1、1,英文寫作 enjoy your writing,2,高分作文的五大特性,1. 條理性.段落完整.層次分明 2. 準(zhǔn)確性.語法準(zhǔn)確.用詞精當(dāng) 3. 流暢性.層次清晰.行文連貫 4. 簡潔.多樣性. 語言簡潔.不重復(fù) 5. 思想性.文章立意高.表達(dá)個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)內(nèi)容積極向上,3,英語寫作方法六大原則,1. 高級詞匯原則 2. 狀語提前原則 3. 短語優(yōu)先原則 4. 并列句.復(fù)合句和特殊句式 原則 5. 長短句交替原則 6. 短文分段分層原則,4,其他注意事項(xiàng)：,（1） 字跡清楚，書寫流利。 （2）審題 認(rèn)真，符合要求，文章觀點(diǎn)明確。 （3）句子既要生動(dòng)，又要簡明扼要。 （4）盡量避免重復(fù)使用相同句型

2、，詞匯和短語,5,使用分詞,Once it is held, it will bring a lot of chances to Beijing and make it more prosperous and modern.,Once held, it will bring a lot of chances to Beijing, making it more prosperous and modern.,學(xué)會使用豐富的句式,6,使用定語從句,Many pollution problems can be more serious, and it can eventually do damage

3、 to our surroundings.,Many pollution problems can be more serious, which can eventually do damage to our surroundings.,More visitors from all over the world will flood into China, which financially benefit Beijing.,Whats more, more people will be attracted to Beijing, which will contribute to the de

4、velopment of tourism to a great extent.,7,使用 with 結(jié)構(gòu),When the number of tourists is increasing, traffic will become more crowded.,With the number of tourists increasing, traffic will become more crowded.,With more and more visitors going to Beijing, tourism will be flourishing .,With everyone doing

5、his bit, the game will be a great success.,8,使用被動(dòng)句,Measures should be taken to avoid the bad effect mentioned above.,Only in this way can we hold a successful Olympic Games.,使用倒裝結(jié)構(gòu),9,二、學(xué)會使用較高級詞匯,用詞準(zhǔn)確、得體是寫作的前提，在此基礎(chǔ)上使用高級詞匯和短語，既可以體現(xiàn)出作者的語言駕馭能力，又有助于獲得高分。,10,How to use advanced expressions,In my opinion,

6、it is difficult to hold the Olympics.,In my opinion, it is challenging to hold the Olympics.,It will have a great effect on the development of Beijing.,far-reaching profound significant,11,Tourism is becoming a booming industry with the development of the city.,China will enjoy a boom in economy.,促進(jìn)

7、 繁榮經(jīng)濟(jì)旅游發(fā)展,Some students see it as a good opportunity to boost economy and accelerate the pace of the construction of our modern society.,Holding the Olympic Games will promote the development of economy, making the city more booming and modern.,12,“中國位于太平洋西岸，地大物博，歷史悠久，面積960萬平方公里”。,China lies on the

8、west bank of the Pacific Ocean. It is very big and has a lot of things. Its history is very long, and its area is 9.6 million square kilometers.,Practice to challenge yourself,13,China, which lies on the west of the Pacific Ocean, is rich in natural resources. It is a great country with a long histo

9、ry, covering an area of 9.6 million square kilometers.,China, a large country with a long history, lies on the west of the Pacific Ocean. It is abundant in natural resources, covering an area of 9.6 million square kilometers.,14,Replace the underlined expressions,Among all the people going to work,

10、car drivers make up 18%. 2.The Internet can help us finish many tasks. 3.The library is important to us. 4. One can only become a skilled one after many failures. 5. Last year saw a more and more fierce competition in the job market. 6. He tried to pass the exam, but failed.,complete,accomplish,fulf

11、ill,vital,essential,endless,countless,numerous,witnessed,attempted to,amount to,account for,get through,15,7. Some students dont value their money at all.,8. It is also essential that you get some skills for taking exams.,treasure,cherish,acquire,obtain,gain,9. It would take me a great deal of time,

