2021.4浙江嘉興模擬讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)電梯驚魂記試題重現(xiàn)

Onaweekend,awomanwonabigbagofcoinsatagamemachine.Shetookabreakfordinnerwithherhusbandinthehoteldiningroom.Butfirstshewantedtoputthecoinsinherroom.“I’llberightbackandwe’llgotoeat,”shetoldherhusband.Thenshecarriedthebagtothelift.Asshewasabouttowalkintotheliftshenoticedtwomenalreadyaboard.Bothwerehuge,veryhugefigures.Thewomanwasscared.Herfirstthoughtwas:“Thesetwoaregoingtorobme.”Hernextthoughtwas:“Don’tbeafraid.Theylooklikenicegentlemen.”Butfearseizedher.Shestoodandstaredatthetwomen.Shefeltanxiousandashamed.Shehopedtheydidn’treadhermind.Surelytheyknewherhesitationaboutjoiningtheminthelift.Itwasalltooobvious.Herfacewasred.Shecouldn’tjuststandthere,sowithaneffortofwillshepickeduponefootandsteppedforwardandfollowedwiththeotherfootandwasonthelift.Avoidingeyecontact,sheturnedaroundandfacedtheliftdoorsastheyclosed.Asecondpassed,andthenanothersecond,andthenanother.Herfearincreased!Theliftdidn’tmove.Panicconsumedher.“Ohdear,”shethought,“I’mabouttoberobbed!”Herheartsankandsweatpoured.Thenoneofthemensaid,“Hitthefloor.”Instinct(本能)toldher:Dowhattheytellyou.Thebagofcoinsflewupwardsasshethrewoutherarmsandcollapsedontheliftcarpet.Ashowerofcoinsraineddownonher.“Takemymoneyandspareme,”sheprayed.Moresecondspassed.Sheheardoneofthemensaypolitely,“Madam,ifyou’lljusttelluswhatflooryou’regoingto,we’llpushthebutton.”Theonewhosaidithadalittletroublegettingthewordsout.Hecouldn’thelplaughing.注意：1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在相應(yīng)位置作答。Sheliftedherheadandlookedupatthetwomen.Then,theliftarrivedatherfloor.理解材料Q1:What

didthe

woman

seewhenshewasabouttowalkintothelift

?

Twoveryhuge

menwho

had

alreadyaboard.

Q2:Whydidthemansay“Hitthefloor”?Heremindedtheothertohitthebuttonoftheirfloor.Q3:How

did

this

woman

feel

when

seeing

these

two

men?

Why?

She

was

scared.

She

thought

they

were

going

to

rob

her.理解材料Shelookedupatthetwomen…1.

OpeningAwomanwonabigbagofcoinsatagamemachine.Shewantedtoputthecoinsinherroombeforedinner.

Asshewasabouttowalkintotheliftshenoticedtwohugemenalreadyaboard.Shewasscaredbecauseshethoughtthesetwomenweregoingtorobher.Timepassed.Theliftdidn’tmove.Thenoneofthemensaid,“Hitthefloor.”Shedidwhathesaidandthebagofcoinsflewupwards.Thenoneofthemensaidpolitely,“Madam,ifyou’lljusttelluswhatflooryou’regoingto,we’llpushthebutton.”

Theliftarrivedatherfloor…2.

Build-up3.

Climax4.

Resolution5.

Ending材料中有大量女士害怕心理的描寫(xiě)，有些是直接描寫(xiě)，如Thewomanwasscared、fearseizedher、Herfearincreased、Panicconsumedher，有些是間接描寫(xiě)，如withaneffortofwillshepickeduponefootandsteppedforwardandfollowedwiththeotherfoot、Avoidingeyecontact、Herheartsankandsweatpoured、“Takemymoneyandspareme,”sheprayed，續(xù)寫(xiě)部分也可適當(dāng)描寫(xiě)該女士心理的變化。

TipsQ4:Whatwouldthewomanorthetwomensayordo?Q5:Howcanwedesigntheendingtoteachthereadersamoral?研讀兩段給出句，想想它們給我們提供了哪些續(xù)寫(xiě)線索？Para.1:Sheliftedherheadandlookedupatthetwomen.Q1:Didthewomanunderstandwhatthemanmeant?Q2:Howmightthewomanfeelaboutthesituation?Q3:Howmighttheydealwiththescatteredcoins?Para.2:Then,theliftarrivedatherfloor.

