1、-PAGE . zPAGE 0在職聯(lián)考英語作文解析大綱要求應(yīng)具備根本的英語書面表達(dá)能力，能夠根據(jù)所給的提綱、情景或圖表按要求寫出相應(yīng)的短文。所寫短文要求主題明確，條理清楚，語言比擬規(guī)。寫作速度應(yīng)到達(dá)每小時(shí)240詞以上。本局部采用提綱、情景或圖表作文的考試形式?？忌鷳?yīng)按照要求寫出一篇120詞以上的英語短文。本局部總分值為15分。評分原則與標(biāo)準(zhǔn)評分原則與標(biāo)準(zhǔn)總分值：15閱卷標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：2，5，8，11，14評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：2：條理不清，思路紊亂，語言支離破碎或大局部句子均有錯(cuò)誤，并且多數(shù)為嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。(一塌糊涂)5：根本切題。表達(dá)思想不清楚，連貫性差。有較多的嚴(yán)重語言錯(cuò)誤。糊里糊涂8分：根本切題。有些地方表達(dá)思

2、想不夠清楚，文字勉強(qiáng)連貫；語言錯(cuò)誤相當(dāng)多，其中有一些是嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。馬馬虎虎11分：切題。表達(dá)思想清楚，文字連貫，但有少量語言錯(cuò)誤。清清楚楚14分：切題。思想表達(dá)清楚，文字通順，連貫性較好，根本上無語言錯(cuò)誤，僅有個(gè)別小錯(cuò)。漂漂亮亮字?jǐn)?shù)缺乏扣分1分：110-1192分：100-109分：分：分：分：分：分：寫作對策容是否緊扣主題，涵蓋提示要點(diǎn)作文構(gòu)造層次是否清晰語言表達(dá)是否流暢，有無重大錯(cuò)誤，邏輯錯(cuò)誤是否恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂眠^度性詞語字?jǐn)?shù)是否到達(dá)要求卷面是否整潔，書寫是否漂亮作文得分點(diǎn) 構(gòu)造: 文章的構(gòu)造完整，例如：開頭引出話題，主體論述或者說明，結(jié)尾我的意見2、詞匯：詞匯多樣化，例如：think (beli

3、eve, maintain, hold, argue, of the opinion); smile (laugh, mock, chuckle, grin, beam); say (whisper, murmur, mutter); look/see (glimpse, glance, scan, skim, peek, peer, peep, stare);句型：句型多樣化，簡單句復(fù)合句混合使用，非謂語構(gòu)造等舉例：舉例不是講故事，點(diǎn)到即可。例如：Modern science is so powerful that many deadly diseases are now curable.M

4、odern science is so powerful that many deadly diseases like cancers and AIDS are now curable.修辭：主要是修辭疑問句和比喻。例如：In order to enrich ones e*perience, one should pick up a part-time job.In order to enrich ones e*perience, why not pick up a part-time job歷年作文題目分析20021人生有不同的目標(biāo)：富有、名氣、地位、幸福的家庭2其中我認(rèn)為重要的是；理由是3

5、結(jié)論。20031終身學(xué)習(xí)對每個(gè)人的重要性。2終身學(xué)習(xí)的方式有多種3你認(rèn)為你應(yīng)該采取哪種方式，為什么2004近年來大學(xué)生在校外租房居住的現(xiàn)象越來越多，這個(gè)問題已引起社會各界的關(guān)注。人們對這一現(xiàn)象的看法不一，各持己見。1你對這個(gè)問題的觀點(diǎn)是2理由是3結(jié)論2005Part VI Writing(30 minutes，1 5 points)Directions：You are to write in no less than 120 words about the topicDo weneed a shopping center in the neighborhoodYour position sho

