1、高中英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作之人物簡(jiǎn)介類(lèi)作文, 廖 菁,人物簡(jiǎn)介,Learning Aims： 1. Learn some words expressions and structures to describe a person 2. Write a passage about Jane Goodall.,Preparation for writing,1、Birthday and birth place 1) 出生于年月地方 2、Family background 2) 在他父母的幫助下 3)當(dāng)他是一個(gè)小孩子的時(shí)候 4)在他的童年時(shí)代 5) 過(guò)著幸福/ 艱難的生活 6) 在歲的時(shí)候,1)was / wer

2、e born onin 2)with the help of his parents 3)when he was a small boy 4)during his childhood 5)live a happy /hard life 6)at the age of,3、Education 1) 從大學(xué)畢業(yè) 2) 當(dāng)他在大學(xué)的時(shí)候，他主修 3) 在方面有天賦 4)獲得博士學(xué)位,1) graduate fromdepartment of university , 2) When at college , he majored in, 3) have a gift for 4) gain a do

3、ctors degree,4. Big events in his life 1)把自己一生的時(shí)間奉獻(xiàn)給 2)做方面的研究 3) do sth with great determination and perseverance . 4)win/get (the)first prize,1) devote his lifetime to , 2) do research about / into 3)帶著巨大的決心和毅力干 4)獲得一等獎(jiǎng),5) 贏得一枚金牌 6) 獲得諾貝爾獎(jiǎng) 7) become a world champion 8) 因而獲得獎(jiǎng)?wù)?9) be awarded the titl

4、e of,5) win a gold medal 6) win the Nobel Prize for 7) 成為世界冠軍 8) be awarded a medal for 9) 獲得稱(chēng)號(hào),5、Evaluation 1) one of the best (most important) 2) 被每個(gè)人尊重 3) his hard work brought him great success . 4) be regarded as 5) set a good example to us 6) 對(duì).評(píng)價(jià)高 7) 把專(zhuān)用于/奉獻(xiàn)給,1) 最好的.之一 2) be respected by ever

5、yone . 3) 他的努力工作帶給了他巨大的成功。 4)被看做 5) 給我們樹(shù)立了良好的榜樣 6) speak highly of 7) devote .to .,Then how to describe a person ?,一、寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容 1. age, sex, birth-place, background (概況) 2. appearance, character (外表、性格) 3. Education (教育背景) 4. big events in his or her life (in order of time) (經(jīng)歷、生平) 5. evaluation (評(píng)價(jià)),1. 職

6、位頭銜： 用同位語(yǔ), 年齡性別與家境也可用同位語(yǔ)。如： 孫淑偉是來(lái)自廣東的14歲男孩，他是世界跳水冠軍。 Sun Shuwei, a world champion in diving (同位語(yǔ)), is a boy of 14 from Guangdong. 例句仿寫(xiě)： 亞伯拉汗林肯(Abraham Lincoln), 于1809年2月12日出生于肯塔基州。(Kentucky) Abraham Lincoln , the son of a poor family , was born in Kentucky on February 12 , 1809 .,二、句式模板,2. 介紹出生: 介紹出

7、生的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)和家境用分詞結(jié)構(gòu), 使文章更簡(jiǎn)潔。如： 姚明于1980年出生在上海，是一位世界著名的籃球運(yùn)動(dòng)員。 Yao Ming, born in Shanghai in 1980 (定語(yǔ)), is a world famous basketball player. 例句仿寫(xiě)： Marie Curie 1867年11月7日出生于波蘭，是世界上最著名的科學(xué)家之一。 Marie Curie，born in Poland on November seventh 1867, was one of the best known scientists in the world.,查爾斯狄更斯出生在貧苦的職

8、員家庭，他幾乎沒(méi)有受過(guò)什么教育。 Born into a poor clerk s family(原因狀語(yǔ)), Charles Dickens had little schooling. 例句仿寫(xiě)： 1930年袁隆平出生于一個(gè)貧困的家庭，于1953年畢業(yè)于西南農(nóng)業(yè)大學(xué)( Southeast Agricultural College) Born into a poor family in 1930, Yuan Longping graduated from Southeast Agricultural College.,3. 描寫(xiě)外貌: 巧用with短語(yǔ)。如： My Chinese teache

