1、2014中考英語作文突破指導(dǎo),中考書面表達(dá)突破,新鄉(xiāng)市一中,2014中考英語作文突破指導(dǎo),1 聽力15 2 單項-8 3 完形10 4 閱讀-25 5 詞語7 6 補全-5 7 作文-20 所剩5-10分鐘，檢查：分值高到低、難到易。,中考英語大致時間分配建議,2014中考英語作文突破指導(dǎo),一、題型特點： 書面表達(dá)是對學(xué)生的語言組織能力、行文表達(dá)能力、基礎(chǔ)知識、語法、詞匯等綜合駕馭能力的考查。 中考書面表達(dá)貼近生活，貼近時代，給同學(xué)們一更多的表達(dá)空間。 作文題目由限制性題目到半開放性題目，提示性詞語越來越少，而給同學(xué)們的空間越來越大： 06年 Non-smoking Day; 07年 “校園節(jié)

2、約從我做起”; 到09年的“A Person I will never forget”， 10年_ is fun,2014中考英語作文突破指導(dǎo),二、考查形式（體裁）： 中考英語考查形式多樣：看圖（表）寫作、書信、通知、日記、記人物等。 體裁包括：記敘文、說明文和應(yīng)用文；,2014中考英語作文突破指導(dǎo),三、中考評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)： 作文一律按檔給分，與錯誤個數(shù)無直接關(guān)系。,影響作文分?jǐn)?shù)的因素： 1 題目要求、內(nèi)容要點； 2 句子準(zhǔn)確、通順； 3 層次結(jié)構(gòu)清晰； 4 拼寫、語法等錯誤； 5 卷面整潔度；,2010年河南中考評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：,2014中考英語作文突破指導(dǎo),四、做題步驟： 1 審題：審清作文體裁（類型

3、）時態(tài)、人稱等細(xì)節(jié)； 2 列提綱（文章結(jié)構(gòu)框架）：分幾段，以及每段大體內(nèi)容； 3 寫作：在提綱的基礎(chǔ)上補充要點； 4 復(fù)查：2遍1遍看查拼寫、語法、標(biāo)點等問題；2遍不出聲讀查，靠語感檢查語句是否通順、連貫等； 5 謄抄：不允許做任何的更改。 *總之做到三審：體裁、時態(tài)、人稱； 三思：詞匯短語句式； 三查：要點、拼寫和語法、連貫。,2014中考英語作文突破指導(dǎo),五、作文一般框架： 文章分3段： （1）綜述：概括性強，最多2句話引入主題； （2）正文主要內(nèi)容：層次性強，一定要有過渡型連接詞。最多展開3個方面，每個方面最多2句話； （3）結(jié)尾：緊扣主題，2句話內(nèi)結(jié)束，盡量升華。,2014中考英語作文

4、突破指導(dǎo),滿分作文標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：,第一檔：（1513分） 完全符合題目要求，觀點正確, 要點齊全，立意高。 句式多樣，詞匯豐富。語言準(zhǔn)確，語意連貫，表達(dá)清楚，結(jié)構(gòu)合理，具有邏輯性。 卷面書寫干凈， 整潔，無涂抹，字跡大小適中，疏密合適，書寫美觀。標(biāo) 點，大小寫正確。 最好能有一兩個亮點句。 （主從，定從，表從，諺語）,2014中考英語作文突破指導(dǎo),六、如何列提綱： 例1：利弊型作文Microblog的利與弊 Para1: （綜述）with the development of internet more and more popular Para2: （利）First, convenient, any

5、where, any time; Second, share with; Last, express views free, money-free Para3: （弊）However, one coin has two faces. On the one hand, a waste of timeaffect study; On the other hand, not safestolen, hurt feelings Para4: （個人）As a student, make good use of it.,2014中考英語作文突破指導(dǎo),七、如何列提綱： 例2：計劃安排型作文談假期安排 Pa

6、ra1: （綜述）graduate from, holiday is coming, plan for this holiday Para2: （正文）Firstly, study comes first. make preparations for the first senior year; Secondly, visit tourist attractions; Last but not least, do sports to build up my body. Para3: I am sure Ill have a meaningful holiday. (Im looking for

7、ward to the coming holiday.) (I cant wait to enjoy my summer vocation.),2014中考英語作文突破指導(dǎo),八、常見的作文類型模板：,1 書信,Dear ., Im glad to receive your letter - - - Best wishes! Yours, Lucy,2014中考英語作文突破指導(dǎo),a書信開頭常用語,I am very glad to receive your letter (hear form you). Hello, Jane. Is everything going (on) well? /H

