3/3SectionⅣWritingaboutafamilymemoryStep1品教材課文Step2析寫(xiě)作手法Sunday20OctoberIwastidyingmyroomyesterdayandfoundanoldphotoinanotebook.AsIwaslookingatit，thelovelymemoryofthatdaycamebacktome.Itwasmymother’sbirthdaytenyearsago，andIdecidedtosurpriseherwithhome-madescrambledeggs.Iwokeupreallyearlyandtip-toedtothekitchen.Ihadnevercookedanythingbefore，soItriedtocopyhowshedidit.Butsomehowtheyendedupburnt.Iwasabouttothroweverythingawaywhenmymothercamein.Ishowedhertheeggsandsadlyexplainedwhathappened.Tomysurprise，shetastedthemandsaidtheyweren’tbad！Iguessloveisindeedamagicalingredient.Infact，weendeduplaughingandatethemall.Thisweekendisher45thbirthday.I’llmakeherscrambledeggsagain，andthistimetheywon’tbeburnt！【學(xué)語(yǔ)言】本文主要講述了作者十年前為母親制作生日禮物的回憶。文章主要以過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)為主，講述了給母親悄悄制作禮物卻失敗的故事。為了給母親驚喜，作者在文中使用了surprise，tip-toe等動(dòng)詞，使語(yǔ)言更加形象；失敗后作者使用了sadly表達(dá)作者的失望之情。最終，母親品嘗后說(shuō)還不錯(cuò)。作者使用了...loveisindeedamagicalingredient，將愛(ài)比喻成“神奇的調(diào)料”，由此“愛(ài)”得到升華……【學(xué)結(jié)構(gòu)】本文寫(xiě)作主要借助時(shí)間順序：yesterday→tenyearsago→thisweekend。文章內(nèi)容：一張老照片（引起回憶）→十年前給母親制作生日禮物失敗→下周母親45歲生日，將再次制作同樣的生日禮物（新的愿望）。Step3背出彩佳句開(kāi)頭回憶1.ThreeyearsagowhenIjustattendedjuniorschool，Ispentmuchtimeplayingandwasratherlazyinmystudy.三年前，我剛上初中。我花了大量時(shí)間去玩，學(xué)習(xí)上很懶惰。2.EverytimeIlookatthewatchonmywrist，alovelymemorywillcomeintomymind.每次我看著手腕上的手表，一段美好的回憶就會(huì)浮現(xiàn)在我的腦海里。3.Althoughtheeveningpartyhappenedthreeyearsago，Iwillneverforgetit.盡管這場(chǎng)晚會(huì)發(fā)生在三年前，但我永遠(yuǎn)不會(huì)忘記。事件描述1.IwaswalkinginthestreetwhenImetafriendofmine.我正在大街上走著，就在那時(shí)遇見(jiàn)了我的一位朋友。2.Asaseniorhighstudent，youshouldknowhowtomanageyourtime.作為一名高中生，你應(yīng)該知道如何管理時(shí)間。3.Itookitovereagerly，fallinginlovewithitatfirstsight.我迫不及待地接過(guò)了它，第一眼就喜歡上了它。感觸或愿望1.IhavebeenfollowingFather’swordsandhavebenefitedalotfromit.Iamthankfulformyfather.我一直遵循父親的話，并從中受益良多。我感謝我的父親。2.ThisisreallythemostunpleasanttripIhaveeverhad！這是我曾經(jīng)經(jīng)歷過(guò)的最不愉快的旅行！假定你是李華，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示詞用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，記敘上周日發(fā)生在你家的一件趣事。提示詞：stayup；father，wakeup；practise；playthepiano；sleep；mother，playfootball；getup；runaway注意：可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。一、審題謀篇，結(jié)構(gòu)分明第一段：總體介紹；第二段：回憶上周日發(fā)生的趣事；第三段：對(duì)趣事的評(píng)價(jià)。二、要點(diǎn)陳述，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范1.