9、r is a beautiful lady, with long hair and big eyes (她長(zhǎng)著兩只大眼睛, 留著長(zhǎng)發(fā)). 例句仿寫(xiě)： 我的老板是一位有著黑色的頭發(fā)，一雙大眼睛的英俊年輕人。 My boss is a handsome young man, with black hair and big eyes.,4. 生平事跡： 盡量用復(fù)合句、并列句、非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)和倒裝等高級(jí)語(yǔ)句。如： In his life, he got many honours， one of which is the 2005 CCTV Moving China Award.在他的一生中，他獲得了許

10、多榮譽(yù)，其中包括獲得“2005年感動(dòng)中國(guó)年度人物”的稱(chēng)號(hào)。(定語(yǔ)從句) 例句仿寫(xiě): Joan Goodall 在猩猩的自然環(huán)境中研究猩猩，這讓她更多地理解了猩猩的行為。 Joan Goodall studied the chimps in their own environment, which made her fully understand chimp behaviour., In 2006, having broken the world record and got the gold medal(在他打破世界紀(jì)錄并獲得金牌之后), he became the idol(偶像） of

11、the youth.(分詞短語(yǔ)做時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)) 例句仿寫(xiě)： 對(duì)自己的生活很滿意，他不在乎名聲和財(cái)富。 Satisfied with the his life, he cares little about his fame and wealth., Not only does he show interest in science, but also he has a gift for music. 他不但對(duì)科學(xué)極感興趣，而且他還有音樂(lè)天賦。(倒裝句式) 例句仿寫(xiě)： 他不僅專(zhuān)注自己的研究，而且關(guān)心社會(huì)福利事業(yè)。 Not only is he devoted to his research, but

12、also he concerns himself with the welfare project.,寫(xiě)成長(zhǎng)經(jīng)歷請(qǐng)按時(shí)間順序。如when he was a small boy， at (the age of) five， in 2006， a year later等。,名師指津：,5. 評(píng)價(jià): 盡量運(yùn)用短語(yǔ)。如： Lei Feng set a good example to us (給我們樹(shù)立了一個(gè)良好的榜樣), so all the people show great respect for /to him (很敬重他).,Next, lets move to practice!,四. 寫(xiě)作

13、 (一) Jane Goodall, 1934年出生于英國(guó)。她是著名的動(dòng)物學(xué)家(zoologist)。畢業(yè)于劍橋Cambridge University)大學(xué)。 從小就夢(mèng)想在自然環(huán)境中研究動(dòng)物。1960年來(lái)到非洲研究猩猩。 取得成就： 1) 在Joan Goodall 之前，沒(méi)有人完全了解猩猩的行為：吃肉；一起狩獵；像家庭成員一樣交流，生活。 2) 保護(hù)并尊重黑猩猩，反對(duì)用于實(shí)驗(yàn)和娛樂(lè)。幫助建立動(dòng)物自然棲息地。 3) 得到許多榮譽(yù)。,Jane Goodall, born in England in 1934, is a world famous zoologist, who graduated

14、 from Cambridge University. Since her childhood she had wanted to work with animals in their own environment. In 1960, she achieved her dream - she arrived in Gombe to study the chimps.,Nobody before Jane fully understood chimp behaviour. Her work changed the way people think about chimps. For examp

15、le, one important thing she discovered was that chimps hunt and eat meat. She actually observed chimps hunt as a group. She also discovered how chimps communicate with each other. She has argued that wild animals should be left in the wild and not used for entertainment or advertisements. She has he

16、lped to set up special places where they can live safely.,Joan Goodall devoted all her time to studying chimps. She gained many honours. She inspires those who want to cheer the achievements of women.,(二) 1)居里夫人(Marie Curie) 1867年11月7日出生于波蘭一個(gè)教師家庭。 2)以第一名的成績(jī)畢業(yè)于巴黎大學(xué)(Paris University ) 物理系。在校期間學(xué)習(xí)勤奮。 3)

17、居里研究所(Curie Institute)的創(chuàng)始人，新元素釙(Po)，鐳(Ra)的發(fā)現(xiàn)者。被稱(chēng)為鐳的母親。 4)1903年和丈夫同獲諾貝爾物理獎(jiǎng)。1911年獲得諾貝爾化學(xué)獎(jiǎng)。,Born into a teachers family in November, 1867, in Poland, Madam Curie was one of the greatest physicists. In 1891 she went to study in Paris University. When she was studying in Paris, she lived a poor life, but

18、 she worked very hard. So she graduated from Paris University winning first.,Madam Curie devoted all her life to her research. She was not only the founder of Curie Institute, but also the discoverer of two kinds of radioactive matter-polonium and radium. She was regarded as the mother of Ra. In 1903 she and her husband were given the Nobel Prize for physics. S