必修第一冊(cè)Unit1Teenagelife建議信

WriteaLetterforAdvice

本單元的寫(xiě)作任務(wù)是寫(xiě)一封建議信。建議信是應(yīng)用文的常用體裁。建議

信是寫(xiě)信者向收信人就某事提出自己的建議或忠告。建議信可以寫(xiě)給個(gè)人，

也可以寫(xiě)給某個(gè)組織或者機(jī)構(gòu)，就某個(gè)問(wèn)題提出自己的看法或建議。

寫(xiě)作任務(wù)建議信的正文一般可以分為三部分：

第一部分：表明目的+建立同理心

第二部分：?jiǎn)栴}分析+具體建議+理由支撐

第三部分：總結(jié)+期待

單元寫(xiě)作1.Yousaidinyourlastletterthat...

2.Knowingfromyourletterthat...

早知道

3.Youhaveaskedformyadvicewithregardto...

4.Iamwritingtotrytomakesomesuggestionson...

5.1amwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning...

常用表達(dá)7.1wouldliketosuggestthat...

8.Thereareseveralthingswecoulddo.

9.Maybeitwouldbebelterto...

10.Whydon'tyou...?

11.Haveyouconsidereddoing...?

12.1hopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionspractical/useful/helpful.

直通高考

話題真題展示高考鏈接

建議信2025?全國(guó)一卷?高考真題通常以書(shū)信或郵件的

假定你是李華，你班的英語(yǔ)報(bào)要增設(shè)一個(gè)欄目。外教形式出現(xiàn)，要求考生給

特定的對(duì)象，如朋友、

Jenny提出“Funatinyschool"和“GuesswhoIam”兩個(gè)

同學(xué)、老師、相關(guān)機(jī)構(gòu)

選項(xiàng)供大家選擇。請(qǐng)給Jenny寫(xiě)一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

Usewhatyouhave等提供建議。設(shè)置貼近

(1)你的選擇；

learnttowritealetter學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)、校園活動(dòng)、

說(shuō)明理由。

ofsuggestion.(2)成長(zhǎng)發(fā)展等方面的情

注意：境，也會(huì)涉及到社會(huì)熱

(1)寫(xiě)作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右；點(diǎn)話題，考查在實(shí)際情

(2)請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)侑置作答.境中運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力。

考情分析

年份卷別考查形式考查話題考查語(yǔ)境

2025新課標(biāo)I卷郵件校園生活班級(jí)英文報(bào)欄目選擇（二選一）

2025浙江卷演講稿校園生活校園內(nèi)使用手機(jī)拍短視頻的看法和建議

2025北京卷書(shū)信社會(huì)熱點(diǎn)朋友詢(xún)問(wèn)聯(lián)合國(guó)倡議征集的建議

2023新課標(biāo)II卷郵件校園生活外教口語(yǔ)分組機(jī)制改進(jìn)

2023北京卷書(shū)信環(huán)境保護(hù)“綠色二匕京”主題活動(dòng)建議

審髓指導(dǎo)

一、緊扣題目核心，明確寫(xiě)作方向

仔細(xì)閱讀題目要求，明確建義的對(duì)象和主題，確定寫(xiě)作的基本方向，如是針對(duì)個(gè)人學(xué)習(xí)生活提建議，

還是對(duì)校園建設(shè)、社會(huì)現(xiàn)象發(fā)表看法等，避免跑題。關(guān)捕捉關(guān)鍵詞，劃出“建議”“改進(jìn)”“優(yōu)化”等核

心動(dòng)詞，本單元要求針對(duì)三名學(xué)生的問(wèn)題，提出建議，避免偏離主題。

二、解析內(nèi)容要求，確定寫(xiě)作重點(diǎn)

根據(jù)題FI給出的要點(diǎn)提示，分析需要涵蓋的具體內(nèi)容，如建議的背景、存在的問(wèn)題、具體的建議措施

等，確保寫(xiě)作時(shí)重點(diǎn)突出，內(nèi)容完整、有條理。

?避坑點(diǎn)：

1.避免脫離情境（如向他們建議“打太極拳減壓”未關(guān)聯(lián)教學(xué)場(chǎng)景）。

2.杜絕空洞表述（如僅寫(xiě)“joinaclub”而未說(shuō)明具體社團(tuán)及益處）。

NameSuggestionsReasons

Thattheyaren'tlisteningtoyouisperhapsbecauseyoudon't

Trylisteningtoyourparents.

listentothem.

