讀后續(xù)寫：具象構(gòu)造大法（原卷版）

目錄

一、具象構(gòu)造大法.............................................-1-

1.關(guān)于天氣寒冷cold的環(huán)境描寫..............

2.關(guān)于風(fēng)wind的環(huán)境描寫.................................-2-

3.關(guān)于雨rain的環(huán)境描寫..................................-3-

4.關(guān)于雪snow的環(huán)境描寫.................................-4-

5.關(guān)于星星star的環(huán)境描寫................................-4-

6.關(guān)于黑夜dark的環(huán)境描寫...............................-5-

7.關(guān)于安靜quiet的環(huán)境描寫...............................-6-

8.關(guān)于祥和的apeaceful的環(huán)境描寫.........................-7-

二、素材積累：...............................................-8-

1.表達(dá)天氣變化...........................................-8-

2.描繪自然景色..........................................-8-

3.氣氛氛圍..............................................-9-

4.江河湖海、山川峽谷、植物草地.........................-10-

5.夜晚與月光...........................................-12-

三、綜合模擬演練............................................-14-

1.（2023?廣東深圳?統(tǒng)考一模）.............................-14-

2.（2023?全國(guó)?高三專題練習(xí)）1........................................................-16-

3.（2023春?安徽阜陽(yáng)?高三統(tǒng)考一模）......................-18-

4.（2022?全國(guó)?模擬預(yù)測(cè)）.................................-20-

5.（2022?湖南師大附中三模）.............................-22-

一、具象構(gòu)造大法

練習(xí)：補(bǔ)充翻譯具象描寫的內(nèi)容。

1.概括描寫：

她覺(jué)得冷。Shefeltcold.

具象描寫：

她覺(jué)得冷。她把衣領(lǐng)拉高，裹緊圍巾，手插到口袋里并把臉側(cè)開(kāi)來(lái)躲避刺骨的寒

風(fēng)。

Shefeltcold.Shepulledhercollarup,tightenedherscarf,shovedherhandsdeepinto

herpocketsandturnedherfaceawayfromthebitingwind.

2.概括描寫：

這個(gè)冬季，天氣異常寒冷。

Thiswinter,theweatherisunusuallycold.

具象描寫：

這個(gè)冬季，天氣異常寒冷。世界似乎在這一刻停住了，河流也停下了腳步。

Thiswinter,theweatherisunusuallycold.Theworldseemstohavestoppedatthis

moment,andtheriverhasstoppeditsfootsteps.

1.關(guān)于風(fēng)wind的環(huán)境描寫

用風(fēng)襯托惡劣環(huán)境的時(shí)候，形容風(fēng)的詞常有：

?nowind無(wú)風(fēng)，

?strongwind強(qiáng)風(fēng)，

?bitingwind刺骨的風(fēng)

練習(xí)：補(bǔ)充翻譯具象描寫的內(nèi)容。

1.概括描寫：

這幾天凈舌I」大風(fēng)。It'sbeenverywindytheselastffewdays.

具象描寫：

這幾天凈刮大風(fēng)。樓上的標(biāo)桿在風(fēng)中猛烈的搖晃著。

It'sbeenverywindytheselastffewdays.Thepostonthebuildingstaggeredviolently

inthewind.

2.概括描寫:

外面舌I」起了大風(fēng)。Outside,therewasastrongwind.

具象描寫：

外面刮起了大風(fēng)，吹的樹(shù)枝亂擺，地上的灰塵亂飛，讓人睜不開(kāi)眼睛。

Outside,therewasastrongwind,andthebrancheswereblowingindisorder.Thedust

onthegroundwasflyingindisorder,whichmadepeopleunabletoopentheireyes.

2.關(guān)于雨rain的環(huán)境描寫

用雨襯托惡劣環(huán)境的時(shí)候，常用的詞有:

?aheavydownpour大暴雨，

?raincatsanddogs下傾盆大雨，

?becaughtintherain被雨淋

練習(xí)：補(bǔ)充翻譯具象描寫的內(nèi)容。

概括描寫：下著傾盆大雨。Itwasrainingcatsanddogs.

具象描寫1:

下著傾盆大雨，雷聲隆隆。(thunder)

Itwasrainingcatsanddogswiththundersroaring.

具象描寫2：

雨傾盆而下，風(fēng)吹著拍打著窗戶。(windows)

Theraincamepouringdownwiththewindsblowingandbeatingagainstthe

windows.

