1、,Writing,Yu Xuemei No.3 Middle School,Writing Task,1. Pre-writing 2. The Writing Process 3. Post-writing,Pre-writing,1. A diary about “ A snowy winter day”.,2. Do you know how to write a diary?,請你用英文以“A diary about a snowy winter day” 寫一篇日記，注意： 根據(jù)圖片和英文提示短語，寫出意思連貫， 符合邏輯的英文文章。 ( 2) 所給英文必須都用上，不必逐句翻譯。 (

2、 3) 注意日記格式. ( 4) 提示詞語： get up early, find, be covered with, go, park with Li Ming, play with snow make a snow man, throw snowballs, be happy, fall down, be badly hurt, and be taken to hospital,怎樣寫英文日記 一、英文日記不拘形式，內(nèi)容不限，長短隨便，關(guān)鍵在于堅持不懈，運用自己學(xué)過的詞語和句型，摘要記述一天生活中有意義的事情及自己的真實感受，可以敘事，可以說理，也可夾敘夾議。 二、英文日記的格式通常為：首

3、行頂格寫“月、日、年、星期”或“星期、月、日、年”，如：Tuesday February 6, 2001 / February 6, 2001 Tuesday, 年份可以略去不寫；在該行的右邊寫上當(dāng)日的天氣狀況。如：Rainy / Cloudy / Fine等；第二行寫標(biāo)題，也可以不寫；再下一行寫日記的正文，正文的第一段的第一行可以頂格寫，也可以和以后各段的第一行一樣，后移三、四個字母位置開始寫。 三、日記一般是寫當(dāng)天發(fā)生的事，所以中文的謂語動詞常用一般過去時和現(xiàn)在完成時，也可以根據(jù)實際情況使用其它時態(tài)。 四、日記所描寫的是“我”當(dāng)天見聞及感受，故常用第一人稱“I”。為了避免寫得單調(diào)乏味，應(yīng)盡

4、可能用上新學(xué)的詞語和句型。完成后應(yīng)通讀全文，檢查是否有錯、漏之處，并及時改正。,A sample of a diary,The Writing Process,Read the picture carefully. 2. Brainstorming to come up with ideas. 3. Group work together for more information about the picture. 4. One student of each group prepared to say something about the picture. 5. Writing the

5、first draft and peer editing or group editing.,Key words: On a winter morning, be covered with, play with the snow, make a snow man, throw snowballs, be happy.,Post-writing,Some of your writing are on show. Correct the mistake together and writing the second draft . 3. Guess what would happen next . 4. Discuss and finish writing the whole story.,Key words: My friend, Li Ming, fall down, be badly