?二、應(yīng)用文寫作分類突破?突破1:邀請(qǐng)信【語料儲(chǔ)備】【句式建?！?.篇首——開篇明義①我代表我校,寫這封信是為了誠摯地邀請(qǐng)你來參加我們學(xué)校的英語日活動(dòng)。Onbehalfofourschool,Iamwritingtoextendmyearnestinvitationtoyoutoparticipatein/getinvolvedin/getengagedinourschool’sEnglishDayprogram.

②為了豐富學(xué)生的課余生活,學(xué)校定于下周六在學(xué)校禮堂舉辦校園音樂節(jié)。Inordertoenrich/Withthepurposeofenrichingstudents’after-schoollife,theSchoolMusicFestivalisscheduled/willbeheldnextSaturdayintheschoolhallbyourschool.

2.篇中——邀請(qǐng)理由①本次活動(dòng)的一些細(xì)節(jié)如下。Somedetailedinformationoftheprogramisasfollows.

②一年一度的傳統(tǒng)文化節(jié)包含了各種各樣的活動(dòng),包括文藝演出和動(dòng)手實(shí)踐活動(dòng),比如剪紙、包餃子等。TheAnnualTraditionalCultureFestivalcoversawidevarietyofactivities,rangingfromartisticperformancestohands-onactivities,suchas/includingpapercuttingandmakingdumplings.

③這個(gè)活動(dòng)不僅增進(jìn)我們之間的相互了解,而且能讓我們對(duì)中國傳統(tǒng)文化有更加深入的認(rèn)識(shí)。Thisactivitynotonlyenhances/promotesmutualunderstandingbetweenusbutalsoallowsustohaveadeeperinsightintotraditionalChineseculture.

3.篇尾——期待回復(fù)①如果你能盡早確認(rèn)參加,我將不勝感激。I’dappreciateitifyoucouldconfirmyourparticipationatyourearliestconvenience.

②你的參與必將給我們帶來更多快樂。Yourparticipationwillsurelyaddtoourenjoyment.

