第29講溫馨家庭篇

目錄

知識(shí)點(diǎn)1五大萬能句型2

知識(shí)點(diǎn)2高頻金句3

溫馨家庭類讀后續(xù)寫是高考英語常考題型，主要圍繞家庭親情主題展開，注重情感表達(dá)與細(xì)節(jié)描寫。主要聚焦家庭

成員間的關(guān)愛互動(dòng)，如母親節(jié)驚喜、親子矛盾化解、長輩技能傳承等，常以節(jié)日驚喜、日常矛盾為情節(jié)起點(diǎn)。情節(jié)構(gòu)建

主要是：通常包含起因（家庭日常或節(jié)日）、發(fā)展（沖突或溫情事件）、高潮（矛盾解決或情感升華）三部分，需緊密

銜接。

“愛的和解”是溫馨家庭主題中頗為常見的情節(jié)之%故事中的親人往往因某些事件而產(chǎn)生隔廢，隨后通過偶然發(fā)

生的事件或人為創(chuàng)造的契機(jī)實(shí)現(xiàn)和解。這一情節(jié)通常涵蓋“矛盾出現(xiàn)”、“關(guān)系修復(fù)”和“愛的表達(dá)”三個(gè)核心部分。

在寫作中，通常有細(xì)節(jié)描寫：運(yùn)用動(dòng)作細(xì)節(jié)（如擁抱、撫摸）、環(huán)境烘托（陽光、燈光）強(qiáng)化情感，通過物品象征

（舊自行車）或行為延續(xù)（定期家庭日）深化主題。

另外，情感表達(dá)也非常重要。結(jié)尾需直接抒發(fā)對父母的感激之情，可使用比喻（如“潮水般的內(nèi)疚”）或環(huán)境描寫

（如“陽光灑滿客廳”）渲染氛圍。

/一1.五大萬能句式

溫馨家庭篇/矛盾出現(xiàn)

2.高頻金句關(guān)系修復(fù)

愛的表達(dá)

知識(shí)點(diǎn)1五大萬能句型

萬能句式1：矛盾出現(xiàn)，情感疏離

句式：Eversince,wehadstoppedtalkingabout

（替換，，”為事件+話題，體現(xiàn)關(guān)系斷裂）

例句：Eversincetheargumentaboutmycareerchoice,wehadstoppedtalkingaboutmyfuture.

（自從那次關(guān)于職業(yè)選擇的爭吵后，我們就不再談?wù)撐业奈磥砹?。?/p>

仿寫句1；自從那次我摔壞了爺爺?shù)呐f懷表后，我們之間就再也沒提過家族往事。

EversinceIbrokeGrandpa'soldpocketwatch,wehadstoppedtalkingaboutfamilystories.

仿寫句2：自從弟弟被收養(yǎng)后，我就不再和父母分享學(xué)校里的事了。

Eversincemylittlebrotherwasadopted,Ihadstoppedtalkingaboutschoolwithmyparents.

仿寫句3：自從媽媽開始加班后，我們家就再也沒有一起吃過晚飯了。

EversinceMomstartedworkinglate,wehadstoppedtalkingabouthavingdinnertogether.

萬能句式2：事件契機(jī)，觸動(dòng)心弦

句式：ItwasthatfinallymademerealizehowmuchImeantto.

（強(qiáng)調(diào)某個(gè)具體事件成為情感轉(zhuǎn)折點(diǎn)）

（列句：Itwasthephotoalbumshekep:underherbed（hatfinallymademerealizehowmuchImeanttoher.

（正是她藏在床下的那本相冊，讓我終于明白我在她心中有多重要。）

仿寫句I：是爸爸深夜為我縫補(bǔ)校服的背影，讓我意識(shí)到我對他有多重要。

ItwasDad'ssilhouettesewingmyschooluniformatnightthatfinallymademerealizehowmuchImeanttohim.

仿寫句2：是妹妹偷偷為我畫的生日賀艮讓我明白她一直把我當(dāng)榜樣。

Itwasthebirthdaycardmylittlesistersecretlydrewformethatfinallymademerealizehowmuch1meanttoher.

仿寫句3：是奶奶堅(jiān)持每年都為我織一條圍巾，讓我感受到她從未說出II的愛。

ItwasGrandma'straditionofknittingmeascarfeveryyearthatfinallymademerealizehowmuchImeanttoher.

萬能句式3：主動(dòng)修復(fù)，打破沉默

句式：Itookadeepbreathandreachedfor,hopingitwasn'ttoolatetosay.

（體現(xiàn)鼓起勇氣、主動(dòng)和解的心理過程）

例句：ItookadeepbreathandreachedfbrtheletterI'dwritten,hopingitwasn'ttoolatetosay'Tmsorry.”

