I am LiMing, a freshman from _ department.I am writing to _.(The main problem involves 名詞 如：the cashiers attitude.) _ (介紹問(wèn)題并且分析) _ (提出解決方案) Thank you for your time and consideration, and

8、I am looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely LiMing 消極事件第12頁(yè)/共60頁(yè)在分析問(wèn)題時(shí)在分析問(wèn)題時(shí)理由生活化 經(jīng)濟(jì)環(huán)境方便健康信息在遇見(jiàn)食堂的問(wèn)題時(shí)，怎樣進(jìn)行思考？第13頁(yè)/共60頁(yè)5選選2經(jīng)濟(jì)環(huán)境方便健康信息1.方便2.健康 （心理健康）3.經(jīng)濟(jì)第14頁(yè)/共60頁(yè)總分思維下的中文?？偡炙季S下的中文模板板這一問(wèn)題對(duì)同學(xué)們的生活帶來(lái)了積極/消極影響。從經(jīng)濟(jì)的角度看，它對(duì)同學(xué)們的經(jīng)濟(jì)生活產(chǎn)生了不好的影響。_ ; 從方便的角度看，它也影響了同學(xué)們的日常生活._.綜上所述，這是一個(gè)亟待解決的問(wèn)題/令人滿意的趨勢(shì)第15頁(yè)/共60頁(yè)這一

9、問(wèn)題對(duì)同學(xué)們的生活帶來(lái)了積極/消極影響。這句話你覺(jué)得眼熟嗎？This exerts positive/negative to the daily lives of students.第16頁(yè)/共60頁(yè)從經(jīng)濟(jì)的角度看，它對(duì)同學(xué)們的經(jīng)濟(jì)生活產(chǎn)生了不好的影響。_ ;From the aspect of economic, it does not provide an ideal condition for students.一句話舉例？學(xué)生們吃飯需要花更多的錢了第17頁(yè)/共60頁(yè)從方便的角度看，它也影響了同學(xué)們的日常生活._.In terms of 從的角度（方面）說(shuō)It is not, meanw

10、hile, good news in terms of convenience.at the same time,思考： 一句話舉例？第18頁(yè)/共60頁(yè)綜上所述，這是一綜上所述，這是一個(gè)亟待解決的問(wèn)題個(gè)亟待解決的問(wèn)題/令人滿意的趨勢(shì)令人滿意的趨勢(shì)To sum upAs has been noted,this is an issue calling for immediate attention.a satisfying trend for (對(duì)象)第19頁(yè)/共60頁(yè)除了利弊外，另一大除了利弊外，另一大邏輯重點(diǎn)邏輯重點(diǎn)原因與目的He failed because he had not worke

11、d hard.但是because用法過(guò)于普遍Rise fromHis failure rose from _The winner ascribed his success to hard work.往自己會(huì)寫的東西上引第20頁(yè)/共60頁(yè)靈活寫出原因或目的靈活寫出原因或目的語(yǔ)句語(yǔ)句1.原因Attribute to He attributed his success to hard work.stem from Success usually stems from hard work.第21頁(yè)/共60頁(yè)原因原因 ：四大天王：四大天王Rise fromStem fromAscribe toAttri

12、bute to第22頁(yè)/共60頁(yè)目的性語(yǔ)句目的性語(yǔ)句We should work hard to gain success.so as tofor the purpose that為什么要學(xué)習(xí)目的性語(yǔ)句呢？Relevant measures should be taken so as to control _ regulations should be carried out 建議措施，只要將上節(jié)課的幾點(diǎn)進(jìn)行名詞替換即可第23頁(yè)/共60頁(yè)條件句條件句 高分句型高分句型原始句： If you work hard, you will success.NB 1: Given that 表示真實(shí)的條件

13、Given that you work hard, you will success.NB 3：Assuming that 表示假設(shè)的條件Assuming that you work hard, you will success.NB 2：on condition that 表示真實(shí)的條件You will success on condition that you work hard.第24頁(yè)/共60頁(yè)條件句的經(jīng)典應(yīng)用條件句的經(jīng)典應(yīng)用It is not, meanwhile, good news in terms of convenience . _在面臨這種一句話舉例時(shí)，你是否一籌莫展？If