【話題詞匯】常用詞匯話題示例相關(guān)表達(dá)(1)invite/invitation(邀請(qǐng))(2)make/deliveraspeech(做演講)(3)judge(評(píng)委)(4)celebration(慶典)(5)honor/privilege(榮幸)(6)arrangement(安排)(7)presence(出席)(8)activity(活動(dòng))(9)sharejoy(分享快樂)(10)acceptone’sinvitation(接受某人的邀請(qǐng))(11)onbehalfof(代表)(12)participatein/takepartin/joinin(參加)(13)lookforwardto/eagerlyawait(期待)(14)atone’searliestconvenience/assoonaspossible(盡快)(15)appreciate/begrateful/bethankfulfor(感激)你校即將迎來100周年校慶,你作為學(xué)生會(huì)代表邀請(qǐng)校友們參加。內(nèi)容包括:1.告知活動(dòng)安排;2.期待廣泛參與。(1)100周年校慶紀(jì)念活動(dòng)theschool’s100thanniversarycelebrations(2)表示熱烈歡迎extendawarm/anenthusiasticwelcometo(3)風(fēng)景如畫的校園picturesquecampus/breathtakingsceneryaroundcampus(4)精彩的表演spectacularperformance(5)多才多藝的師生versatileteachersandstudents(6)教育講座論壇EducationalSeminarForum你校交換生Tom曾在程序設(shè)計(jì)競(jìng)賽中獲獎(jiǎng),你打算邀請(qǐng)他加入你的團(tuán)隊(duì)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給他寫一封邀請(qǐng)信,內(nèi)容包括:1.邀請(qǐng)?jiān)?2.加入的意義。(1)專業(yè)知識(shí)和經(jīng)驗(yàn)expertiseandexperience(2)完美地滿足需求perfectlymeetone’sneeds(3)我們團(tuán)隊(duì)的寶貴成員avaluableadditiontoourteam(4)和志同道合的人合作collaboratewithlike-mindedindividuals(5)進(jìn)一步提升編程技能furtherdevelopprogrammingskills【重溫真題】(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷)假定你是校廣播站英語節(jié)目“TalkandTalk”的負(fù)責(zé)人李華,請(qǐng)給外教Caroline寫郵件邀請(qǐng)她做一次訪談。內(nèi)容包括:1.節(jié)目介紹;2.訪談的時(shí)間和話題。注意:寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右。DearCaroline,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【審題與構(gòu)思】本文為一篇邀請(qǐng)信——邀請(qǐng)外教參加節(jié)目訪談。本文寫作需把握以下三點(diǎn):1.理解交際目的,根據(jù)雙方身份把握好語氣;2.介紹節(jié)目是本文的重點(diǎn),需具體詳細(xì);3.告知訪談時(shí)間和話題需言簡(jiǎn)意賅,清晰明確。內(nèi)容結(jié)構(gòu)方面,可將信件分為三段。第一段自我介紹并說明寫信目的。本題中,李華以節(jié)目負(fù)責(zé)人的身份向外教Caroline提出邀請(qǐng),開頭應(yīng)適當(dāng)做自我介紹表明身份,然后表明寫信目的——邀請(qǐng)Caroline參加節(jié)目訪談第二段介紹節(jié)目以及告知訪談時(shí)間和話題。在介紹節(jié)目時(shí),不要泛泛而談,應(yīng)涉及節(jié)目的具體信息,如創(chuàng)辦時(shí)間、節(jié)目?jī)?nèi)容、受眾以及受歡迎程度等。在告知訪談時(shí)間和話題時(shí),要簡(jiǎn)潔明了,切勿花費(fèi)過多筆墨贅述第三段結(jié)束信件。再次邀約,期待回復(fù)【經(jīng)典范文】DearCaroline,I’mLiHua,directoroftheEnglishprogram“TalkandTalk”.Isincerelyinviteyoutoparticipateinaninterviewofourprogram.Establishedinthe1990s,ourprogramenjoysalonghistory,bringingjoysandknowledgetothestudents.EveryMonday,ourprograminvitesnativeEnglishspeakersfromallwalksoflifetosharewithusabouttheirexperienceinChina,rangingfromtheirattitudestowardscertainissuestotheirworkandlifeinChina.Ournextinterviewwilltakeplaceat2p.m.nextMonday,thethemeofwhichwillbe“TeachingEnglishasaforeignlanguage”.Asadistinguishedforeignteacher,yourexperienceissuretobringussomuchfun.Ifthetimeandtopicworkforyou,pleasekeepusinformed.I’dappreciateitifyoucouldtakemyinvitationintoconsideration.Lookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Yourssincerely,LiHua【學(xué)生習(xí)作】DearCaroline,Ihopethisemailfindsyouwell.MynameisLiHuaandI’mthedirectoroftheEnglishprogram“TalkandTalk”onourcampusradiostation.OurprogramaimstoprovidestudentswithanopportunitytoimprovetheirlisteningandspeakingskillsinEnglishbylisteningtonativespeakerstalkaboutvarioustopics.Isincerelyinviteyoutoparticipateinaninterviewrelevanttoourprogram,whichwilltakeplaceat2p.m.onMonday,revolvingthetheme“TeachingEnglishasaforeignlanguage”.Ifthethemeandtimeworkforyou,pleaseinformmeandwecanarrangethedetails.ThankyouforyourconsiderationandIlookforwardtohearingfromyou.Yourssincerely,LiHua教師點(diǎn)評(píng)[得分]11分優(yōu)點(diǎn):1.要點(diǎn)齊全,內(nèi)容完整;2.語言恰當(dāng),較好地達(dá)到了邀請(qǐng)的目的。缺點(diǎn):1.文章第一段不夠簡(jiǎn)潔,沒有開門見山發(fā)出邀約;2.文章結(jié)構(gòu)布局欠合理,將過多的信息放在了首段,導(dǎo)致文章頭重腳輕;3.節(jié)目介紹略顯單薄,角度單一?！拘薷呐c升級(jí)】DearCaroline,Ihopethisemailfindsyouwell.I’mLiHua,directoroftheEnglishprogram“TalkandTalk”onourcampusradiostation.Isincerelyinviteyoutoparticipateinaninterviewofourprogram.Ourprogram,whichiswell-receivedamongstudentsforyears,aimstoprovidestudentswithanopportunitytoimprovetheirlisteningandspeakingskillsinEnglishbylisteningtonativespeakerstalkaboutvarioustopics,suchasarts,music,historyandsports.Asscheduled,ournextinterviewwilltakeplaceat2p.m.nextMonday,featuring“TeachingEnglishasaforeignlanguage”.Ifthetimeandtopicworkforyou,pleaseinformmeandwecanarrangethedetails.I’dappreciateitifyoucouldtakemyinvitationintoconsideration.Lookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Yourssincerely,LiHua教師點(diǎn)評(píng)[得分]14分優(yōu)點(diǎn):1.要點(diǎn)齊全,內(nèi)容完整,語言恰當(dāng),很好地實(shí)現(xiàn)了交際目的;2.文章結(jié)構(gòu)合理,主次分明。首段開門見山自我介紹并提出寫信目的,第二段介紹了節(jié)目的基本情況,包括受眾、節(jié)目?jī)?nèi)容以及受歡迎程度等;3.詳略得當(dāng)、內(nèi)容充實(shí),并恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂昧藦木?、分詞等高分表達(dá),錦上添花?！緦?shí)戰(zhàn)演練】假定你是李華,學(xué)校英語俱樂部負(fù)責(zé)人。俱樂部計(jì)劃舉行經(jīng)典英文電影賞析會(huì)(ClassicalEnglishFilmNight),請(qǐng)你給美籍外教Liz寫一封郵件邀請(qǐng)她參加。內(nèi)容包括:1.賞析會(huì)的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn);2.活動(dòng)內(nèi)容介紹;3.邀請(qǐng)Liz并請(qǐng)她推薦電影。注意:1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右;2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。DearLiz,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【參考范文】DearLiz,AsthestudentinchargeoftheEnglishclubofourschool,I’mwritingtoinviteyoutojoinusinour“ClassicalEnglishFilmNight”,anactivitywhichwe’regoingtoholdnextweek.Aimingtopiquestudents’interestinEnglishlearning,theactivityisscheduledtobeheldinthelecturehallat7:00p.m.nextFriday.First,theclassicalmoviewithprofoundtheme—PrideandPrejudicewillbescreenedaimingtoarousestudents’awarenessofgenderequalityandothersocialissues.Moreover,wehaveinvitedafilmdirectortogiveabriefintroductionincludingthehistorybackgroundandthecamerawork,whichhopefullycandeepenstudents’insightofBritishcultureandfilmingtechniques.Sinceyou’reanenthusiastofclassicalfilms,wewouldappreciateitmoreifyoucouldrecommendoneortwoofyourfavorites.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,LiHua突破2:推薦信【語料儲(chǔ)備】【句式建?！?.篇首——開篇明義①我非常愿意應(yīng)你的要求再推薦一部令人印象深刻的中國電影。I’mperfectlywillingtorecommendanotherimpressiveChinesemovieatyourrequest.