（我深吸一口氣，拿起了那封寫好的信，希望說“對不起”還不算太晚。）

仿寫句1：我深吸一口氣，拿起電話撥通了媽媽的號(hào)碼，希望還能來得及說“我想你了

ItookadeepbreathandreachedfbrthephonetocallMom,hopingitwasn'ttoolatetosay“Imissyou?

仿寫句2：我鼓起勇氣打開了那本日記，希望還能來得及告訴她“我一直都懂

Itookadeepbreathandreachedfbrthediary,hopingitwasn'ttoolatetosay"I'vealwaysunderstood.''

仿寫句3：我拿起那張全家福，走向爺爺?shù)姆块g，希望還能來得及說“我以你為榮

Itookadeepbreathandreachedfbrthefamilyphoto,headingtoGrandpa'sroom,hopingitwasn'ttoolatetosay"I'mproud

ofyou.”

萬能句式4：愛的表達(dá)，行勝于言

句式：Withoutaword,handedme,andIkneweverythingwouldbealright.

（強(qiáng)調(diào)“無聲勝有聲”的親情瞬間，極具畫面感）

例句：Withoutaword.Momhandedmeherfavoriteteacup,andIkneweverythingwouldbealright.

（媽媽一句話沒說，把她的茶杯遞給了我，我知道一切都會(huì)好起來的。）

仿寫句1：父親默默遞給我他珍藏的工具箱，我知道他終于認(rèn)可了我。

Withoutaword.Dadhandedmehistreasuredtoolbox,andIkneweverythingwouldbealright.

仿寫句2：奶奶輕輕遞給我那條舊圍巾，我知道她原諒了我。

Withoutaword,Grandmahandedme（heoldscarf,andIkneweverythingwouldbealright.

仿寫句3：妹妹把她的存錢罐抱過來放在我床邊，我知道她在用自己的方式說“我愛你”。

Withoutaword,mylittlesisterhandedmeherpiggybank,andIkneweverythingwouldbealright.

萬能句式5：情感升華，親情永恒

句式：Thatmomenttaughtmethatfamilyisn'tabout—it'sabout.

（用于結(jié)尾段，進(jìn)行主題升華，突出親情本質(zhì)）

例句：Thatmomenttaughtmethatfamilyisn'taboutneverarguing—it'saboutalwayscomingback.

（那一刻讓我明白，家人之間不在于從不爭吵，而在于永遠(yuǎn)愿意回歸彼此。）

仿寫句1：那一刻我懂得，家不是沒有矛盾的地方，而是無論走多遠(yuǎn)都想回去的地方。

Thatmomenttaughtmethatfamilyisn'taboutavoidingconflicts—il'sabouthavingaplaceyoualwayswanttoreturnto.

仿寫句2：我終于明白，親情不在于天天見面，而在于心里永遠(yuǎn)有對方的位置。

Thatmomenttaughtmethatfamilyisn'taboutseeingeachothereveryday—it'saboutalwayshavingaplaceinyourheart.

仿寫句3：現(xiàn)在我明白，家的意義不在于完美無缺，而在于彼此包容與守護(hù)。

Thatmomenttaughtmethatfamilyisn'taboutbeingperfect—it'saboutprotectingandforgivingeachother.

知識(shí)點(diǎn)2高頻金句

矛盾出現(xiàn)

場景1：突發(fā)變故

1.Dad'sbusinessdidn'tgowell,whichmadeithardforthefamilytomakeendsmeet.

爸爸的生意不好，家庭很難維持收支平衡。

2.Herheartmissedabeatwhenshefeltherleftringfingerabitlighter.

當(dāng)她感覺到左手無名指輕了一點(diǎn)時(shí)，她心里一震。

3.1wasnotinthemoodtobeonstagewiththeonenewlyadoptedbymyparents.

我不想和最近被我父母收養(yǎng)的那個(gè)人一起上臺(tái)表演。

4.Everythingaboutmovingdaywasapuzzle.Ididn'tknowanythingaboutournewbuildingonthestreet.

當(dāng)她的畫筆平穩(wěn)地在紙上移動(dòng)時(shí)，雛菊活了起來。

15.Hehandedheralargebox,whichshecarefullyplacedonthedesknearmybed.

他遞給她一個(gè)大盒子，她小心翼翼地把它放在我床邊的桌子上。

16.Iexcitedlyturnedthetapon,brushingthecombwithausedtoothbrushashardasIcould.

我興奮地打開水龍頭，用?把用過的牙刷拼命地刷著梳子。

愛的表達(dá)

場景1：大聲說愛

17.Withhiseyestwinkling,hecriedout,loveyou,Mom.”

