新高考高分必備

高中英語讀后續(xù)寫片段描寫限時練13

一、環(huán)境渲染類（奠定基調(diào)）

1.高分句式：As+時間/天氣變化，感官細(xì)節(jié)+主角反應(yīng)（情景融合）

2.高分句式：Theairwasfilledwith+氣味/聲音，環(huán)境動態(tài)+主角動作（氛圍沉浸）

3.高分句式：Under+特定環(huán)境，環(huán)境細(xì)節(jié)+主角狀態(tài)（場景聚焦）

?描寫練習(xí)1：隨著最后一縷陽光隱入遠(yuǎn)山，刺骨的寒風(fēng)裹著沙粒刮過臉頰，男孩下意識地

把外套領(lǐng)口向上拉了拉。

?英文翻譯I：,the

bitingcoldwindblewsandagainsthischeeks,makingtheboypullupthecollarofhiscoat

unconsciously.

?描寫練習(xí)2：空氣里滿是烤面包的香甜，窗外的梧桐「打著旋兒落下，女孩踮起腳尖，把

剛洗好的圍巾掛在陽臺的晾衣繩上。

?英文翻譯2：.andtheplanetree

leavesoutsidethewindowwhirleddown.Thegirlstoodonhertoesandhungthenewlywashed

scarfonthebalconyclothesline.

?描寫練習(xí)3：在昏暗的路燈下，積著雨水的路面映出模糊的光影，老人拄著拐杖，慢慢走

在空無一人的街道上。

,英文翻譯3：,therain-puddledroadreflectedvaguelight

andshadow.Theoldmanleanedonhiscaneandwalkedslowlyontheemptystreet.

答案：

1.Asthelastrayofsunlightfadedbehindthedistantmoumains

2.Theairwasfilledwiththesweetsmellofbakedbread

3.Underthedimstreetlamp

段落一

Afterhikingwithhisdadallafternoon.Tom'slegsfeltsore,buthestillchattedexcitedly

aboutthebirdsthey'dseen.Theywalkeddownthemountainpath（1）

（天空漸漸變成橘色）,andTomkeptlookingbackatthedistantpeaks.

（2）（隨著最后一縷陽光隱入遠(yuǎn)山）.ihebitingcoldwind

blewsandagainsthischeeks,makingtheboypullupthecollarofhiscoatunconsciously.Hisdad

noticedandhandedhimawarmhat,saying,“Wintercomesearlyhere-

⑶(我們得在天更黑前趕回去)Tomnodded,

tuckinghishandsintohispockets,and(4)(加快腳步跟

上了爸爸).

答案：

(1)astheskyturnedorange

(2)Asthelastrayofsunlightfadedbehindthedistantmountains

(3)weshouldheadbackbeforeitgetsdarker

(4)quickenedhisstepstokeepupwithhisdad

段落二

ItwasaquietSundaymorning,andEmmadecidedtohelphermomwithhouseworkafter

breakfast.First,shefoldedthecleanclothes,thenwipedthedustytable,andfinallytookthewet

scarftothebalcony.(1)(空氣里滿是烤面包的香甜)

—hermomwasmakingEmma'sfavoriteblueberrybreadinthekitchen—andtheplanetree

leavesoutsidethewindowwhirleddown.Thegirlstoodonhertoesand

⑵(把剛洗好的用巾掛在陽臺的晾衣繩上).Justthen,

hermomcalledher,“Emma,thebreadisready!(3)(趁

熱來嘗嘗！)"Emmasmiledandranbacktothekitchen,leavingthescarfflutteringgently：nthe

breeze.

答案：

(1)Theairwasfilledwiththesweetsmellofbakedbread

(2)hungthenewlywashedscarfonthebalconyclothesline

(3)Comeandtasteilwhileil'swarm!

這是一個安靜的周口早晨，艾瑪決定早餐后幫媽媽做家務(wù)。她先疊好干凈的衣服，又擦了擦

積灰的桌子，最后拿著濕圍巾走向陽臺。一一媽媽正在廚房做艾瑪最愛的藍(lán)莓面包一一窗外

的梧桐葉打著旋兒落下。女孩踮起腳尖，。就在這時，媽媽喊她：“艾瑪，面包好啦！”艾瑪

笑著跑回廚房，只留下圍巾在微風(fēng)中輕輕飄動。

二、動作連貫類(推進(jìn)場景)

1.高分句式：主語+grabbed...,dashedtowards...andthen+連貫動作(動作鏈)

2.高分句式：With+動作伴隨，主語+核心動作+whiledoing（伴隨動作）

3.高分句式：Hardlyhad主語+Hnished...when+銜接動作（倒裝銜接）

?描寫練習(xí)1：男孩抓起桌上的雨傘，朝門口沖過去，然后在臺階上停下，回頭喊媽妲快點

跟上。

?英文翻譯I：Theboy_____________________________________________________________

toturnaroundandcallhismomtohurryup.