②得知你渴望進(jìn)一步了解我的國家,我強(qiáng)烈推薦《航拍中國》這部獲獎(jiǎng)紀(jì)錄片。Learningthatyourferventdesiretofurtherknowaboutmycountry,IstronglyrecommendAerialChina,anaward-winningdocumentary.

2.篇中——推薦理由①他是一個(gè)全面的學(xué)生,各科成績(jī)優(yōu)異。作為一個(gè)很有潛力的男孩,他擅長解決難題。Heisanall-roundstudentwithexcellentgradesinallsubjects.Asaboywithgreatpotential,heisgood/skillfulatsolvingdifficultproblems.

②首先,餐廳配有古老的中國家具,體現(xiàn)了中國文化的優(yōu)雅與深度,必定會(huì)給你留下深刻的印象。Firstandforemost,equippedwithancientChinesefurniture,therestaurantreflectsthegraceanddepthofChineseculture,whichwillsurelyleaveadeepimpressiononyou.

3.篇尾——表達(dá)希望①希望你能考慮我的建議。熱切期待你的及時(shí)答復(fù)。Yourtakingmyrecommendationintoconsiderationwillbehighlyexpected.Keenlyanticipateyourpromptreply.

②我希望我的推薦對(duì)你有幫助。期待你的早日/及時(shí)回復(fù)。Ihopethatyoucanfindmyrecommendationbeneficial.Lookingforwardtoyourearly/promptreply.【話題詞匯】常用詞匯話題示例相關(guān)表達(dá)(1)recommend/recommendation(推薦)(2)suggest/suggestion(建議)(3)extraordinary(卓越的)(4)competent(能干的)(5)expertise(專業(yè)知識(shí))(6)qualify/qualification(資格)(7)besuitablefor(適合)(8)makecontributionsto(做出貢獻(xiàn))(9)beresponsiblefor(負(fù)責(zé))(10)meetthestandard(符合標(biāo)準(zhǔn))(11)raiseone’sinterest(激發(fā)某人的興趣)(12)beexposedto(接觸)(13)beofsomehelp(有幫助)(14)takesth.intoaccount/consideration(考慮)(15)rangefrom...to...(從……到……不等)假定你是李華,你的英國筆友Henry暑假期間來中國游學(xué)。請(qǐng)你給他寫封信推薦一道中國美食,內(nèi)容包括:1.你的推薦;2.說明理由;3.表達(dá)祝愿。(1)典型的中國美食thetypicalChinesedelicacy(2)原產(chǎn)于四川省originateinSichuanProvince(3)品嘗一下這種美味佳肴的真味haveagenuine/anauthentictasteofthisdelicioustreat(4)去隱藏在小巷里的當(dāng)?shù)夭宛^gotothelocalrestaurantshiddeninalleys(5)享受你口腔中各種味道和口感的迸發(fā)enjoytheexplosionofflavorsandtexturesinyourmouth假定你是李華。在上周的國際文化節(jié)上,你結(jié)識(shí)了喜歡中國書法的交換生Peter。你準(zhǔn)備贈(zèng)送他一本英文版《中國書法鑒賞》。請(qǐng)給他寫一封電子郵件,內(nèi)容包括:1.寫信目的;2.簡(jiǎn)介該書;3.詢問地址。(1)備受歡迎earnitsgreatpopularity(2)全面地描繪了中國書法的發(fā)展情況drawafullpictureofthedevelopmentofChinesecalligraphy(3)提供專業(yè)分析和有用的意見provideexpertanalysesandusefulcomments(4)加深對(duì)中國傳統(tǒng)文化的了解deepeninsightsintotraditionalChineseculture【重溫真題】(2024·浙江1月高考)請(qǐng)你寫一篇短文向校英文報(bào)“SportsandHealth”欄目投稿,向同學(xué)們推薦一項(xiàng)適合課間開展的運(yùn)動(dòng),內(nèi)容包括:1.介紹這項(xiàng)運(yùn)動(dòng);2.說明推薦理由。注意:寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【審題與構(gòu)思】本文為一篇推薦信——向同學(xué)們推薦一項(xiàng)適合課間開展的運(yùn)動(dòng)。本文寫作需把握以下三點(diǎn):1.理解交際目的,根據(jù)雙方身份把握好語氣;2.介紹課間運(yùn)動(dòng)是本文的重點(diǎn),需具體詳細(xì);3.說明推薦理由需有理有據(jù),清晰明確。內(nèi)容結(jié)構(gòu)方面,可將信件分為三段。第一段簡(jiǎn)述運(yùn)動(dòng)的重要性(身心健康);或者談?wù)勀壳暗默F(xiàn)狀(學(xué)生學(xué)業(yè)壓力大,不愛運(yùn)動(dòng),身體素質(zhì)差等),因此運(yùn)動(dòng)刻不容緩第二段What:介紹適合課間開展的運(yùn)動(dòng),如briskwalking,ropejumping,jianzikicking等,并介紹其特點(diǎn)。Why:推薦理由可從以下角度著手:1.從該運(yùn)動(dòng)本身特點(diǎn)出發(fā):simpleandaccessible,lesspronetoinjury2.從運(yùn)動(dòng)對(duì)學(xué)生的影響出發(fā):(注意此處不宜泛泛而談運(yùn)動(dòng)的好處,而要具體結(jié)合你所推薦的運(yùn)動(dòng))第三段呼應(yīng)寫作目的,鼓勵(lì)同學(xué)們運(yùn)動(dòng)起來【經(jīng)典范文】Currently,moststudentsloadedwithheavyschoolworkattachlittleimportancetosports,whichmightleadtosomepotentialhealthproblems.Therefore,let’smakethemostofourbreaktimeandgetmoving!Honestly,youcan’tbeatbriskwalking,aformofmoderate-intensityaerobicexercisethatinvolveswalkingatafasterpacethanusual.Itissuitableforpeopleofallfitnesslevelsandcanbedoneindividuallyoringroups.Thereasonswhybriskwalkingisagreatchoicearetoomanytobelisted.Notably,simpleandaccessible,itdoesn’trequireanyspecialequipmentortraininganditcaneasilybeincorporatedintoyourdailyroutines.Whilewalkingalone,youcaneventakeamomenttoreflectonyourselfandenjoysuchqualityme-time,whichhelpsgetridofstressandbemoreenergizedwhenyoureturntoyourstudies.Moreover,benefitstostrengthenimmunesystemandtherebyreducetheriskofserioushealthproblemscan’tbedenied.HaveIpiquedyourinterest?Let’sgetmovingforbetterhealthandwell-being.Remembertostartsmallandslowlyworkyourwaytoalongerandharderexercise.