具象描寫3：

樹(shù)在雨中隨著風(fēng)瘋狂地飛舞。(wind)

Thetreesweredancingmadlywithwindintherain.

3.關(guān)于雪snow的環(huán)境描寫

練習(xí)：補(bǔ)充翻譯具象描寫的內(nèi)容。

1.概括描寫：

現(xiàn)在天黑了，雪還在落下。It'sdarknowandthesnowisstillfalling.

具象描寫：

現(xiàn)在天黑了，雪還在落下，一團(tuán)團(tuán)的雪花隨風(fēng)飄落。

It'sdarknowandthesnowisstillfalling,clumpsofwetflakesdriftingwindlessly

down.

2.概括描寫：

雪花飄落在地上。Snowflakesdriftedtoearth.

具象描寫：

雪花在微風(fēng)中懶洋洋地雪花飄落在地上，公園像是被一層厚厚的白色毯子覆蓋。

Snowflakesdriftedlazilytoearthongentlebreeze.Theparkwascoveredinathick

blanketofwhite.

4.關(guān)于星星star的環(huán)境描寫

練習(xí)：補(bǔ)充翻譯具象描寫的內(nèi)容。

1.概括描寫：

在晴朗的夜晚，天空中布滿了星星。Onaclearnight,theskyappearstobefilled

withstars.

具象描寫：

在晴朗的夜晚，天空中布滿了星星。星星像一顆顆美麗的珍珠在夜空中閃爍。

Onaclearnight,theskyappearstobefilledwithstars.

Thestarslikebeautifulpearlstwinkleinthenightsky.

3.概括描寫：

天上的星星在照耀。Thestarsareshininginthesky.

具象描寫：

天上的星星在照耀，就像鉆石般鑲嵌在這深藍(lán)的夜空

中。

Shiningthesky,thestarsarelikediamondsinlaidinthedeepbluesky.

5.關(guān)于黑夜dark的環(huán)境描寫

練習(xí)：補(bǔ)充翻譯具象描寫的內(nèi)容。

概括描寫：

（高考真題）黑夜降臨了。Itwasgettingdark.

具象描寫1：

黑夜降臨了。一片漆黑立刻籠罩了整個(gè)森林。更糟糕的是，氣溫突然急劇下降。

Itwasgettingdark.Immediately,anabsolutedarkness

ruledtheforest.Evenworse,thetemperaturesuddenly

droppeddramatically.

具象描寫2：

天很黑。太陽(yáng)躲在山后，在黑暗中很難看到任何東西。

Itwasdark.Thesunhidhimselfbehindthemountains,makingithardtoseeanything

inthethickdarkness.

具象描寫3：

那一刻，除了天空中的幾顆星星發(fā)出微弱的光外，天已經(jīng)完全黑了。

Atthatmoment,itwaspletelydarkexceptthefaintlightgivenoutbyafewstarsin

thesky.

6.關(guān)于安靜quiet的環(huán)境描寫

練習(xí)：補(bǔ)充翻譯具象描寫的內(nèi)容。

概括描寫：

很安靜。Itwasquiet.

具象描寫1:

很安靜，除了我自己的心跳，一點(diǎn)聲音也聽(tīng)不到。

ItwasquietNotasinglesoundcouldbeheardexceptmyownheartbeat.

具象描寫2：

夜很靜，只有鐘擺滴答滴答地響。

Thenightwasveryquietexceptforthetickingofthe

clock.

具象描寫3：

班上所有的同學(xué)都在寫作業(yè)，沒(méi)有任何人發(fā)出響聲，安

靜得連根針掉在地上都能聽(tīng)得見(jiàn)。

Allthestudentsintheclasswerewritingthehomework,andnoonemadeasound.It

wassoquietthatyoucouldhearapindrop.

7.關(guān)于祥和的apeaceful的環(huán)境描寫

概括描寫：

那是一個(gè)祥和的地方。Itwasapeacefulplace.

具象描寫1：

當(dāng)我沐浴在陽(yáng)光下，感覺(jué)琥珀色的陽(yáng)光親吻著我

的每一寸肌膚。

WhenIwasbathedinthesunlight,itfeltlikethe

amberlikesunshinewaskissingeveryinchofmy

skin.

具象描寫2：

霧蒙蒙的山上點(diǎn)綴著小農(nóng)場(chǎng)和村莊。

Mistcoveredmountainsweredottedwithsmallfarmsandvillages.

