1、(最新整理)四級(jí)作文講解(精)2021/7/261大學(xué)英語四級(jí)作文2021/7/262四級(jí)考試中，作文最難拿分的原因: 一、作文是一項(xiàng)綜合考察的項(xiàng)目，既考察學(xué)生對(duì)詞匯、語法的掌握情況，也考察句型、篇章的能力； 二、有的考生過分自信，認(rèn)為只要寫足字?jǐn)?shù)，大體寫一寫，就能得個(gè)八、九分；三、有的考生過于缺乏自信，覺得這個(gè)部分太綜合了，平時(shí)也懶得寫，考試時(shí)能寫到哪兒就寫到哪兒，結(jié)果造成了“活馬當(dāng)作死馬醫(yī)”，自然是“醫(yī)死”了。 2021/7/263作文最低分的規(guī)定 （1）根據(jù)學(xué)生目前的作文分均值，將作文的最低分定為6分； （2）作文分為0分，總分若高于60分，最后報(bào)分一律按59分不及格處理；若低于60分則

2、報(bào)分時(shí)一律再減6分； （3）作文分大于0分，小于6分，則按下面的公式計(jì)算成績(jī)： 最后報(bào)導(dǎo)分=原計(jì)算總分-6分+實(shí)得作文分2021/7/264例1：原計(jì)算總分為63分，實(shí)得作文分為2分，最后報(bào)導(dǎo)分=63-6+2=59分。例2：原計(jì)算總分為80分，實(shí)得作文分為4分，最后報(bào)導(dǎo)分=80-6+4=78分。例3：原計(jì)算總分為58分，實(shí)得作文分為2分，最后報(bào)導(dǎo)分=58-6+2=54分。2021/7/265評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn) 1. 短文寫作部分滿分為15分。2. 閱卷標(biāo)準(zhǔn)共分五等:14分、11分、8分、5分、及2分。各有參照卷一至二份。3. 閱卷人員根據(jù)閱卷標(biāo)準(zhǔn),對(duì)照參照卷評(píng)分,若認(rèn)為與某一分?jǐn)?shù)(如8分)相似,即定為該

3、分?jǐn)?shù)(即8分)；若認(rèn)為稍優(yōu)或稍劣于該分?jǐn)?shù),則可加一分(即9分)或減一分(即7分)，但不得加或減半分。2021/7/2662分：條理不清，思路紊亂，語言支離破碎或大部分句子均有錯(cuò)誤，且多數(shù)為嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。5分：基本切題，表達(dá)思想不夠清楚，連貫性差，有較多的嚴(yán)重語言錯(cuò)誤。8分：基本切題，表達(dá)思想比較清楚，文章尚連貫，但語言錯(cuò)誤較多，其中有少量的嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。2021/7/26711分：切題，表達(dá)思想清楚，文字連貫，但有少量語言錯(cuò)誤。14分：切題，表達(dá)思想清楚，文字通順，連貫性較好，基本上無語言錯(cuò)誤。字?jǐn)?shù)不夠扣分。（各段已給出的主題句均不得計(jì)入）段落不夠扣分。2021/7/268四級(jí)考試作文 作文題型縱覽歷

4、年的作文試題，我們可以發(fā)現(xiàn)論說文占絕大多數(shù)，但近年應(yīng)用文有上升的勢(shì)頭。就話題而言，主要有三大類：社會(huì)熱門話題、校園話題和日常生活話題。2021/7/269四級(jí)考試作文寫作常識(shí)一、 基本的寫作步驟: 在四級(jí)考試（包括其它水平考試）的寫作中，通常進(jìn)行以下五個(gè)步驟：審題、選材、腹稿（包括提綱和正文）、書寫、修改。 2021/7/2610二、文章的銜接與連貫 在評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中，同是否扣題同樣重要的是文章的連貫性。往往有的文章扣題倒也扣題了，但還是得不了幾分，這其中的原因恐怕與連貫性有很大的關(guān)系。 這里所說的連貫有兩兩層含義。一是指文章在內(nèi)容上是連貫、統(tǒng)一的，文章中所有的句子都是為全文的中心服務(wù)的。就各段而

