2024-2025學(xué)年第二學(xué)期七年級英語期中復(fù)習(xí)專練09書面表達(dá)解題技巧精講一、滿分寫作核心技巧1.結(jié)構(gòu)清晰三段式結(jié)構(gòu)：開頭（觀點(diǎn)/主題句）→主體（2-3個論點(diǎn)+例子）→結(jié)尾（總結(jié)萬能框架：開頭：Nowadays,…/iswidelybelievedthat…中間：……What'smore…結(jié)尾：aword,…/Ihope…2.語言升級替換低級詞匯：→excellent/beneficialimportant→vital/cruciallike→enjoy/befondof多用復(fù)合句：定語從句：ThisisthebookthatIborrowedfromthe狀語從句：workhard,willachieveourdreams.3.內(nèi)容飽滿舉例法：example,…/example.數(shù)據(jù)法：Accordingtoa70%ofstudents…對比法：theonehand…theotherhand…4.避免硬傷字?jǐn)?shù)達(dá)標(biāo)（80-100二、高頻題型模板1.議論文（觀點(diǎn)類）題目：Shouldstudentsusesmartphones?模板：>開頭：Smartphoneshavebecomeahottopic.Somepeoplethink…,whileothersbelieve…>主體：>-smartphoneshelpusstudy(e.g.searchinformation).>-spendingtoomuchtimeonphonesmayoureyes.>結(jié)尾：myopinion,shouldusesmartphones2.記敘文（故事類）題目：Experience模板：>開頭：Iwillneverthedaywhen…>主體：>-Whathappened:Onesunnyafternoon,…>-Feelings:Ifeltnervousfirst,but…>結(jié)尾：Thisexperiencemethat…3.應(yīng)用文（書信郵件）題目：給筆友寫回信，介紹你的周末活動模板：>>Howwritingtotellaboutmylastweekend.>內(nèi)容：>-Iwenthikingwithmy>-Ifinishedmyhomeworkandwatchedamovie.>結(jié)尾：Ihopetofromsoon!>>Hua三、提分細(xì)節(jié)開頭結(jié)尾萬能句：開頭：thedevelopmentofsociety…結(jié)尾：Onlyinthiswe…過渡詞升級：并列：notonly…butalso…轉(zhuǎn)折：however/actually因果：aresult/therefore卷面加分：單元話題精練基礎(chǔ)入門訓(xùn)練篇71．假設(shè)你是Hua，你的英國筆友想了解你的家及你的社區(qū)。請根據(jù)以下提示，給他寫一封電子郵件。提示：1.你家的位置、房子類型、房間布局；2.你所在社區(qū)的情況(如：基礎(chǔ)設(shè)施、環(huán)境、鄰居等)要求：1.包含以上提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.語言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，語意通順、連貫；3.80詞左右，郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearI’mtellsomethingabouthomeand_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________IreallymyhomeandmyWhataboutyours?soon.Bestwishes,Hua2ChineseClothes”題舉辦征文活動。請根據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇英語短文進(jìn)行投稿。1.介紹你最喜歡的中國傳統(tǒng)服裝（風(fēng)格、材質(zhì)······2.喜歡的理由；3.如何向全世界推廣的建議。recentyears,andmoreyoungpeoplewouldliketraditionalChineseclothes.Theybecomeanewfashion.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．每個人都有自己的夢想家園。根據(jù)下列提示，設(shè)計(jì)你自己夢想的家園。不少于90詞，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。1.Whatyourdreamhomelike?2.Howroomsarethereyourdreamhomeandwhatarethey?3.Whatthingsare........dreamhomeI’msharemyideasaboutmydreamhome.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．Dolikeyourownhome?Dowantabetterone?yourdreamhomelike?Pleaseanarticleaboutyourdreamhome.注意事項(xiàng)：短文必須包括所給內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要求語句通順，意思連貫；2)詞數(shù)：70詞左右；3)短文必須寫在答題卷對應(yīng)的位置上，寫在試卷其他部位無效。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5Millie的朋友Sandy寫一封信，邀請她來揚(yáng)州玩時住在自己家里。揚(yáng)州市中心，靠近學(xué)校和購物中心配套設(shè)施空氣清新，鳥語花香。小區(qū)有大型超市，人們可以小區(qū)有……，人們可以樂于助人，舉例說明；四間臥室，每間帶陽臺；兩個衛(wèi)生間，可以自擬一點(diǎn))要求:1.100左右；短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、班級名；2.短文應(yīng)包括表格內(nèi)所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，不要逐條翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫通順。DearI’mhappyknowthatvisitnextweek.I’dlikeinvitestayatmyhome._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________home.Bestwishes!6．俗話說“遠(yuǎn)親不如近鄰”。近日，某英文報(bào)正在舉行題為neighbourhood”的征文活動。假設(shè)你是李華，住在陽光社區(qū)，請根據(jù)以下問題提示要點(diǎn)，完成一篇英文征文稿。Whatyourneighbourhoodlike?Whatareyourneighbourslike?Howdofeelyourneighbourhood?