?描寫練習(xí)2：手指飛快地按著計算器，女孩核對著賬單上的數(shù)字，同時用肩膀夾著手機(jī)跟

媽媽報平安。

,英文翻譯2：,thegirlcheckedthe

numbersonthebillwhileholdingherphonebetweenhershoulderstotellhermomshewassafe.

?描寫練習(xí)3：女孩剛把最后一份作業(yè)放進(jìn)書包，就聽見門鈴響了一一是約好一起去圖書館

的同學(xué)。

?英文翻譯3：____________________________________________________________________

sheheardthedoorbellring-itwasherclassmalewhohadagreedtogotothelibrarywithher.

答案：

1.grabbedtheumbrellaonthetable,dashedtowardsthedoor,andthenstoppedonthesteps

2.Withherfingerspressingthecalculatorquickly

3.Hardlyhadthegirlfinishedputtingthelasthomeworkintoherschoolbagwhen

段落一

Theskyoutsideturneddarksuddenly,andheavyraindropsstartedhittingthewindow.The

boyrememberedhismomhadgonetothesupermarketandhadn'（takenanumbrella.Helooked

aroundthelivingroom,spottedtheblueumbrellaonthecoffeetable,anddidn'twanttomakehis

momwaitintherain.（1）（男

孩抓起桌上的雨傘,朝門口沖過去,然后在臺階loturnaioundandcallhisiiiomto

hurryup.Hestoodontheporch,（2）（把

傘舉得高高的擋雨）,andsoonsawhismomcarryingtwobigshoppingbags,hurryingtowards

thehouse.Theboyranovertohelp,andtogethertheywalkedbackinside,

⑶（笑著吐槽天氣變得真快），

答案：

⑴Theboygrabbedtheumbrellaonthetable,dashedtowandsthedoor,andthenstoppedonthe

steps

(2)holdingtheumbrellahightoblocktherain

(3)laughingathowquicklytheweatherhadchanged

段落二

Afterfinishingherpart-timejobatthecafe,thegirlneededtochecktheday,ssalesbill

beforelockingup.(I)(她

從抽屜里拿出計算器，把賬單放在面前，這時發(fā)現(xiàn)手機(jī)響了)一itwashermom,whoalways

calledtomakesureshegotoffworksafely.(2)(手指

飛快t也按著計算器)，thegirlcheckedthenumbersonthebillwhileholdingherphonebetween

hershoulderstotellhermomshewassafe.Shesaid,“Mom,don'tworry,T11behomesoonafter

finishingthecheck,"thenhungupandfocusedonthebillagain.Justasshemarkedthebillas

correct.(3)(女孩岡把最后一份作'也

放進(jìn)書包)sheheardthedoorbellring-itwasherclassmatewhohadagreedtogotothelibrary

withher.Thetwogirlswavedateachother,andthegirlquicklylockedthecaf6door,ready(ogo

tothelibrarytogether.

答案：

(1)Shetookoutthecalculatorfromthedrawer,placedthebillinfrontofher,andnoticedher

phonewasringing

(2)Withherfingerspressingthecalculatorquickly

(3)Hardlyhadthegirlfinishedputtingthelasthomeworkintoherschoolbagwhen

三、心理刻畫類(展現(xiàn)情緒)

1.高分句式:Awaveof+情緒+sweptover主語,makingsb.+生理/動作反應(yīng)(情緒沖擊)

2.高分句式：主語+triedto...butcouldn,thelp+情緒驅(qū)動的動作(情緒克制與流露)

3高分句式：Ildawnedon主語thal+andsuddenly主語+情緒/動作轉(zhuǎn)變(頓悟

情緒)

?描寫練習(xí)I：一陣委屈涌上女孩心頭，淚水瞬間模糊了視線，她咬著嘴唇，不讓自己哭出

聲來。

,英文翻譯1：,blurringhervisionwithtears

instantly.Shebitherliptoholdbackhersobs.

?描寫練習(xí)2：男孩努力裝作不在意，但還是忍不住盯著櫥窗里的模型飛機(jī)，腳步也放慢了

許多O

,英文翻譯2：,buthecouldn'thelpstaringat

themodelplaneinthewindowandsloweddownhisstepsalot.

?描寫練習(xí)3：男孩突然意識到媽媽早上說的“驚喜”就是自己想要的球鞋，臉上瞬間綻開

了笑容。

?英文翻譯3：the"surprise"hismommentionedinthe

morningwasthepairofsneakershewanted,and.