5、言，其中的每一句話都要緊緊圍繞著該段的主題句進(jìn)行，不能說與主題句無關(guān)的東西。有人也將其稱為統(tǒng)一性。2021/7/2611不同類型作文的寫作方法 共同原則: 1. 中心第一;2. 注意分段; 3. 注意比例. 2021/7/2612表示列舉的方法 First of all/Above all, secondly, moreoverIn the first place, in the second place, furthermore/whats moreTo begin(start) with, secondly, in additionFor one thing, for another th

6、ing, for still another thing2021/7/2613表示舉例說明的過渡語For example, for instance, for one thing, to illustrate, as an illustration, a case in point, Lets take as an example. Take for example. is a typical example of is a typical/proper case in point.2021/7/2614表示遞進(jìn)關(guān)系的過渡語In addition, furthermore, moreover,

7、 besides, also, whats moreNot only, but also, similarly, Another is is another is also a factor. 2021/7/2615表示對(duì)比對(duì)照的過渡語In contrast, by contrast, on the other hand,in comparison, on the contrary, unlike, like, contrary to, whereas, while, conversely, differ/vary greatly/vastly fromDifferent from 2021/

8、7/2616表示因果關(guān)系的過渡語Because of, on account of, due to, owing to, thanks to, for, because, since, as, for this reasonTherefore, so, as a result, consequently, in consequence, accordingly, hence, thusThe reasons why/for are/lie in results in result from2021/7/2617表示結(jié)論的過渡語To sum up, to conclude, to summari

9、zeIn sum, in summary, in conclusion, in all, in a word, in short, in briefSo, therefore, thusWe can come to the conclusion that A conclusion can be reached that 2021/7/2618表示轉(zhuǎn)折的過渡語Though, although, however, nevertheless, nonetheless, even thoughLets look at the other side of the coin.As everything h

10、as two sides, we should not neglect the other side of the coin.Just as there are two sides of a coin,. 2021/7/2619歸納總結(jié)概括全文，得出結(jié)論 All in allIn a word As for me In my opinionPersonally, I think /believeAs far as I am concerned2021/7/2620作文模板（A or B）模板1：1 Different people have different views on 事物/問題。2

11、Some prefer 一種觀點(diǎn)/選擇。3 Others tend to 另一種觀點(diǎn)/選擇。4 As to me, I agree to the first/second opinion. 2021/7/26215 Of course, “我” 不贊同的觀點(diǎn)/選擇的合理性。6For example, 支持其合理性的例子。7 But, 我不贊同觀點(diǎn)/選擇的不足。8 The following reasons can account for my preference.2021/7/26229 One of the main reasons is that 我的觀點(diǎn)/選擇一。10 A good e

12、xample to illustrate is that 支持一的例子。11 In addition, 我的觀點(diǎn)/選擇二。12 To conclude, 重申觀點(diǎn)/選擇。2021/7/2623模板二1There is no complete agreement among people consider事物或問題。2 Some people consider that 一種觀點(diǎn)或選擇。3However, others think that 另一種的觀點(diǎn)或選擇。2021/7/26244 Some people may say that 觀點(diǎn)一理由。5 They hold this opinion

13、 because 深入的闡述觀點(diǎn)一的理由。6 However, others believe that 觀點(diǎn)二或選擇二的理由。7 They argue that 深入闡述觀點(diǎn)二的理由。2021/7/26258 Personally, I prefer the former/latter opinion/choice. 9 Firstly, 我的理由一。10 Secondly， 我的理由二。11. Most important of all, 我的理由三。12. Taking the above-mentioned into consideration, I/we may reasonably

14、conclude that 重申觀點(diǎn)/選擇。2021/7/2626模板三1 When asked about/ When it comes to 事物/問題， different people will offer different opinions. 2 Some people take it for granted that 觀點(diǎn)一。3 In their opinion, 觀點(diǎn)一的理由。4 Besides, 觀點(diǎn)一的理由二。2021/7/26275 However，other hold that 觀點(diǎn)二/選擇二。6 They maintain that 觀點(diǎn)二/選擇二的理由一。7 And

15、 觀點(diǎn)二/選擇二的理由二。2021/7/26288Weighing up these two arguments, I am for the first opinion/choice. 9 For one thing/ On the one hand, 我的理由一。10. For another/On the other hand, 我的理由二。11 For instance, 舉例說明理由二。12 Therefore, as stated above, 重申理由。2021/7/2629常用句式1. There is a general discussion nowadays on the p