6、uld be based onthe Chinese outline given below.1. 市里要在你家住的這個(gè)街區(qū)新建一個(gè)購物中心，你的意見(同意或反對)2. 同意或反對的理由。3. 結(jié)論。2006青藏鐵路于今年7月1日通車，請簡單地談?wù)勄嗖罔F路建成和通車的重大意義，如經(jīng)濟(jì)、文化、旅游等方面。注：Tibet 的、人、藏語：Tibetan2007中央電視臺圓夢行動(dòng)公益活動(dòng)旨在發(fā)動(dòng)社會力量捐助貧困學(xué)子圓大學(xué)之夢，你的作文可以1. 對貧困學(xué)子是否應(yīng)受到捐助發(fā)表你的看法；或者2. 舉一個(gè)貧困學(xué)子需要幫助的例子。2021Can the internet take the place of pa

7、per media現(xiàn)在上網(wǎng)閱讀的人越來越多，人們可以更快地從網(wǎng)上讀到新聞、找到他們所需要的信息或下載文學(xué)作品。你認(rèn)為網(wǎng)絡(luò)是否能最終代替書刊報(bào)紙.舉例說明你的理由結(jié)論2021Part VI Writing (30 minutes, 15 points) Directions: You are to write in no less than 120 words on the topic of A Threat (Threats) to Endangered Animals. You may base your position on the clues given below:Many anim

8、als are now in danger of being e*tinctAmong the threats to endangered animals is (are) The way to cope with the threat (threats)Conclusion.(Note: endangered 瀕危)2021Directions: You are to write in no less than 120 words on the topic of A Threat (Threats) to Endangered Animals. You may base your posit

9、ion on the clues given below:1. 如果有時(shí)機(jī)去國外度假，你會選擇哪個(gè)國家.2. 請至少說出三個(gè)理由。2021Directions: You are to write in no less than 120 words on the topic of What Do I Do to Stay Healthy . You may base your position on the Chinese clues given below and put your position on the ANSWER SHEET.安康的標(biāo)志是為了安康，最重要的是要我個(gè)人保持安康的做法

10、是從以上分析可以看出，除2006、2007是情景類題目，即給出了一定的情景，例如身邊事件、社會熱點(diǎn)問題等，讓考生進(jìn)展評論，發(fā)表看法外，其他年份都是提綱類作文，即題目已經(jīng)規(guī)定了寫作的框架和思路，我們自由發(fā)揮的空間有限。這兩類作文的寫作方式根本一樣，我們可以套用一定的模版來寫作。圖表式作文因難度太大，從未出現(xiàn)，我們認(rèn)為今年也不可能出現(xiàn)，故不作講解。六作文模板一觀點(diǎn)類作文模板1. 對立觀點(diǎn) 我的觀點(diǎn)模版1 + q8 D2 : I- T5 Z9 j* e Some people believe (argue, recognize, think) that (觀點(diǎn)1). But other people

11、 take an opposite side. They firmlybelieve that (觀點(diǎn)2). As to/for me, as far as I am concerned, I agree to the former/latteridea.There are a dozen of reasons behind my belief. First of all,論據(jù)1. More importantly, 論據(jù)2.Most important of all, 論據(jù)3. $ K1 R0 r* + . z5 q In summary, 總結(jié)觀點(diǎn). 4 ae; _ 7 U; A0 P模版

12、2 People hold different views about *. Some people are of theopinion that 觀點(diǎn)1, while others point out that 觀點(diǎn)2. As far as I am concerned, the former/latter opinionholds more weight. * Y b0 j- *; b, - M For one thing, 論據(jù)1. + s; $ j9 w; m1 D( Q+ z For another (thing), 論據(jù)2. 3 e0 y; * c8 o/ F, j c* U( L

13、ast but not the least, 論據(jù)3. To conclude, 總結(jié)觀點(diǎn). / D% q& y P: *$ z8 p- u7 ( N9 I7 b. a7 |2 / d% N! 模版3There is no consensus of opinionsamong people about *爭論的焦點(diǎn)。Some people are of the view that 觀點(diǎn)1，while others take an opposite side, firmlybelieving that 觀點(diǎn)2。As far asI am concerned, the former/latter