14、 so,(典型低分)套用這樣的邏輯：主體變化法Esp: 主體取反 如果這一趨勢(shì)繼續(xù)，將有什么消極后果Assuming that this trend continues,第25頁(yè)/共60頁(yè)建議句建議句如果你想給出建議，卻不想滿篇都是we should,we must怎么辦？如果你希望換詞，卻又礙于詞匯有限，怎樣最簡(jiǎn)單地進(jìn)行變換？正話反說(shuō)主動(dòng)句不行是不是可以考慮被動(dòng)句？肯定句不行是不是可以考慮否定句？第26頁(yè)/共60頁(yè)舒緩一下舒緩一下剛剛主要通過(guò)應(yīng)用文型的文章完善了原有模板回憶：哪四種重點(diǎn)結(jié)構(gòu)是你寫作主體時(shí)必須用到的？總結(jié) :書信類總模板第27頁(yè)/共60頁(yè)Dear XXXX： I am LiMi

15、ng, a freshman from XX department.I am writing to _.(The main problem involves 名詞 如：the cashiers attitude.) This exerts positive/negative to the daily lives of students. From the aspect of economic, it does not provide an ideal condition for students. _ It is not, meanwhile, good news in terms of co

16、nvenience. _ As has been noted,this is an issue calling for immediate attention. _ (提出解決方案) Thank you for your time and consideration, and I am looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely LiMing第28頁(yè)/共60頁(yè)應(yīng)用文思考題應(yīng)用文思考題P34 本次志愿者活動(dòng)的目的第29頁(yè)/共60頁(yè)怎樣把你的作文寫得怎樣把你的作文寫得真正的好看真正的好看第30頁(yè)/共60頁(yè)長(zhǎng)短句原則長(zhǎng)短句原則滿篇的長(zhǎng)句反而讓你的作文

17、顯得重點(diǎn)不突出第31頁(yè)/共60頁(yè)短句修辭短句修辭1 頂真頂真1.什么叫頂真歸來(lái)見(jiàn)天子，天子坐明堂2.頂真的優(yōu)勢(shì)3.英語(yǔ)頂真的寫法A,B,C三個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句能夠構(gòu)成連續(xù)的因果/并列關(guān)系時(shí)，寫成A,B, and C的形式第32頁(yè)/共60頁(yè)短句修辭短句修辭2 強(qiáng)調(diào)強(qiáng)調(diào)性倒裝性倒裝 NCE 3 46 So great is our passion for doing things ourselves, that we are becoming increasingly less dependent on specialized labor.The problem is so serious.A is B B

18、 is A第33頁(yè)/共60頁(yè)常用詞匯的替換常用詞匯的替換 實(shí)詞實(shí)詞numerousMany people take this for granted.incalculableMany a + 單數(shù)considerable第34頁(yè)/共60頁(yè)goodBeneficialFavorablePromisingExcellentOutstanding第35頁(yè)/共60頁(yè)badNegativeAdverseUnfavorable第36頁(yè)/共60頁(yè)There are different views about A variety ofvariousdiverse第37頁(yè)/共60頁(yè)A is more impor

19、tant than BCrucialIndispensableEssentialFundamentalVitalparamountThe significance of A outweights that of B第38頁(yè)/共60頁(yè)P(yáng)eople realize Be aware of Be conscious of第39頁(yè)/共60頁(yè)P(yáng)ay attention toSet ones mind onConcentrate on第40頁(yè)/共60頁(yè)enoughSufficientAdequateAmple第41頁(yè)/共60頁(yè)In factIn realityvirtually第42頁(yè)/共60頁(yè)WayMe

20、thodApproachmeans第43頁(yè)/共60頁(yè)showReflectManifestDemonstrateindicate第44頁(yè)/共60頁(yè)dangerousHazardousperilous第45頁(yè)/共60頁(yè)虛詞虛詞 1. 所以： hence, therefore, accordingly,Consequetly第46頁(yè)/共60頁(yè)讓步讓步NotwithstandingIn spite of despite名詞第47頁(yè)/共60頁(yè)一方面，另一方面一方面，另一方面FirstlySecondlyFinally,To begin withIn additionLast but not least

