1、1,中 考 專(zhuān) 題 復(fù) 習(xí) 課,Writing,2,書(shū)面表達(dá): 是中考英語(yǔ)中的必考題，占卷面總分的12.5%，分值為15 分 。,3,文章的形成過(guò)程：,單詞 短語(yǔ)，結(jié)構(gòu) +符號(hào) 句子 段落 文章,如何把這些組織一篇文章？,分析文章的形成過(guò)程,首先，我們必須在頭腦中構(gòu)成一幅mind map. 在map的幫助下，我們就能有效的到達(dá)我們的 目的地。,4,分析結(jié)構(gòu),Mike is crazy about football! He loves watching football matches. Of course, he loves playing football too. He often spe

2、nds about one hour playing football with his classmates after school. His parents dont like this and have asked him to go home before 5.30. He thinks it is important for him to spend some time on his hobbies. He wishes his parents could give him their support for his hobbies .,Introduction,Main body

3、,Conclusion,5,Discussion,How to Write English Compositions,6,集句成段,組段成篇,審清題意,連詞成句,抓住要點(diǎn),抄寫(xiě)規(guī)范,Writing skillssix steps,7,自從實(shí)施教育新政策，中學(xué)生有了更多自主支配的時(shí)間，但有些同學(xué)不知如何利用好這些時(shí)間，針對(duì)這種現(xiàn)象，你校廣播室“校園英語(yǔ)之聲”欄目就“如何更好地利用課余時(shí)間”進(jìn)行征文。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給該欄目寫(xiě)一篇廣播稿。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括： 注意: 100詞左右，廣播的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù) 參考詞匯: make good use of, interest groups social ac

4、tivities, do sports, net bar,8,Hello, everybody! Its time again for our English Broadcasting Program. Todays topic is “ How to Make Better Use of Our SpareTime”._,9,第一步:審清題意,認(rèn)真審題，明確寫(xiě)作主題、體裁、人稱(chēng)、字?jǐn)?shù)、結(jié)構(gòu)、時(shí)態(tài)、提示要點(diǎn)和補(bǔ)充信息,具體做法：用筆勾畫(huà),10,自從實(shí)施教育新政，中學(xué)生有了更多自主支配的時(shí)間，但有些同學(xué)不知如何利用好這些時(shí)間，針對(duì)這種現(xiàn)象，你校廣播室“校園英語(yǔ)之聲”欄目就“如何更好地利用課余時(shí)間

5、”進(jìn)行征文。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給該欄目寫(xiě)一篇廣播稿。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括：,注意: 100詞左右，廣播的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù),主題,體裁,人稱(chēng),結(jié)構(gòu),時(shí)態(tài),字?jǐn)?shù),已知信息,未知信息,以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主,11,第二步： 列出寫(xiě)作提綱（Outline）。,具體做法： 根據(jù)段落整理寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn),不要遺漏要點(diǎn)！,12,Introduction Main body Conclusion,problems,opinions,suggestions,Write an outline,花太多時(shí)間在興趣愛(ài)好上 迷戀網(wǎng)吧，打電腦游戲 -,-,合理安排時(shí)間 參加興趣小組 -,13,List some keywords about p

6、roblems. Phrases: _ _ 2. List some keywords about opinions. Phrases: _ _ 3. List some keywords about suggestions. Phrases: _ _,第三步：抓住要點(diǎn)，列關(guān)鍵詞,14,1.List some keywords about problems.,spend too much time on their hobbies be crazy about play computer games watch too much TV refuse to do homework,2. List

7、 some keywords about opinions.,not good for our health and study do harm to focus on Pay more attention to,1. 花太多時(shí)間在興趣愛(ài)好上 2. 迷戀網(wǎng)吧，上網(wǎng)打游戲 .,15,3. List some keywords about suggestions.,plan time carefully achieve a balance between study and bobbies take part in different after- school activities join i

8、nterest groups do some sports do some housework,合理安排時(shí)間 參加興趣小組,16,spend too much time on their hobbies refuse to do homework watch too much TV be crazy about play computer games,Whats worse,1.Make sentences with the keywords about problems.,so,that,Many students spend much time on their hobbies,they

9、cant finish their homework on time.,some of them watch too much TV,others students often go to the net bar and are crazy about playing computer games.,Nowadays, we students have much more free time than before. But quite a number of students dont know how to use the time properly.,We dont think its

10、good for their study and health.,2. Make sentences with the keywords about opinions.,第四步：連詞成句,第五步：集句成段，組段成篇,17,第五步：集句成段，組段成篇,we can plan our time carefully and try our best to achieve a balance between our study and hobbies. can set up and join different kinds of interest groups, and take part in so

11、me good social activities. we can do some sports. If we have time, we should help parents do some housework.,However, how can we make better use of our spare time?,For example,Besides these,And also,we,We,注意添加主題句，連接詞！,plan time carefully achieve a balance between study and bobbies take part in diffe

12、rent after- school activities join interest groups do some sports do some housework,3. Make sentences with the keywords about suggestions.,There are many things we can do.,18,How to give this writing an end?,Lets make better use of our free time and make our life rich and colorful!,Why not put our f

13、ree time to better use ? It is a good way to have a more colorful future.,19,范文展示,Hello, everybody! Its time again for our English Broadcasting Program. Todays topic is “ How to Make Better Use of Our Spare Time”. Nowadays, we students have much more free time than before. But quite a number of stud

14、ents dont know how to use the time properly. They spend so much time on their hobbies that they cant finish their homework on time. Also some of them watch too much TV, Whats worse, some students often go to the net bar and are crazy about playing computer games. We dont think its good for their stu