8、ow is everything going (on)? Im writing to you for some advice on how to Im writing to ask if you can . How time flies! It has been months/years since we last met. Thank you for inviting me to .,2014中考英語作文突破指導(dǎo),b 書信結(jié)尾常用語,Best wishes (to/for you). Wish you good luck. (I am) looking forward to hearing

9、from you.,2014中考英語作文突破指導(dǎo),二、口頭通知常見寫作模板： 呼語及開場白部分： Ladies and gentlemen, May I have your attention, please? I have an announcement to make. 正文部分： All the teachers and students are required to attend it. Please take your notebooks and make notes. Please listen carefully and well have a discussion in gr

10、oups. Please come on time and dont be late. 結(jié)束語部分： Please come and join in it. Everybody is welcome to attend it. I hope youll have a nice time here. Thats all. Thank you.,2014中考英語作文突破指導(dǎo),八、常見的作文類型提綱模板：,2 圖表、數(shù)字比例型,（提出討論或調(diào)查的事實）Last week, our class had a class meeting on (how to) Here are the results.

11、（表達(dá)出不同看法或觀點）Most students think While 20% of them choose to. Another 15 believe There are also some saying that （表達(dá)個人看法） As a student, I agree to,2014中考英語作文突破指導(dǎo),3 說明利弊型,Nowadays is becoming more and more popular. It has many advantages . First, 優(yōu)點1 Besides, 優(yōu)點2 However, every coin has two sides. It

12、also brings us bad influences. On the one hand, 缺點1 On the other hand, 缺點2 In my opinion,個人觀點 ,2014中考英語作文突破指導(dǎo),4 不同觀點型,We made a survey about whether we should 提出矛盾問題. Different people hold different ideas. Some believe 正方觀點. First, 原因1 Besides, 原因2 While others dont agree. They think反方觀點. On the one

13、 hand, 原因1 On the other hand, 原因2 As for me,個人觀點 ,2014中考英語作文突破指導(dǎo),5 解決問題型,Recently, the problem has been more and more serious. should do something to solve it. Firstly, 方法1 Secondly, 方法2 Finally, 方法3 I am sure if everyone can make a contribution to , the will become better and better.,2014中考英語作文突破指導(dǎo)

14、,九、常用過渡性詞語 敘事文常用的句子間連接詞： At first; at last; in the end then/next/after that when/while/as soon as/not until at the same time; at times; once in a while; so that To ones surprise/joy Luckily/fortunately/unluckily/unfortunately in a word/in all,2014中考英語作文突破指導(dǎo),議論文常用連接詞 表示并列：eitheror; neithernor; bothan

15、d; not onlybut also; 表示遞進(jìn)的：besides; whats more; whats worse; (moreover); 表示原因的：because; for; because of; thanks to; (for the reason that); 表示結(jié)果的：so; as a result; sothat; therefore; 表示目的的：so that; in order that; (in order) to; for; 表示對比的：while; on the one hand + on the other hand; Each coin has two s

16、ides.; preferto; would rather dothan do;,2014中考英語作文突破指導(dǎo),議論文常用連接詞 表示轉(zhuǎn)折的：however; but; 表示舉例的：for example; for instance; such as; like; that is to say 表示總結(jié)的：in all/short; in a word; in brief/ total; last but not least; last; 表示利弊的：be good/bad for sb.; be harmful to sb.; do harm to sb.; have great/much

17、influence on sb.; sth. benefit sb.; sb benefit from sth.; affect; have an effect on sb.; 表示喜愛的：love/like/enjoy; be fond of; be interested in; show great interest in; lose oneself in; put ones heart into; be good at; be poor at; be weak in;,2014中考英語作文突破指導(dǎo),議論文常用連接詞 表達(dá)個人想法的：I think/believe; (as) for me

18、; in my opinion/view; as a student; from the bottom of my heart; personally; 其他：in general; generally speaking; to be short; to be honest; to tell the truth; as we know; make up ones mind to do; in a way;,2014中考英語作文突破指導(dǎo),議論文常用連接詞 表達(dá)個人想法的：I think/believe; (as) for me; in my opinion/view; as a student;