他眼睛一閃一閃地，大聲喊道：“我愛你，媽媽?！?/p>

18.“Iloveyou.Mom,“1whisperedtoherwithtearsstreamingdownmycheeks.

“我愛你，媽媽?！拔业吐晫λf，淚水順著臉頰流下來。

19.1pickedupthereceiver,andontheotherend,atinyvoicecame,loveyou,Daddy.”

我拿起聽筒，另一端，一個(gè)微小的聲音說著：“我愛你，爸爸?！?/p>

20.MomheldthedressupbeforeLucyandsaidinanapprovingtone,44Youknowwhat?Ithinkitlooksnice.”

媽媽把這件連衣裙舉到Lucy面前，用贊許的語氣說：“你知道嗎？我覺得它看起來很漂亮。”

場景2：行勝于言

21.Wesmiledandheldeachother'shands.

我們相視一笑，握住了對方的手。

22.Deeplytouched.Dadheldontotheflowers,gatheringusintohisarms.

爸爸深受感動(dòng)，緊緊地提著手里的花，將我們攬入懷中。

23.Hugginghimtightly,themotherknewthathersonwouldtastethebittersweetnessinhischocolate.

母親緊緊地?fù)肀е膬鹤?，她知道他?huì)嘗到巧克力中苦甜參半的滋味。

練習(xí)

一結(jié)合以上所學(xué)表達(dá)，翻譯句子。

1.聽完我的話，爸爸把我攬入懷中。

Afterhearingmywords,myfather.

2.當(dāng)媽媽看到修復(fù)好的碗時(shí)，她流下了淚水。

Whenmymothersawtherestoredbowl,therewere.

3.媽媽怒沖沖地盯著我，問我為什么決定退學(xué)。

,mymomaskedwhy1haddecidedtoquitschool.

4.最后，姐大聲喊到：“我討厭你！”然后跑出了房間。

Finally,she,“Ihateyou!”,andranoutoftheroom.

5.他沖到我跟前，臉上的笑容像鉆石一樣閃閃發(fā)光。

He,withasmileonhisfaceshininglikeadiamond.

6.一聽到這個(gè)令人鼓舞的消息，我們都笑了，并且握住了對方的手.

Onhearingthisencouragingnews,we.

7.聽了他的話，我被一種溫暖的感覺包闈，所以我緊緊地?fù)肀Я怂?/p>

Hearinghiswords,Iwasoverwhelmedbyafeelingofwarmth,so.

8.我找了一個(gè)借口試圖蒙混過關(guān)，但是媽媽的眼神似乎在說她已經(jīng)知道了事實(shí)。

I,tryingtomuddlethrough,butMom'seyesseemedtosayshehadalreadyknownthetruth.

二結(jié)合以上所學(xué)，補(bǔ)全段落內(nèi)容。

On30thJune2021,1wasonmygraduationtripinThailand.MysistercalledmetosaythatGrandmawouldhaveaheartsurgery

on2ndJuly.ThinkingbacktothatdaywhenIquarreledwithGrandma,Ihesitated.

一、短語翻譯及詳解

1.gatheredmeintohisarms

翻譯：把我擁入他的懷中

詳解：gaiher有“聚集；收攏”含義，這里形象體現(xiàn)出將人用力抱進(jìn)懷里的動(dòng)作，常用來描繪親人、愛人之間親昵

的肢體互動(dòng)場景，比如久別重逢時(shí)的擁抱。

2.tcarsstreamingdownherchecks/face

翻譯：淚水順著她的臉頰/臉流淌下來

詳解：stream作動(dòng)詞有“流動(dòng)；涌流”意思，tearsstreaming...是獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)，用現(xiàn)在分詞streaming體現(xiàn)淚水

持續(xù)流淌的狀態(tài)，生動(dòng)展現(xiàn)人物因情緒（如悲傷、感動(dòng)等）而流淚的畫面。

3.Glaringatme

翻譯：怒視著我

詳解：glare是“怒目而視；瞪視”，強(qiáng)調(diào)帶著憤怒、不滿的情緒去看，常出現(xiàn)在矛盾、沖突場景里，比如家人間因

誤會(huì)產(chǎn)生爭執(zhí)時(shí)的眼神表現(xiàn)。

4.criedout

翻譯：大喊；叫嚷

詳解：cry本身有“哭；呼喊"意思，cryout更突出“大聲喊出”，可用于情緒激動(dòng)（如焦急、憤怒、驚喜等）時(shí)