EricInvitethemoutforsomething

Thiswillgiveyouachancetospeaktothemwithout

toeat.

distractions.

Thiswillgiveyouachancetobearoundotherpeople,andhelp

Joinavolunteergroup.

yourealizethatotherpeoplehaveproblems,too.

XuTingConnectwithyourparents

Justbecausetheyarefaraway,itdoesn'tmeanthatyoucan't

online.

talktothem.

Askamutualfriend（一個(gè)共同

的朋友）tointroduceyoutoYourfriendwillbeabletohelpyoubreaktheice（破冰,打破

her.沉默，打破僵局）withherandprovideencouragementtoyou.

MinHo

Findchancestoget:ogetherinIfyouareinagroup,i（takesall（hepressureoff（消除所有壓

groupswheresheisagroup力）,andyoucanin:eractwithherinarelaxingsetting.

member.

寫(xiě)作框眥8計(jì)

段落內(nèi)容句子設(shè)計(jì)

問(wèn)題回應(yīng)型：Learningthatyouarcstrugglingwith______,I'dliketo

表明目的+建立同理offerpracticalsuggestions.

第一段

心主動(dòng)建議型:Asaregularuserof______,I'mwritingtopropose

feasibleimprovementsto______.

客觀描述現(xiàn)狀:Randomgroupingleadstounbalancedlanguage

abilities,causingadvancedstudentstodominateconversaiions.

問(wèn)題分析

分點(diǎn)列出措施:First,groupstudentsbasedontheirlanguage

第二段具體建議

proficiency;second,allowself-selectiontoboostmotivation.

理由支撐

說(shuō)明建議的合理性:Thisapproachensureseveryonecanpractice

effectivelywhilefosteringcollaboration.

弱命令語(yǔ)氣：Hopefully,thesemeasurescould______,though

adjustmentsbasedon______arcwelcome.

第三段總結(jié)+期待

開(kāi)放結(jié)尾：Shouldyourequirefurtherdetailsabout______,Iam

readilyavailable.

【小試牛刀】

DearXuTing,

Youwrotethatyoualwaysfeellonelyafterschoolbecauseyourparentsworkinanothercity.Iunderstandhow

youfeelquitewell.IamsorrytohearthatandIhopethefollowingsuggestionswillbeofhelptoyou.

Firstofall,Irecommendyoumakesomegoodfriendsinyourclassandhavefunwiththemafterschool.In

thisway,youwillfeellesslonelybecauseyoucantalktoeachotherabouttheunhappythingstoreduceyourbad

feelingsandhavefuntogether.What'smore,italsomightbeagoodideafbryoutotakeanactivepartinmore

activities.Bydoing(his,youcannotonlyknownewfriendsbutalsodevelopfriendlyrelationships.Finally,ifit

doesn'twork,whynotturntoourteachersfbrhelp.Ibelievetheycanusuallyofferyousomepractica'suggestions.

Idohopethesesuggestionswillhelpdriveawayyourloneliness.

BestWishes!

Yourssincerely

Susan

C----------------------

?素材重庫(kù)

【單元必備詞塊】

教材基礎(chǔ)詞塊

makefriendswithsb.與某人交朋友sharehappiness分享快樂(lè)

inmyopinion依我看gooutforawalk出去散步

haveatalkwithsb.與某人談心getalongwith與...相處：進(jìn)展

joinin參加gettiredof厭煩

高分詞塊

提出建議解決措施

makesuggestions提出建議takeeffectivemeasuresto采取有效措施...

giveadvice給出建議dealwith處理

recommend推薦solve解決

propose提議improve(hesituation改善這種狀況

putforwardideas提出想法makeimprovementsin在...方面做出改進(jìn)

表達(dá)重要性表達(dá)希里

ofgreatimportance非常垂要的hopethat希望...

playavitalrolein在...中起關(guān)鍵作用wishIha【但愿...

becrucialfor對(duì)...至關(guān)重要的itisexpectedthat預(yù)期...

beessentialto對(duì)...是必不可少狗Isincerelyhopethat我真誠(chéng)地希望...

指出問(wèn)題表示原因

thereexistsaproblemthatdueto由于

存在這樣一個(gè)問(wèn)題……becauseof因?yàn)?/p>

aissuethatneedstobeaddressedisowingto歸因于

一個(gè)需要被解決的問(wèn)題是……thanksto多虧了

itisworthnotingthat值得注意的是...asaresultof由于...的結(jié)果

【必備句式】

第一部分：說(shuō)明寫(xiě)信的目的

1.I'msorrytohearthatyouarchavingtroublefittinginyournewschool.Suchproblemsarcquitenormal.