【學(xué)生習(xí)作】I’dliketosuggestTaiChi,akindofChinesemartialart,forourschoolbreaks.It’saneasyexercisethatcombinesslowmovementswithdeepbreathing.WhyTaiChi?Itissuchacommonandeasysportthatyoujustwarmyourselvesandgetstarted.Everyonecanhaveatry.It’ssuitableforallstudents.Itpromotesmentalhealth,reducesstress,andenhancesphysicalfitnessandbalance.Plus,it’seasytolearnanddoesn’trequireanyspecialequipment.GiveTaiChiatry—it’saperfectwaytorefreshyourmindandbodyduringschoolhours.教師點(diǎn)評(píng)[得分]11分優(yōu)點(diǎn):1.要點(diǎn)齊全,內(nèi)容完整;2.語言恰當(dāng),較好地達(dá)到了推薦的目的。缺點(diǎn):1.文章第一段的開場(chǎng)過于生硬,沒有實(shí)現(xiàn)交際目的,關(guān)鍵詞應(yīng)該是recommend而不是suggest。2.第二段的推薦理由重復(fù)啰嗦,common,easy,everyone,suitableforallstudents都是表達(dá)一個(gè)意思:“太極簡(jiǎn)單上手”。mentalhealth和reducesstress不是同等份量,前者更籠統(tǒng)。3.推薦理由略顯單薄,句型簡(jiǎn)單?！拘薷呐c升級(jí)】Areyouwearyofstayingatyourdeskallday?It’shightimethatweshouldgetourbodymovingduringbreaks.I’dliketorecommendTaiChi,agentleChinesemartialart,forourschoolbreaks.It’saslowexercisethatcombinesflowingmovementswithdeepbreathing.WhyTaiChi?Itissuchacommonandeasysportthatyoujustwarmyourselvesandgetstarted,withnorequirementforanyspecialequipment.Ithelpstoreducestressofstudying,whichcontributestoimprovedconcentrationandmentalwell-being.Additionally,itemphasizestheunityofmindandbody,promotingflexibilityandbalance.GiveTaiChiatry—it’saperfectwaytorefreshyourmindandbodyduringschoolhours.教師點(diǎn)評(píng)[得分]14分優(yōu)點(diǎn):1.要點(diǎn)齊全,內(nèi)容完整,語言恰當(dāng),很好地實(shí)現(xiàn)了交際目的;2.文章結(jié)構(gòu)合理,主次分明。首段結(jié)合學(xué)生現(xiàn)狀,呼吁大家動(dòng)起來;第二段介紹了太極的基本情況,并從方便簡(jiǎn)單、有益身心健康等角度進(jìn)行了推薦;3.詳略得當(dāng)、內(nèi)容充實(shí),并恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂昧藦木?、分詞等高分表達(dá),錦上添花?！緦?shí)戰(zhàn)演練】假定你是李華。你得知一家英國電視臺(tái)的攝制隊(duì)在你市拍攝中國傳統(tǒng)美食節(jié)目,請(qǐng)你給他們寫一封電子郵件,推薦本地一家老字號(hào)的飯店——蓮香樓(LinHeungTeaHouse)。內(nèi)容包括:1.歡迎節(jié)目組的到來;2.推薦該飯店的理由;3.期待節(jié)目的播出。注意:1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右;2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。DearSir,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【參考范文】DearSir,IammorethandelightedtoknowthatyouareproducingaTVprogramabouttraditionalChinesefoodinourcity.WelcometoChinaandIamwritingtoyoutorecommendalocalrestaurantnamedLinHeungTeaHousewhichyoumightbeinterestedin.Withahistoryofmorethan100years,therestauranthasearneditsfameforthetraditionalanduniqueCantonesecuisine(Guangdongcuisine),amongwhichthesalt-bakedchickenandstuffedtofuarewellworthtrying.Itsspecialseasoning,featuredcookingmethods,diversifiedcookingmaterialsanddistinctiveflavorshavebeenwidelyaccepted,attractingvisitors,especiallyfoodieswhohaveagreatpassionforChinesefood.What’smore,theelegantenvironmentwithtraditionalChineseelements,aswellasitstopservicewillsurelyleaveawonderfulimpressiononyou.HopeyoucangivesomeconsiderationtomyrecommendationandIamanticipatingthebroadcastofyourprogram.Yourssincerely,LiHua突破3:告知信【語料儲(chǔ)備】【句式建模】1.篇首——開篇明義①很高興得知一場(chǎng)重要的排球比賽將在我們學(xué)校的體育場(chǎng)舉行,我寫信是為了表達(dá)我的興奮,并告訴你一些相關(guān)的信息。Delightedtolearnthatanimportantvolleyballgamewillbelaunchedinourschoolstadium,I’mwritingtoextendmyexcitementandinformyouofsomerelevantinformation.