的發(fā)聲，像發(fā)現(xiàn)意外情況、表達(dá)演烈訴求等場景。

5.rusheduptome

翻譯：沖向我；朝我奔過來

詳解：rush是“沖；奔”，upto有“向；朝”指向性，整體描繪出快速、急切地朝著某人移動(dòng)的動(dòng)作，比如親人

久別后急切相見，或是遇到緊急情況時(shí)的奔赴動(dòng)作。

6.smiledandheldeachother'shands

翻譯：微笑著握住彼此的手

詳解：簡潔呈現(xiàn)出溫馨、和睦的互動(dòng)畫面，常用來表現(xiàn)家人、朋友間化解矛盾后，或是共享美好時(shí)刻時(shí)的親昵、友

好舉動(dòng)。

7.1huggedhimtightly

翻譯：我緊緊地抱住他

詳解：lighUy是“緊緊地”，修飾hug（擁抱）這個(gè)動(dòng)作，突出擁抱時(shí)用力的程度，以此傳遞深厚的情感，像對親

人的不舍、愧疚后的和解等情緒都可用此表達(dá)。

8.madeupanexcuse

翻譯：編造一個(gè)借口

詳解：makeup有“編造；虛構(gòu)”意思，excuse是“借口；理由”，常出現(xiàn)在因不想做某事、掩蓋錯(cuò)誤等情況而編

造理由的語境中，比如家庭里孩子因調(diào)皮闖禍后，可能會(huì)編造借口。

二、段落內(nèi)容及詳解（先呈現(xiàn)原段落，再逐句詳解）

Afteralongstruggle.Idecidedtotaketheearliestflightbackhome,hwasmidnightwhenIarrivedatthehospital.Irushed

uptoGrandma'sroom.Seeingherpaleface,Iheldherhandswithtearsstreamingdownmychecks.Grandma,forcingasmile,

saidinatinyvoice,t4IamOK.It'sapitythatIruinedyourtrip."Ichoked,"No.Nothingcancomparewithyou.Wecanrestart

thistripafteryourrecovery.”

?逐句詳解：

Afteralongstruggle,Idecidedtotake(heearliestflightbackhome.

翻譯：經(jīng)過長時(shí)間的掙扎后，我決定乘坐最早的航班回家。

詳解：alongstruggle體現(xiàn)內(nèi)心糾結(jié)、權(quán)衡的過程，比如可能在外有事務(wù)，但因牽掛家人（這里結(jié)合后文是奶

奶）,經(jīng)過思想斗爭后選擇問家，lakeIheearliestflight突出急切想回家的心情。

ItwasmidnightwhenIarrivedatthehospital.

翻譯：我到達(dá)醫(yī)院的時(shí)候是午夜。

詳解：交代到達(dá)時(shí)間是midnight（午夜），營造出一種靜謐又帶著焦急的氛圍，也側(cè)面體現(xiàn)趕路的急切，顧不

上時(shí)間早晚。

IrusheduptoGrandma'sroom.

翻譯：我沖向奶奶的病房。

詳解：rushupto生動(dòng)展現(xiàn)出急切奔赴奶奶所在之處的動(dòng)作，體現(xiàn)對奶奶的擔(dān)憂、牽掛，想盡快見到奶奶的心情。

Seeingherpaleface,Iheldherhandswithtearsstreamingdownmycheeks.

翻譯：看到她蒼白的臉，我握住她的手，淚水順著我的臉頰流下來。

詳解：Seeing...是現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語，體現(xiàn)看到奶奶狀態(tài)后的艮J時(shí)反應(yīng)；heldherhands是親昵又帶著安撫、心

疼的動(dòng)作；tearsstreaming...用獨(dú)立主格展現(xiàn)因心疼、擔(dān)憂等情緒而流淚的狀態(tài)。

Grandma,forcingasmile,saidinatinyvoice,“IamOK.It'sapitythatIruinedyourtrip.''

翻譯：奶奶勉強(qiáng)擠出一絲微笑，用微弱的聲音說：“我沒事。很遺憾我毀了你的旅行?！?/p>

詳解：forcingasmile體現(xiàn)奶奶身體不適仍想讓“我”放心的心情，inatinyvoice因身體虛弱所以聲音微弱；

奶奶說的話體現(xiàn)出她的愧疚，覺得自己影響了“我”的行程。

Ichoked,"No.Nothingcancomparewithyou.Wccanrestartthistripafteryourrecovery.”

翻譯：我哽咽著說：“不。沒有什么能比得上你。等你康復(fù)后我們可以重新開啟這次旅行?！?/p>

詳解：choked體現(xiàn)“我”因情緒激動(dòng)（感動(dòng)、心疼、對奶奶的重視等）而哽咽的狀態(tài)；回應(yīng)奶奶的愧疚，強(qiáng)

調(diào)奶奶比旅行重要，康更后再旅行的話，展現(xiàn)家庭中愛的和解與對奶奶康復(fù)的期待。

高考真題演練

2025年6月新高考1卷（狗引發(fā)的兄弟風(fēng)波）

MywifeandIwantedtoshareournewhomewithfamilyandfriendsbyhostingasmallgatheringintheearlysummer.Shehad

preparedlotsofsnacks,whilemyjobwastohavethebackyardinorder.