Perhapsthefollowingsuggestionsarehelpful.

很遺憾聽(tīng)說(shuō)你在適應(yīng)新學(xué)校方面有困難。這樣的問(wèn)題是很正常的?？赡芟旅娴慕ㄗh會(huì)有一些幫助。

2.1havereceivedyourlettersayingyouplantoplayavisittoChinafortendaysnextmonth.Perhapsthe

followingsuggestionsarchelpfultoyou.

我已經(jīng)收到了你的來(lái)信。信上說(shuō)你打算下個(gè)月來(lái)參觀中國(guó)十天?？赡芟旅娴慕ㄗh對(duì)你是有幫助的。

3.I'mwritingtoyoutopresentwhai1(hinkonthefurtherimprovementofourhotelsoastoattractmoreclients

(顧客).

我給你寫(xiě)信是想說(shuō)明一下我對(duì)于進(jìn)一步改善我們旅館的一些想法，以吸引更多顧客。

4.YouhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardtohowtolearnChinese,andIwilltrytomakesome

suggestionshere.

你關(guān)于如何學(xué)習(xí)漢語(yǔ)詢(xún)問(wèn)我的建議，那么我就在這里給出一些建議。

5.I'mverygladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtofitin(henewschoollife.Hereareafew

suggestions.

很高興收到你的來(lái)信，信上詢(xún)問(wèn)我關(guān)于如何適應(yīng)新的學(xué)校生活。下面是我的一些建議。

6.I'mverygladtohavereceivedyoure-mail.NowI'mwritingtogiveyousomeadviceonhowtolearnEnglish

wellinhighschool.

很高興收到你的電子郵件。現(xiàn)在，關(guān)于如何在高中學(xué)好英語(yǔ)，我寫(xiě)信給你一些建議。

第二部分：介紹詳情、說(shuō)明原因

Litwillbeginat2:00pmandlasttwohours,duringwhichtime15well-preparedcontestantswilldelivertheir

speeches.

它將于下午兩點(diǎn)鐘開(kāi)始，四點(diǎn)鐘結(jié)束，在此期間將會(huì)有十五位準(zhǔn)備充分的參賽者發(fā)表演講。

2.Wewillstartat8:00amandarrivethereat9:00.我們將會(huì)在上午八點(diǎn)出發(fā)，九點(diǎn)到達(dá)那里。

3.Duringtheafternoon,wc'H...together.下午，我們會(huì)?起..

4.Remembertotakewaterandlunchwithyou.記得帶上水和午餐。

5.Bytheway,youmaytakeBusNo.322anditwilltakeyoudirectlytotheclub.

順便說(shuō)一下，你可以乘坐322路公交車(chē)，它會(huì)直接把你帶到俱樂(lè)部。

6.1knowyouareanativespeakerofEnglishandanEnglishteacher,andI,onbehalfofourschool,sincerelyinvite

youtobepartofthecontest.

我知道你的母語(yǔ)是英語(yǔ)，還是一名英語(yǔ)老師。我代表我們學(xué)校真誠(chéng)地邀請(qǐng)你來(lái)比賽現(xiàn)場(chǎng)。

7.SinceyouarcsoeagertoimproveyourEnglish,itwillprovetobeagreatchance.

既然你如此渴望提高英語(yǔ)，這會(huì)是一個(gè)很好的機(jī)會(huì)。

8Tmsurethatyouwillenjoyyourselfthere.我保證你在那里會(huì)過(guò)得很愉快。

第三部分：提出建議

I.Ithinkthemostsuitable...foryouis...

我認(rèn)為對(duì)?你來(lái)說(shuō)最適合的……是……

2.1wouldliketosuggestthat...我想建議..

3.You'dbetter..bestio...

你最好……/最好是……

4.AsfarasIamconcerned/Inmyopinion/Asforme/Frommypointofview,itwouldbewisetotakethefollowing

action.

在我看來(lái)，采取如下行動(dòng)是明智的。

5.Foronething...;foranother...

一方面...，另一方面....

6.ICIwereyou,Iwould…如果我是你，我會(huì)...