14、notion is preferable in many senses. Thereasons are obvious. 6 4 A2 t/ T& O First of all, 論據(jù)1. Furthermore, 論據(jù)2.Among all of the supporting evidences, one is the strongest.That is, 論據(jù)3。 - . H/ T! z& t( p A natural conclusion from the above discussion is that總結(jié)觀點(diǎn)。 2. 批駁觀點(diǎn)式A.一個(gè)錯(cuò)誤觀點(diǎn)。B. 我不同意。模版4Many peo

15、ple argue that 錯(cuò)誤觀點(diǎn)。By saying that, they mean 對這個(gè)觀點(diǎn)的進(jìn)一步解釋。An e*ample they have presented is that 一個(gè)例子。(According to a survey performed by * on a group of Y, almost 80% of them 贊成這個(gè)錯(cuò)誤觀點(diǎn)或者受到這個(gè)錯(cuò)誤觀點(diǎn)的影響)。There might be some element of truth in these peoples belief. But if we consider it in depth, we will

16、 undoubtedly conclude that 與錯(cuò)誤觀點(diǎn)相反的觀點(diǎn)。There are a number of reasons behind my belief. (以下參照辯論文的議論文寫法)。二 問題原因/方案類A.一個(gè)社會問題或者現(xiàn)象B. 產(chǎn)生的原因C.對社會和我們生活的影響D. 如何杜絕。(如果是問題的話)E. 前景的預(yù)測。模版5Nowadays, there e*ists an increasingly serious social/economic/environmental problem facing us. (* has increasingly bee a mon

17、concern of the public). According to a survey, 調(diào)查容說明這種現(xiàn)象的情況。(或者是一個(gè)例子)。There are a couple of reasons/causesfor this problem/phenomenon. To begin with,_. Besides, _. Last but not least, _.結(jié)尾1：影響* has caused substantial impact on the society and our daily life, which has been articulated in the followi

18、ng aspects. 參照辯上文。結(jié)尾2：解決方法It is high time that we did something about the problem. A dozen of measures are supposed to be taken to prevent * from bringing us more harm. 同上結(jié)尾3：預(yù)測Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that more and more people will 模版6With the development of modern indu

19、stry/society, more and more people are concerned about the problem that _ ( 主題問題). Accordingly, _ (伴隨主題問題出現(xiàn)的新問題) is being more and more serious.Confronted with _ (主題問題), we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, _ ( 解決方法1). For another, _ ( 解決方法2). Fina

20、lly,_ (解決方法3).To sun up, Im confident that a bright future is awaiting us if we can smoothly solve the problem.七、作文的開頭與結(jié)尾開頭萬能公式一名人名言經(jīng)典句型：A proverb says, You are only young once. 適用于已記住的名言It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever. 適用于自編名言更多經(jīng)典句型：As everyone knows, No one can deny that開頭萬能

21、公式二數(shù)字統(tǒng)計(jì)原理：要想更有說服力，就應(yīng)該用實(shí)際的數(shù)字來說明。原則上在議論文當(dāng)中不應(yīng)該出現(xiàn)虛假數(shù)字的，可是在考試的時(shí)候哪管那三七二十一，但編無妨。所以不妨試用下面的句型：According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation.看起來這個(gè)數(shù)字文鄒鄒的，其實(shí)都是編造出來的，下面隨便幾個(gè)題目我們都可以這樣編造：Honesty根據(jù)最近的一項(xiàng)統(tǒng)計(jì)調(diào)查顯示，大學(xué)生向教師請假的理由當(dāng)中78%都是假的。Travel by Bike

22、根據(jù)最近的一項(xiàng)統(tǒng)計(jì)調(diào)查顯示，85%的人在近距離旅行的時(shí)候首選的交通工具是自行車。Youth根據(jù)最近的一項(xiàng)統(tǒng)計(jì)調(diào)查顯示，在*個(gè)大學(xué)，學(xué)生的課余時(shí)間的70%都是在休閑娛樂。Five-day Work Week Better than Si*-day Work根據(jù)最近的一項(xiàng)統(tǒng)計(jì)調(diào)查顯示，98%的人同意每周五天工作日。更多句型：A recent statistics shows that 結(jié)尾萬能公式：1 結(jié)尾萬能公式一：如此結(jié)論 Obviously此為過渡短語, we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness an