②我非常高興地告知你們國際文化節(jié)將在我市舉行。I’mverydelightedtotellyouthataninternationalculturalfestivalistobeheldinmycity.

2.篇中——告知信息①這一活動(dòng)將于下周一舉辦,旨在加強(qiáng)跨文化交流,幫助學(xué)生提升多文化意識(shí)。Theactivity,tobeheldnextMonday,isaimedatenhancingcross-culturalcommunicationandhelpingstudentsdevelopmulticulturalawareness.

②一開始,會(huì)播放一個(gè)介紹視頻,展示多種文化的和諧共存。Tobeginwith,anintroductoryvideowillbeplayedtoshowcasetheharmoniouscoexistenceofmanycultures.

③最后,活動(dòng)將以精彩的表演結(jié)束,一定既富有娛樂性,又能增進(jìn)我們的知識(shí)。Atlast,theactivitywillendupwithawonderfulperformance,whichwillsurelybeentertainingandinformative.

3.篇尾——期待回復(fù)如果你想更多地了解這個(gè)活動(dòng),隨時(shí)聯(lián)系我。Ifyouwanttolearnmoreabouttheactivity,feelfreetocontactme.【話題詞匯】常用詞匯話題示例相關(guān)表達(dá)(1)inform(告知)(2)provide/offer(提供)(3)request(要求)(4)confirm(確認(rèn))(5)relevant(相關(guān)的)(6)concerning(關(guān)于)(7)schedule(n.時(shí)間表v.時(shí)間定于)(8)detailthearrangement(詳細(xì)說明安排)(9)inresponseto(作為回應(yīng))(10)bringsth.toone’sattention(引起某人的注意)假定你是李華,你的英國筆友David對(duì)你校的實(shí)踐項(xiàng)目VegetableGarden非常感興趣,請(qǐng)你寫一封郵件告知相關(guān)情況,內(nèi)容包括:1.項(xiàng)目?jī)?nèi)容;2.邀請(qǐng)?bào)w驗(yàn)。(1)以實(shí)踐體驗(yàn)為特色featurehands-onexperiences(2)發(fā)展實(shí)用技能的途徑anaccesstodevelopingpracticalskills(3)欣賞迷人大自然的窗口awindowforthefascinatingnature(4)播種、清理雜草、記錄它們的生長并收獲蔬菜sowtheseeds,cleantheweed,recordtheirgrowthandharvestthevegetables(5)實(shí)地觀察doreal-fieldobservations假定你是李華,你的新西蘭朋友Terry將去中國朋友家里做客,發(fā)郵件向你詢問有關(guān)習(xí)俗。請(qǐng)你回復(fù)郵件,內(nèi)容包括:1.到達(dá)時(shí)間;2.合適的禮物;3.餐桌禮儀。(1)重視準(zhǔn)時(shí)性laygreatemphasisonpunctuality(2)重視餐桌禮儀attachgreatimportancetotablemanners(3)進(jìn)食時(shí)不吵鬧don’tmakeloudsoundwhilechewingordrinking(4)合適的禮物appropriategifts(5)展示友好showyourkindnessandfriendliness【重溫真題】(2019·全國卷Ⅱ)假定你是校排球隊(duì)隊(duì)長李華。請(qǐng)寫封郵件告知你的隊(duì)友Chris球隊(duì)近期將參加比賽,內(nèi)容包括:1.比賽信息;2.賽前準(zhǔn)備;3.表達(dá)期待。注意:寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右。DearChris,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【審題與構(gòu)思】本文為一篇告知信——告知你的隊(duì)友Chris相關(guān)的比賽信息。本文寫作需把握以下兩點(diǎn):1.理解交際目的,根據(jù)雙方身份把握好語氣;2.告知的內(nèi)容必須真實(shí)、準(zhǔn)確,且告知事項(xiàng)需簡(jiǎn)明扼要。內(nèi)容結(jié)構(gòu)方面,可將信件分為三段。第一段交代背景和寫作目的背景:球隊(duì)近期將參加比賽寫作目的:告知Chris一些相關(guān)信息第二段告知的具體內(nèi)容1.比賽信息:應(yīng)包括相關(guān)的比賽時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、對(duì)手等要求2.賽前準(zhǔn)備:看對(duì)手的比賽視頻,分析對(duì)手的特點(diǎn);好好休息,補(bǔ)充精力迎戰(zhàn);賽前集訓(xùn),提高隊(duì)員之間的配合等第三段期盼回復(fù)【經(jīng)典范文】DearChris,Gettingtheinformationthatwe’llhaveavolleyballmatchnextMonday,I’mwritingtoinformyouofsomedetailsaboutthecomingeventsothatyoucanpreparewellforit.Firstandforemost,thematchtobeheldinthesportscentrewillbeginat2p.m.,inwhichwewillplayagainstthestudentscomingfromRedStarMiddleSchool.Besides,wewillwatchthevideothatrecordedthepreviousmatchagainstcompetitorstoanalyzetheskillsofthemtomorrow,soleavesometimeinadvance.Further,inordertoprovideenoughenergyforthecomingcompetition,itisnecessaryforyoutohaveagoodrest.Tosumup,Iwishyoucouldliveuptotheexpectationsofourschoolandgiveaperfectperforminthematch.Lookingforwardtoourvictoryandyourreply.Yourssincerely,LiHua【學(xué)生習(xí)作】DearChris,Howiseverythinggoing?Ihavegoodnewstotellyou.Avolleyballmatchisgoingtobeheldinafewweeksandourteamwillparticipate.Asforthedetailedinformationofthematch,therewillbeprobablydozensofteams,whichsoundschallenging.Additionally,notonlycanthetopthreeteamseachbeawardedamedalbutalltheotherteamstakingpartinitwillgetarewardaswell.Whatwillbethemostattractiveisthatthetopthreeteamstoreceivespecialvolleyballsthathavethenameofthemostpopularvolleyballplayeronthem.Therefore,wemustdoenoughpreparationsbeforethematch,suchastrainingasmoreaswecan.SoexcitedamIthatIcan’twaittojoininit.Howaboutyou?Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,LiHua教師點(diǎn)評(píng)[得分]10分優(yōu)點(diǎn):1.要點(diǎn)齊全,內(nèi)容完整;2.結(jié)構(gòu)清晰,語言較恰當(dāng)。缺點(diǎn):1.“比賽信息”和“賽前準(zhǔn)備”的比例分配不合理,前者占比過多,而后者則一句話簡(jiǎn)略帶過。這兩個(gè)要點(diǎn)的比重應(yīng)該是一樣的;2.“比賽信息”最重要的應(yīng)該是時(shí)間地點(diǎn)和對(duì)手,本文并沒有提及;3.“獲得明星球員的親筆簽名”應(yīng)表達(dá)為Themostexcitingpartisthatthetopfinisherswillbeawardedexclusivevolleyballs,eachsignedbyarenownedvolleyballstar.【修改與升級(jí)】DearChris,Iamthrilledtosharesomeexcitingnewswithyou.Ourvolleyballteamhasbeeninvitedtoparticipateinanupcomingtournament,whichpromisestobeanexhilaratingevent.Herearethekeydetailsofthecompetition.Thematchtobeheldinthesportscentrewillbeginat2p.m.nextFriday.Thetopthreeteamswillreceivewell-deservedmedals,andthemostexcitingpartisthatthetopfinisherswillbeawardedexclusivevolleyballs,eachsignedbyarenownedvolleyballstar.Inpreparationforthisevent,wewillintensifyourpracticesessions,focusingonbothindividualskillsandteamcoordination.Therefore,aseriesofstrategymeetingswillbeheldtodiscussourgameplanandaddressanypotentialchallenges.Pleaseletmeknowyouravailabilityfortheupcomingpracticesandstrategysessions.Iamlookingforwardtoyourenthusiasticresponse.Yourssincerely,LiHua教師點(diǎn)評(píng)[得分]14分優(yōu)點(diǎn):1.內(nèi)容全面:郵件涵蓋了所有關(guān)于比賽的關(guān)鍵信息,語言使用得當(dāng),有效地實(shí)現(xiàn)了溝通的目的。2.結(jié)構(gòu)清晰:郵件結(jié)構(gòu)合理,開頭部分立即吸引了讀者的注意,主體部分詳細(xì)介紹了比賽的基本情況,并從多個(gè)角度強(qiáng)調(diào)了為比賽所做的準(zhǔn)備。3.詳略得當(dāng):內(nèi)容充實(shí),既沒有冗余也不失重點(diǎn),恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂昧藦木?、分詞等高級(jí)語法結(jié)構(gòu),使郵件更具吸引力?！緦?shí)戰(zhàn)演練】假定你是李華,你正在教你的英國朋友Leslie學(xué)習(xí)漢語。請(qǐng)你寫封郵件告知下次上課的計(jì)劃。內(nèi)容包括:1.時(shí)間和地點(diǎn);2.內(nèi)容:學(xué)習(xí)唐詩;3.課前準(zhǔn)備:簡(jiǎn)要了解唐朝的歷史。注意:1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右;2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。DearLeslie,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【參考范文】DearLeslie,I’mdelightedtoseethegreatprogressyouhavemadeinyourChineselearningrecently.I’mwritingtoinformyouofthedetailsofournextclass.Asusual,theclasswillbegiventoyouat3p.m.thisSaturdayinmyflat.Duringthelesson,wewillhaveatasteoftheTangpoetry,aglorioustreasureintheChineseliterature,byappreciatingandrecitingtwoTangpoems,onebyLiBaiandtheotherbyDuFu,bothofwhomarerecognizedasoneofthemostoutstandingpoetsinthatera.Whenreadingthemaloud,notonlycanwefeeltheirrhythmicbeautybutwemayfeelhowthepoetsfelthundredsofyearsago.Togetbetterpreparedforthelesson,wouldyoupleasedoalittlereadinginadvanceaboutthehistoryoftheTangDynasty?Aglanceatitshistorymayhelpyouhaveabetterunderstandingoftheirworks.(AlittleresearchintothedynastymayshedsomelightontheprosperityofTangpoems.)Ifyouhaveanyquestions,pleasedon’thesitatetoaskme.Iwillbemorethangladtohelpyou.Yourssincerely,LiHua突破4:建議信【語料儲(chǔ)備】【句式建模】1.篇首——開篇明義①關(guān)于如何學(xué)好中文,你向我尋求幫助,我將給出一些建議。YouhaveaskedmeforhelpconcerninghowtolearnChinesewell,andI’llmakesomesuggestions.