7.1thinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould…我認(rèn)為如果你能...將會(huì)更有益。

第四部分：希望采納建議，并表示謝意，盼望回復(fù)

1.1hopethesesuggestionswillbeofusetoyou.Remember:wherethereisawill,thereisaway（有志者事竟成）.

我希望這些建議會(huì)對(duì)你有用。記?。河兄菊呤戮钩伞?/p>

2.1hopethesesuggestionswillbeofusetoyou.Remember:Themanwhohasmadeuphismindtowinwill

neversay“impossible”（一個(gè)決心要成功的人從來(lái)不說(shuō)“不可能”）.

我希望這些建議會(huì)對(duì)你有用。記?。阂粋€(gè)決心要成功的人從來(lái)不說(shuō)“不可能”。

3.Bestwishes!

（給你）最美好的祝愿！

4.1hopethatmysuggestionsarehelpfulforyouanyway.Iwouldbemorethanhappytoseeimprovement.

無(wú)論如何，我希望這些建議對(duì)你芍所幫助。我會(huì)非常高興看到情況改善。

5.1believethatyouwilltakemysuggestionsintoseriousaccount.Whateveryoudecidetodo,goodluckwith

yourstudies/work!

我相信你會(huì)認(rèn)真考慮我的建議。無(wú)論你決定做什么，祝你學(xué)習(xí)/工作好運(yùn)。

6.1sincerelyhopemyadvicewillbesomehelpforyou.IfthereismoreIcandotohelp,pleaseletmeknow.

我真誠(chéng)的希望我的建議對(duì)你有一些幫助。如果有更多我可以幫忙的，請(qǐng)告訴我。

【必背模板】

模板①

Dear,

Youhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardto,andIwilltrytomakesome

conducivesuggestionshere.

Inmyopinion,youwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions:（建議的內(nèi)容）.

Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposalsuseful,andIwouldbereadytodiscuss（hismailerwithyoutofurther

details.

Goodluckwithyour（祝愿）.

YoursSincerely,

LiHua

模板②

Dear,

I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowto（引出對(duì)方需要建議的

主題）.

Hereareafewsuggestion（引出作者的建議）.First,Itisimportantto.Then,italsohelps

to.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideato.Youcanalso.

（可以根據(jù)要求用不同的句式提出建議，如下）

Asto,Isuggest_____________（需要具體到某一方面）.Inaddition,（其他的建議）.

Pmsure（預(yù)測(cè)可能的結(jié)果，給對(duì)方以行為的信心和決心）.

Ihope（表達(dá)愿望）。

YoursSincerely,

LiHua

典例指引

(2025?全國(guó)一卷?高考真題)假定你是李華,你班的英語(yǔ)報(bào)要增設(shè)一個(gè)欄目。外教Jenny提出“Funatmy

school”和“GuesswhoIam”兩個(gè)選項(xiàng)供大家選擇。請(qǐng)給Jenny寫(xiě)一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

(1)你的選擇；

(2)說(shuō)明理由。

注意：

(1)寫(xiě)作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右；

(2)請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

DearJenny,

IreallyliketheideaofaddinganewcolumntoourEnglishnewspaper.

Yours,

LiHua

【知識(shí)點(diǎn)】學(xué)?；顒?dòng)、申請(qǐng)/請(qǐng)求/建議

【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求芍生就外教Jenny提出的校英文報(bào)增設(shè)一個(gè)欄目，在“Funatmy

school”和“Guesswho1am”兩個(gè)選項(xiàng)中給出自己的推薦，并說(shuō)明理由。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

表達(dá)：express—?convey

利用：capitalizeon—?use

擔(dān)當(dāng)：serveas—>actas

注意：payheedto—>takenoticeof

2.句式拓展

簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Suchaninvitingcolumn,adoptinga^descriptionandguess”approach,mustexposeeveryonetoothers'

characteristics,thusstrengtheningmutualunderstanding.

拓展句：Suchaninvitingcolumn,whichadoptsa"descriptionandguess“approach,mustexposeeveryoneto

otters'characteristics,thusstrengtheningmutualunderstanding.

［點(diǎn)睛］［高分句型1】I'mwritingtoexpressthatmypredilectiongoesto“GuesswhoIam”,which

capitalizesonanobjectclausetosignalitspotentialcontents.(運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句,which引導(dǎo)的定

語(yǔ)從句)

【高分句型2］Moreiinportantly,morefriendshipswillbeforged,sincethecolumnenablesustobefriend

someoneonthesamewavelength.1運(yùn)用了since引導(dǎo)的狀語(yǔ)從句)

【組句成篇】

DearJenny,

IreallyliketheideaofaddinganewcolumntoourEnglishnewspaper.Fmwritingtoexpressthatmy

predilectiongoesto“GuesswhoIam'',whichcapitalizesonanobjectclausetosignalitspotentialcontents.

