1、話題寫作 (九)安全問題篇,話題寫作 (九)安全問題篇,話 題 分 析,安全問題主要涉及如何保護人身安全、校園安全、交通安全等。此類試題常以要點提示的形式來考查。,話題寫作 (九)安全問題篇,常 用 表 達,1As students, we should keep safety in mind. 2As a result, safety must come first! 3We should try our best to make sure we are safe. 4If we are in danger, we must call the police for help so that

2、we can keep ourselves safe. 5We must remember it is dangerous for us to swim alone in the river.,話題寫作 (九)安全問題篇,基 礎(chǔ) 寫 作,翻譯下列句子 1不要隨便和陌生人說話。 _ 2通過網(wǎng)絡(luò)和書學習一些自我保護措施。 _ _,Dont speak to strangers freely.,Learn some protection ways and steps through Internet and books.,話題寫作 (九)安全問題篇,3我們在網(wǎng)上交友的時候，一定不要輕易告訴別人自己的

3、個人信息。 _ 4對我們來說不在外面待到很晚是很重要的。 _,Its important for us not to stay out late at night.,When we make friends on the Internet, we cant tell others about our own information easily.,話題寫作 (九)安全問題篇,典 例 精 析,為了增強中學生的安全意識，提高自我保護能力，某校開展了以“安全”為主題的英語演講比賽。請你根據(jù)以下要點提示寫一篇演講稿。,話題寫作 (九)安全問題篇,注意： 1內(nèi)容必須包括所給的全部要點，可適當發(fā)揮； 2表

4、達清楚，語句通順，意思連貫，書寫規(guī)范； 3詞數(shù)80左右。文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。 參考詞匯： be careful, online, danger, callfor, go bad,話題寫作 (九)安全問題篇,How to keep safe? As teenagers，we should always keep safety in mind. But how can we keep safe? Here are some of my suggestions. First，_ _,話題寫作 (九)安全問題篇,【審題思路】 1明確主題：本文根據(jù)圖片內(nèi)容就“如何保持安全”這一話題進行闡述；

5、2寫作要點：(1)慎重交友；(2)遇險報警；(3)安全飲食；(4)自己的觀點； 3時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時； 4人稱：第一人稱。,話題寫作 (九)安全問題篇,【寫作模板】,話題寫作 (九)安全問題篇,【佳作賞析】 How to keep safe? As teenagers, we should always keep safety in mind. But how can we keep safe? Here are some of my suggestions. First , we should be careful when_we make_friends， especially online

6、. Second, if_we_are_in_danger , we must call the police for help in time so_that_we_can_keep ourse- _lves_safe . Also, we ought to eat healthily and safely. Eating_food that_goes_bad will do harm to our health.,話題寫作 (九)安全問題篇,Last but not the least, summer is coming, and we must remember it_is_danger

7、ous_to_swim_alone_in_the_river. In_short , safety must come first!,話題寫作 (九)安全問題篇,【名師點評】 使用first與second, also, last but not the least使文章布局合理，條理清晰 時間狀語從句 if引導的條件狀語從句，從句中用一般現(xiàn)在時表示將來 so that引導的目的狀語從句動名詞作主語，屬于高級用法定語從句 it作形式主語，“to swim alone in the river”是真正的主語。結(jié)合要點：說明自己的觀點 進行簡要總結(jié),話題寫作 (九)安全問題篇,實 戰(zhàn) 演 練,近來，

8、全國正在進行平安校園建設(shè)，作為一名學生，我們更應(yīng)該珍惜自己的生命，更加注意自己的人身安全。假如你是Daming，擔任校學生會主席，請你就安全問題，向全校學生發(fā)出倡議，寫一封安全倡議書。 內(nèi)容提示： 1不帶管制刀具到學校；2.不私自下河洗澡； 3不打架；4.上學放學的途中應(yīng)該注意安全； 5遇緊急情況，立即報告警察或老師。 ,話題寫作 (九)安全問題篇,參考詞匯：restricted knives or things(管制刀具)；have a bath(洗澡)；fight(打架)；emergency(緊急情況)；pay attention to the traffic(注意交通安全)。 寫作要求：

9、1.用詞恰當，要點全面，層次清晰，書寫規(guī)范。 2可適當發(fā)揮，80詞左右，開頭、結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。,話題寫作 (九)安全問題篇,Dear students， As we know, safety is the most important thing in our lives. So, we should try our best to make sure we are safe._ Yours， Daming,話題寫作 (九)安全問題篇,One possible version: Dear students， As we know, safety is the most importa

10、nt thing in our lives. So, we should try our best to make sure we are safe. We mustnt bring restricted knives or things to school because these things may cause serious problems. Do not have a bath in rivers or ponds alone without our parents permission. And, we should be friendly to others,話題寫作 (九)安全問題篇,so fighting is strongly banned. Make sure that we always pay attention to the traffic on our way to school or home. Furthermore,