16、roblem of Some argue/hold that, but other set forth a totally different argument about the issue.2021/7/26302. In reaction to the phenomenon/ in answer to the problem/ in response to the on-going social change, some people believe, in their minds, Others maintain, in their eyes,2021/7/26313. Persona

17、lly, I side with the former/latter opinion.4 I am of the opinion that priority should be given to 5 In conclusion, it is clear that6 There is a striking contrast between7It may be briefly summed up as follows.8. From what has been mentioned above, we can come to the conclusion that 2021/7/2632Your a

18、ssignment today!Directions: for this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic College Lectures or Discussions? You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline below:2021/7/26331 有些學(xué)生認(rèn)為大學(xué)里的教學(xué)方式應(yīng)該是用講授式2 另一些學(xué)生認(rèn)為應(yīng)該用討論式的教學(xué)方式3 我的看法2021/7/2634現(xiàn)象解釋型1

19、總體現(xiàn)象has brought into focus./總體現(xiàn)象, which has roused great concern. /Recently, the problem of 現(xiàn)象has become the focus of the public concern. 2 Nowadays, 現(xiàn)象表現(xiàn)或變化. 3 In addition, 進(jìn)一步闡述現(xiàn)象. 4 The reasons for this phenomenon are varied./ There are many different factors deciding 該現(xiàn)象或其相關(guān)情況./該現(xiàn)象has a great ef

20、fect on 影響的主要對(duì)象。2021/7/26355 Among all these reasons/factors/effects, 原因一plays a critical role. 6 具體闡述原因一. 7. Moreover，原因二. 8 Besides, 原因三。 9 Therefore，最終結(jié)果或影響。10. As far as I am concerned/ As to me, 我的觀點(diǎn)/態(tài)度/做法. 11 Furthermore/Besides, 進(jìn)一步說明. 12 In a word, 總結(jié)全文。2021/7/2636常用句式1 There may be a combin

21、ation of factors which contribute to/are responsible for/ explain2. Its not easy/simple task to offer the reasons for this phenomenon which involves more than one complicated factor.2021/7/26373 Among all the important/convincing reasons for, one should be emphasized.2021/7/26382007/12What Elective

22、to Choose1 各大學(xué)開設(shè)了各種各樣的選修課2.學(xué)生因?yàn)楦鞣N原因選擇了不同的選修課3. 以你自己為例。2021/7/2639 觀點(diǎn)論證型1. It is true that 普遍的不適當(dāng)?shù)挠^點(diǎn)和做法。2 However, 不同的觀點(diǎn)和做法。3 I think, 我的觀點(diǎn)。4 My reasons for this point can be listed as follows.2021/7/26405 Firstly,論據(jù)一。6進(jìn)一步說明論據(jù)一。7.Secondly, 論據(jù)二。 8 For example, 支持理由二的事例。9 Thirdly，論證理由三。10 A case in poi

23、nt is that支持理由三的事例。2021/7/264111 It goes without saying that 重申觀點(diǎn)。12 Therefore, 與該觀點(diǎn)相符的做法和態(tài)度。2021/7/2642Due Attention should Be Given to Spelling1 如今不少學(xué)生在英語學(xué)習(xí)中不重視拼寫。2 出現(xiàn)這種現(xiàn)象的原因。3 為了改變這種狀況，我認(rèn)為。2021/7/2643問題解決型1It is well-known that 相關(guān)背景。2現(xiàn)象一。3現(xiàn)象二。2021/7/26444 There are many facts accounting for 該問題。/

24、Great attention should be paid to the fact that 該問題is causing great harm.5 On the one hand, 危害一。6 危害二。7 Therefore, it is high time that 解決問題。2021/7/26458 First of all, 方法一。9進(jìn)一步闡述方法一。10 Secondly，方法二。11Thirdly，方法三。12 Only in this way can we 解決問題。2021/7/26461 Recently, there has been a heated discussion that 不良現(xiàn)象或問題。2It is obviously that 危害一。3 Additionally，危害二。4 Therefore，how to 解決問題is worth our great attention2021/7/26475 On the one hand, 方法一。6 進(jìn)一步闡述方法。7 On the other hand, 方法二。 8 For example, 支持方法二的例子。9 In addition, 方法三。2021/7/264810 In fact, mor