Sheliftedherheadandlookedupatthetwomen.Theman’swordsbroughtherbacktoreality.Onehadactuallybeenremindingtheothertohitthebuttonoftheirfloor.Shethought:

“WhataspectacleI’vemadeofmyself.”_______________________（感到既羞愧又尷尬，這個(gè)女人站起身來(lái)。她想道歉，但道歉的話怎么也說(shuō)不出口。形容詞作狀語(yǔ)）Thetwomen,afterpressingthebutton,bentdown,gatheredupthescatteredcoinsandrefilledherbag.Itwasobvioustheywerehavingahardtimenotlaughing.

根據(jù)括號(hào)中的提示，補(bǔ)出范文缺失的部分。

Sheliftedherheadandlookedupatthetwomen.Theman’swordsbroughtherbacktoreality.Onehadactuallybeenremindingtheothertohitthebuttonoftheirfloor.Shethought:“WhataspectacleI’vemadeofmyself.”Shamefulandawkward,thewomansprangtoherfeet.Shewantedtoapologize,butwordsfailedher.Thetwomen,afterpressingthebutton,bentdown,gatheredupthescatteredcoinsandrefilledherbag.Itwasobvioustheywerehavingahardtimenotlaughing.

閱讀以下參考范文，并學(xué)習(xí)范文精彩表達(dá)。范文賞析——語(yǔ)言精彩

Sheliftedherheadandlookedupatthetwomen.Theman’swordsbroughtherbacktoreality.Onehadactuallybeenremindingtheothertohitthebuttonoftheirfloor.Shethought:“WhataspectacleI’vemadeofmyself！”Shamefulandawkward,thewomansprangtoherfeet.Shewantedtoapologize,butwordsfailedher.Thetwomen,afterpressingthebutton,bentdown,gatheredupthescatteredcoinsandrefilledherbag.Itwasobvioustheywerehavingahardtimenotlaughing.

形容詞作狀語(yǔ)It

is+adj.+（that）句式非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞作狀語(yǔ)感嘆句連續(xù)動(dòng)作描寫(xiě)，有畫(huà)面感

Then,theliftarrivedatherfloor.

_____________________________________________（她羞怯地說(shuō)再見(jiàn)，匆匆走出電梯。當(dāng)她沖進(jìn)她的房間時(shí)，聽(tīng)到了遠(yuǎn)處的笑聲。非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞作狀語(yǔ)）Shebrushedherselfdown,pulledherselftogetherandwentdownstairsfordinnerwithherhusband.Overdinner,shesharedthewholeeventwithherhusband,wholaughedalotandjokedthatthewomanwouldneverforgetwhat“hitthefloor”meantandneverjudgeabookbyitscoveragain._________________________（多么有趣而又難忘的經(jīng)歷??！感嘆句）根據(jù)括號(hào)中的提示，補(bǔ)出范文缺失的部分。

Then,theliftarrivedatherfloor.Sayinggoodbyeshyly,shesteppedoutofthelifthurriedly.Assherushedintoherroomshecouldheartheirlaughterinthedistance.Shebrushedherselfdown,pulledherselftogetherandwentdownstairsfordinnerwithherhusband.Overdinner,shesharedthewholeeventwithherhusband,wholaughedalotandjokedthatthewomanwouldneverforgetwhat“hitthefloor”meantandneverjudgeabookbyitscoveragain.Whatanamusingandunforgettableexperience!閱讀以下參考范文，并學(xué)習(xí)范文精彩表達(dá)。范文賞析——語(yǔ)言精彩

Then,theliftarrivedatherfloor.Sayinggoodbyeshyly,shesteppedoutofthelifthurriedly.Assherushedintoherroomshecouldheartheirlaughterinthedistance.Shebrushedherselfdown,pulledherselftogetherandwentdownstairsfordinnerwithherhusband.Overdinner,shesharedthewholeeventwithherhusband,wholaughedalotandjokedthatthewomanwouldneverforgetwhat“hitthefloor”meantandneverjudgeabookbyitscoveragain.Whatanamusingandunforgettableexperience!as引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句定語(yǔ)從句感嘆句連續(xù)動(dòng)作描寫(xiě)，有畫(huà)面感亮點(diǎn)語(yǔ)塊把某人帶回現(xiàn)實(shí)bringsb.backtoreality

出丑，出洋相makeaspectacleofoneself做……很困難

haveahardtimedoingsth.

把自己清理干凈brushoneselfdown

使自己鎮(zhèn)定自若（或冷靜）

pulloneselftogether

續(xù)寫(xiě)素材積累1.

Inaflash,sheunderstoodthemanwasactuallyremindingtheotherto

hitthe

buttonoftheirfloor.

2.

Ridiculouslyshehadmisunderstoodthetwomen.

3.

Theman’swordsbroughtherbacktorealitythattheyactually