Thecolumnwillserveasacatalystforcloserbondsbetweenstudents.Redoublingeffortstoboostacademic

performance,wepaylittleheedtootherclassmates'personalities,hobbies,strengths,andevenaspirations.Suchan

invitingcolumn,adoptinga''descriptionandguess“approach,mustexposeeveryonetoothers5characteristics,thus

strengiheningmutualundersianding.Moreimporiandy,morefriendshipswillbeforged,sincethecolumnenables

ustobefriendsomeoneonthesamewavelength.

Thiseye-catchingcolumn,I,mfirmlyconvinced,won'tfailtograntthewholeclassaharmoniousatmosphere.

Yours,

LiHua

T實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練

【第一部分基礎(chǔ)題】

一、單元話題詞匯翻譯

1.adv.事實(shí)上7.關(guān)注

2.n.（大學(xué)或高中）一年級(jí)新生8.對(duì)……是適合的

3.v.建議9.報(bào)名（參加課程）

4.n.日程安排10.跟上;趕上

5.對(duì)……感到困惑II.提前

6.課外活動(dòng)

答案1.actually2.freshman3.recommend4.schedule5.beconfusedabout...6.extra-curricularactivities?.focus

on8.besuitablefor9.signup（forsth.）lO.keepupwith11.inadvance

二、補(bǔ)全句子

1.完成句子

第一段:表示理解，表明寫(xiě)信目的

（1）（事實(shí)上），（很多一年級(jí)新生都

對(duì)...感到困惑）highschoollife.

第二段:根據(jù)提示給出建議

⑵]___________（建議）lhalyou（報(bào)名參加課外

活動(dòng))andtheycanhelpyoumakemorenewfriends.

(3)Youshould____________________________________________(做一個(gè)合理的日程安排)and

(關(guān)注)yourstudies.

(4)Ybucan(跟上)otherclassmatesintheclass.

(5)You'dbelterpreparefor(henewlessons(提前).

第三段:表達(dá)希望

(6)Ihopemysuggestionswill(適合你).

答案(l)Actually;manyfreshmenareconfusedabout(2)rccomniend:signupforextra-curricularactivities(3)make

areasonableschedule;focuson(4)kccpupwith(5)inadvancc(6)besuitableforyou

2.句式升級(jí)

(7由句(2)升級(jí)為含有定語(yǔ)從句的句子

(8)用sothat合并句(3)和句(4)

答案

(7)Irecommendthatyousignupforextracurricularactivitiesthat/whichcanhelpyoumakemorenewfriends.

(8)Youshouldmakeareasonablescheduleandfocusonyourstudiesso(hatyoucankeepupwithotherclassmates

intheclass.

二、連句成篇

請(qǐng)使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪^(guò)渡詞將以上句子組成一篇建議信。

DearJack,

Yours,

10/18

LiHua

答案：

DearJack,

Iamsorry(ohearthatyou'rehavingtroubleadjustingtoyourhighschoollife.Actually,manyfreshmenare

confusedabouthighschoollife,sodon'tworryaboulitloomuch.I'mwritingtoofferyousomeusefuladvice.

Tobeginwith,Irecommendthatyousignupforextra-cunicularactivitiesthat/whichcanhelpyoumakemore

newfriends.What'smore,youshouldmakeareasonablescheduleandfocusonyourstudiessothatyoucankeep

upwithotherclassmatesintheclass.Lastbutnotleast,you'dbetterprepareforthenewlessonsinadvance.

Ihopemysuggestionswillbesuitableforyouandthatyouwillenjoyyourhighschoollife.

Yours,

LiHua

【第二部分提升題】

I.(2023?北菸高考真題)假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。你的英國(guó)好友Jim正在策劃一次以“綠色北

京”為主題的社團(tuán)活動(dòng)，他發(fā)來(lái)郵件詢(xún)問(wèn)你的建議。請(qǐng)你用英文給他回復(fù)，內(nèi)容包括：

(1)活動(dòng)形式；

(2)活動(dòng)內(nèi)容。

注意；⑴詞數(shù)100左右；

(2)開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

DearJim,

Yours,

LiHua

【范文】DearJim,

Hearingthatyouarcplanningaclubactivitywiththethemeof“GreenBeijing“andneedmyhelp,1am

writingtoofferyoumysuggestions.

