Unit1Anewstart同步寫作課講義外研版2024七年級(jí)上冊(cè)?話題解讀??話題解讀?本單元以“嶄新的初中學(xué)校生活”為話題，主要圍繞“勤學(xué)善思”“制訂好的計(jì)劃”“努力學(xué)習(xí)”等方面展開(kāi)。?寫作任務(wù)??寫作任務(wù)?相關(guān)的寫作通常涉及以下幾個(gè)方面：1.介紹自己初中的第一節(jié)課；2.描述初中生活面臨的問(wèn)題；3.給同學(xué)/朋友提供初中生活建議；4.發(fā)表如何看待初中生活的觀點(diǎn)。?審題指導(dǎo)??審題指導(dǎo)?假如你是李華，剛進(jìn)入初中的你，面臨著許多新問(wèn)題，你很苦惱，請(qǐng)你寫一封信給學(xué)生會(huì)，尋求建議與幫助。信件要點(diǎn)如下：1.學(xué)習(xí)科目增多，學(xué)習(xí)內(nèi)容難度加大。2.學(xué)習(xí)任務(wù)很多，不知道如何制訂計(jì)劃。3.學(xué)校活動(dòng)很多，不知道如何選擇。要求：1.信件應(yīng)包含所有要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.詞數(shù)不少于80（信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。DearStudents’Union,Hi!I’mLiHuafromClass3,Grade7.I’mwritingtoaskforadvice.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua審題審主題：尋求建議和幫助審體裁：信件審人稱：以第一人稱為主審時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)審要點(diǎn)：1.科目多、任務(wù)多、學(xué)?；顒?dòng)多2.不知道如何制訂計(jì)劃和選擇活動(dòng)3.請(qǐng)求給予幫助寫作步驟◆步驟一：表明目的◆步驟二：描述問(wèn)題1.科目多、任務(wù)多、學(xué)校活動(dòng)多2.不知道如何制訂計(jì)劃和選擇活動(dòng)◆步驟三：請(qǐng)求給予幫助，表達(dá)感謝?寫作框架??寫作框架??素材寶庫(kù)??素材寶庫(kù)?詞匯積累詞匯積累學(xué)習(xí)科目Chinese語(yǔ)文Maths數(shù)學(xué)English英語(yǔ)Biology生物Geography地理History歷史Art美術(shù)Music音樂(lè)PE體育Science科學(xué)MoralEducationandLaw道德與法治學(xué)習(xí)任務(wù)homework家庭作業(yè)schooltask學(xué)習(xí)任務(wù)makeaposter制作海報(bào)writeareport寫一份報(bào)告makeaphotoalbum制作相冊(cè)makeaprofile創(chuàng)建個(gè)人資料學(xué)?；顒?dòng)club社團(tuán)fieldtrip野外考察culturalfestival文化節(jié)sportsmeet/meeting運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)takepartin/joinin參加時(shí)間安排eightlessonsaday每天八節(jié)課havenotimetodosports沒(méi)時(shí)間鍛煉makegooduseoftime好好利用時(shí)間makeplansfor為……制訂計(jì)劃句型積累句型積累開(kāi)頭句Hi!I’mwritingtoaskforsomeadvice.你好！我寫信是想來(lái)尋求一些幫助。（已給出）ThenewtermisbeginningandI’mfacingmanyproblems.新學(xué)期開(kāi)始了，我正面臨許多問(wèn)題。中間句1.與科目相關(guān)as...and...omanysubjects,suchas...and...有很多科目，比如……和……Therearemanynewsubjectsatjuniorhigh.初中有很多新科目。I’mnotgoodat+學(xué)科名詞.我不擅長(zhǎng)……學(xué)科。2.與學(xué)習(xí)任務(wù)相關(guān)It’sdifficultformetomakegoodplans.我很難制訂好的計(jì)劃。TherearemanydifferentkindsoftasksandIcan’tdecidewhattodofirst.有許多不同種類的任務(wù)，我無(wú)法決定先做什么。It’shardtomakegooduseofmytime.好好利用我的時(shí)間很難。It’shardformetoplanmytime.我很難計(jì)劃我的時(shí)間。3.與學(xué)?；顒?dòng)相關(guān)It’shardformetochoosetheschoolactivities.對(duì)我來(lái)說(shuō)，挑選學(xué)?；顒?dòng)很難。Therearemanyactivitiesatschool,andIdon’tknowwhichoneisgoodforme.學(xué)校有很多活動(dòng)，我不知道哪個(gè)適合我。Itakepartintoomanyactivities,soIdon’thavetimetodomyhomeworksometimes.我參加了太多的活動(dòng)，所以我有時(shí)沒(méi)有時(shí)間做家庭作業(yè)。Ispendtoomuchtimeontheschoolactivities.我在學(xué)校活動(dòng)上花費(fèi)了太多的時(shí)間。結(jié)尾句Inaword,I’mworriedaboutmystudyandlifeatjuniorhigh.總之，我很擔(dān)心我初中的學(xué)習(xí)與生活。Wouldyoupleasehelpmewiththeseproblems?請(qǐng)你幫我解決這些問(wèn)題好嗎？Thankyouso/verymuch!非常感謝！?參考范文??參考范文?DearStudents’Union,Hi!I’mLiHuafromClass3,Grade7.I’mwritingtoaskforsomeadvice.ThenewtermisbeginningandI’mfacingmanyproblems.First,it’shardformetolearnthesubjectswell.Therearemanynewsubjectsatjuniorhigh,suchasHistory,GeographyandBiology.AndI’mnotgoodatMathsorHistory.Second,it’sdifficultformetomakegoodplans.TherearemanydifferentkindsoftasksandIcan’tdecidewhattodofirst.Lastly,it’shardformetochoosetheschoolactivities.Therearemanyactivitiesatschool,butIdon’tknowwhichoneisgoodforme.Wouldyoupleasehelpmewiththeseproblems?Thankyousomuch!Yourssincerely,LiHua名師點(diǎn)評(píng)本求助信涵蓋了題目所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，且表述清晰。