②得知你在適應(yīng)新學(xué)校方面遇到困難,我特意寫信給你,向你提供一些建議。Learningthatyouhavetroublefittinginyournewschool,I’mwritingtoofferyousomeadvice.

2.篇中——提出建議①你可以嘗試將班級(jí)分成較小的小組,以促進(jìn)協(xié)作和學(xué)生互動(dòng)。它將讓中國學(xué)生有機(jī)會(huì)在輕松的環(huán)境中練習(xí)英語。Youmaytrytodividetheclassintosmallergroupstopromotecollaborationandstudents’interaction,whichwillgiveChinesestudentsthechancetopracticeEnglishinalow-pressuresetting.

②強(qiáng)烈建議通過多閱讀、多體驗(yàn)來豐富自己的生活。這樣,我們可能會(huì)結(jié)識(shí)新朋友,不再感到孤獨(dú)。It’sstronglyrecommendedtoenrichyourlifebyreadingmoreandexperiencingmore.Inthisway,wemaymakenewfriendsandwon’tfeellonelyanymore.

③此外,營造一種更加歡迎提問的氛圍可能也是一種激勵(lì)我們參與討論的好方法。Additionally,creatingamorewelcomingatmospherewherequestionsareencouragedmaybeagoodmethodtomotivateustoengageindiscussions.

3.篇尾——希望采納我真誠地希望我的建議對(duì)你有一些幫助。如果有更多我可以幫忙的,請(qǐng)告訴我。Isincerelyhopemyadvicewillbeofsomehelptoyou.IfthereismoreIcandotohelp,pleaseletmeknow.

【話題詞匯】常用詞匯話題示例相關(guān)表達(dá)(1)suggest/suggestion(建議)(2)advise/advisable(建議;可行的)(3)propose/proposal(建議)(4)benefit/beneficial(好處;有益的)(5)consider/consideration(考慮)(6)encourage(鼓勵(lì))(7)havetrouble/difficultyin(在某方面遇到困難)(8)leadto/contributeto(導(dǎo)致)(9)taketheapproachintoconsideration(考慮這個(gè)方法)(10)hopefully(有望)假定你是李華,是你班的英語課代表。本學(xué)期初,新外教Steve想了解同學(xué)們對(duì)口語課的建議。請(qǐng)你代表班級(jí)給他寫一封郵件,內(nèi)容包括:1.感興趣的話題;2.授課方式;3.考試形式。(1)欲知becurioustoknow(2)在教學(xué)方法方面intermsofteachingapproaches(3)讓我們更多地參與班級(jí)活動(dòng)involvemoreofusintheclassactivities(4)評(píng)估我們能力的不同方法adifferentwaytoevaluateourcompetence(5)小組演講、辯論或戲劇表演agrouppresentation,adebateoradramaperformance假定你是李華,你的外國朋友David最近選修了中文課程。他來信向你咨詢學(xué)好中文的方法。請(qǐng)你寫一封回信,內(nèi)容包括:1.提出建議;2.表達(dá)祝愿。(1)將漢語口語融入日常生活incorporatespokenChineseintoyourdailyroutine(2)報(bào)名參加漢語班或討論組signupforaChineseclassordiscussiongroup(3)從收音機(jī)中學(xué)習(xí)一些漢語成語learnsomeChineseidiomaticphrasesfromradios(4)參加一些漢語沉浸式課程attendsomeChineseimmersionprograms(5)購買參考書籍purchasereferencebooks【重溫真題】(2023·新高考Ⅰ卷)假定你是李華,外教Ryan準(zhǔn)備將學(xué)生隨機(jī)分為兩人一組,讓大家課后練習(xí)口語,你認(rèn)為這樣分組存在問題。請(qǐng)你給外教寫一封郵件,內(nèi)容包括:1.說明問題;2.提出建議。注意:寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右。DearRyan,I’mLiHuafromClass3.

