OurbeautifulschoolHowtoWriteEnglishCompositions一、認(rèn)真審題，確定文章主旨二、列舉提綱，打造文章骨架三、充實(shí)提綱，完善文章內(nèi)容四、仔細(xì)檢查，完美文章細(xì)節(jié)寫作四步走

一、認(rèn)真審題，確定文章主旨

在這一環(huán)節(jié)中，我們要通過(guò)對(duì)題目的仔細(xì)研讀，確定好文章的體裁、時(shí)態(tài)、人稱、主題等信息。常見的文章體裁有記敘文、書信、E-mail、日記、說(shuō)明文等。（初中階段我們通常使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行作文。）二、列舉提綱，打造文章骨架在完成審題工作之后，根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出提綱，打造整篇文章的骨架，在這一環(huán)節(jié)中，我們必須把作文的要點(diǎn)列舉出來(lái)，包括你在作文中需要補(bǔ)充的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)等。三、充實(shí)提綱，完善文章內(nèi)容文章骨架一定，接下來(lái)就要進(jìn)行充實(shí)完善，使之血肉豐滿。根據(jù)骨架，我們把詞和詞組充實(shí)為句子，把句子結(jié)合為段落，再整理成文章。這又要求我們把握幾點(diǎn)：①句子要完整，意思須符合主旨。②恰當(dāng)使用連接詞，使文章通順，過(guò)度自然。③處理好開頭和結(jié)尾。為更好地達(dá)到這三點(diǎn)要求，在作文時(shí)要求學(xué)生在確保正確的前提下，能夠正確使用關(guān)聯(lián)詞，并且文章句式盡可能多樣化，。如簡(jiǎn)單句和復(fù)合句并用，陳述句和感嘆句共存，插入語(yǔ)、省略句、習(xí)語(yǔ)、格言的適當(dāng)運(yùn)用都能使文章更完美，更具說(shuō)服力.

四、仔細(xì)檢查，完美文章細(xì)節(jié)

⑴是否有語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤：主謂是否一致，句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)，動(dòng)詞的用法，詞語(yǔ)的搭配是否正確，比如consider后要跟動(dòng)名詞形式，happen不能使用被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)，beableto與can不能同時(shí)使用，一個(gè)句子中不能同時(shí)出現(xiàn)because與so或者although與but等情況。⑵檢查上下文是否連貫，句子銜接是否自然流暢。⑶是否有大小寫、拼寫和標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。⑷是否有重要信息遺漏。⑸開頭和結(jié)尾是否處理完美。Hetooktheringoutofanegg.Peoplecheeredforhim.whenassoonasafterbecausePeoplecheeredforhimassoonashetooktheringoutofanegg2009CCTVSpringFestivalGalasurpriseddidmagicshowsHedidmagicshowssowellthat

everyonewasreallysurprised.so…that…(春節(jié)聯(lián)歡晚會(huì)）Hedidmagicshowswell.Everyonewassurprised.['ɡɑ?l?]Canyoucorrectthemistakes?1.Webelievehappinessbelongstoour.2.Althoughhewastired,hewashappy.3.Studyhardlyisthebridgetosuccess.4.Therearemanypeoplelikepopmusic.---

Manypeoplelikepopmusic.5.Whateverhehappens,heneverloseconfident.---

Whateverhappenstohim,heneverlosesconfidence.6.It'simportantforustokeephealth.usbutStudyinghardhealthy7.MyEnglishismoreandmorebetter.8.Wehavetodosomethingsavetheearth.9.TheaimoftheclubisimproveourEnglishspeakingskills.10.Hehasmanyhobbies,fromcollectstampstoswim.11.Thereisgoingtohaveaconcertthisevening.12.TheylikeplayinggamesandsingEnglishsongs.betterandbettertosavetheearthcollectingswimmingbesingingtoPractice

假如你是Frank,閱讀郵件內(nèi)容，然后根據(jù)提示給Danny回一封電子郵件。DearDoctorFrank,Howareyou?IoftenfeelveryweakandIdon’tknowwhattodo.Couldyougivemesomeadviceonhowtokeephealthy?Danny不吸煙喝酒多鍛煉自擬建議2吃健康食物自擬建議1Howtokeephealthy?Theoutlineoftheletter

outlineBeginningMainpartEndingDearFrank,

I’msorrytohearthatyou’renotfeelingwell………..First：eathealthyfood,suchas…..stayawayfromjunkfoodSecond:domoresports,run,playballgamesThird:giveupbadhabits(drinkingandsmoking),Ithink:gotobedearlyandgetupearly.notstayuplate,stayhappyandtalkwithyourparentsandyourfriendsmoreoften.Ihopeyou'llfeelbettersoon,bestwishes!DearDanny,I'msorrytohearthatyou'renotfeelingwell.Asweknow,itisimportantforustokeephealthy.Butdoyouknowhowtomakeit?I'mhappytosharemyideaswithyouhere.First,youshouldeathealthyfood,suchasapples,vegetablesandsoon,don'tforgettostayawayfromjunkfood.Second,it'snecessaryforyoutodomoresports.You

canruneverymorningandplayballgamesafterschool.Third,youshouldgiveupunhealthylivinghabits,suchasdrinkingandsmoking.Ithinkyou'dbettergotobedearlyandgetupearly.Stayinguplateisbadforourhealth.What'smore,you'resupposedtostayhappyandtalkwithyourparentsandyourfriendsmoreoften.Ihopeyou‘llfeelbettersoon,bestwishes!Frank

Whatshouldwedotosavetheearth?

planttreesturnofftheshowersavewatertakeyourownbagswhenshopping

don’tusepapernapkins（餐巾）

stopridingincarsrecycle（回收）books,bottlesandpaperTheoutlineoftheletter

outlineBeginningMainpartEndingIt’sourdutyto……Theenvironmentisbecoming……….First：

plantmoretreesandgrass,protectthewildanimalsSecond:

savewater,turnofftheshowerNext:

takeourownbagswhenshopping.recyclepaper、bottlesandbooks,stopridingincarsIfeveryonecan…….,theworldwillbe…..Atlast:

stopusingpapernapkins

It’sourdutytoprotecttheenvironment.Theenvironmentisbecomingworseandworse,sowemustdosomethingtosaveit.First,Ithinkweshouldplantmoretreesandgrass,itishelpfultoprotectthewildanimals.weallknow,animalsareourfriendssowemuststoppeoplehurtingthem.Second,it’sourdutytosavewater,whilewearewashingourhair,weshouldturnofftheshower.Next,makesurewetake

ourownbagswhenshopping.Recyclingpaper、bottlesandbooksisalsoagoodwaytosavetheearth.Oh,yes,thetrafficisbusierandbusier