注意事項(xiàng)：1.表達(dá)清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；2.必須回答上面問題，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，80詞左右；3.開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。neighbourhoodI’mHua.IliveSunshine___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7Emily封電子郵件，介紹你所在社區(qū)的情況。請按需求選用參考詞匯：Places:CommunityCentre;Fix-itClub;…Activities:awayoldbooks;repairbrokenbicycles;careofpets;doexercise;…注意：1.90左右，郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名和地名。DearI’mhappytellaboutmy_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Whataboutyourcommunity?I’mlookingforwardyourBestwishes,Hua進(jìn)階拓展訓(xùn)練篇78hometown”題，寫一封郵件向他介紹你的家鄉(xiāng)，包括以下要點(diǎn)：“通在無錫離上海不遠(yuǎn)，開車去上海2個多小時；“游在無錫以黿頭渚公園Park)聞名；那里綠樹環(huán)繞，鳥語花香；“吃在無錫可以嘗試本地美食——小籠包(steameddumplings)“人在無錫樂意幫助他人解決各種問題；“住在無錫我家在無錫市東面，沿著馬路直走就能看到學(xué)校；你的感想注意：……(自擬，至少一句)(1)要點(diǎn)清楚，語言流暢；(2)90字左右；(3)開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearIwanttellsomethingaboutmyhometown.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________thebest,Ming9．為了激發(fā)同學(xué)們熱愛家鄉(xiāng)的情感，學(xué)校英語角開展題為hometown”的征文活動。假如你是李文，請根據(jù)以下表格中的信息提示，用英語寫一篇文章參加活動?，F(xiàn)代化城市，空氣清新，每天聽到鳥語；我家離市中心不遠(yuǎn)，乘坐地鐵到市中心只要20分鐘；在三樓，有自己的臥室；最愛……，因?yàn)樽⒁猓?.80左右，文章開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.文中應(yīng)包括所給內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使文章連貫；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的真實(shí)姓名、校名等信息。hometownI’mI’mgladtellsomethingaboutmyhometown.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ThomasAnthony你的家鄉(xiāng)南通。請認(rèn)真閱讀他的郵件，并根據(jù)郵件內(nèi)容回信。Thomas@China.comFrom:Anthony2023@UK.comSubject:hometownDearThomas,Howareyou?Gladhearfromyou.IamthinkingabouttravellingChinaduringthesummerIplantravelyourhometown—Nantong.Iwantknowsomethingabouttheenvironment(環(huán)境),peopleandtransport(交通)yourhometown.Pleasetellsomethingelseaboutyourhometown.Hopehearfromsoon.Anthony注意：1.回信須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要求語句通順、意思連貫；2.文中不得提及真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息；3.90個左右，短文的開頭和結(jié)尾句已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearI’mhearyou’recomingmyhometown-Nantong.Itagoodplacevisit.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ihopeanswerhelpfulyou.Nantong!Thomas．假如你是李華，你在南京學(xué)習(xí)的英國筆友Henry五一假期要來你家鄉(xiāng)鹽城游玩。現(xiàn)在你想要寫一封邀請信，邀請他來參觀游玩。邀請信需包含如下內(nèi)容：1.Whatyourhometownlike?2.Whereyourcommunity?3.Whatdoyourneighboursdohelpeachother?4.Whatcandotogetheratyourhome?5.HowcanHenryyourhome?注意：1.2.關(guān)信息；3.80個左右，短文的開頭和結(jié)尾句已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearIamwritinginvitevisithometown_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hopeseesoonthebest!Hua．同學(xué)們，“我為家鄉(xiāng)代言主題展覽活動即將啟動，請根據(jù)問題和提示，以hometown為題，寫一篇英文演講稿，簡單介紹宿遷。1.WhatSuqianthenorthofJiangsuProvince,8555squarekilometers,treesandflowers/…)2.WhatcanwedoSuqian?(interestingplacesvisit,SantaishanForestPark/LuomaLake…)3.WhatdothinkoflivingSuqian?awonderfulplace/…)要求：1.90左右，短文開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.文章必須包含所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文語連貫、通順。hometownIwouldtellsomethingabouthometownSuqian.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________13．保護(hù)和傳承中國傳統(tǒng)技藝是每個中華兒女的責(zé)任，現(xiàn)在得到了越來越多人的重視和關(guān)注。