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Ithinkyoucancarryoutthisactivityinaninteractiveandexperientialmanner,whichmeansstudentscan

participateandhaveabetterunderstandingof“GreenBeijing^^throughgettinginvolvedindifferentactivitiesby

themselves.Youcanshowcasegarbageclassificationonsite,planttreesandpublicizesharingeconomy,which

willallfitintothethemeof"GreenBeijing,.

Hopefully,youwillgetsomeinspirationfrommysuggestions.Wishyousuccess.

Yours,

LiHua

【知識(shí)點(diǎn)】申請(qǐng)/請(qǐng)求/建議

【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給好友Jim策劃的“綠色北京”社團(tuán)活動(dòng)給出一些建議。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

建議：suggestion—*tip

提供：offer—^provide

開(kāi)展：carryout—?conduct

主題：theme—>topic

2.句式拓展

同義句轉(zhuǎn)換

原句：Hearingthatyouareplanningaclubactivitywiththethemeof“GreenBeijing"andneedmydhelp,Iam

writingtoofferyoumysuggestions.

拓展句：Sinceyouareplanningaclubactivitywiththethemeof“GreenBeijing^^andneedmyhelp,Iam

writingtoofferyoumysuggestions.

【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Hearingthatyouareplanningaclubactivitywiththethemeof"GreenBeijing'andneed

myhelp,Iamwritingtoofferyoumysuggestions.（運(yùn)用Ythat弓|導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句）

[言分句型2]Ithinkyoucancarryoutthisactivityinaninteractiveandexperientialmanner,whichneans

studentscanparticipateandhaveabetterunderstandingof"GreenBeijing''throughgettinginvolvedindifferent

activitiesbythemselves.（運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句）

2.（2023?新課標(biāo)II卷?高考真題）假定你是李華，外教Ryan準(zhǔn)備將學(xué)生隨機(jī)分為兩人一組，記大家課后

練習(xí)口語(yǔ)，你認(rèn)為這樣分組存在問(wèn)題。請(qǐng)你給外教寫(xiě)一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

I.說(shuō)明問(wèn)題；

2.提出建議。

12/18

注意：

1.寫(xiě)作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右；

2,請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。

DearRyan,

I'mLiHuafromClass3.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

【范文】DearRyan,

I'mLiHuafromClass3.1thinkit'snotagoodideatorandomlypairupstudentsfbrthespokenEnglishtraining

afterclass.Thereasonsareasfollows.

Tobeginwith,randomlypairingupstudentsmayleadtounbalancedlanguageabilitieswithinthe

groups.Thiscanhindertheprogressofstudentsasthemoreadvancedonemaydominatetheconversation,

leavinglittleroomfortheotherstudentstoimprove.Besides,studentsmayfeeluncomfonablcorlessmotivatedif

pairedwithsomeonewhotheydon'tgetalongwithorhavedifficultycommunicatingwith.

Mysuggestionistogroupstudentsbasedontheirlanguageabilitiesortoletstudentschoosetheirown

partners.Thisway,everyonecanfeelmorecomfortablepracticingandimproving(heirspokenEnglishtogether.

Thankyouforconsideringmysuggestion.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua

【知識(shí)點(diǎn)】語(yǔ)言學(xué)習(xí)策略、申請(qǐng)/請(qǐng)求/建議

【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇是應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作，要求考生給外教寫(xiě)一封郵件，告訴他將學(xué)生隨機(jī)分為兩人一組，讓大家課

后凍習(xí)口語(yǔ)，你認(rèn)為這樣分組存在問(wèn)題。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

首先：tobeginwith—>firstofall

提高：improve—*progress

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建議：suggestion—>advice

選擇：choose—>select

2.句式拓展

簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句

原句：Mysuggestionistogroupstudentsbasedontheirlanguageabilitiesortoletstudentschoosetheirown

partners.

拓展句：Mysuggestionisthatwearesupposedtogroupstudentsbasedontheirlanguageabilitiesortolet

studentschoosetheirownpartners.