19、 from the bottom of my heart; personally; 其他：in general; generally speaking; to be short; to be honest; to tell the truth; as we know; make up ones mind to do; in a way;,2014中考英語作文突破指導(dǎo),十、作文萬能句式 I will work hard to make my dream come true. I hope your dream will come true one day. It takes sb. +時間+to

20、 do Sb. spend（某種人稱時態(tài)）+時間/錢+on sth./ (in) doing sth. Its important/necessary/useful/useless/common(for sb.) to v Its nice/kind of sb. to v. Its time for sb. to do sth. Its a waste of time to Its years/days since sb. +ved Its great fun to do=sb. have great fun doing Its a pity that Its an honor to,201

21、4中考英語作文突破指導(dǎo),十、作文萬能句式 Im/Were not allowed to Im afraid of making mistakes There be doing Great changes have taken place in sth is/are well worth v-ing. It seems/seemed that It seems (im)possible to v It is said that As the saying goes, and . are different in many ways. too + adj./adv. to do There are

22、 many differences between and ,2014中考英語作文突破指導(dǎo),十、作文萬能句式 I have made up my mind to I am sure that I am not sure whether/if I would rather . than It doesnt matter if Thank you for v-ing. If everyone can make a contribution to the earth/ nature/ society, our life will be better and better.,2014中考英語作文突破指

23、導(dǎo),十一、作文萬能短語 have/look for a chance to do do outdoor activities be/get used to (doing) sth. learnfrom be proud of/ take pride in play an important/active part/role in agree with sb. to do sth. with the help of sb.=with ones help (反義：without ones help) be/get ready to do sth.= be/ get ready for sth. p

24、ay attention to take good care of make friends with get on/along well with ,2014中考英語作文突破指導(dǎo),十一、作文萬能短語 wish you successful/success as time goes by graduate from looking back to the past three years,（用現(xiàn)在完成時態(tài)）pass the (final) exam stick to doing keep you mind on your goals make up ones mind to do sth. (

25、on sth.) make a decision to do work hard at English once in a while/ at times/ now and then from then on,2014中考英語作文突破指導(dǎo),十一、作文萬能短語 in the future（將來）/ in future（從今以后） increase our knowledge/ enlarge our vocabulary in fact/as a matter of fact in the beginning/ at first feel like giving up have trouble/

26、difficulty in (doing) sth. have (no) time to do have experience in (doing) sth. follow ones advice/suggestions master some basic skills be required to do ask sb. for help cant wait to do,2014中考英語作文突破指導(dǎo),十一、作文萬能短語 be supposed to do encourage sb. to do deal/do with work out/solve the problems all sorts

27、/kinds of at home and abroad one of be full of learn sth. by oneself come up with good ideas be surprised at sth.(to do sth.) in order to keep healthy/fit a good way to v,2014中考英語作文突破指導(dǎo),十一、作文萬能短語 keep (on) trying worry about/ be worried about in ones spare/free time be kind/friendly to be strict wit

28、h help others say thank you to have fun/enjoy oneself/have a good time plenty of +C/U worry about/be worried about ask sb. for help/ turn to sb. for help/call sb. for help be popular with share sth. with sb. know little/much about ,2014中考英語作文突破指導(dǎo),十一、作文萬能短語 do/try ones best to v be/feel sorry for hel

29、p sb. (to) do sth./ with sth. in/during class before/after class teach sb. to do sth.,2014中考英語作文突破指導(dǎo),* 詞數(shù)80左右，不少于70詞，不多于 100詞。 不能使用其他顏色筆、修正液等可被 視為標(biāo)記的工具；絕對不能透露真實信息。,2014中考英語作文突破指導(dǎo),四、Language errors in writing糾錯,2014中考英語作文突破指導(dǎo),. be多余或缺少,Im enjoy studying English. It bad for our health.,I enjoy studyin

30、g English.,It is bad for our health.,2014中考英語作文突破指導(dǎo),2.時態(tài)錯誤,At that time, they always help me with my English. I had enjoyed studying English since I meet him.,At that time, they always helped me with my English.,I have enjoyed studying English since I met him.,2014中考英語作文突破指導(dǎo),My favorite sport is run

31、. I think do some sports is very important for us.,My favorite sport is running.,I think doing some sports is very important for us.,2014中考英語作文突破指導(dǎo),3.非謂語動詞錯誤,I like do sports. I wish take part in the Olympic Games when I grow up.,I wish to take part in the Olympic Games when I grow up.,I like doing