最近你校準(zhǔn)備舉行“你最喜愛的傳統(tǒng)技藝”為主題的英語演講活動。請你用英語寫一篇演講稿，介紹你最喜愛的傳統(tǒng)技藝，并號召大家來保護(hù)傳統(tǒng)技藝。What介紹一種傳統(tǒng)技藝是中國文化的重要部分favouritetraditionalChineseskillWhy（請你補(bǔ)充How（請你補(bǔ)充注意：1.詞數(shù)：802.不得透露學(xué)校、姓名等任何個人信息，否則不予評分。AsweallprotectingthetraditionalChineseskillsimportant.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________worktogetherprotectthistraditionalskillandkeepalive.14．為豐富校園生活，弘揚(yáng)中華優(yōu)秀傳統(tǒng)文化，近期你校校報(bào)英語專欄舉行了GettingclosetraditionalChineseculture征文活動，請根據(jù)表格中的內(nèi)容提示寫一篇英語短文，向此專欄投稿，介紹中國傳統(tǒng)手工藝（handicraft）風(fēng)箏的歷史、特征及其文化重要性，并分享你的看法。KitesHistoryMozi,theStatesperiodmaterialsformakingkites:…shapesofkites:…Characteristicskites:●atraditionalChinesehandicraft●…Culturalimportancekiteflying:●apopularoutdooractivity…●theCapital:ShandongProvince…ideas…要求：(1)表達(dá)清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；(2)必須包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；(3)詞數(shù)：100(4)不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名等。KitesofKiteshaveahistoryabout2,300yearsChina._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________能力綜合實(shí)踐篇6．請你寫一篇文章介紹中國燈籠的特點(diǎn)、用途，表達(dá)你對它的喜愛之情。詞數(shù)80以上。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________16．請根據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇關(guān)于中國民間藝術(shù)的短文，不少于60提示：1.介紹一種你喜歡的中國民間藝術(shù)，如剪紙、刺繡、陶瓷等。2.描述它的特點(diǎn)和制作過程。3.說明你為什么喜歡它。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________為題寫一篇小短要求：1、詞數(shù)不少于802、語言流暢、書寫規(guī)范、卷面整潔；3、文中不得使用你的真實(shí)姓名，否則以零分計(jì)。4、短文必須寫在答卷相應(yīng)位置上，如在本卷上作答，一律不得分。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________．假如你是王林，家住在HappinessHome。本周六是來自英國的交換生的生日。你打算邀請他來你家過生日。請你根據(jù)下列提示，用英語給他寫一封郵件，介紹一下你的小區(qū)環(huán)境、鄰里關(guān)系，并告訴他生日會的安排以及從學(xué)校到你家的具體路線。1.Whatdothinkoftheenvironmentofyourneighborhood?2.Whatareyourneighborslike?（Giveatleastoneexample.）3.Whatyourplanfortheparty?4.Howcanyourhomeaccordingthe要求：1.層次清楚、語句通順、意思連貫、書寫規(guī)范；2.郵件內(nèi)容必須包括上面提及的要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3.詞數(shù)不少于80詞，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；4.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名或地名。DearMike,Iamgoinghaveapartyathomecelebrateyourbirthdaythis_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________19．假如你是王欣悅，你的英國筆友David想了解你的社區(qū)和你的理想家園。請你根據(jù)以下提示，給他寫一封電子郵件介紹你的社區(qū)和理想家園。communitydreamhome1.Nice,lotsofflowersandtrees1.Abigflatonthetopfloor2.Asupermarket,alibraryandapark2.Hasanareaof160squaremetres3.Friendlyneighbours，oftenhelpeachother3.Favouriteplace:thebalcony4.funfriendsthepark4.Enjoytheofthecitythere1.Luckylivethiscommunity2.happyhaveadreamhome要求：1.包含所有提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.語句通順，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范；詞數(shù)：80詞左右。DearDavid,Howareyou?I’mtellsomethingaboutmycommunityanddreamhome.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes!Xinyue20．你?！坝⒄Z寫作競賽”即將舉行，要求大家積極投稿，以Hometown”為題，結(jié)合要點(diǎn)，完成作文：1.我的家鄉(xiāng)無錫是個現(xiàn)代化的城市，位于江蘇東南部；2.離上海不遠(yuǎn)，乘火車只要一個小時左右；3.每年有很多游客到無錫來參觀，春天去公園賞花很盡興；4.在這里可以嘗到各種東西方的美食；5.我覺得要求：1.短文須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，語句通順、語言規(guī)范；2.第5要點(diǎn)用2句話展開合理想象，做適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3.詞數(shù)：70詞左右。Hometown______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________答案與解析基礎(chǔ)入門訓(xùn)練篇71．