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讀后續(xù)寫閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。MyhusbandandIwanderedthetropicalgardensofSanDiego'sBahiaResortHotel.Wecametoalargepool.Awetnoseappearedoutofthewaterandaseal(海豹)climbedupontoarocktogreetus.“Look!”Icried,delighted.“HernameisGracie,”myhusbandsaid,readingasignbythefencethatenclosedthepool.Amomentlater,anothersealswampast.“AndthatmustbeBilly,”headded.GraciedovebackintothewaterandchasedafterBilly.Wewatchedinwonderastheyracedaroundthepoolhappily.ThenextdayIfoundmyselfbackattheseals'pool.GracieandBillywereenjoyingthemorningsunshineonalargerock.IwassurprisedtolearnthatGracieandBillywereblind.TheywerethoughttohavesufferedaheadinjuryinstormyAlaskawaters,whichcausedthemtolosetheirsight.Theyneededtobetaughttosurviveinaworldofdarkness.Ifeltsorryforthem,astheycouldnolongerreturntothesea.Atthesametime,Iwasamazedhowtheyhadadaptedtotheirnewenvironment.Theymovedeasilyandbeautifully,theirlackofsightseemingtobenoproblematall.Ispenthourswatchingthemplayinghappilyinthepool,nosinglargeredandblueballs.Threeyearslater,inspring2020,aseriousillnessdamagedmyeyes,makingmealmostblind.Myeyeshadtobeprotectedfromsunlight,soIcouldn'tgooutside.Isatinmybedroomwiththeshadesdrawn,unabletoreadorevenwatchtelevision.Iwasterrified.WhatifIlostmysightpletely?HowwouldIpossiblymanage?IfeltsodepressedthatIbegantolosehope.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式作答。ThenIrememberedsomethingthatgavemethehopeIneeded._________________________________________________________________SoImadeupmymindtolivelikethosetwoseals._________________________________________________________________從失明海豹獲得鼓舞的故事續(xù)寫續(xù)寫分析第一段(ThenIrememberedsomethingthatgavemethehopeIneeded.)?此段以“我”回憶起海豹Gracie和Billy為核心,通過“movedgracefully”“playedjoyfully”“adaptedtothedarkness”等描述,重現(xiàn)海豹雖失明卻積極生活的畫面,形成強(qiáng)烈的情感對(duì)比。這些細(xì)節(jié)不僅展現(xiàn)了海豹的堅(jiān)韌,更通過“touchedmedeeply”直接點(diǎn)明對(duì)“我”內(nèi)心的觸動(dòng),推動(dòng)“我”的心態(tài)從絕望到燃起希望的轉(zhuǎn)變,為后文“我”積極應(yīng)對(duì)失明困境埋下伏筆,完成了從消極情緒到心理轉(zhuǎn)變的關(guān)鍵過渡,使故事邏輯連貫。?第二段(SoImadeupmymindtolivelikethosetwoseals.)?該段承接上文,圍繞“我”以海豹為榜樣展開行動(dòng)描寫。“l(fā)earningtomove”“l(fā)istenedtoaudiobooks”“venturedoutside”等具體行為,體現(xiàn)“我”逐步適應(yīng)失明生活的過程,突出“我”的積極改變?!癇itbybit,Iregainedmyconfidence”點(diǎn)明努力的成果,結(jié)尾“GracieandBillytaughtme...”直接升華主題,將海豹的精神與“我”的感悟相結(jié)合,強(qiáng)調(diào)無論處于何種黑暗困境,都能找到希望并積極生活,使故事主旨得到深化,塑造了一個(gè)勇敢戰(zhàn)勝挫折的人物形象。?翻譯全文?然后我想起了一些給我?guī)硭柘M氖虑?。我想到了巴伊亞度假酒店里那兩只失明的海豹格雷西(Gracie)和比利(Billy)。盡管它們身有殘疾,卻能在泳池中優(yōu)雅地游動(dòng),快樂地嬉戲。它們適應(yīng)了黑暗,繼續(xù)過著幸福的生活。它們的堅(jiān)強(qiáng)和韌性深深觸動(dòng)了我。我意識(shí)到,失去視力并不意味著失去享受生活的能力。就像它們一樣,我也能找到新的方式去體驗(yàn)周圍的世界。?于是我下定決心,要像那兩只海豹一樣生活。我首先開始自信地在屋內(nèi)活動(dòng),利用其他感官引導(dǎo)自己。我聽有聲讀物和播客,它們?yōu)槲议_啟了知識(shí)與娛樂的新世界。在家人和朋友的幫助下,我戴著特殊的太陽鏡,慢慢嘗試走出家門。漸漸地,我重拾了信心。格雷西和比利教會(huì)了我,即使在最黑暗的時(shí)刻,也總是存在希望,我們有能力茁壯成長。?故事線?美好邂逅:“我”和丈夫在圣地亞哥巴伊亞度假酒店的熱帶花園,看到海豹格雷西和比利在泳池中快樂嬉戲,并得知它們失明,卻能很好地適應(yīng)環(huán)境。?遭遇困境:三年后,一場(chǎng)重病使“我”幾乎失明,“我”因無法外出、不能正常閱讀和看電視,陷入恐懼與絕望,對(duì)未來失去希望。?回憶啟悟:“我”回憶起格雷西和比利雖失明卻積極生活的場(chǎng)景,它們的堅(jiān)韌和快樂深深觸動(dòng)“我”,讓“我”意識(shí)到自己也能找到享受生活的方式。?