32、sports.,2014中考英語作文突破指導(dǎo),4.副詞位置錯誤,I very thank her. I very like football.,I thank her very much.,I like football very much.,2014中考英語作文突破指導(dǎo),5.代詞錯誤,They are good for us body. I hope me also become a basketball player.,They are good for our body.,I hope I also become a basketball player.,2014中考英語作文突破指導(dǎo),6

33、.缺介詞或介詞錯誤,I thank him very much help me study English. He even came to my home for help me.,I thank him very much for helping me study English.,He even came to my home to help me.,2014中考英語作文突破指導(dǎo),I like it because its exciting and good for my healthy. I have ever gived up English.,(單詞錯誤),(動詞P.P.錯誤),I

34、 like it because its exciting and good for my health.,I have ever given up English.,7. 其他錯誤,2014中考英語作文突破指導(dǎo),Its good for my health. Not only make me brave, but also make me become taller. If you want to keep fit, it important for you to take an hour to sports every day.,Its good for my health. It not

35、 only makes me brave, but also makes me become taller.,If you want to keep fit, it is important for you to spend an hour on sports every day.,（缺主語）,（句型錯誤）,2014中考英語作文突破指導(dǎo),Lets practise.,2014中考英語作文突破指導(dǎo),Find out the mistakes in the following sentences and correct them.,1. I climed slowly and was very t

36、ried.,2. I think it is an unforgetable thing because I helped sb.,climbed,tired,unforgettable,somebody,3. On a friday afternoon, I went shopping with my mother.,Spelling（拼寫）,（others),Friday,4. I cant forget that day. Because it is the last time we can celebrate her birthday together.,I cant forget t

37、hat day because,5. What a crazy day it was, I will remember it forever.,!,Capital letter（大小寫）,Punctuation（標(biāo)點符號）,2014中考英語作文突破指導(dǎo),6. I will remembered that day forever.,remember,7. I thought it is hungry.,was,8. My grandmother always tidy up my room.,tidies,9. How unforgettable this things is!,thing,Fi

38、nd out the mistakes in the following sentences and correct them.,Tense（時態(tài)）,Verb agreement (主謂一致),Word form (詞形）,2014中考英語作文突破指導(dǎo),10. In my fathers help, I became more patient than before.,With my fathers help,11. To cut a long story to short, .,To cut a long story short,12. I went to Shihua by a bus w

39、ith my mother.,by bus,13. My mother told me dont give it up.,told me not to give it up,Find out the mistakes in the following sentences and correct them.,Phrases(短語和固定搭配）,14. I saw an old lady lay in the middle of the road.,saw an old lady lying,2014中考英語作文突破指導(dǎo),16. We played snow in front of house.,p

40、layed with,15. I sat on a seat , listening music.,listening to,17. Then a lady asked who had broken her window. We all were afraid.,were all,Find out the mistakes in the following sentences and correct them.,Missing words（漏詞）,18. We should do things by our own hands.,with,the house,19. It is tired w

41、ork.,tiring,Words order（詞序）,Using wrong word（選詞錯誤）,2014中考英語作文突破指導(dǎo),22. He encouraged me to look for the watch by heart.,carefully,21. One Sunday morning, I went to Shihua by bus and sat beside me was a girl.,I went to Shihua on a bus and there was a girl sitting beside me.,Find out the mistakes in th

42、e following sentences and correct them.,Chinese English（中式英語）,In my life, many things happened.,20. In my life have many things happened.,2014中考英語作文突破指導(dǎo),During the winter holidays, It happened a lot of things. One of the things was helpt a small girl to find her mother. When my friends and me shoppi

43、ng in a shopping mall, we saw a small girl cried in a corner. We asked what happened on her . She said she cuondt found her mother. So we started to helpt she to found her mother. Luckily, we found her mother, they were very happy and we were happy, too. I think it was the most unforgettable thing I

44、 did in the winter holidays because I found I also can help others.,The most unforgettable thing I did in the winter holidays.,Check and correct this article.,a lot of things happened.,helping,I,were shopping,crying,happened to,couldnt,find,help,her,find,.,They,could also, so,2014中考英語作文突破指導(dǎo),1. 是否有大小