具象描寫3：

我的腳步聲只伴隨著優(yōu)雅地隨風(fēng)飄揚(yáng)的蘆葦。

Thesoundofmyfootstepswasacpaniedonlybythegracefullywavingreeds.

二、素材積累:

1.表達(dá)天氣變化

1.astormynight暴風(fēng)雨之夜

2.beburiedinsnow深埋在雪中

3.thewinddrivensnow風(fēng)雪交加

4.thebrightbluesky明朗的天空

5.intheblindingrain在茫茫大雨中

6.coolandrefreshingbreeze涼爽清新的風(fēng)

7.Thefogisbeginningtolift.霧正在散去。

8.Thesnowsoonmeltedaway.雪不久就化了。

9.Thestormisatitsheight.暴風(fēng)雨下得正猛。

lO.Therainwettedhisclothes.雨水弄濕了他的衣服。

11.Thewindiswhippingatmyhair.風(fēng)吹打著我的頭發(fā)。

12.Theneedlecoldwindpiercedhisface.寒風(fēng)如針,刺著他的臉。

13.1fsrainingcatsanddogsoutsidenow.現(xiàn)在外面下著傾盆大雨。

14.Thescorchingsunbeatdownonmyhead.火辣辣的太陽(yáng)照在我的頭頂。

15.Thatnight,thetemperaturedroppedbelowzero.那天晚上，溫度降至！J了零度以下。

2.描繪自然景色

1.thebeautifulscenery美景

2.thelimitlessgreengrass無(wú)邊的草地

3.thebeautyofthenature大自然的美

4.thegreatsightsalongtheway沿途的美景

5.thecountlessstarsinthecurtainofnights夜幕下無(wú)數(shù)的星星

6.thenightwithfreshairandmillionsofstars空氣清新滿天繁星的夜晚

7.Thebeautifulsceneryisbeyonddescription.這美麗的景色難以用語(yǔ)言形容。

8.Thenightsettledin.夜幕降臨。

9.Thesunsankbehindthehills.太陽(yáng)落到山背后去了。

lO.Thelotusflowersarenowinfullbloom.荷花正在盛開(kāi)。

11.Moonbeamsstreamedinthroughawindow.月光從一扇窗戶傾瀉而入。

12.However,thelakesshonelikeglassinthesettingsunandlookedwonderful.然而,

湖水在落日的余暉下閃亮如鏡，景色迷人。

13.Therewasalmostnowind-onlytheflamesofourfireforpany.幾乎沒(méi)有風(fēng)，只有

篝火相伴。

14.Therosegivesoutasweetsmell,whichpromisestobeaperfectday.玫瑰花散發(fā)

出香甜的味道，預(yù)示著美好的一天開(kāi)始了。

15.Inthedistance,wecouldseethemistycloudrisingfromthelake,whichremains

freshinmymemory.在遠(yuǎn)處，我們可以看到霧靄從湖的上方升起，那個(gè)情景我

至今記憶猶新。

3.氣氛氛圍

1.Aheavysilenceblanketedtheroom.（描寫房間的寂靜）

2.Ahushfellupontheclass.（描寫教室寂靜）

3.Thehousesmelledmustyanddamp,andalittlesweet,asifitwerehaunted

bytheghostsoflongdeadcookies.（描寫屋內(nèi)環(huán)境）

4.Anabsolutedarknessruledtheforest.（描寫黑暗）

5.Itdidn'ttaketoolongfortheforesttobeenvelopedindarkness.6苗寫森林

變暗）

6.Therewereadeathlystillnessinthehouse.（描寫死寂）

7.Therewasamomentofsinistersilence,thenamultitudinousstirringofthe

leaves.（描

寫暴風(fēng)雨前

的死寂）

8.Anairof

sadness

settledover

the

group.（描

寫悲傷氛圍）

9.Itsuddenly

seemed

frighteningl

yquiet.The

airwaschargedwithtension.（描寫緊張氣氛）

10.Thesilenceoftheforestwasrippedapartbyasoundlikearoaringwind.

（描寫狂風(fēng)打破寂靜）

11.Therewasnoviewanywhere,nothingbuttheoppressiveandsilentscrub.