23、d respect for others.更多過渡短語：to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus更多句型：Thus, it can be concluded that, Therefore, we can find that2 結(jié)尾萬能公式二：如此建議 Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.這里的虛擬語氣用得很經(jīng)典，因?yàn)榭脊俦緛斫?jīng)?？歼@個(gè)句型，而如果我們自己寫出來，你說考官會怎么想呢.更多句型：Accor

24、dingly, I remend that some measures be taken.Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.寫作的三項(xiàng)根本原則：一、 長 短 句原則工作還得一一馳呢，老讓讀者讀長句，累死人！寫一個(gè)短小精辟的句子，相反，卻可以起到畫龍點(diǎn)睛的作用。而且如果我們把短句放在段首或者段末，也可以提醒主題：As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is to meet the primary need of my b

25、ody and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar.強(qiáng)烈建議：在文章第一段開頭用一長一短，且先長后短；在文章主體局部，要先用一個(gè)短句解釋主要意思，然后在闡述幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)的時(shí)候采用先短后長的句群形式，定會讓主體局部妙筆生輝！文章結(jié)尾一般用一長一短就可以了。二、主題句原則國有其君，家有其主，文章也要有其主。否則會給人造成群龍無首之感！一定要寫一個(gè)主題句，放在文章的開頭保險(xiǎn)型或者結(jié)尾，讓讀者一目了然，必會平安無事！特別提示：隱藏主體句是冒險(xiǎn)的。To begin wit

26、h, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the e*am主題句. Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly e*pect to answer all the questions correctly.三、 一 二 三原則條理清楚?？脊賯兛次恼乱脖厝灰ㄟ^這些關(guān)鍵性的標(biāo)簽來判定你的文章是否構(gòu)造清楚，條理自然。破解方法很簡單，只要把下面任何一組的詞匯參加到你的幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)前就清楚了。1to begin with, then, furthermore, fina

27、lly強(qiáng)烈推薦2to start with, ne*t, in addition, finally強(qiáng)烈推薦3first and foremost, besides, last but not least強(qiáng)烈推薦4most important of all, moreover, finally5on the one hand, on the other hand適用于兩點(diǎn)相互對立的情況6for one thing, for another thing適用于兩點(diǎn)的情況7in the first place, in the second place, last but not least.八、202

28、1年作文詳解2021年作文解析Part VI Writing (30 minutes, 15 points) Directions: You are to write in no less than 120 words on the topic of A Threat (Threats) to Endangered Animals. You may base your position on the clues given below:Many animals are now in danger of being e*tinctAmong the threats to endangered a

29、nimals is (are) The way to cope with the threat (threats)Conclusion.(Note: endangered 瀕危)許多動(dòng)物有滅絕的危險(xiǎn)威脅瀕危動(dòng)物的因素有處理這些威脅的方法環(huán)境保護(hù),生態(tài)保護(hù)是一個(gè)老生常談的話題。這個(gè)題目可以這樣寫，第一段，切題，作文要拿到13分檔，首先要切題，因此第一段一定要切到物種滅絕這個(gè)中心問題。我們參照模板5的寫法：Nowadays, there e*ists an increasingly serious problem facing us. That is many animals, like pand

30、as, tigers and some species of fish, are in danger of being e*tinct. According to a survey,animal species are disappearing at least 1,000 times faster than at any other time in the last 65 million years. 第二段分析原因，在此即指瀕危物種面臨的威脅。作為非專業(yè)人員，我們盡可能想的有科學(xué)依據(jù)，但要實(shí)在想不出恰當(dāng)原因的時(shí)候，靠近就行。閱卷主要看語言組織情況，而不是考察同學(xué)們的專業(yè)知識：Among the threats to end