1、2018 .6月續(xù)寫,浙江蘭溪蘭蔭中學(xué) 李華,第二節(jié) 讀后續(xù)寫 (滿分25分) 閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。 It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West. We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the

2、late afternoon. Uncle Paul, my dads friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.,His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolli

3、ng down the river nearby. Very early in the morning. Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. “The day starts at dawn on my farm,” he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze (吃草). I was impressed to see my da

4、d and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool.,In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasnt going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed

5、 slowly towards the mountains. “Dont be late for supper,” Uncle Paul cried, “and keep to the track so that you dont get lost!” “OK!” my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine t

6、rees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven (編織的) blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.,Paragraph1: Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. Paragraph2: We had no idea where we were and it got dark.,Basic information:,Da

7、d,Writer,A vocation like never before,A trip to the Wild West,Late afternoon,night,Morning,Afternoon,Settings:,1. listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby,3. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees , and the late afternoon sun m

8、ixed to create a magic scene .,4. It looked like a beautiful woven blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.,2. headed slowly towards the mountains.,Description of the rabbit:,The little Rabbit has a coat of white/brown hair. The two ears are long and prick up on its head. It is furry, soft an

9、d white/brown with two red eyes glaring above the chin. Its eyes are like a pair of small red bulbs. Exposed to sunlight, they become little pieces of red thread. Its ears are straight and long and they can turn and move slightly. How cute it is! 小白兔全身蓋一層雪白的毛。兩只耳朵很長，直立在頭上。它長著一身柔軟的毛，瞪著一雙紅眼睛.眼睛像一對紅色的小

10、燈泡，見到陽光時就微微瞇起；耳朵長而直豎，有時還會微微轉(zhuǎn)動,它多可愛啊,agile （動作）敏捷的，靈活的 able to move quickly and easily,At 20 years old he was not as agile as he is now. 20歲時他并不如現(xiàn)在這般矯健。,scurry VERB (尤指受驚嚇時)急奔，亂竄 When people or small animals scurry somewhere, they move there quickly and hurriedly, especially because they are frighten

11、ed.,The attack began, sending residents scurrying for cover. 襲擊發(fā)動后，居民們紛紛奔逃躲避。,Bushy-tailed squirrels scurry to find acorns and nuts to hide. 大尾巴的松鼠忙著搜尋和貯藏橡果和松子,gallop n. 疾馳；飛奔 v. 飛馳；急速進(jìn)行,whinny n. 馬嘶聲；嘶聲 v. 嘶；以嘶聲表示,用作名詞 (n.) The horse went off at a gallop across the field. 那匹馬疾馳起來跑過田野。 All the horse

12、s broke into a gallop. 所有的馬突然飛奔起來。,用作動詞 (v.) Two people gallop whip and spur, do not come in the city a little while.兩人快馬加鞭飛馳，不一會兒就來到城里。 When running free, the Afghan Hound moves at a gallop, showing great elasticity and spring in his smooth, powerful stride.自由奔跑時，阿富汗獵犬是飛馳的，它平穩(wěn)有力的步幅顯示出極大的彈力和跳躍力。,用作動

13、詞(v.) The horse whinnied with pleasure. 那匹馬舒服的嘶叫著。 It is an ill horse can neither whinny nor wag his tail. 這匹馬病了,它不會嘶鳴,也不會擺尾。,Problems and solutions,plot,Writing purpose,characters,feelings,Writing purpose:,分享作者年輕時的和父親的一次冒險行動，以及從父親那學(xué)到了一些東西。,Feelings：,從興奮，開心到害怕，吃驚，再到放松，開心的過程,Characters：,文章沒有明顯的顯示出來，但

14、父親應(yīng)該是很有經(jīng)驗的樣子。,Problems and resolutions：,第一段是problem的產(chǎn)生。第二段是resolution 的過程。,Paragraph1: Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.,It was very cute. We tried to hunt for it , walking through forests and hills without any rest. We finally got into the deep of a forest.,Paragraph2: We ha

15、d no idea where we were and it got dark.,We got lost . Through some difficulties, we got back safe with our efforts.,Paragraph1: Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. It was furry with a coat of gorgeous brown hair. After looking up at me with its pair of red bulbs , it began to

16、scurry ahead. “ Why not catch it and bring it back to Uncle Paul? They must be very happy.”With this thought, I rode hard to hunt for it. Dad saw it and had to follow me. The rabbit was very agile, soon entering a mountain forest . We had to get down the horses, continuing the chase and totally forg

17、etting the track back. Even though we tried desperately, the rabbit was out of sight in the end. Then we realized we were in the deep part of an forest.,Paragraph2: We had no idea where we were and it got dark. And dark clouds seemed to be gathering in the sky. Taking out the cell phone, we soon fou

18、nd something was wrong: no signal. And no compass. Frightened, I stared at Dad , trying to seek a solution for the trouble from him. “Maybe what you have learned in geography class works, he said, pointing to the stars in the sky. I knew he meant the North Star. Soon we found the right direction. We

19、 hurried back finding the horses . And the river was in sight again. The family was worried and about to call the police. At the sight of us, they were relieved and hugged us tightly. There was nothing more memorable than this rabbit hunting in my life!,第一篇 Cherie 老師 Paragraph 1 Suddenly a little ra

20、bbit jumped out in front of my horse.Instinctively, I yelled out loud, pulling back the reins hard in order to stop the horse from hurting the little creature. Badly startled by the sudden incident, the horse sped off the trackinto another direction.Dadfollowed closely behind, calling out to tell me