12、 which would surely invite numerous inconveniences to me.,undoubtedly,unquestionably,10. More and more people come to big cities, which causes serious housing problems.,flood into,crowd into,pour into,definitely,16,practice,隨著家庭收入的增加，越來越多的人們能買起個(gè)人電腦，空調(diào)，手提電腦和數(shù)碼相機(jī)等等。（新舊變化） With the family income raised

13、,more and more people can afford to buy personal computers, air-conditioners, portable computers, digital cameras and so on.,17,.為了使得生態(tài)平衡,我們要保護(hù)野生動(dòng)物. (新舊變化) In order to keep balance of nature, we should protect wild animals/wildlife. 多達(dá)百分之四十的男孩喜歡在網(wǎng)上打游戲。 (觀點(diǎn)討論) As many as 40 percent of the boys like p

14、laying games on line.,18,我寫這封信,申請你們在報(bào)紙廣告中招聘的職位。我認(rèn)為我適合這工作。(求職) I write this letter, applying for the post you offered ( offered ) on the ads in the newspaper. I think I am fit/suitable for this position.,19,.為了豐富學(xué)生的課外生活,學(xué)生會將組織一次郵票展覽. (格式套用語) In order to enrich the students out-of-class life, the stud

15、ents union will held this stamp show. To enrich the students s out-of-class life, the students union will held the stamp show.,20,如果我被接受,我一定會盡力干好工作.(人物介紹) If I am accepted, Ill surely try my every effort to do the job well.,21,過去，人們過著貧困而簡單的生活。 （新舊變化） 4.In the past, people led/lived a poor and simple

16、 life. (They lived poorly and simply.),22,絕大部分的學(xué)生上網(wǎng)只是聊天,打游戲或者看電影。只有少數(shù)學(xué)生是我為了搜索信息或者國內(nèi)外新聞. (觀點(diǎn)討論) Most of the students who are on net are just to have a chat, play games or see films. Only a few students on net are just to seek information or learn about news both at home and abroad.,23,最近，我在200個(gè)學(xué)生中作了一

17、個(gè)關(guān)于他們未來工作的調(diào)查。其中一半是男生，一半是女生。 （觀點(diǎn)討論） Recently, I have made a survey among 200 students about their future jobs. Half of them are boys and half of them are girls. (I have surveyed among 200 students aboutHalf of them and the rest),24,隨著中國經(jīng)濟(jì)的發(fā)展和中國的進(jìn)入WTO，越來越多的轎車將進(jìn)入普通家庭。 With the development of the Chines

18、e economy and Chinas entry into WTO, more and more cars will enter/ go into ordinary families.,25,過渡詞的使用,過渡詞是一種關(guān)系指引詞，一般由副詞或起副詞作用的短語承擔(dān)。此外，代詞、連詞、上下文的近義詞等也可作過渡詞。過渡詞猶如“橋梁”，在文章中發(fā)揮著連接上下文的作用，學(xué)會恰當(dāng)?shù)剡\(yùn)用過渡詞會使文章結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，啟、承、轉(zhuǎn)、合，過渡自然，融會貫通，連成一體。,26,（1）表并列關(guān)系的過渡詞： and, also， as well, as well as， or, too, not onlybut als

19、o, both and, either or, neithernor等。,27,（2）表遞進(jìn)關(guān)系的過渡詞： besides, in addition（加之，除之外）, moreover(此外，而且), whats more， whats worse等。,28,（3）表轉(zhuǎn)折對比的過渡詞： but, however, yet, instead, on the other hand, on the contrary, although, different from, despite, in spite of, whereas, unlike, nevertheless, not onlybut a

20、lso, herethere, years agotoday, thisthat, the formerthe latter, thennow, the first whereas the second, oncenow, on the one hand on the other hand, someothers等。,29,（4）表原因的過渡詞： because, because of, since, as, for, now that, thanks to, due to（由于）, for this reason, owing to, as far as, considering that,

21、 seeing that等。,30,（5）表結(jié)果的過渡詞： so, thus, therefore, as a result, so that, then, thereby, hence, sothat, suchthat, accordingly等。,31,（6）表?xiàng)l件的過渡詞： if, unless, on condition that, as/so long as等。,32,（7）表時(shí)間的過渡詞： when, while, after, before, until, as soon as, later, afterwards, soon, lately, recently, since,