文章多處遷移使用了教材原文中的表達(dá)，做到了學(xué)以致用。①句交代寫求助信的背景。②⑤⑦中First、Second和Lastly的使用，使文章條理清晰；“it’s+adj.+forsb.+todosth.”句式的使用，點(diǎn)明了自己面臨的三個(gè)主要問(wèn)題。③⑥⑧句均含therebe結(jié)構(gòu)，具體闡釋自己為什么會(huì)面臨這些問(wèn)題；其中③句中還用suchas（例如，比如）來(lái)列舉科目名稱，⑥句中還含有“特殊疑問(wèn)詞+動(dòng)詞不定式”結(jié)構(gòu)（whattodo）。④句中用（not）begoodat［（不）擅長(zhǎng)］短語(yǔ)，引出了自己不擅長(zhǎng)的科目。with...d和please的使用，使得語(yǔ)氣委婉，helpsb.with...（在……方面幫助某人）的使用，重申了自己的訴求。?寫作拓展??寫作拓展?變式提升訓(xùn)練變式提升訓(xùn)練（1）（2425七年級(jí)上·天津河北·期中）假如你是李華。在初中的第一節(jié)英語(yǔ)課上，你需要進(jìn)行自我介紹。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示，用英語(yǔ)介紹自己。(1)見(jiàn)到新的老師們和同學(xué)們很興奮，想與大家交朋友；(2)有許多愛(ài)好，如……(至少兩條)；(3)最喜歡的學(xué)科是……；(4)暑假學(xué)習(xí)了畫畫，與父母去了大連游玩，很高興；(5)開(kāi)啟初中生活，你的個(gè)人感受是……要求：(1)詞數(shù)：80詞左右。(2)開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。(3)要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。Hello,everyone!MynameisLiHua.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thankyou!【答案】例文：Hello,everyone!MynameisLiHua.I’mexcitedtoseenewteachersandclassmates,andIwanttomakefriendswithyou.Ihavemanyhobbies,suchasreadinganddrawing.Myfavoritesubjectishistory.IlearnedpaintingduringthesummervacationandIwenttoDalianwithmyparentsforatrip.Wehadagoodtimethere.Ifeelthatthenewlifeisveryexcitingandfullofchallenges.Iwilltrymybesttostudyhardinthemiddleschool.Thankyou!【詳解】[總體分析]題材：本文是一篇演講稿；時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，注意不要遺漏提示中的要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作要點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，表達(dá)自己見(jiàn)到新的老師們和同學(xué)們的激動(dòng)之情。第二步，介紹自己的愛(ài)好、最喜歡的學(xué)科以及暑假的活動(dòng)。第三步，介紹開(kāi)啟初中生活，自己的個(gè)人感受。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①wanttodo想做某事②makefriends交朋友③haveagoodtime玩得高興[高分句型]①Ifeelthatthenewlifeisveryexcitingandfullofchallenges.(that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句)（2）（2425七年級(jí)上·天津·期中）假如你是李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，給你的筆友David用英文寫一封郵件，介紹一下你第一周的初中生活。1.你的學(xué)校很大很漂亮；2.見(jiàn)到新老師和同學(xué)們，你很興奮；3.第一節(jié)是英語(yǔ)課。在課上你們學(xué)新單詞，做游戲；4.初中作業(yè)很多，很難決定先做什么；5.你將……要求：1.詞數(shù)：6070個(gè)。2.開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。3.要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。DearDavid,Howiseverythinggoing?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Doyouhaveanythingnewtotellme?I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply!Yours,LiHua【答案】例文DearDavid,Howiseverythinggoing?I’dliketosharemyfirstweekofmiddleschoolwithyou.Itwasreallyfun!Myschoolisbigandbeautiful.IfeltsoexcitedthatImetlotsofnewteachersandclassmates.OurfirstclasswasEnglish.Welearnedsomenewwordsandplayedsomegames.Itwasreallyinteresting.Butthere’saproblem.There’ssomuchhomeworkinmiddleschool!It’shardtodecidewhichoneIshoulddofirst.ButI’lltrymybesttodoitall.Next,Iwanttojoinsomeclubsoractivitiestomeetmorefriendsandhavemorefun.Doyouhaveanythingnewtotellme?I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply!

Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為一封電子郵件；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)主要為“一般過(guò)去時(shí)”和“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：文章應(yīng)該包括5個(gè)方面的問(wèn)題要點(diǎn)，要適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充，使文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)；行文時(shí)多用第一人稱，盡量多使用短語(yǔ)和句型；寫作中適當(dāng)使用連接詞，使行文連貫、順暢。[寫作步驟]第一步，開(kāi)門見(jiàn)山：分享第一周的初中生活；第二步，依據(jù)提示要點(diǎn)，逐一陳述第一周的生活學(xué)習(xí)情況，適當(dāng)拓展；第三步，書寫總結(jié)，表達(dá)期待。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①lookforwardto期待②somuchhomework如此多的家庭作業(yè)[高分句型]①It’shardtodecidewhichoneIshoulddofirst.(it作形式主語(yǔ)、賓語(yǔ)從句)②IfeltsoexcitedthatImetlotsofnewteachersandclassmates.

(so…that引導(dǎo)結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句)（3）（2425七年級(jí)上·天津?yàn)I海新·期中）假如你是李華，現(xiàn)已成為初中生一段時(shí)間，回顧這段多姿多彩的時(shí)光，請(qǐng)以“MyNewLifeinJuniorHigh”為題。根據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇短文，介紹你的初中新生活。要點(diǎn)提示：（1）校園大而整潔，老師和同學(xué)都很友善；（2）有八門課程，最喜歡的科目是……（3）每天做運(yùn)動(dòng)，對(duì)身體好，比如打籃球、……（4）學(xué)校的食物很美味，愛(ài)吃健康的食物；（5）適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充一兩點(diǎn)相關(guān)信息或想法……提示詞：整潔的tidy

友善的friendly

美味的delicious

健康的healthy要求：（1）詞數(shù)：70詞左右；（2）開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；（3）要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，內(nèi)容可以適當(dāng)拓展。MyNewLifeinJuniorHighHello!I’mLiHua.I’dliketotellyousomethingaboutmynewlifeinjuniorhigh.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MyNewLifeinJuniorHighHello!I’mLiHua.I’dliketotellyousomethingaboutmynewlifeinjuniorhigh.Myschoolisbigandclean.Theteachersandclassmatesareveryfriendly.Thereareeightcourses.IlikeEnglishbest.Idosportseverydaybecauseit’sgoodformybody.Forexample,Iplaybasketballandfootballwithmyclassmatesinthesportsclub.Thefoodinschoolisdelicious.Ilikehealthyfood,suchasfreshvegetablesandfruit.Ienjoymynewlifeverymuch.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，突出重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹學(xué)校人員、環(huán)境和學(xué)科；第二步，介紹個(gè)人運(yùn)動(dòng)愛(ài)好以及學(xué)校食物，發(fā)表感想。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①friendly友好的②dosports做運(yùn)動(dòng)③delicious美味的[高分句型]Idosportseverydaybecauseit’sgoodformybody.（原因狀語(yǔ)從句）（4）（2425七年級(jí)上·浙江溫州·期中）為了讓初一新生更好地適應(yīng)初中生活，學(xué)生會(huì)將舉行以“HowtoEnjoyJuniorHigh”為主題的演講。假如你是學(xué)生會(huì)主席李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)你的演講提綱完成你的演講稿。要求：(1)內(nèi)容需要包含所有提示信息，可適當(dāng)擴(kuò)展；(2)文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等信息；(3)詞數(shù)50左右。演講稿開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。HowtoEnjoyJuniorHighHelloeveryone!Howisyourjuniorhighschoollife?Youmaymeetsomeproblemsandhereissomeadvice.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ihopeallofyouwillhaveagreattimeinjuniorhigh.Thanksforlistening!【答案】例文： HowtoEnjoyJuniorHighHelloeveryone!Howisyourjuniorhighschoollife?Youmaymeetsomeproblemsandhereissomeadvice.Learningwillbemoredifficultinjuniorhighsoit’simportanttothinkmoreinclass.Yourteachersandclassmatesarealwaysreadytohelp.Yourschoollifewillbehappierwithfriends.Youcanmakenewfriendswhenyoutakepartindifferentactivitiesorjoinsomeclubsafterclass.Butremembertoplanyourtimewellbecausetherearemanytasks.Ihopeallofyouwillhaveagreattimeinjuniorhigh!Thanksforlistening!