【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]

Thiscanhindertheprogressofstudentsasthemoreadvancedonemaydominatetheconversation,leavinglittle

roomfortheotherstudentstoimprove.（運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語(yǔ)）

[高分句型2]

Besides,Studentsmayfeeluncomfortableorlessmotivatedifpairedwithsomeonewhotheydon'tgetalongwith

orhavedifficultycommunicatingwith.（運(yùn)用了省略句和who引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句）

3.（2022?上海?高考真題）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-50wordsaccordingtothe

instructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

假設(shè)你是明啟中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李明，入冬以來(lái)，你校組織全校師生每周一至周五晨跑時(shí)間為7:30-7:50,休

息5分鐘后上第一節(jié)課。但有同學(xué)反映，晨跑后身體不適，因此學(xué)校委托學(xué)生會(huì)征詢(xún)大家對(duì)晨跑的意

見(jiàn),請(qǐng)你給學(xué)生會(huì)寫(xiě)一封郵件，內(nèi)容必須包括：

(1)你認(rèn)為該晨跑安排中存在的問(wèn)題；

(2)你的改進(jìn)建議及理由。

【范文】

DearStudentUnion.

IamLiMing,aSenior3studentfromMingqiMiddleSchool.Iamwritingtosharemythoughtsonthe

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morningrunningarrangement.

Thecurrentmorningrunningfrom7:30-7:50followedbythefirstclassaftera5-minulebreakhassome

problems.Firstly,ninningrightbeforeclassdoesn'tgivestudentsenoughtimetocalmdown.Secondly,running

inthecoldwintermorningwithoutproperwarm-upcanbeharmfultoourhealth,causingdiscomfortlikemuscle

strains.

Isuggeststartingtherunning15minutesearlier.Thisallows20minutesforrunning,10minutesfor

studentstorelaxandadjustbeforeclass.Moreover,weshouldhavea5-minuteguidedwarm-upactivitybefore

running.Thisway,wecanbetterprepareourbodiesforexerciseandreducetheriskofinjury.

Thankyouforconsideringmysuggestions.

Yourssincerely,

LiMing

【知識(shí)點(diǎn)】學(xué)校活動(dòng)、體育健身

【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生給學(xué)生會(huì)寫(xiě)一封郵件，反映晨跑的意見(jiàn)。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

導(dǎo)致：causing—>leadingto

建議：suggest—?advise

此外：moreover—?what'smore

減少，降低：reduce—*decrease

2.句式拓展

簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句

原句：IamLiMing,aSenior3studentfromMingqiMiddleSchool.

拓展句：IamLiMing,whoisaSenior3studentfromMingqiMiddleSchool.

【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型I]Secondly,runninginthecoldwintermorningwithoutproperwarm-upcanbeharmful

toourhealth,causingdiscomfortlikemusclestrains.(運(yùn)用了非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞中的現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語(yǔ)。)

[高分句型2]Thecurrentmorningrunningfrom7:30-7:50followedbythefirstclassaftera5-minutebreak

hassomeproblems.(運(yùn)用了非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞中的過(guò)去分詞作后置定語(yǔ)修飾morningrunning(>)

4.(2025?浙江?高考真題)你將參加英語(yǔ)課上的“一分鐘演講”活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你針對(duì)部分同學(xué)在校園內(nèi)用手機(jī)拍

攝短視頻的現(xiàn)象寫(xiě)一篇演講稿，內(nèi)容包括：

(1)陳述看法；

(2)提出建議。

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注意:

(1)寫(xiě)作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右;

(2)請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題紙的相應(yīng)位置作答。

MyViewsonFilmingShortVideosonCampus

【范文】

MyViewsonFilmingShortVideosonCampus

Dearclassmates,

Recently,someofushavebeenfilmingshortvideosoncampus.Inmyopinion,itcanbeafunwayto

recordcampuslife,butitalsohasitsdrawbacks.Notonlymayitdistractusfromourstudiesandevendisruptthe

schoolorder,butitmightalsocauseunnecessarycomparisonsandaffectourself-esteemwhenthevideosdon't

gettheexpectedresponse.

Isuggestweshouldlimitthetimeforfilmingandchooseproperplaces.Let'sfbcusmoreonouracademic

tasksandmakegooduseofourtimeoncampus.

Thankyou!

【知識(shí)點(diǎn)】學(xué)校生活、微信/微博/短視頻

【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于演講稿。要求考生針對(duì)部分同學(xué)在校園內(nèi)用手機(jī)拍攝短視頻的現(xiàn)象陳述看法

并提出建議。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

記錄：record—?document

缺點(diǎn)：dr