21、 how to soothe the terrified horse andI did as told. Finally, the horse calmed down, but we seemed toget lost, unable togo back to the mountain road. Paragraph 2 We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark.Wandering around, we were still stuck in the dilemma. Much to our delight, the sound

22、of water in the distance caught our attention and drove us to the riverbank. Dad proposed that we should walk along theriverwhich may lead us to thefarm houseand nothing seemed better than that. Time appeared to be merrier and shorterwhen I stayedtogether withDadand before long, the farm house came

23、intosight. What a thrilling but memorable experience it was!,第二篇：Katie 老師 Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.I immediately grew fond of the furry rabbit and called out excitedly,“Dad! Look!”Alarmed, the rabbit ran away in a flash. I followed it eagerly, hoping to catch it as my

24、 trophy for the trip. My dadjust followed me, knowing it was impossible to stop me. We tracked the rabbit for about ten minutes until it got completely out ofsight. Depressed and tired, I suggested going back. But apparently, we had diverged from thetrackUncle Paulwarned us to keep. (86 words) We ha

25、d no idea where we were and it was getting dark.The thought that we might havegot lostin such darkness sent shivers down my spine. Tears of fear and regret filled my eyes. Fortunately, Dad was not so panicked as I was. He kept silent and listened very carefully as he took my horse rein and led the w

26、ay. We had wandered for what seemed like ages when suddenly arivercame into sight. Hopefully, we could find our way back to thefarm houseif we followed the river. Finally, we arrived home safely just in time for supper, but what an experience! It turns out theres always a way out of any plight as lo

27、ng as we stay calm. (114 words),第三篇： Oz老師 Paragraph 1 Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. It was so quick that my horse was scared. The horse started to neigh, shiver and gradually lose control. It suddenly ran to another direction away from the initialtrackUncle Paulhas warned

28、 us to keep. Mydadheld the rope tightly in order to calm the horse down. However, it didnt work. Our cowboy hats were even lost while the horse was running wild and finally we fell down from the horse and the horse just ran away leaving me and my dad lying on the ground. Paragraph 2 We had no idea w

29、here we were and it was getting dark. My legs were hurt so that my dad had to carry me on the back.“Weget lost, right?”I asked my dad,“Yes. But dont worry, well find the way back home.”We slowly walked towards the luminous direction.“I guess werelatefor supper.”Sensing my fear and concerns, my dad t

30、ried to make me laugh. At that time, we saw theriverin front of us.“Dad, this is the river next to ourfarm house.We can follow the river to find our way home.”“Exactly! How clever you are!”Then we followed the river bank and finally our house came into oursight. Reflecting on this memory, I regarded

31、 this experience as my special adventure with my dad.,第四篇：Niehai 老師 Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. It got such a fright that it rushed at a high speed. I, frightened too, grabbed the rein tightly. Minutes later, the horse was off thetrackand I found that there was no sign

32、of mydad. In the middle of nowhere, I felt a wave of fear wrap around me .Worse still, the rain came pouring down and I was wet through. After seemingly long hours, there came a loud cry of my dad. As a quick response , I shouted in a loud voice.Dad, Im here!Tracing my voice, Dad finally found me an

33、d we got reunited. We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. The moon burst through the clouds and cast its silver light all over the wet land. We wandered slowly on our horses, feeling at a loss what to do. Suddenly, the sound of a floatingrivercaught my attention.Dad, maybe we can find

34、 thefarm housedown the river.Dad nodded with approval. With great care, we rode our horses along the river. Shortly afterwards, the Uncle Pauls farm, sure enough ,came into oursight. Finally, we got to the farm, safe and sound. What a trip like never before!,第五篇： Tanya 老師 Suddenly a little rabbit ju

35、mped out in front of my horse.My horse reared into the air, let out a frightened whinny, and galloped off thetrack. I held on for dear life, branches lashing into my arms and face. Finally he slowed down, then stopped, but looking around at the endless sea of trees, I knew wehad gottenhopelesslylost

36、. I called; the only answer was the rustling of the wind in the trees. The horse meandered through the lonesome pines, with me continuing to call and scan the horizon for a familiar landmark, ears pricked for the sound of a horse or a human voice. We had no idea where we were and it got dark.At last

37、 I heard the welcome sound of rushing water - theriver! Gratefully we went to the bank and drank our fill. We followed it in the direction that the sun had set, and eventually heard the familiar frogs, and saw the comfortingsightof the oldfarm house, mydadshining a huge lamp from the porch, guiding

38、our way home.,Molly Dorighi 3/6/2017 07:52:35 pm Lost in The Wild, Wild West It was the summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the wild, wild west. We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Alb

39、uquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul, my dads friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his ranch in Pecos. His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guest room listening to the crickets, owls, and c

40、oyotes. Very early in the morning, uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. The day starts at dawn on my ranch he said. After breakfast, I went to help aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze. I was impressed to see my dad and uncle Paul riding h

41、orses, they looked really cool.,In the afternoon, I asked uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasnt going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mount

42、ains. Dont be late for supper uncle Paul cried and keep to the trail so that you dont get lost. OK my dad cried back. After a while we could hardly see uncle Paul and his farm house. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun

43、 blended to create a majestic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.,原文地址：,coyote英 kat,Suddenly a little coyote jumped out in front of my horse and startled him. He was so startled, he took off running faster than I imagined he could. I was holding on

44、 as hard as I could and my dad was trying to keep up with me. My horse got off the trail and kept running, and only stopped once it reached the river. It seems the water must have calmed him down a bit. It was a beautiful spot and as frightened as I was just a few minutes earlier, I was happy that I got a chance to see such a place. My dad thought it was gorgeous too, but he said that we had to leave because the sun was setting and he did not want us to get lost. We had left the trail and we did not have