答案：

1.Awaveofgrievancesweptoverthegirl

2.Theboytriedtopretendnottocare

3.Itdawnedontheboythat;suddenlyasmilespreadacrosshisface

段落一

Thegirlhadspentthreenightsmakingahandmadebirthdaycardforherbestfriend,drawing

littlestarsandtheirfavoritecartooncharactersonitcarefully.Butwhenshegaveittoherfriend

thismorning,(1)(對方只掃了

一眼,就隨手放進(jìn)包里，一句話也沒說).Allday,thegirlkeptreplayingthatmomentinhermind,

tryingtotellherselfherfriendwasjustinahurry.Afterschool,shewalkedaloneonthesidewalk,

kickingsmallstonesasshewent.(2)(一■陣委屈

1甬上女孩，C?頭)，blurringhervisionwithtearsinstantly.Shehitherliptoholdbackhersobs.Just

then,herphonerang——itwasherfriend,saying,“SorryIwasrude(hismorning!Iwantedtowait

untilIgothometoopenyourcardcarefully.Il*ssobeautiful-Iloveit!”Thegirl*s(earsslopped,

and(3)(忍不住笑了出來).

答案：

(1)tierfriendjustgkuicedalilandpulitinherbagwilhuulsayingaword

(2)Awaveofgrievancesweptoverthegirl

(3)shecouldn'thelpbutsmile

段落二

Thisweekend,(heboy'sdadsaidhewouldtakehim(o(hetoystoretopickasmallgif!for

gettinggoodgrades.(1)(男孩想買那架

模型飛機(jī)好幾個月T)，buthedidn'twanttoseemtooeager.Whentheywalkedintothestore,

hisdadasked,“Whichonedoyoulike?”

(2)(男孩努力裝作不在意),buthecouldn，thelp

staringatthemodelplaneinthewindowandsloweddownhisstepsalot.Hisdadnoticedhisgaze

andsmiled,walkingovertotakethemodelplaneofftheshelf."Irememberyoutalkingabout

thislastmonth,“hisdadsaid.(3)(男孩突然

意識到爸爸其實早就留意到自己的心思)wasamodelplanehewanted,andsuddenlyasmile

spreadacrosshisface.Helookthemodelplanecarefully,andevensaiduThankyou,Dad"twice

-(4)(開心得幾乎藏不住自己的興奮).

答案：

(1)Theboyhadbeenlookingforwardtoamodelplaneformonths

(2)Theboytriedtopretendnottocare

(3)Itdawnedontheboythatthe"surprise"hismommentionedinthemorning

(4)hewassohappyhecouldbarelyhidehisexcitement

四、沖突轉(zhuǎn)折類(制造波瀾)

1.高分句式：Justas主語+wasaboutto...,sth.+意外動作(計劃打斷)

2.高分句式：主語+hadjust+完成動作,when+突發(fā)狀況(努力后意外)

3.高分句式：What主語+didn"texpectwasthat+意外結(jié)果(反轉(zhuǎn)轉(zhuǎn)折)

?描寫練習(xí)1：就在女孩要把畫好的賀卡遞給老師時，手里的彩筆突然掉在地上，墨水濺到

了賀卡上。

,英文翻譯I：,thecolored

peninherhandsuddenlyfelltotheground,andtheinksplashedonthecard.

?描寫練習(xí)2：爺爺剛把修好的收音機(jī)調(diào)到常用的頻道，突然一陣雜音傳來，聲音瞬間消失

了。

?英文國羽譯2：aburstof

staticcame,andthesounddisappearedinstantly.

?描寫練習(xí)3：女孩本以為沒人發(fā)現(xiàn)自己忘帶鑰匙，沒想到鄰居阿姨早就拿著備用鑰匙在門

口等她了。

?英文翻譯3：thatshethoughtnoonenoticedshe

hadforgottenherkeys,buttheneighboraunthadbeenwaitingforheratthedoorwiththespare

key.

答案：

1.Justasthegirlwasabouttohandthepaintedgreetingcardtoherteacher

2.Grandpahadjustadjustedtherepairedradiotohisusualchannelwhen

3.Whatthegirldidn'texpectwas

段落一

Lilyspentthreeclassbreaks(1)______________________________________________(給她

最喜歡的懷特老師做了一張賀P),Ms.White.Shedrewlittlesunflowersonthecover-Ms.

While'sfavoriteflower-andwrotedownherthanksinneatcursiveinside.Whenclassended,

sheheldthecardtightlyinonehandandacoloredpeninthsother,walkingquicklytoMs.White

sdesk.(2)(就在女孩要把畫好的賀卡遞

給老師時),thecoloredpeninherhandsuddenlyfelltotheground,andtheinksplashedonthe

card.(3)___________________________________(莉莉的眼睛瞬間蓄滿了淚水