1、.【考研 1 號】 2011 版寫作160 篇 寫作第一 ， 五年命中作文原 ！反思與 步【背 范文】this is a very thoughtprovoking picture. in the picture ， a man has just bumped into thewall and wounded his nose. however， he seems puzzled by what had happened ， and has notfigured the way out. clearly ， if he does not learn a lesson from his bump

2、ing ， the next time hitwill definitely be harder.we can deduce from this cartoon that the drawer wants to remind us of an important lesson ofa life philosophy ： we should draw a lesson from past mistakes ， otherwise we will meet morefailures ， even bigger ones.in other words ， a failure is only an o

3、pportunity for us to restartmore intelligently.in the face of failures and mistakes ， we should study them carefully andseriously for their hidden assets.the invention of toilet paper is a good example to illustrate the above point of view. aworker in a germany paper factory got fired when the paper

4、 he made was of poor quality because he followed a wrong production procedure. as he was very sad ， one of his friends suggested thathe should examine his paper to find something useful. following his friends advice， he soonfound that although his paper was not good for writing ， it was soft and cou

5、ld be used for other purposes. then， he decided to modify the production procedure and manufactured the first batchof toilet paper ， which finally earned him a big sum of money.it is clear from this examplethat the mistake is sometimes a reminder that there is another way to learn how to do somethin

6、g right.【文章 言和 構(gòu)點(diǎn) 】1.描述 畫深 含 的另一種表達(dá)：we can deduce from this cartoon that the drawer wants to remind us of animportant lesson of a life philosophy2. we can deduce from this cartoon that the drawer wants to remind us of an important lesson of a life philosophy ： we should draw a lesson from past mista

7、kes ， otherwise we will meet morefailures ， even bigger ones.in other words ， a failure is only an opportunity for us to restartmore intelligently.in the face of failures and mistakes ， we should study them carefully andseriously for their hidden assets. 段首句冒號后的句子均是有關(guān)失 、 的 典表達(dá)， 熟 背 并在日常寫作 中靈活 用。3. 例

8、 首句 構(gòu) is a good example to illustrate the above point of view.其后敘述具體的事例。4. then， he decided to modify the production procedure and manufactured the first batch of toilet paper， which finally earned him a big sum of money. 句中 which 引 的非限定性定 從句，起 充 明作用。 從句中 earn 的另一種用法 得學(xué) ，earn 最常用的 是人作主 ，而 句 用物作主 ，表達(dá)

9、“使某人得到”的 ，例：his honesty earned him great respect.他因 而博得人 的尊敬。適當(dāng) 用常用 的特殊 和用法要靠平 的 ，使用 多思考能否 用其他的表達(dá)， 才能從根本上提高寫作水平。5. it is clear from this example that the mistake is sometimes a reminder that there is anotherway to learn how to do something right.注意兩個that 注意區(qū)分，第一個 真正主 的引 ，第二個 reminder 的同位 的引 .詞。同時該句與

10、句也達(dá)到了首尾呼應(yīng)的表達(dá)效果。【范文精譯】這是一幅發(fā)人深省的漫畫。圖中一個男子撞到墻上，傷了鼻子。但是，他似乎很困惑，不知怎么回事， 也沒有想出對策。 很清楚，如果他沒有從撞墻中吸取教訓(xùn)，下一次肯定撞得更重。我們從漫畫中得知，畫家想提醒我們關(guān)于生活哲理的一個重要方面：我們應(yīng)該從過去的錯誤中吸取教訓(xùn)，否則，我們會遇到更多的失敗，甚至更大的失敗。換句話說，失敗只是讓我們更加明智地重新開始。面對失敗和錯誤，我們應(yīng)該仔細(xì)、認(rèn)真地予以研究，這樣才會得到隱藏的財富。衛(wèi)生紙的發(fā)明就是說明上述觀點(diǎn)的一個很好的例子。一個德國的造紙廠的工人因?yàn)樗a(chǎn)的紙質(zhì)量不好而被解雇了，原因是他選擇了錯誤的生產(chǎn)流程。他的一個朋友看