【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇講稿；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)主要為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏信息提示，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖。引出如何享受初中生活的話題；第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。從課內(nèi)課外兩個(gè)方面介紹如何享受初中生活；第三步，書寫結(jié)語(yǔ)。總結(jié)并表達(dá)對(duì)同學(xué)們的祝愿。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①bereadytohelp樂(lè)于幫助②makefriends交朋友③takepartin參加[高分句型]①Learningwillbemoredifficultinjuniorhighsoit’simportanttothinkmoreinclass.(動(dòng)名詞作主語(yǔ)；so引導(dǎo)結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句)②Youcanmakenewfriendswhenyoutakepartindifferentactivitiesorjoinsomeclubsafterclass.(when引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句)③Butremembertoplanyourtimewellbecausetherearemanytasks.(祈使句；because引導(dǎo)原因狀語(yǔ)從句)（5）（2425七年級(jí)上·浙江溫州·期中）假設(shè)你是李華，你的英國(guó)好友Jack非常想了解你的校園生活。請(qǐng)你給Jack寫一封郵件，介紹你這半個(gè)學(xué)期的學(xué)校生活。請(qǐng)根據(jù)思維導(dǎo)圖，完成你的介紹。要求：1.文章必須包含表格中所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)拓展；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名與校名等相關(guān)信息；3.詞數(shù)60詞左右，首句已給出，不計(jì)入總數(shù)。DearJack,Iamhappytosharemyschoollifewithyou.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________LovefromLiHua【答案】參考范文：A(68詞）DearJack,I’mhappytosharemyschoollifewithyou.Wehavemanyactivitiesinjuniorhigh.Everymorning,wedomorningexercisesandsometimesplaybasketballafterclass.Myfavoritesubjectismathbecauseit’sfun,butEnglishishardforme.Theteacherisniceandalwayshelpsme.Sometimes,thereistoomuchhomework,andit’shardtofinishitontime.Iwilltrymybestandworkhard.Ilikemyschoollife.LovefromLiHuaB(78詞）DearJack,I’mhappytosharemyschoollifewithyou.Mynewschoollifeinjuniorhighisreallyinteresting!Everymorning,wedoexercises,andIoftenplaybasketballwithmyfriendsafterschool.Myfavoritesubjectissciencebecausetheteachermakestheclassexciting.Ialsoenjoymathalot,butsometimesIfinditdifficulttounderstand.Thereisalsoalotofhomework,andIfeelalittletired.Butinaword,Ilikemyschoollifealot.Whataboutyou?LovefromLiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一封郵件；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)以“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”為主；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏提示，并適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，注意字母大小寫以及標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)。[寫作步驟]第一步、承接已給的開(kāi)頭，介紹學(xué)校的活動(dòng)；第二步、介紹自己最喜歡的科目以及老師的情況；第三步、介紹自己遇到的問(wèn)題并書寫結(jié)語(yǔ)。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①doexercises做運(yùn)動(dòng)②afterschool放學(xué)后③alotof很多④inaword總之⑤whatabout……怎么樣[高分句型]①M(fèi)yfavoritesubjectissciencebecausetheteachermakestheclassexciting.(because引導(dǎo)原因狀語(yǔ)從句)（6）（2025·貴州畢節(jié)·三模）三年快樂(lè)而充實(shí)的初中生活已經(jīng)結(jié)束，你將進(jìn)入高中繼續(xù)學(xué)習(xí)。展望未來(lái)，你對(duì)高中生活充滿期待。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)以“MyHighSchoolLife”為題，根據(jù)以下思維導(dǎo)圖中的提示和寫作要求，寫一篇不少于80詞的英語(yǔ)短文，描繪你期待的高中生活。寫作要求：1.短文須包含思維導(dǎo)圖中的所有信息，可適當(dāng)拓展；2.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名等信息。MyHighSchoolLife_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________