星期六晚上我熬夜了，所以第二天早上直到爸爸叫我才醒來(lái)。2.他叫我起床練習(xí)彈鋼琴。3.閉著眼睛，我懇求父親讓我再多睡一會(huì)兒。4.事實(shí)上，這只是因?yàn)槲也幌刖毩?xí)彈鋼琴。5.我父親別無(wú)選擇，只好離開(kāi)我的臥室。6.不久，媽媽進(jìn)來(lái)讓我起床去踢足球。7.聽(tīng)了這話，我立刻跳下床，穿好衣服，迅速洗臉。8.在那之后，我?guī)е业淖闱蚺芰恕?.我家有很多有趣的故事。10.它們是我父母和我最寶貴的記憶。三、句間銜接，過(guò)渡自然1.用動(dòng)詞-ing形式作狀語(yǔ)改寫(xiě)要點(diǎn)7。2.用定語(yǔ)從句合并要點(diǎn)9和10。四、檢查謄寫(xiě)，卷面整潔動(dòng)作描寫(xiě)approachv.走近，靠近c(diǎn)hatv.&n.閑談，聊天ignorevt.忽視，不理sighv.&n.嘆氣，嘆息（尤因厭煩、失望、疲倦等）settlev.和解，結(jié)束（爭(zhēng)論）；解決；安排；定居apologisev.道歉judgev.認(rèn)為，判斷containvt.包含，含有；抑制人物描寫(xiě)talentn.天賦，才能responsibleadj.（對(duì)事故、錯(cuò)誤、罪行等）負(fù)有責(zé)任的，應(yīng)承擔(dān)責(zé)任的→responsibilityn.責(zé)任jawn.下巴，下頜beardn.胡須skinn.皮膚slimadj.苗條的，修長(zhǎng)的請(qǐng)從以上語(yǔ)料中選擇合適的詞匯，并用適當(dāng)?shù)倪^(guò)渡詞完成下面語(yǔ)段。看到亂七八糟的場(chǎng)面，爸爸驚訝地張口結(jié)舌。珍娜低下頭，淚流滿面，為此向爸爸道歉。一半驚訝，一半擔(dān)心，一種關(guān)心孩子的責(zé)任感驅(qū)使父親擦去她的眼淚。然后，爸爸說(shuō)：“讓我們一起做吧！”爸爸幫助他們成功地做了早餐。拿著早餐，雙胞胎在接近媽媽的房間時(shí)有點(diǎn)緊張。媽媽一睜開(kāi)眼睛，她就無(wú)法控制自己的情緒。“謝謝，親愛(ài)的！”她哽咽地說(shuō)。SectionⅣWritingaboutafamilymemory【演練佳作·寫(xiě)美文】寫(xiě)作步驟二、1.IstayeduplateonSaturdaynight，sothenextmorningIdidn’twakeupuntilmyfathercalledme.2.Heaskedmetogetupandpractiseplayingthepiano.3.Withmyeyesclosed，Ibeggedmyfathertoallowmetosleepsomemore.4.Infact，itwasjustbecauseIdidn’twanttopractiseplayingthepiano.5.Myfatherhadnochoicebuttoleavemybedroom.6.Soon，mymothercameinandaskedmetogetuptoplayfootball.7.WhenIheardthis，Iimmediatelyjumpedoutofmybed，dressedmyselfandwashedmyfacequickly.8.Afterthat，Iranawaycarryingmyfootball.9.Therearemanyinterestingstoriesinmyfamily.10.Theyarethemostvaluablememoriestomyparentsandme.三、1.Hearingthis，Iimmediatelyjumpedoutofmybed，dressedmyselfandwashedmyfacequickly.2.Therearemanyinterestingstoriesinmyfamily，whicharethemostvaluablememoriestomyparentsandme.四、SomethinginterestinghappenedtomyparentsandmeathomelastSunday.IstayeduplateonSaturdaynight，sothenextmorningIdidn’twakeupuntilmyfathercalledme.Heaskedmetogetupandpractiseplayingthepiano.Withmyeyesclosed，Ibeggedmyfathertoallowmetosleepsomemore.Infact，itwasjustbecauseIdidn’twanttopractiseplayingthepiano.Myfatherhadnochoicebuttoleavemybedroom.Soon，mymothercameinandaskedmetogetuptoplayfootball.Hearingthis，Iimmediatelyjumpedoutofmybed，dressedmyselfandwashedmyfacequickly.Afterthat，Iranawaycarryingmyfootball.Ididn’tknowhowmyfatherwouldfeelwhenhereturnedtomybedroomandfoundIhadleft.Therearemanyinteresti