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【審題與構(gòu)思】本文為一篇建議信——你認(rèn)為外教的分組方式有問題,并提出建議。本文寫作需把握以下兩點(diǎn):1.理解交際目的;即表達(dá)訴求,提出建議,希望對(duì)方采納;2.“說明問題”和“提出建議”的比重應(yīng)該是相當(dāng)?shù)?具體的問題對(duì)應(yīng)具體的建議。內(nèi)容結(jié)構(gòu)方面,可將信件分為三段。第一段交代背景和寫作目的。背景:你認(rèn)為外教的分組方式有問題寫作目的:針對(duì)分組方式提出建議第二段問題和建議的具體內(nèi)容。1.隨機(jī)分組的弊端2.你的分組建議第三段希望采納【經(jīng)典范文】DearRyan,I’mLiHuafromClass3.Itisimpressiveofyourarrangementabouttheafter-classoralEnglishpracticewhichisassumedtoimproveourproficiency,butIfindsomeproblemswiththeapproach.Withreferencetoacceptablegrouping,Iamwritingtooffersomepracticaladvice.Giventhatthestudents’Englishlevelsandabilitiesareunevenandunmatchable,randompairingislikelytobringaboutsomeproblems,suchastimeschedule,relationshipandseximbalance,whichmaydiscourageourinterestinandpassionforEnglishtrainingandimposelimitationonmoreprogress.Woulditbepossibleforustopairourselvesonthebasisoflanguageproficiencyorpartnerpreference?Ithinkitwilldefinitelyhelptobuildamorerelaxingandharmoniousatmosphereallowingformoreinteractionandadvancements.Ihopemyideaswillbeofsomehelpandreallyappreciateyourtakingthetimetothinkaboutmyadvice.Yourssincerely,LiHua【學(xué)生習(xí)作】DearRyan,I’mLiHuafromClass3.Inmyopinion,thewayyoudividedusintogroupshassomeproblems.Firstly,twostudentsagroupmaymakeuslesseffectiveandweareunabletoobtainenoughadvice.Secondly,dividingrandomlymayleadustobeingshytoexpressourselves.Inordertosolvethepotentialproblems,Isuggestthateachgroupshouldincludethreeormorestudents.Apartfromthat,weshouldbedividedwithourfriendswhoknowuswell,sothatwecanexpressourselvesbetter.Lastbutnotleast,ademonstrationshouldbeheldinordertoshowourprogressinspokenEnglishandboostourconfidence.Iwillhighlyappreciateitifyoutakemysuggestionsintoconsideration.Lookingforwardtoyourearliestreply!Yourssincerely,LiHua教師點(diǎn)評(píng)[得分]9分缺點(diǎn):1.首段中,考生直接指出問題,其實(shí)不利于個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的表達(dá),更不符合交際目的。從真實(shí)的交際功能出發(fā),禮貌委婉是建議信的主要基調(diào);2.要點(diǎn)分布不合理,第一段應(yīng)該表明寫作目的,第二段提出問題和給出建議;3.第二段結(jié)尾demonstration這個(gè)建議不相關(guān)?！拘薷呐c升級(jí)】DearRyan,I’mLiHuafromClass3.ThanksforyourarrangementbutIdon’tthinkit’sagoodideatorandomlypairupstudentsforthespokenEnglishtrainingafterclass.Tobeginwith,pairingupstudentsmayleadtoreducedcommunicationwithingroup,whichcanhindertheprogressofstudents.Besides,studentsmayfeeluncomfortableifpairedwithsomeonewhotheydon’tgetalongwellwith.Therefore,mysuggestionistoinvolve3or4studentsinagrouportoletstudentschoosetheirownpartners.EveryonecanfeelmorecomfortablepracticingandimprovingtheirspokenEnglishtogether.Hopefully,mysuggestionscouldbeofsomehelp.Yourssincerely,LiHua教師點(diǎn)評(píng)[得分]13分優(yōu)點(diǎn):1.內(nèi)容相關(guān)性:郵件內(nèi)容與提出的問題緊密相關(guān),有效地表達(dá)了對(duì)隨機(jī)分組練習(xí)口語的擔(dān)憂,并給出了合理的建議。2.結(jié)構(gòu)合理性:郵件結(jié)構(gòu)清晰,正文部分邏輯清晰,先指出問題,再提出建議,比重分配合理。3.語言準(zhǔn)確性:郵件使用了恰當(dāng)?shù)恼Z言表達(dá),如“reducedcommunication”和“feeluncomfortable”,這些詞匯準(zhǔn)確地傳達(dá)了學(xué)生可能的體驗(yàn)?！緦?shí)戰(zhàn)演練】假定你是李華,你們學(xué)校的英國交換生Jeff準(zhǔn)備參加“外國人講中國成語故事”比賽,他發(fā)郵件請(qǐng)你給予輔導(dǎo)。你回復(fù)郵件,內(nèi)容包括:1.答應(yīng)幫忙;2.提出建議;3.詢問輔導(dǎo)時(shí)間與地點(diǎn)。注意:1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右;2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。DearJeff,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【參考范文】DearJeff,Howareyoudoing?Havinglearntthatyouaregoingtotakepartinthe“ForeignerstellChineseidiomstory”speakingcontestandaskmeforguidance,I’mwritingtoprovideyouwithmyhelp.Firstofall,amongthousandsofprofoundidioms,you’dbetterchoosetheonethatisinstructiveandinterestingaswellassearchitsmeaningandor