/18forowingkindhisgratitudeher.Hehisentirelifetohismothersandcare.toowedkindnessWithherhewouldnothavehadtheconfidenceorthecouragetofighthisWithouthasdisability.Asaresultofthegreatefforthemade,hewasfinallyadmittedhadtoakeyuniversity.解析：第一處：flowers—flowerflowershop意為“花店”，flower為名詞作定語(yǔ)當(dāng)名詞作定語(yǔ)時(shí)，一般使用名詞的單數(shù)形式第二處:刪除beenappear意為“出現(xiàn);露面”，是不及物動(dòng)詞，故不能用于被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)。第三處:visiting—visit連詞or連接when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句中并列的謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞由go,attend可知此處應(yīng)用動(dòng)詞原形visit。第四處：clear—clearly修飾謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞remember應(yīng)用副詞clearly。第五處：for—to“(因某事)表達(dá)對(duì)某人的感激”為expressone'sgratitudetosb(forsth)。第六處:owing—owed本句缺少謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞，此處描述過(guò)去發(fā)生的事情，應(yīng)使用一般過(guò)去時(shí)、故將owing改為owned。第七處:kind—kindness形容詞性物主代詞之后應(yīng)接名詞，kind作名詞時(shí)，意為“種；類(lèi)”、符合語(yǔ)境，故將kind改為kindness，此處意為“仁慈;和藹”。第八處:With—Without根據(jù)句意以及本句使用的虛擬語(yǔ)氣wouldnothavedone可知，應(yīng)該把With改為Without。第九處:在result后加ofasaresultof…意為“作為的結(jié)果”。第十處：has—had根據(jù)句意和上下文邏輯關(guān)系可知此處表示過(guò)去的過(guò)去，應(yīng)該使用過(guò)去完成時(shí)。10答案及解析：答案：Nothingisimpossible!Ifyouhaveadream,yourdreammustbecometrueaslongasyoualwaysworkhard.Totellyouthetruth,mydreamistobeadoctor.thatTherewasatimeIwasinhospital.Isawthroughmyowneyesthatadoctorwhenfightskindlyallnighttosaveababyslife.IwastouchedbythebehaviouroffightkindWe?thedoctor.Ithinkdoctorsarethegreatest.canmakepatientsrecoverfromTheyHoweverareadisease.,Iamwillingtogiveahandtowhoeverintrouble.Therefore/ThusisIhopethatI'mabletohelppeoplekeephealthy.Atthesametime,Iwilldevotetreatmyselftopatients.Fromnowon,IwillmakeeveryefforttostudyeverytreatingansubjectsothatIcangoto—university.a解析：第一處:刪除becometrue意為“（夢(mèng)想等）成為現(xiàn)實(shí)”是不及物動(dòng)詞，要用主動(dòng)形式，故刪除be。第二處：that—whenTherewasatimewhen…意為“曾經(jīng)有一段時(shí)期"，先行詞atime被定語(yǔ)從句修飾,關(guān)系詞在從句中作時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)，故將that改為when。第三處:fights—fought本句的動(dòng)作發(fā)生在過(guò)去,應(yīng)使用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，故將fights改為fought。第四處:kindly—kind此處應(yīng)用形容詞修飾名詞，故將kindly改為kind。第五處:We—They根據(jù)語(yǔ)境,該句承接前文，“我”認(rèn)為醫(yī)生最偉大，那是因?yàn)樗麄兡茏尣∪巳视么~They指代上句提到的復(fù)數(shù)名詞doctors。第六處:在recover后加fromrecoverfrom…意為“從中恢復(fù)/疫愈”。因后接賓語(yǔ)adisease，故在recover后^口from。第七處:However—Therefore/Thus根據(jù)語(yǔ)境可知，此處為因果關(guān)系,而沒(méi)有轉(zhuǎn)折之意，故將However改為T(mén)herefore/Thus。第八處:are—is句意為:因此，我愿意幫助任何遇到困難的人。whoever引導(dǎo)的名詞性從句作介詞to的賓語(yǔ)，另外‘whoever還在從句中作主語(yǔ)，從句謂語(yǔ)應(yīng)用單數(shù)形式,故將are改為is。第九處：treat