（描寫死寂的樹(shù)林）

4.江河湖海、山川峽谷、植物草地

12.Thegurgleofthestreamsoothedme.（描寫潺潺流水）

13.Aclearlittlestreamranquitemerrilyalongitsnarrowway.（描寫歡快的溪

流）

14.Thefragrantflowersattractedlotsofbirds,lingeringaroundthem.（描寫花

香鳥(niǎo)語(yǔ)）

15.Thelakemirroredtheskyabove,bothofthemblamelessblueand

shimmering.（描寫天空映襯下的湖面）

16.Thewaterwasdeepblueandsunlightglitteredonitslookingglassclear

surface.（描寫波光粼粼的水面）

17.Dawnsentshimmeringraysovertheplacidocean,bestowingagoldenpath

fromtheshoretothehorizon.（描寫黎明的海洋）

18.Theexpanseofbluewaterstretchedineverydirectiontothehorizon,frothy

waveslappingatasandbeach.（描寫海水拍打沙灘）

19.Thebeachwasbathedintheamberlikesunshine.（描寫陽(yáng)光下的沙灘）

20.Rippingcrystalstreamsstretchedawayintothedistancefromthetowering

bluffslikethebeautifulstreamersofafairymaid.（寸苗寫瀑布）

21.Themeadowwasagloriousexpansesofgrassandmeadowflowers,grass

rustlinggentlyinthebreeze.（描寫青青草地）

22.Patchesofweedsdottedthemountainside.（描寫雜草）

23.Themeadowflowedlikeaseaofgreenoverthehill,studdedwiththe

purpleofthistles.（描寫漫山的花草）

24.Thepeaklookedtohimexactlylikeagiantfist,withthethumbsticking

straightup.（描寫山峰）

25.Thevalleyseemedtogrowquieterandquieterashesatandstaredatthe

brightdelicateblueness.（描寫山谷的寂靜）

5.夜晚與月光

1.Themoonappearedmomentarily,herdiskwasbloodredandhalfovercast:

sheseemedtothrowmeabewildered,drearyglance,andburiedherself

againinstantlyinthedeepdriftofcloud.

月亮出現(xiàn)了片刻，她的月輪略帶點(diǎn)血紅色，半遮著臉：她似乎向我投去

一個(gè)迷茫、沉悶的目光，然后立刻又把自己埋在了深深的云朵里。

2.Thenthemoonappearedinallitselegantwhiteness,lighteningupthe

cloudlesssky;finally,movingmoreslowly,itcastonthesurfaceoftheriver

alargeparchoflightwhichglitteredlikeaninfinityofstars.

然后，月亮在其其優(yōu)雅的白色光芒的映襯下出現(xiàn)，照亮了無(wú)云的天空；

最后，它慢慢地移動(dòng)，在河面上投下一大片光，像無(wú)數(shù)星星一樣閃閃發(fā)

光。

3.Theoncereddishandpurpleskytransformedintoavastexpanseof

jetblackthatengulfedthetown.Acanopyofluminousstarsmaterialized

amongsttheoceanofblackness.

曾經(jīng)泛著紅紫色的天空轉(zhuǎn)變成了烏黑得一大片，黑夜吞沒(méi)了整個(gè)城鎮(zhèn)，

黑暗的海洋中出現(xiàn)了明亮的星星。

4.Thelingeringsunlightwasobliteratedbytherapidlyfallingnight,

resemblingapitchblackcurtaindrapedoverthesky.

逗留在天際的最后一縷陽(yáng)光被迅速落下的夜幕擦除，就像是天空被一層

漆黑的幕布覆蓋。

5.Themoonundersiegebystarsseemedtolightenthenightbringing

forthstarsthatshoneandhungintheblackness.Theneverendingblackness

consumedeverything.

被群星圍困的月亮似乎照亮了黑夜，帶來(lái)了在黑暗中閃耀和懸掛著的群

星。無(wú)盡的黑暗吞噬了一切。

6.Thenightbroughtanunrelentingdarknessthatwrappedtheireyesand

mouths,buryingthembeneathastarlesssky.Theairhadthickened;the

temperaturedroppedandnowherewasthereafortingsound.

夜晚帶來(lái)了一片無(wú)情的黑暗，包裹著他們的眼睛和嘴巴，把他們浸沒(méi)在

一片沒(méi)有星星的天空下?？諝庾儩饬?，溫度下降了，沒(méi)有一個(gè)地方有令

人欣慰的聲音。

三、綜合模擬演練

1.（2023?廣東深圳?統(tǒng)考一模）

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短

文。

Ihadbeenactinginschoolforafewyears.WhenIgotaroughroleinaplay,I,

onlyajuniorinmyhighschool,wasexcitedthatmyinspiringdramateacherand

directorhadtrustedmewiththepart.