Therewasplentyofspaceforthekidstorunandplay.TherewasjustonethingIhadn'tcountedon:Mybrotherchosetobring

hisdogToby,a50-poundballoffire.Thoughfriendly,hecouldeasilyknockovermyniece'ssmallboysandmysix-inonth-old

granddaughter.So,whenmybrothershowedup,IaskedhimtowatchTobyandkeephimoutside.

Myplanwasworkingoutjustfine.Tobywasusinguphisenergybyrunningbackandforthinthebackyardandgivingthekids

plentyofroom.Unexpectedly,aftersupper,theweatherchanged.Itstartedtorainandeveryonewentindoors.

Itwasanawkwardmoment.Ididn'twantTobytoberunningaroundinthehouse,andmybrotherwasn'thappywithdriving

homewithawetdog.Eventually,mybrotherdecidedtoleaveratherthanforcetheissue.

Afewdayspassed,andIhadn'theardanythingfrommybrother.Itextedhimandexpressedwishesforhimtocomeoutagain.

Hisreplycameasasurprise—ashock,actually:"Notachance.^^Clearly,hewasunhappyoverthewaywehadparted.Afterall,I

hadlefthimlittlechoice.Well,he'llgetoverit,Ireasoned.

Twomonthspassed.MywifesuggestedIgetintouchwithmybrother,butIresisted,thinkingheshouldcallfirst.However,my

conscience(良心)keptbotheringme.1triedtoputmyselfinmybrother'sshoes.Hewasfacinghealthissuesandhiswifeof

thirty-fiveyearshadpassedawayafewmonthsearlier.Tobywashisconstartcompanion,theonewhokepthimgoing.

注意：

(1)續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右；

(2)請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

Irealizeditwasmewhowasatfault.

Willithebiscuitsmywilehadmade,IanivedalmybiulhciSduur.

【答案】

Irealizeditwasmewhowasatfault.Ihadbeensofocusedonkeepingtheparlyundercontrol(hatIfailedtoconsiderhow

importantTobywastomybrotherduringthisdifficulttime.Mypridehadkeptmefromreachingout,andnowmonthshadpassed

withoutaproperconversation.Oneevening,Ipickedupthephoneandlefthimavoicemessage,apologizingformybehaviorand

askingifwecouldmeet.Tomyrelief,hecalledbackthenextday,andweagreedtogettogethersoon.

Withthebiscuitsmywifehadmade,Iarrivedatmybrother'sdoor.Heopeneditwithasurprisedsmile,andfbramoinenl,

neitherofusspoke.Thenwehugged—somethingwehadn'tdonesincebeforehiswifepassedaway.WesatontheporchwithToby

restingbesideus,andIhandedhimtheboxofbiscuits."Thankyou,“hesaidquietly.Wetalkedfbrhours,laughing,rememberingold

times,andslowlyrebuildingwhathadbeenlost.AsIwatchedTobygentlyresthisheadonmybrother'sleg,Iknewwcwerefinally

onthepathtohealing.

【解析】

【導(dǎo)語】本文以人物為線索展開，講述了作者因擔(dān)心弟弟的狗Toby影響聚會(huì)，要求弟弟看好狗，后因天氣變化導(dǎo)致弟弟

提前離開并心生芥蒂。兩個(gè)月后作者意識(shí)到自己的過錯(cuò)，主動(dòng)帶著妻子做的餅干登門道歉，最終兄弟倆和解的故事，展

現(xiàn)了親情中理解與包容的重要性。

【詳解】1.段落續(xù)寫：

①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“我意識(shí)到是我錯(cuò)了?！笨芍?，第一段可描寫作者反思自己在聚會(huì)上只顧控制局面，忽視了Toby

刈弟弟的重要性，因驕傲遲遲未聯(lián)系弟弟，最終通過電話留言道歉并約定見面。

②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“帶著妻子做的餅干，我來到了弟弟家門口。”才知，第二段可描寫弟弟開門時(shí)的驚訝與沉默，兄