22、 from then on,eventually, in the meantime, then, suddenly, at the same time, next, early this morning / year / century, after a while, in a few days, now, presently, finally, at last, all of a sudden, form now on, at present, immediately, the moment等。,33,（8）表特定的順序關(guān)系的過渡詞： first, firstly, second, seco

23、ndly, third, thirdly, above all, first of all, then, next, finally, in the end, at last, afterwards （后來）, meanwhile（幾乎同時(shí)）, thereafter（在那以后）, last, finally, eventually（終于）等。,34,（9）表換一種方式表達(dá)的過渡詞： in other words, that is to say, to put it another way等。,35,（10）表進(jìn)行舉例說明的過渡詞： for instance, for example, take

24、 as an example, namely, such as, like, in other words, that is to say, that is等。,36,（11）表陳述事實(shí)的過渡詞： in fact, actually, as a matter of fact, to tell you the truth等。,37,（12）表強(qiáng)調(diào)的過渡詞： certainly, indeed, above all, surely, most important, in fact, no doubt, without any doubt, truly, obviously, of course,

25、actually, as a matter of fact, chiefly, especially, primarily, in particular, undoubtedly, absolutely等。,38,（13）表比較、對比的過渡詞： like, unlike, in the same way, similarly, be similar to, rather than, on the contrary, by contrast, one one hand, on the other hand, otherwise 等。,39,（14）表目的的過渡詞： for this reason

26、, for this purpose, so that, in order to, so as to等。,40,（15）表總結(jié)的過渡詞： in a word(總之，簡言之), in general, in short(總之), above all, after all, generally speaking, to sum up, finally, in conclusion, to conclude, at last, in summary, on the whole等。,41,（16）表增補(bǔ)的過渡詞：in addition, furthermore, again, also, beside

27、s, moreover, whats more, similarly, next, finally 等。,42,2、文章段落之間的邏輯關(guān)系主要由過渡詞來完成，在修辭中稱為啟、承、轉(zhuǎn)、合?！皢ⅰ本褪情_頭, “承”是承接，“轉(zhuǎn)”是轉(zhuǎn)折，“合”是綜合或總結(jié)。,43,（1） “啟”。用于表示“啟”的過渡詞或過渡性的語句通常用在段落或文章的開頭：,過渡詞： first, first of all, at first, in the first place, firstly, to being with, to start with, recently, now, at present, in recen

28、t years, in general, generally speaking, at present, lately, currently, 過渡句：It is often said that, As the proverb says, It goes without saying that, It is clear/obvious that, Many people often ask ,44,過渡詞： second, similarly, in addition, besides, then, furthermore, moreover, what is more, what is wo

29、rse, for example, for instance, certainly, surely, obviously, in other words, especially, particularly, in particular, indeed, still, third, truly, in fact, at the same time, no doubt，,（2） “承”。表示“承”的過渡詞或過渡性的語句通常 用在段落中的第一個(gè)句中：,45,（2） “承”。表示“承”的過渡詞或過渡性的語句通常用在段落中的第一個(gè)句中：,過渡句：It is true that, Everybody kn

30、ows that, It can be easily proved that, No one can deny that The reason why is that , There is no doubt that, To takefor an example (instance) , We know that, What is more serious is that,46,（3）“轉(zhuǎn)”。用于“轉(zhuǎn)”的過渡詞或過渡性的語句通常用在段落中的第二個(gè)句中：,過渡詞：but, however, on the other hand, on the contrary, in contrast, in a

31、ny case, at any rate(無論如何), nevertheless(雖然如此), otherwise, or, or else, while, whereas, but, despite, in spite of ., yet, instead, 過渡句：I do not believe that, Perhaps youll ask why This may be true, but we still have a problem with regard to, Though we are in basic agreement with , yet differences will be found, Thats why i feel that,47,（4） “合”。用于“合”的過渡詞或過渡性的語句通常用在段落的結(jié)論句或文章的結(jié)論段中：,過渡詞： in a word, in general, in short, above all, after all, generally speaking，to sum up, finally, in