21、For one thingFor another thing第48頁(yè)/共60頁(yè)當(dāng)你拿到一篇作文時(shí)，當(dāng)你拿到一篇作文時(shí)，思路思路提綱：現(xiàn)象寫什么？邏輯段落：寫原因還是寫利弊？寫的話，從什么角度去寫？選取相應(yīng)模板句型建議措施怎樣選出2個(gè)？關(guān)鍵名詞是否需要替換？第49頁(yè)/共60頁(yè)寫作過(guò)程中寫作過(guò)程中 （篇（篇章）章） 一段圍繞一個(gè)主題，千萬(wàn)不要寫成散文牢記：觀點(diǎn)+分析+例子的模式在列舉時(shí)，一定要記得把一，二，三寫上去或者寫成第一，第二，第三；或者寫成從角度看，從方面看第50頁(yè)/共60頁(yè)如果不從三觀入手如果不從三觀入手從短期和長(zhǎng)期看從短期和長(zhǎng)期看積極：積極：不論從短期看還是從長(zhǎng)期看，這一現(xiàn)象的出現(xiàn)不論

22、從短期看還是從長(zhǎng)期看，這一現(xiàn)象的出現(xiàn)/品質(zhì)品質(zhì)都將使從社會(huì)成員到整個(gè)人類收益無(wú)窮。都將使從社會(huì)成員到整個(gè)人類收益無(wú)窮。消極消極:雖然這一現(xiàn)象的出現(xiàn)是可以理解的，甚至一些專家雖然這一現(xiàn)象的出現(xiàn)是可以理解的，甚至一些專家認(rèn)為這是社會(huì)發(fā)展的必然結(jié)果，但是從長(zhǎng)期看，如果認(rèn)為這是社會(huì)發(fā)展的必然結(jié)果，但是從長(zhǎng)期看，如果任其發(fā)展將給整個(gè)社會(huì)帶來(lái)巨大問(wèn)題。任其發(fā)展將給整個(gè)社會(huì)帶來(lái)巨大問(wèn)題。This phenomenon, no matter in the short term or in the long term, could benefit the human race, from individuals

23、 to the society as a whole. Although the occurrence of this phenomenon is understandable ，and even some experts point out that it is an inevitable result of the development of the modern society and there is no way to avoid it, if we let it be, it will baffle the development of our nation in the lon

24、g run.第51頁(yè)/共60頁(yè)寫作過(guò)程中（詞匯）寫作過(guò)程中（詞匯）每當(dāng)想要提筆寫出一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單的常用詞時(shí)，想想自己花時(shí)間背的那些替換詞就白費(fèi)了。不要讓簡(jiǎn)單詞過(guò)多出現(xiàn)在你的作文中。第52頁(yè)/共60頁(yè)寫完后進(jìn)行檢查寫完后進(jìn)行檢查1.主謂是否一致例如：第三人稱單數(shù)是否加了S2.時(shí)態(tài)是否有誤3.單詞大小寫是否正確，標(biāo)點(diǎn)有無(wú)出現(xiàn)一逗到底的現(xiàn)象？第53頁(yè)/共60頁(yè)例子段例子段以上觀點(diǎn)能夠極好地被下面的例子所證明：以上觀點(diǎn)能夠極好地被下面的例子所證明：積極消極Xxx,他所在領(lǐng)域里的杰出人物。在他奮斗的過(guò)程中，遭遇了許多困難。他最終戰(zhàn)勝了這些苦難（靠主題詞）。而正是（主題詞）使他最終取得了今天的成就。反過(guò)來(lái)說(shuō)可能

25、性 較小 總結(jié)：從中可以看出，（主題詞）對(duì)一個(gè)人的 生活能夠產(chǎn)生怎樣的影響第54頁(yè)/共60頁(yè)以上觀點(diǎn)能夠極好地以上觀點(diǎn)能夠極好地被下面的例子所證明：被下面的例子所證明：It can be best exemplified by the following case (s):Our society has been filled with a variety of examplesof 主題詞 ,with the following one being foremost:Among all the touching facts relating to that I have heard, noticed, and experienced , the most impressive one is 第55頁(yè)/共60頁(yè)單例段：積極單例段：積極XXX，the excellence in his own field, encountered numerous difficulties in his struggles for a better life. He finally overcame all these