45、寫錯誤(capital letters or lowercase letters) 是否有拼寫錯誤 (spelling mistakes) 是否有標(biāo)點錯誤 (punctuation mistakes) 4.是否有語法錯誤 (grammar mistakes) 主謂是否一致 動詞的時態(tài) 語態(tài)的使用是否正確 詞組的搭配是否合乎習(xí)慣 ,Common Errors in English writing,2014中考英語作文突破指導(dǎo),五、整潔性,1.字跡亂，劃痕較多，字字不踩線。高低錯落。 2.字跡或太大，顯得不緊湊；或太小，太密，看不清，占不滿格。 3 字?jǐn)?shù)太多，顯得太羅嗦，出格就看不見了。 字?jǐn)?shù)太少

46、，空太多格，會被誤認(rèn)為字?jǐn)?shù)不夠，不會得高分。,2014中考英語作文突破指導(dǎo),4 規(guī)范三寫：大 小 寫,拼 寫,書 寫,2014中考英語作文突破指導(dǎo),2014中考英語作文突破指導(dǎo),2014中考英語作文突破指導(dǎo),以“My English Teacher”為題寫一篇100字左右的英語短文，提示如下： 1 孫老師，25歲，1.65米, 打扮入時。 2 關(guān)心熱愛學(xué)生 。 3 教學(xué)方法生動有趣。 4 與學(xué)生關(guān)系融洽，深受同學(xué)歡迎；,六、實戰(zhàn)訓(xùn)練,2014中考英語作文突破指導(dǎo),Pre-writing 1.審：,2.定：,“My English Teacher” 為題寫一篇100字作文,記敘文，第三人稱，一般

47、現(xiàn)在時 篇章結(jié)構(gòu)：三段式 首段：個人簡歷 正文：教學(xué)特色 尾段：作者的評價,2014中考英語作文突破指導(dǎo),be fashionable,love students, and care about the students,be lively and interesting,get on well with,be popular with,Writing: 3.列 打扮入時 2.熱愛學(xué)生，關(guān)心學(xué)生 3.生動有趣 4.相處融洽，深受歡迎,2014中考英語作文突破指導(dǎo),My English Teacher Miss Sun is our English teacher. She is 25 year

48、s old. She is 1.65 meters tall. She is very fashionable.She loves her students. She cares about us. Her lessons are interesting and lively; Miss Sun gets on well with us. She is very popular. We all love her and her teaching !,Writing4.連：連詞成句，連句成篇,2014中考英語作文突破指導(dǎo),復(fù)寫Rewriting： 5、美潤色豐富要點；,6、改查錯改錯,7、抄修改

49、無誤后，認(rèn)真規(guī)范地謄寫在規(guī)定的地方。,2014中考英語作文突破指導(dǎo),Writing My English Teacher Miss Sun is our English teacher. She is 25 years old. She is 1.65 meters tall. She is very fashionable.She loves her students. She cares about us. Her lessons are interesting and lively; Miss Sun gets on well with us. She is very popular.

50、We all love her and her teaching !,2014中考英語作文突破指導(dǎo),2014中考英語作文突破指導(dǎo),homework,2014中考英語作文突破指導(dǎo),請根據(jù)要點提示，用英文寫一篇簡要介紹四川汶川大地震中舍己救人英雄譚千秋老師的短文。字?jǐn)?shù)100詞左右。內(nèi)容要點如下： 1譚老師個人簡況：1957年生于湖南；大學(xué)畢業(yè)后， 2在四川德陽一所中學(xué)教書；外表嚴(yán)肅， 3對學(xué)生要求嚴(yán)格， 4深愛學(xué)生。 5譚老師英雄事跡：汶川地震時，他在上課。教學(xué)樓坍塌時刻，用身體保護(hù)4名學(xué)生英勇獻(xiàn)身，4名學(xué)生得救。 6你的感受及愿望。 參考詞語：1. graduate from a univers

51、ity, 大學(xué)畢業(yè) 2. be strict with,對嚴(yán)格3. the Wenchuan earthquake, 汶川地震 4. collapse,坍塌5. deeds,事跡,2014中考英語作文突破指導(dǎo),三段式： 首段： 正文： 結(jié)尾：,譚老師的個人簡介,譚老師的英雄事跡,作者的感受和愿望,2014中考英語作文突破指導(dǎo),列出7個內(nèi)容要點： 1）外表嚴(yán)肅； 2）對學(xué)生要求嚴(yán)格； 3） 深愛學(xué)生； 4）地震時在上課； 5）教學(xué)樓坍塌時，用身體保護(hù)4名學(xué)生英勇獻(xiàn)身； 6）感受； 7）愿望。,He looks serious.,Hes strict with his students.,He loves his students deeply.,He was giving lessons at that