假設(shè)你是Hua，你的英國筆友想了解你的家及你的社區(qū)。請根據(jù)以下提示，給他寫一封電子郵件。提示：1.你家的位置、房子類型、房間布局；2.你所在社區(qū)的情況(如：基礎(chǔ)設(shè)施、環(huán)境、鄰居等)要求：1.包含以上提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.語言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，語意通順、連貫；3.80詞左右，郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearI’mtellsomethingabouthomeand_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________IreallymyhomeandmyWhataboutyours?soon.Bestwishes,Hua【答案】例文DearI’mtellsomethingabouthomeandIliveacomfortableapartmentonthefloorofabuildingagreatapartmenthasalivingroomanddiningarea.amodernkitchen.Therearebedrooms.Onepersonalspace,andtheotheraguestroom.Besides,thereatidybathroom.Thecommunitywonderful.Peoplecanexerciseafitnessandthereasmallbutbeautifulgardenforrelaxing.Theenvironmentcleanandquiet,treesandflowerseverywhere.neighborsarenice.oftenmeetthehallwayandhavefriendlyconversations.IreallymyhomeandmyWhataboutyours?soon.Bestwishes,Hua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一封電子郵件；②時態(tài)：主要運(yùn)用一般現(xiàn)在時；③提示：對自家房屋布局和社區(qū)環(huán)境、設(shè)施以及鄰里關(guān)系等要點(diǎn)的介紹，通過具體描述展現(xiàn)家與社區(qū)的特點(diǎn)，突出喜愛之情。[寫作步驟]第一步，開篇點(diǎn)明寫作意圖，告知對方寫信是為介紹自己的家與社區(qū)，讓讀者明確郵件主旨；第二步，詳細(xì)介紹自家情況，先說明居住在社區(qū)中某棟樓的五樓公寓，接著描述公寓內(nèi)布局，包括客廳、餐廳、現(xiàn)代化廚房、兩間臥室及整潔的浴室；然后介紹社區(qū)情況，提及社區(qū)內(nèi)有健身中心供居民鍛煉、美麗小花園可放松身心，環(huán)境干凈安靜且到處有花草樹木，還有友善的鄰里關(guān)系；第三步，總結(jié)強(qiáng)調(diào)對家與社區(qū)的喜愛之情。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①comfortable舒適的②modern現(xiàn)代的③friendly友好的[高分句型]Peoplecanexerciseafitnessandthereasmallbutbeautifulgardenfor(therebe句型)2ChineseClothes”題舉辦征文活動。請根據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇英語短文進(jìn)行投稿。1.介紹你最喜歡的中國傳統(tǒng)服裝（風(fēng)格、材質(zhì)······2.喜歡的理由；3.如何向全世界推廣的建議。recentyears,andmoreyoungpeoplewouldliketraditionalChineseclothes.Theybecomeanewfashion.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】范文：recentyears,moreandmoreyoungpeoplewouldliketraditionalChineseclothes.Theybecomeanewfashion.OfallthetraditionalChineseclothes,Ilikehanfubest.They’reusuallylooseabelt.They’remadeofdifferentmaterials,likecottonandsilk.Hanfuarebeautiful.They’resuitableforpeopleofallages.They’realwayscomfortablethey’repopularyoungpeoplehanfuagoodwayshowourtraditionalculturetheworld.Maybewecanhavehanfufestivalsandhanfushowsholidays.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇話題作文；②時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹自己喜歡的中國傳統(tǒng)服飾；第二步，說明自己喜歡的理由；第三步，提出向全世界推廣的建議。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①aremadeof由……②aresuitablefor適合③peopleofallages各個年齡階段的人[高分句型]①hanfuagoodwayshowourtraditionalculturetheworld.(動名詞作主語)②Maybewecanhavehanfufestivalsandhanfushowsholidays.(and并列句)3．每個人都有自己的夢想家園。根據(jù)下列提示，設(shè)計(jì)你自己夢想的家園。不少于90詞，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。1.Whatyourdreamhomelike?2.Howroomsarethereyourdreamhomeandwhatarethey?3.Whatthingsare........dreamhomeI’msharemyideasaboutmydreamhome.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：dreamhomeI’mgladshareideasaboutmydreamhome.dreamhomeahousefloors.TherearesevenroomsOnthegroundcanseeasofathesitingroom.Besidethesitingroomthekitchen.aandacupboardThereadinnertablethediningroom.Onthefirstthereastudyandthreebedrooms.ThereabookcasetheIhaveownbedroomandhasabathroomfrontofmyhouse,thereanicegardenmanyflowers.Theflowersarebeautiful.