WehadlittletimetoprepareandIwouldneverforgetreadingthelinesforthe

firsttime.Atfirstthedialoguewaslively,butthenitbecamequitelongandboring.To

mysurprise,mycharacterhadonedisrespectfullinethatplainedabouthisbadluck.I

hadneversaidsomethinglikethatonstagebefore.UnfortableasIfeltaboutit,Ihad

neverthoughtofmakingmyselfheardtomakeachange.Iwasweak,wentsilent,and

acceptedthelineasitwas.

Atourfirstrehearsal（彩科F）,Iwhispered,thelineandhopedwithsomany

distractionsonstagethatthedirectorwouldn'tnotice.Luckily,shedidn't.Overthree

wildweeksofrehearsals,IconvincedmyselfthatIcouldkeepfakingit.Then,when

thecurtainfinallyrosewithanaudience,maybeIwouldfeelfineaboutsayingthe

linejustonceasloudlyasIcould.

Onthenightoftheopendressrehearsal,Iwasnervoustoseeanoldcouple,the

Ehlers,seatedinthehall.TheywereclosefriendsofourfamilyandIhadnoideathey

wouldbethere.Whenthebigmomentarrived,withnervousnessracingthroughmy

body,Iwentforit.Irememberthemomentquiteclearly.WhereIstood.Howit

sounded.HowIfelt.

Aftertheshow,theEhlersmetmewithcheers,awarmhug,andsomebrief

dialogueoftheirown.Whiletalkingwiththem,Iwasoverwhelmedbymixedfeelings

ofregretandshame.

注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

“Jason,thatwasquitesomelanguage.Yousurprisedus,"Mrs.Ehlerslookedat

Isaidgoodbyetothecoupleandwaitedinthedramaroomuntilourdirector

appeared.

2.（2023?全國(guó)?高三專題練習(xí)）1

閱讀下而材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的

短文。

TheBiggestDogontheMountain

Welikedhikingtogether.Today,wewerelookingforatrailoverWallace

Mountain.

"It'sbeenoveranhour,^^saidJesse,mynineteenyearoldson."Doyouthinkthe

trailstillexists?”Wehadexploredseveralpathsbutwithnoluck.Wepushedthrough

weedsmidcalfhighforus,butneckhighforourrustybrowndog,Shadow.Onceina

while,wewouldcallShadowbackwhenshewasattractedbythepleasantsmellof

flowers.Nolongerslimandbouncingwithenergy,Shadowwasthesizeofalarge

housecat,andalwayscontenttocurluponthecouchbesideoneofus.

Suddenly,weheardwhatsoundedlikemanydogsbarkinginthedistance,an

unusualsoundinthewildernessaroundus.Curious,weclimbedtheridge（山脈），

onlytofindwhatseemedlikeadogfactory.Smalldogs,bigdogs,browndogs,and

dogsIcan'tevendescribepouredout.Thehounds（獵狗）hittheground,sniffingthe

airandturningtofaceus.Beforelong,theywentdownfromtheirsideofthe

mountain.Jesseshotanalarmedglanceatmebeforeturningtocallinafirmvoice,

“Shadow,ehere,stay.”

Ipattedmypockets,feelingforthepepperspray（防3良噴霧），sosmallitwould

neverworkagainstsomanyanimals.Iturned,surveyingthenearbybrushfora

potentialweapon.Withthehelpofadrenaline（腎上腺素）,Ibrokeofftwothick

branchesfromatreeandrushedtoJesse'sside,“Hereyouare!”"OK,"hesaid,"Dad,

theyareingtous."Mymouthwentdry.IglancedoveratJesse,hislipspinched（夾緊）

tight.

Thepackemergedfromthevalley,marchingstraighttowardus.Thedogsinthe

leadwerenowcloseenoughforustoseethatmostofthemwerethreetimeslarger

thanShadow.Withdeepgrowls（怒呼L聲）,theyranstraightforus.Jesseswallowed

hardandlookedatme.

注意：

1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2,請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

Shadow'sbackfurrose.

Surprisingly,theentiremassofdogsturnedtailandfled.

3.（2023春?安徽阜陽(yáng)?高三統(tǒng)考一模）

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短

文。

Mr.BirkwaywasmyEnglishteacher,andwhenImethimonthatfirstdayinmy

newschool,Ididn'tknowwhattomakeofhim.Hewasoneofthoseenergetic

teacherswholovedhissubjecthalftodeathandwalkedabouttheroomdramatically,

wavinghisarmsandpatting（輕拍）peopleontheback.