弟倆擁抱和解，坐在門廊上談心，看著Toby依偎在笫弟腿邊，明白親嘴修復(fù)的意義。

2.續(xù)寫線索：反思過錯(cuò)一一電話留言道歌一一約定見面一一帶餅干登門一一擁抱沉默一一談心和解一一領(lǐng)悟親情

3.詞匯激活

行為類

①道歉：apologize/saysorry/makeanapology

②擁抱:hug/embiace

③重建：rebuild/restore/rcconstruct

情緒類：

①寬慰：rslief/comfort/satisfaclion/ease

②驚訝:surprised/shocked/astonished

【點(diǎn)睛】［高分句型1JIhadbeensofocusedonkeepingthepartyundercon:rolthat1failedtoconsiderhowimportantTobywasto

mybrotherduringthisdifficulttime.（運(yùn)用了“so...that…”引導(dǎo)結(jié)果狀語從句以及how引導(dǎo)賓語從句）

［高分句型2］Oneevening,Ipickedupthephoneandlefthimavoicemessage,apologizingformybehaviorandaskingifwecould

meet.（運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞短語作狀語以及if引導(dǎo)的賓語從句）

［高分句型31AsIwatchedTobygentlyresthisheadonmybrother'sleg,Iknewwewerefinallyonthepathtohealing.（運(yùn)用j'

as引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語從句以及省略that的賓語從句）

2021年6月新高考卷（母親節(jié)的驚喜）

AMOTHER'SDAYSURPRISE

ThetwinswerefilledwithexcitementastheythoughtofthesurprisetheywereplanningforMother'sDay.Howpleasedand

proudMotherwouldbewhentheybroughtherbreakfastinbed.TheyplannedtomakeFrenchtoastandchickenporridge.They

hadwatchedtheirmotherinthekitchen.Therewasnothingtoit.JennaandJeffknewexactlywhattodo.

Thebigdaycameatlast.Thealarmrangat6a.m.Thepairwentdownthestairsquietlytothekitchen.Theydecidedtoboil

theporridgefirst.TheyputsomericeintoapotofwaterandleftittoboilwhiletheymadetheFrenchtoastJeffbroketwoeggs

intoaplateandaddedinsomemilk.Jemafoundthebreadandputtwoslicesintotheeggmixture.Next,Jefturnedonthesecond

stoveburnertoheatupthefryingpan.EverythingwasgoingsmoothlyuntilJeffstartedfryingthebread.Thepanwastoohotand

（hebreadturnedblackwithinseconds.Jennathrewtheburntpieceintothesinkandputintheothersliceofbread.Thistime,she

turneddownthefiresoitcookednicely.

ThenJeffnoticedsteamshootingoutofthepotandthelidstarling（oshake.Thenextminute,theponidgeboiledoverand

putoutthefire.Jennapanicked.Thankfully,Jeffstayedcalmandturnedoffthegasquickly.Butthestovewasamessnow.Jenna

toldJeftocleanitupsotheycouldcontinuetocook（herestof（heporridge.ButJeffshandtouchedthehotburnerandhegavea

cryofpain.Jennamadehimputhishandincoldwater.Thenshecaughtthesmellofburning.Ohdear!Thepieceofbreadinthe

panhadturnedblackaswell.

注意：

1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為15（）左右：

2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

Paragraph1:Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappoinlment,theirfatherappeared.

Paragraph2:Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.

[范文1]

Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment^theirfatherappeared."Don'tpanic!,,hehandedeachonea

wettowel,helpingthemcleanthemessquickly.Afterthat,Jeffstammeredouttheirplan,hisfaceflushing.However,

Fatherlaughed,“Soundsgreat!Icanteachyoutocook."Atthis,JennaandJefalmostjumpedtotheirfeet,joyin

eyes.Underhiscarefulguidance,itdidn'ttakelongbeforetheFrenchtoastandchickenporridgewere

ready.Everythingsettled,Fatherleftthekitchen,promisingtokeeptheirsecret.

Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.Meeting（heirsmilingeyes,Motherfelt

confuseduntiltheypresentedthebreakfastandsaid“HappyMother'sDay”.Mothergavethematighthug,

“Unbelievable!Youcancook!It'sthebiggestsurpriseIhavereceived/*Herfacelitupwithhappiness,"Theyhave

knownhowtotakecareofothers."Fathersaidinresponsetoherexcitement,winkingatJennaandJef.Theycouldivt

helpgiggling.Itwasasecretonlysharedbetweenthem.

【范文2】

Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.Onelookandheknewwhattheywere

upto.Seeingtheirdisappointedfaces,hetoldthemtocleanupthekitchenwhilehehelpedthemmakebreakfastfor

Mother.Thetwinscheeredupanddidastold.Withinanhour,thekitchenwascleaned,andFatherhadmadesonicegg

sandwichesandcookedsomeporridge.Thenhewentbacktobedquietly.Thetwinspreparedthebreakfasttrayand

addedacardtheyhadmade.

Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.Theyhuggedherandshouted,“Happy

Mother'sDay,dearMummy!”Motherhuggedthetwins.Hereyeswidenedatthesightofthebreakfast.Sheshook

Fatherwhowaspretendingtosleep.Hefakedastonishmentwhenhesawthebreakfast.Motherbitintoasandwichand

saiditwasthebestshehadevertasted.Jeffimmediatelywantedtohaveabite.Jennacaughtherfather'seyeandthey

smiledateachothersecretly.

2021年6月浙江卷（少年打工記）

Mydad,George,onlyhadaneighthgradeeducation.Aquietman,hedidn'tunderstandmyworldofschoolactivities.From

age14,hewoikcd.Andliisdad,Albeit,luukllicniuncymydadearnedandusedillopayfamilyexpenses.

Ididn'treallyunderstandhisworldeither:Hewasalivestocktrucker,and1thoughtthat1wouldsurpass（超過）anythinghe

hadaccomplishedbythetime1walkedacrossthestageathighschoolgraduation.

Summersinthemid,70swerespentathomeshootingbaskets,hittingabaseball,orthrowingafootball,preparingfor

myfutureasaquarterbackonafootballteam.Inpoorweather,Ireadaboutsportsorpracticedmytrombone（長號(hào)）.

Thesummerbeforemyeighthgrade1wasoneofagroupofboysthataneighboringfarmerhiredtoworkinhisfield.He

explainedourbasictask,thetractorfiredupandwewereoff,ridingdownthefieldlookingforweedstospraywithchemicals.

Afterashortway,（hefarmerstoppedandpaintedataweedwhichwemissed.Thenwebeganagain.Thishappenedoverandover,

butwesoonlearnedtoidentifydifferentgrasseslikecockleburs,lamb's-quarters,foxtails,andthekingofweeds,theprettypurple

thistle.Itwastiringwork,butIlookedforwardtothepay,eventhoughIwasn'tsurehowmuchitwouldamountto.

Athome,mydadsaid,11Ajob'sabigsteptogrowingup.I'mgladyouwillbecontributingtothehousehold."Mydad'swords

mademerealizethatmyearningmightnotbeminetodowithaswished.

Mylaborslastedabouttwoweeks,andthefarmersaidtheremightbemorework,butIwasn'tinterested.1decideditwas

notfairthat1hadtocontributemymoney.

注意：

1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右：

2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

Paragraph1:Thepaydayarrivedatlast.

Paragraph2:1understoodimmediatelywhatmyparentswereworriedabout.

[范文1]

Thepaydayarrivedatlast.IwasgladdialIfinallygulllicpaymciilaflciwoikinghardfurlw。weeksWhilewalkingback

homewithanexcitedmind.Iconceivedmanyplansabouthowtodisposeofit.Ineededanewfootballbecausetheoldonewe

playedhadalreadywornout.Iintendedtopurchasemyfavoritechocolates.Uponapproachingthehouse,Inoticedmydadand

momstandingbesidetheoldtruck,lookingsadly.Ilseemedasifsomethingunpleasanthappened.4iHowmuchdowestillneedto

payforanewtruck?"askcdmymother/4Threehundreddollars,butwcjusthadtwohundredleft”

/understoodimmediatelywhatmyparentswereworriedabout.Really,thetruckmydaddroveoftenbrokedownontheway,

whichmademydadintrouble.Myparentshadintendedtobuyanewtruckbutcouldn'taffordit.Suddenly,IrealizedwhatI

shoulddo.Steppingforward,Isaid,“Dad,hereiswhatIreceivedfbrmywork.Ithinkitwouldhelpyoualittle."Alittlesurprised

atwhatIsaid,mymomhuggedmetightly.Thatnight,beforeIwenttobed,IthoughtIwouldtellthefarmerthenextdaythatI

wouldcontinuemywork,afterall1grewup.

[范文2]

ThepaydayarrivedatlastAwasdelightedtofinallygetthepaymentafterIworkedhardfortwoweeks.Onthewayhome

fullofexcitement,Ithoughtabouthowtomakeuseofthe"huge"sumofmoney.UIneededanewfootballinthefuture.I

whisperedtomyself.Approachingmyhouse,1noticedmydadandmomstandingbesidetheoldtruckofmyfamily,lookingsad.It

seemedasifsomethingwronghadhappened.€tHowmuchdowestillneedtopayfbranewtruck?”askedmymother.4tEight

hundreddollars,butwehadlittleleft”

/understoodimmediatelywhatmyparentswereworriedabout.Iknewthattruckalwaysbrokedown,bringalotoftroubleto

mydad.Myparentshadintendedtobuyanewtruckbutcouldn'tgotenoughmoneytoaffordit.Suddenly,IrealizedwhatI

shoulddo.Holdingthemoney,Isaid,uDad,hereiswhatIgotfbrmywork.Ihopeitwouldhelp."SurprisedatwhatIdid,mymom

huggedmetightly.Thatnight,beforeIwenttobed,IdecidedtocontinuemyworkifIcouldbecauseIlearnedthe(ruemeaningof

growingup.