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇話題作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：根據(jù)題干中的提示問題介紹自己夢想中的家，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹自己夢想中的家的樣子；第二步，具體介紹家的樣子，包括房間數(shù)量和房間里的陳設(shè)；第三步，書寫結(jié)語。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①ahousefloors一個有兩層樓的房子②frontof在……[高分句型]①aandacupboardit.（therebe句型）4．Dolikeyourownhome?Dowantabetterone?yourdreamhomelike?Pleaseanarticleaboutyourdreamhome.注意事項(xiàng)：短文必須包括所給內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要求語句通順，意思連貫；2)詞數(shù)：70詞左右；3)短文必須寫在答題卷對應(yīng)的位置上，寫在試卷其他部位無效。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文dreamhomefarawayfrombigcities.abigthree-floorhouseagarden,afootballfieldandaswimmingpool.Thelivingroombigandbright.AfterIcanchatmyparentsandwatchthere.IhavemyownbedroomonthesecondItcleanandcomfortable.Ilikethefootballfieldbest,becauseIcanhavefunplayingfootballfriendsatweekends.【詳解】[總體分析]題材：本文是一篇說明文，材料作文，描述你夢想中的家是什么樣的；時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“信息提示”中介紹夢想中的家的提示要點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，敘述夢想中的家的位置；第二步，具體敘述夢想中的家的樣子。第三步，敘述在家中做的有趣的事情。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]farawayfrom遠(yuǎn)離abigthree-floorhouseagarden帶花園的三層大房子chat與……like…best最喜歡havefundoingsth.很高興做某事[高分句型]①Ilikethefootballfieldbest,becauseIcanhavefunplayingfootballfriendsatweekends.（原因狀語從5Millie的朋友Sandy寫一封信，邀請她來揚(yáng)州玩時住在自己家里。揚(yáng)州市中心，靠近學(xué)校和購物中心配套設(shè)施空氣清新，鳥語花香。小區(qū)有大型超市，人們可以小區(qū)有……，人們可以樂于助人，舉例說明；四間臥室，每間帶陽臺；兩個衛(wèi)生間，可以自擬一點(diǎn))要求:1.100左右；短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、班級名；2.短文應(yīng)包括表格內(nèi)所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，不要逐條翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫通順。DearI’mhappyknowthatvisitnextweek.I’dlikeinvitestayatmyhome._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________home.Bestwishes!【答案】例文DearI’mhappyknowthatvisitnextweek.I’dlikeinvitestayatmyhome.Ourcommunitythecenterofnearschoolsandshoppingcenters.Theairfreshhere.IcansmelltheflowersandhearthebirdsThereabigsupermarketthePeoplecantherebuywhattheylike.Thecommunityalsohasabeautifulsmallgarden,peoplecanwalktherest.Ourneighborsareandhelpful.OnceIhomeandkeys,myneighborcalledmotherforme.havefourbedrooms.EachbedroomhasaTherearerestroomshome,soconvenientthetoilet.OurlivingroomIcansitonthesofaandwatchthere.IamhappyhaveownroomandIhopeIcanseesoon.Thenwecanreadhappilyhome.Bestwishes!Millie【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文，為書信作文；②時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)提示已經(jīng)給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏，并在適當(dāng)?shù)牡胤窖a(bǔ)充和發(fā)揮，使用正確的詞匯和句型，注意語句的通順，使得行文連貫有邏輯。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖，以“想邀請你來我家玩并住我家里引出下文；整內(nèi)容，注意行文的連貫和語法的準(zhǔn)確；第三步，結(jié)尾介紹自己的感受和看法，表明對朋友到來的期待，并總結(jié)文章。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①thecenter在中心②behappydosth很開心做某事③hearsbdosth聽見某人做某事④watch看電視[高分句型]①convenientthetoilet.（句型is+adj+todosth表示“做某事如何”）②OnceIhomeandmykeys,myneighborcalledmymotherforme.once引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句）6．俗話說“遠(yuǎn)親不如近鄰”。近日，某英文報(bào)正在舉行題為neighbourhood”的征文活動。假設(shè)你是李華，住在陽光社區(qū)，請根據(jù)以下問題提示要點(diǎn)，完成一篇英文征文稿。Whatyourneighbourhoodlike?Whatareyourneighbourslike?Howdofeel