Hesaid,"Brilliant!"and"Wonderful!,9and“Terrific!”Hewasquitetallandslim,

andhisbushyblackhairmadehimlooklikeawildnativeattimes.Hehaddeep

browncoweyesthatsparkled（閃耀）allovertheplace,andwhenheturnedtheseeyes

onyou,youfeltasifhiswholepurposeinlifewastostandthereandlistentoyou,

andyoualone.

Midwaythroughthefirstclass,Mr.Birkwayaskedifwehadoursummerjournals.

Ihadn'taclueastowhathewastalkingabout.Someoftheotherstudentsstarted

noddinglikecrazy,andMr.Birkwayspreadouthisarmsandsaid,“Wonderfill!”He

receivedthejournalsexcitedly."Thankyou,“hesaidtoeachjoumalgiver.

Iwasextremelyworried.Ihadnojournal.

WhenhegottoBethAnn'sdesk,Mr.Birkwayliftedupherjournalandlooked

inside."Ididn'twritemuch,“Annsaid."Infact,IcanhardlyrememberwhatIwrote

aboutatall.”

“Don'tworryaboutittoomuch,"Mr.Birkwaysaidwithasmile.“Nexttime,try

writingaboutsomethingyoulikeaplace,aroom,aperson.Justwritewhateveresto

mind.^^Thenhemovedon.

OntopofMaryLou'sdeskweresixjournals.Mr.Birkwaystoodopenmouthed

andsaid,“Isit-canitbe-Shakespeare?"Hecountedthejournals.“Six!

Brilliant!^^

ChristyandMegan,twogirlswhohadtheirownclubcalledtheGGP(whatever

thatmeant),werewhisperingoverontheothersideoftheroomandcasting

disapprovinglooksinMaryLou'sdirection.MaryLoukeptherhandontopofthe

journalsasMr.Birkwayreachedforthem.Inalowvoiceshesaid,"Idon'twantyou

toreadthem.^^

注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

“What?”Mr.Birkwaysaid.uNotreadthem?”

BythetimeMr.Birkwaygottomydesk,myheartwasbeatingsohardthatI

thoughtitmightjumpstraightoutofmychest.

4.（2022?全國(guó)?模擬預(yù)測(cè)）

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的

短文。

ItseemedlikeithadonlybeenafewyearsagothatIndigohadfirstrushed

throughourdoor.Herunderbellyshowedthesignsofthelittershe'drecently

delivered.Shehadanosefortrouble.Ononeoccasion,Ihadehometofindthatshe'd

eatenafivepoundbagofflour.Shewascoveredinwhitepowder,andflourpawprints

wereeverywhere,including,incredibly,onthecountertops（臺(tái)板）.Iaskedthedog

whatthehellhadhappened,andIndigojustlookedatmewithaglancethatsaid,I

cannotimaginewhatyouarereferringto.

Timeracedby.Ourchildrengrewupandwentofftouniversity.Themirror,

whichhadreflectedayoungmumwhenIndigofirstarrived,nowshowedawomanin

latemiddleage.Ihadsurgeryforcataracts（白內(nèi)障）.Ibegantolosemyhearing.We

allturnedgrey:me,myspouse（酉己偶）,thedog.

InAugust2017,1tookIndigoforonelastwalk.Shewasslowandunsteadyon

herpaws.Shelookedupatmesadly.Youdidsayyou'dtakecareofmewhenthe

timecame,shesaid.Youpromised,Jenny.Shediedthatmonth,atennisballbyher

side.Tdownedasuccessionofdogssince1964,eachoneofthemawitnesstoa

particularstageofmylife.ButwiththelossofIndigo,allthatwasover.Thedaysof

mydogs,Inowunderstood,weredoneatlast.

Butonemorning,asIwaspassingtheBed'n'Biscuitinmycar,somehowI

pulledover.Icouldatleastlayeyesupononecutedog,atinysweetthing.Whatharm

coulditdo?Shehadasoftface.

Notlongafter,IgotacallfromtheBed'n'Biscuit,ourdogdaycare（日托所）.

Oneoftheircustomerswasleaving,andherdogwhichwastheoneIsawthat

morning,Chloe,neededahome.Givenourrecentloss,theyasked,mightourfamily

beinterestedinadoptingher?

注意：

1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好；

Paragraph1：

Itoldthemthatweweresorrybutwewouldn'tbeadoptinganymoredogs.

Paragraph2：

WhenChloeenteredourhouse,shewascautious,uncertain.

5.（2022?湖南師大附中三模）