2017年H月浙江卷(和媽媽去旅行)

Avacationwithmymother

Ihadaninterestingchildhood:Itwasfilledwithsurprisesandamusements,allbecauseofmymother—loving,sweet,

yetabsent-mindedandforgetful.Onestrangefamilytry}wetookwhenIwaseleventellsalotabouther.

Mytv/osetsofgrandparentslivedinColoradoandNorthDakota,andmyparentsdecidedtospendafewweeksdrivingto

(hoseslatesandseeingallthesightsalongtheway.Asthefirstdayofourtripapproached,David,myeight-year-oldbrother,andI

unwillinglysaidgood-byetoallofourfriends.Whoknewifwe'deverseethemagain?Finally,themomentofourdeparture

arrived,andweloadedsuitcases,books,games,campingequipment,andaten【into(hecarandbravelydroveol'f.Webravely

droveoffagaintwohourslaterafterwe'dreturnedhometogetthepurseandtraveler'schecksMomhadforgotten.

DavidandIwerealwaysalittlenervouswhenusinggasstationbathroomsifMomwasdrivingwhileDadslept:"Youstand

outsidethedoorandplaylookout(放哨)whileIgo,andI'llstandoutsidethedoorandplaylookoutwhileyougo.MIhadterrible

picturesinmymind:"Honey,wherearethekids?”44What?!Oh,Gosh...Ithoughttheywerebeingawfullyquiet.”Wewerenever

actuallyleftbehindinastrangecity,butweweren'tabouttotakeanychances.

Onthefourthorfifthnight,wehad(roublefindingahotelwithavacancy.Afterdrivinginvainfbrsometime,Mom

suddenlygotagreatidea:Whydidn'twefindahousewithalikely-lookingbackyardandaskifwecouldse!uptentthere?David

andIbecamenervous.Toourgreatrelief.Dadturneddowntheidea.Momnevercouldunderstandourobjections.Ifastrange

familyshoweduponherfrontdoorstep,Momwouldhavebeendelighted.Shethinkseveryoneintheworldisasniceassheis.

Wefinallyfoundavacancyinthenexttowr.

注意：

1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2.至少使用5個(gè)短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；

3.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；

4.續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。

Paragraph1:Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwehadbroughtwithus.

Paragraph2:Wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofgreatsightsalongtheway.

【解析】本文以人物為線索展開，講述了作者11歲的一次家庭旅行讓作者了解了自己的母親。在路二作者和弟弟一直擔(dān)

心遇到危險(xiǎn)，而媽媽卻堅(jiān)持要在外面搭帳篷睡覺，最后他們搭好了帳篷，在外面度過了美好的一個(gè)假期。

【詳解】

1.段落續(xù)寫：

①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“第二天，我們想起了我們帶來的新帳篷?！笨芍?，第一段可描寫他們回去取帳篷的經(jīng)過。

@由第二段首句內(nèi)容“我們開車經(jīng)過了幾個(gè)州，沿途看到了許多美麗的景色。''可知，第二段可描寫他們在戶外

搭帳篷做飯的事情。

2.續(xù)寫線索：想起帶來的新帳篷——媽媽堅(jiān)持回去取帳篷一看見美麗的風(fēng)景一搭帳篷準(zhǔn)備飯菜一作者感

3.詞匯激活

行為類

建議：recommend/suggest

回去：goback/retum

發(fā)現(xiàn)：find/discover

情緒類

準(zhǔn)備好的：ready/prepared

令人愉快的：pleasant/pleasing

【點(diǎn)睛】

[高分句型1]Butthenwewerehalfanhourawayfromthehotel,wherethetentwasleftbehind.（運(yùn)用了where引導(dǎo)非

限制性定語從句）

[高分句型2]IfMomhadn'tbeenthatabsent-minded,itwouldhavesavedusthetroubleofgoingbackagainandagain.

（運(yùn)用了虛擬語氣）

參考范文1

Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwehadbroughtwithus.Thinkingofthistent,Momsuggestedthatwego

campinginthenextvillageinexcitement,withhereyesglittering.Consideringherenthusiasm,weallagreed.Whenthedoorof

ourcaropened,Momstormedoutinstantlyandurgedustoputupthetent.DavidandIwereaskedtopickupsomebranchesto

buildafire.Andwhenwecameback,DadandMomhadalreadylaindownthegrasscomfortablyinfrontof(hetent,talking

merrilywithalocalboyatourage.whokeptglancingat