1、高考英語短文改錯考點類析代詞一、考點規(guī)律分析短文改錯對代詞的考查主要涉及人稱代詞的前后一致性(包括指代的一致性和單復(fù)數(shù)的一致性)、人稱代詞的主格與賓語變化、各類代詞的誤加與漏用(尤其是一些易受漢語影響的結(jié)構(gòu))、某些不定代詞的用法(尤其是在意思上用錯)、代詞在某些習(xí)語中的用法等。二、真題單句歸納(1) david pointed to a path which it he thought would probably lead to a village. (去掉 it，因它與其前的關(guān)系代詞 which 語義重復(fù)) (全國卷)(2) when we walked to the car, bill

2、smiled and shook head. (head 前加 his，漢語可“搖頭”，而英語的習(xí)慣要說 shake ones head) (全國卷)(3) we climb everywhere, not only in america. they have been to europe many times. (they 改為 we，前后人稱不一致) (全國卷)(4) and i cant forget the good food you cooked for i. (i 改為 me，因介詞之后的人稱代詞要用賓格) (全國卷)(5) i hope that both you two cou

3、ld come and visit us some time soon. (去掉 both。因 both 與后面的 two 意義重復(fù)，況且詞序安排也不對) (全國卷)(6) the smiths did his best to make me feel at home. (his 改為 their，因前面的 the smiths 指的是“史密斯夫婦”或“史密斯一家”，是復(fù)數(shù)意義) (全國卷)(7) and they must not break the rules too often if we want to win the game. (they 改為 we，根據(jù)句意，主從句的主語應(yīng)該一致

4、) (全國卷)(8) now i cant watch much television, but a few years ago (去掉 much，因為從下文看作者現(xiàn)在根本就不看電視) (全國卷)(9) now someone at home reads instead. (someone 改為 everyone 或 everybody。從全文語義來看，應(yīng)為“每一個人”) (全國卷)(10) im spend all the whole weekend reading and preparing for it. (去掉 all，因 all 與 whole 語義重復(fù)) (北京春季卷)(11) t

5、he day before the speech contest(比賽) english teacher talked to me. (english 前加 my，teacher 為單數(shù)可數(shù)名詞，前面要有限定詞) (全國卷)(12) i think i liked those classes because i felt that it helped me understand what the world works. (it 改為 they，因它表示 those classes) (北京春季卷)(13) in any other words, i am an only child. (去掉

6、 any，因 in other words 為固定短語，意思是“換句話說”) (全國卷)(14) for example, when he bought a chocolate cake, he put them in a secret place i couldnt find. (them 改為it，因它指代上文提到的a chocolate cake) (北京春季卷)(15) then he ate it all, by himself. he never helped other. (other改為others，others 泛指“其他人”) (北京春季卷)(16) the three o

7、f them were very excited. (them 改為 us，因短文用的是第一人稱) (全國卷)(17) but his parents think going to college is more important than playing sports and college is the only place for a smart boy like his son. (his 改為 their，因要與其前的 his parents 保持一致) (安徽春季卷)(18) according to studies, any children spend more time w

8、atching television than they spend in school. (any 改為 many / some，由句意決定) (北京春季卷)(19) and tried to translate anything into english. (anything 改為 everything，根據(jù)上下文句意確定) (全國卷)(20) as i was learning to express me in simple english. (me 改為 myself，express oneself 為固定結(jié)構(gòu)，意為“表明意思、意見，表達(dá)思想”) (全國卷)(21) one day i

9、 wrote a little story and showed to my teacher. (showed 后加 it，showed 在此作及物動詞，后面缺少賓語) (全國卷)(21) at once i apologize and controlled me at my best till the dinner started. (me 改為 myself，根據(jù)主語和句意，此處應(yīng)用反身代詞) (江蘇卷)(22) and every year more and more people start a stamp collection of your own (your 改為 their，主

10、語是 more and more people，故用代詞their) (浙江卷)(23) if any one of us had any difficulty in our life or study, the other would help him out.(other 改為 others，因為當(dāng)某個人遇到困難時，“其余的所有人”都會幫他，而不是“另外的那一個人”會幫他) (天津卷)(24) whats more, you have to be friendly with your pupils and take good care of him. (him 改為 them，因為此處要代

11、替的是 your pupils) (湖北卷)三、模擬單句演練(1) here are some letters for you and he. (2) she loves swimming. it keeps she fit.(3) here are the cats auntie brought us. take good care of it.(4) everyone here gets up earlier than her does.(5) here is my dog. its name is petty.(6) he opened mouth as if to say someth

12、ing.(7) dont lose your heart. try again. (8) the smiths have been married, but have no children of his own. (9) i tell him everything, for he is a good friend of me. (10) he smiled at her and laid her hand on hers.(11) when you are away from home, you should look after you.(12) if you have any quest

13、ion, put up hand. (13) its a very important thing. you must think over carefully. (14) i dont like these; please show me some other.(15) in order to catch the thief, the police did his best.(16) this is the book which you bought it for me ten years ago.(17) im very sorry about all the whole thing.(1

14、8) when i got up, i found parents were preparing breakfast for me.(19) yes, money is very important, but it is not anything.(20) at the airport, all his baggage was stolen, but soon he got them back. 【參考答案】(1) he 改為 him，因與you并列用作介詞 for 的賓語。(2) she 改為 her，因用作動詞 keeps 的賓語。(3) it 改為 them，因它指代前面的cats。(4

15、) her 改為 she，因其后有動詞 does。(5) its 改為 its，its = it is / it has，而 its 意為“它的”。(6) mouth 前加his，按英語習(xí)慣，此物主代詞不能少。(7) 去掉 your，比較：lose heart意為灰心，lose ones heart意為愛上。(8) his 改為 their，因其前相應(yīng)的名詞 the smiths(史密斯夫婦)表復(fù)數(shù)。(9) me 改為 mine，a friend of 后習(xí)慣上名詞性物主代詞，不接人稱代詞的賓格形式。(10) 將 her hand 中的 her 改為 his，句意為“他對她笑了笑，把他的手放在她手上”。(11) 將最后一個 you 改為 yourself，look after oneself 意為“自己照顧自己”。(12) hand 前加 your，否則不合英語習(xí)慣。(13) think 后加 it，因 think over 為及物動詞。(14) o