積極改變:“我”下定決心向海豹學(xué)習(xí),通過利用其他感官在屋內(nèi)活動(dòng)、聽有聲讀物、在他人幫助下外出等行動(dòng),逐步適應(yīng)失明生活,重拾信心。?短語?despiteone’sdisability:盡管某人有殘疾?adaptto:適應(yīng)?loseone’ssight:失去視力?makeupone’smind:下定決心?ventureoutside:冒險(xiǎn)外出;嘗試外出?bitbybit:一點(diǎn)一點(diǎn)地;逐漸地?regainone’sconfidence:重拾信心?inthedarkesttimes:在最黑暗的時(shí)刻?主旨升華句?Liketheblindsealsnavigatingthepoolwithgrace,ourabilitytoadaptinthefaceofadversityilluminatesthepathtoaresilientlife,provingthatlimitationsarebutsteppingstonestogrowth.(以海豹游泳類比在逆境中成長)?Whendarknessveilsourworld,it’snottheabsenceoflightthatdefinesus;it’sthesparkofhopewithin,kindledbythestrengthofothers,thatguidesustofindnewwaystoshine.(強(qiáng)調(diào)希望的力量)?JustasGracieandBillytransformedtheirblindnessintoanopportunityforjoy,oursetbackscanbeecatalystsfordiscoveringhiddenreservoirsofcourageandcreativity.(說明挫折的積極意義)?Intheoceanoflife’schallenges,thelessonslearnedfromtheresilientspiritsofthosewhoovereadversityserveasourpass,leadingustowardsahorizonofendlesspossibilities.(把經(jīng)驗(yàn)比作指南針)?Thestoryoftheblindsealsremindsusthattruevictoryliesnotintheabsenceofobstacles,butinourunwaveringdeterminationtodanceintherainoflife,evenwhenthesunseemslost.(點(diǎn)明面對(duì)困難的正確態(tài)度)?寫作示范一?ThenIrememberedsomethingthatgavemethehopeIneeded.TheimageofGracieandBilly,glidingthroughthewaterwithsuchelegancedespitetheirblindness,flashedbeforemyeyes.Theydidn'tletdarknessstopthemfromembracinglife;instead,theythrivedintheirownway.Theirfearlessspiritstruckachordinmyheart.Irealizedthatthoughmysightwasfading,myspiritdidn'thaveto.Therewerecountlesswaystoexperiencetheworldbeyondwhatmyeyescouldsee.?SoImadeupmymindtolivelikethosetwoseals.Ibeganexploringmyhomewithnewfoundcuriosity,usingtouchandsoundtomapoutmysurroundings.Ijoinedabooksharinggroupforthevisuallyimpaired,wherestorieswereexchangedthroughlivelydiscussions.Withawhitecaneinhand,Ibravelysteppedoutside,feelingthewarmthofthesunandthegentlebreeze.Eachsmallachievementfilledmewithpride.GracieandBillyshowedmethathopeisachoice,andwithit,wecanrewritethestoryofourlives.?寫作示范二?ThenIrememberedsomethingthatgavemethehopeIneeded.RecallinghowGracieandBillyplayedwithballsinthepool,theirjoyundiminishedbyblindness,broughttearstomyeyes.Theywerealivingtestamenttothepowerofresilience.Irealizedthatmystrugglewasnotanend,butanewbeginning.Ifthesesealscouldfindhappinessindarkness,socouldI.Theirstorybecamethebeaconthatguidedmeoutofthedepthsofdespair.?SoImadeupmymindtolivelikethosetwoseals.Istartedtakingcookingclasses,learningtocreatedeliciousdishesbyrelyingonmysenseofsmellandtaste.Ialsobeganwritinginajournal,pouringoutmythoughtsanddreams.Withthesupportofmyfamily,Ivisitedanaturereserve,listeningtothesongsofbirdsandfeelingthetexturesofleaves.Everydaywasanewadventure.Thesealstaughtmethatinthejourneyoflife,it’snotaboutthedestination,butthecouragetokeepmovingforward,nomatterwhatchallengeslieahead.參考答案ThenIrememberedsomethingthatgavemethehopeIneeded.Yes,Ithoughtofthetwoseals.Theygotusedtotheirnewlifeinthepoolregardlessofthegreatchangeswhentheywereunabletogobacktotheseawheretheywere

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