15、dy and health. However, how can we make better use of our spare time? There are many things we can do. For example, we can plan our time carefully and try our best to achieve a balance between our study and hobbies. And also we can set up and join different kinds of interest groups, take part in som

16、e good social activities. Besides these, we can do some sports. If we have time, we should help parents do some housework. Lets make better use of our free time and make our life rich and colorful!,20,how to write a good composition,開(kāi)頭:開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山 中間 結(jié)尾:,書(shū)面表達(dá)六步法,（審-抓-連-集-組-抄）,抓要點(diǎn),列短語(yǔ) 短語(yǔ)擴(kuò)句 找連接詞 連句成段,與主題相呼應(yīng)，

17、 緊扣主題,21,1. 壓線(xiàn) 2. 斜度一致3. 扁 4. 飽滿(mǎn) 5. 間隔,22,常見(jiàn)錯(cuò)誤,時(shí)態(tài)是否正確 主謂是否一致 要點(diǎn)是否全面 人稱(chēng)是否正確 語(yǔ)序是否有問(wèn)題 語(yǔ)言是否符合習(xí)慣 固定短語(yǔ)是否恰當(dāng),23,如今，中國(guó)掀起了廣場(chǎng)舞(public square dancing)熱潮。對(duì)于這種現(xiàn)象，人們褒貶不一。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列提示寫(xiě)一篇短文，談?wù)剰V場(chǎng)舞的利與弊，并提出解決措施。,要求：1.短文須包括所有要點(diǎn)，不要逐字翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；盡量運(yùn)用本講的重點(diǎn)句子。 2詞數(shù)：80100詞左右。開(kāi)頭部分已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：遭受suffer from；音量volume,24,Nowadays，pub

18、lic square dancing is becoming more and more popular. Most of the public squares are crowded with dancers，especially in the morning and evening. We all agree that public square dancing is a good way to keep healthy，especially for the old. Besides，it is money saving. But it also causes noise pollutio

19、n. Many people suffer from the noise caused by the loud music. They cant work，study or sleep well. They feel very angry and some even argue with the dancers. In my opinion，the dancers should turn down the volume while dancing. In addition，our government should build more public places for them，such

20、as squares and parks. We hope that people can have fun dancing without disturbing other people.,25,范文展示,Hello, everybody! Its time again for our English Broadcasting Program. Todays topic is “ How to Make Better Use of Our Spare Time”. Nowadays, we students have much more free time than before. But

21、quite a number of students dont know how to use the time properly. They spend so much time on their hobbies that they cant finish their homework on time. Also some of them watch too much TV, Whats worse, some students often go to the net bar and are crazy about playing computer games. We dont think

22、its good for their study and health.,26,However, how can we make better use of our spare time? There are many things we can do. For example, we can plan our time carefully and try our best to achieve a balance between our study and hobbies. And also we can set up and join different kinds of interest

23、 groups, take part in some good social activities. Besides these, we can do some sports. If we have time, we should help parents do some housework. Lets make better use of our free time and make our life rich and colorful!,27,The structure of the article Introduction Main body Conclusion,Summary,28,

24、寫(xiě)作： 第一步就是要認(rèn)真審題，明確寫(xiě)作主題、體裁、人稱(chēng)、字?jǐn)?shù)、結(jié)構(gòu)、時(shí)態(tài)、提示要點(diǎn)和補(bǔ)充信息 第二步就是要列出寫(xiě)作提綱（列關(guān)鍵詞、連詞成句、集句成段、組段成篇）,寫(xiě)作前：,確定人稱(chēng)、時(shí)態(tài),寫(xiě)作后：,查錯(cuò)改錯(cuò),29,中學(xué)生在成長(zhǎng)過(guò)程中經(jīng)常會(huì)碰到一些煩惱。假設(shè)你是李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇發(fā)言稿，在班會(huì)上談?wù)勀阌龅降臒酪约澳阕约旱淖龇ā?寫(xiě)作實(shí)踐,30,變換句式,并列句,復(fù)合句 結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句,Some students spend too much time on their hobbies. They cant finish their homework on time.,Some stu

25、dents spend too much time on their hobbies and they cant finish their homework on time,Some students spend so much time on their hobbies that they cant finish their homework on time,31,思路構(gòu)建,32,自我展示,Hello everyone, Im Li Hua. Id like to talk about my problems and how I deal with them.,Im not tall and

26、 Im not goodlooking. But I dont care about these. I always believe in myself. My parents sometimes cant understand what I do and say. I have few friends at school. So I often communicate with them and Im always friendly to my classmates at school. I have too much pressure in study too and often have

27、 few afterschool activities. So I often relax myself. When I have free time, I often do sports or listen to music. Sometimes I go shopping with my,33,_ _ Thats all. Thank you!,parents or friends. In this way, we can get better grades and enjoy the colorful life.,高分點(diǎn)評(píng)：,本文采用“總分總”的寫(xiě)作結(jié)構(gòu)。首先提出了分享問(wèn)題與解決方法的意愿，然后談?wù)撁總€(gè)問(wèn)題及解決的方法，最后用禮貌性的語(yǔ)言作出總結(jié)。本文作者能夠較好地處理表格中所提供的寫(xiě)作信息，并能發(fā)揮自主性，提出自己的合理建議。,34,短語(yǔ)：care about, believe in, communicate with, be friendly to; relax oneself; go shopping 句型：When I have free time, I often do sports or listen to music.時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句的運(yùn)用，使文章中的句子顯得不那么單調(diào)。In this way, we can get better gr