作文10 海南卷2019年文段表達(dá)據(jù)悉，我國(guó)青少年的近視率居全球第一，70%的學(xué)生有視力方面的問(wèn)題為引起廣大青少年的重視，某英語(yǔ)報(bào)刊正在開(kāi)展以 Saving Our Eyesight為題的征文活動(dòng)請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示寫(xiě)一篇短文投稿，分析造成青少年近視的原因并提出保護(hù)視力的合理建議要求：1語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，語(yǔ)法正確，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范2所有提示須全部用上，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮3文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名、地名4. 80詞左右（文章開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）Saving Our Eyesight As the saying goes， Eyes are the window to the soul（心靈 ） However， 70% of us have poor eyesight What has caused this problem？_In a word， lets take care of our eyes so that we can see our bright future2019年海南中考英語(yǔ)作文以“保護(hù)視力”為話題，話題貼近學(xué)生生活。現(xiàn)在學(xué)生視力下降已經(jīng)成為一個(gè)比較嚴(yán)重的問(wèn)題，同時(shí)也受到了社會(huì)的關(guān)注，是一個(gè)常見(jiàn)的話題。學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以聯(lián)系自己的生活實(shí)際，使學(xué)生可以有話可說(shuō)，本話題難度較低。學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作時(shí)一定要注意表達(dá)邏輯清楚，思路清晰，注意語(yǔ)言生動(dòng)，多用有亮點(diǎn)的句型。Saving Our Eyesight As the saying goes，Eyes are the window to the soul（心靈 ） However， 70% of us have poor eyesight What has caused this problem？The main reason is the bad habits of using eyesFor example， many of us read in wrong positions，such as reading in bed or keeping our eyes too close to the bookBesides，taking less exercise can also cause poor eyesight Whats more， some of us spend too much time playing computer games or watching TVIts bad for our eyes So how can we protect our eyes？Here is some advice on how to protect our eyes First，we should be cautious on the health of using eyesWe should not keep our eyes working for a long time While reading ，we should keep the book about a foot away from usAfter reading for an hour or two，we had better have a rest by looking at the plants in the distanceSecond，using less electronic products is a good way to protect our eyes Besides，we should see green plants as often as possibleFinally， remember to do eyeprotecting exercises or do more outdoor sports， which will help us keep good eyesight In a word，lets take care of our eyes so that we can see our bright future【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】2019年海南中考英語(yǔ)作文，要求介紹保護(hù)視力的重要性和方法，文體為說(shuō)明文；說(shuō)明介紹類(lèi)文章主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；本文要求談?wù)勅绾伪Ｗo(hù)視力，所以主要使用第一人稱(chēng); 詞數(shù)不少于70詞，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)，文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名。整體邏輯清晰,有條理;讓人讀起來(lái)思路很清晰。為提升作文的整體水平，應(yīng)注意使用一些高級(jí)詞匯、短語(yǔ)以及復(fù)合句、非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞等復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)。同時(shí)語(yǔ)句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意上下連貫，表達(dá)流暢。【寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，學(xué)生能聯(lián)系自己的實(shí)際生活，展開(kāi)合理的論述。短文作者根據(jù)題目要求以保護(hù)我們的視力為主題，采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，作文對(duì)學(xué)生視力下降的原因做了分析，“The main reason is the bad habits of using eyesFor example.kBesides. Whats more，.”條理清楚，語(yǔ)言生動(dòng)，第二段，給出了具體的建議，語(yǔ)篇內(nèi)容完整。文中多處使用連接詞，高級(jí)詞匯、句型。如【高分句型一】 Besides，we should see green plants as often as possible【高分句型一】Finally， remember to do eyeprotecting exercises or do more outdoor sports， which will help us keep good eyesight結(jié)尾：表達(dá)愿望呼吁大家保護(hù)好視力。2018年2018 年 5 月 5 日上午，第十屆海南省“書(shū)香節(jié)”啟動(dòng)儀式在海南省圖書(shū)館舉行。為響應(yīng) “書(shū)香節(jié)”活動(dòng)，你校?？⑽陌嬲陂_(kāi)展以“I Like Reading”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表提示內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一篇短文，介紹你對(duì)閱讀的看法及個(gè)人的閱讀情況。要求：1. 語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，語(yǔ)法正確，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；2. 必須包含所給提示內(nèi)容，并做適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3. 行文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名、校名或地名；4. 不少于 80 詞。（短文的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）Reading makes a full man. Its important and necessary for everyone to read._2018年海南中考英語(yǔ)作文與以往的作文形式相比大致相同，要求學(xué)生寫(xiě)出閱讀的優(yōu)點(diǎn)以及自己的閱讀習(xí)慣等內(nèi)容，契合學(xué)生生活實(shí)際，體現(xiàn)了核心素養(yǎng)下的實(shí)踐創(chuàng)新，具有時(shí)代特色。旨在培養(yǎng)學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)能力以及充分、合理安排自己業(yè)余生活的能力。培養(yǎng)學(xué)生愛(ài)讀書(shū)的良好習(xí)慣。學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，要注意把握文章的體裁/人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài)。 Reading makes a full man. Its important and necessary for everyone to read. Reading can open up our minds and help us get more knowledge. As for me, I like reading a lot. In my spare time, I not only go to bookstores to buy books but also borrow books from the library. Before going to bed, I always spend some time reading. That really makes me feel relaxed. On weekends, I enjoy reading some novels. Journey to the West is my favorite book. And Monkey King is my super hero. The summer holiday is coming, I am going to read Harry Potter which is a very popular magic book. Reading is a lifelong journey. I hope everyone can read as much as possible in the future.【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】2018海南中考英語(yǔ)作文以“ I Like Reading ”為題目的夾敘夾議的命題作文，難度等級(jí)屬于適中，是常見(jiàn)的中考作文話題之一，用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)敘述，人稱(chēng)為第一人稱(chēng)。要求介紹你對(duì)閱讀的看法及平時(shí)的閱讀情況，有參考提示語(yǔ)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意圍繞全文主題安排文章結(jié)構(gòu)，不能逐詞翻譯，語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確。合理使用連詞，使得文章邏輯清晰，盡量使用熟悉且有把握的單詞和句式，保持卷面整潔?！緦?xiě)作亮點(diǎn)】本文是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，圍繞主題展開(kāi)論述。本文開(kāi)篇即點(diǎn)明觀點(diǎn)，引出話題，閱讀開(kāi)闊思維，豐富知識(shí) Reading makes a full man . it s important and necessary for everyone to read . Reading can open up our minds and help us get more knowledge. 接下來(lái)寫(xiě)了自己的閱讀狀況和習(xí)慣包括閱讀內(nèi)容，Journey to the West和Harry Potter. 并適當(dāng)運(yùn)用了連詞 As for me ，和 be going to 句型。結(jié)尾點(diǎn)明主題，表達(dá)自己的期望，希望大家熱愛(ài)讀書(shū)Reading is a lifelong journey. I hope everyone can read as much as possible in the future.。【高分句型一】In my spare time, I not only go to bookstores to buy books but also borrow books from the library.【高分句型二】The summer holiday is coming, I am going to read Harry Potter which is a very popular magic book.2017年梁玲同學(xué)是你校初三（1）班的學(xué)生。她家境貧寒，但她勇于面對(duì)困難、主動(dòng)承擔(dān)家 務(wù)且刻苦學(xué)習(xí)，大家都很喜歡并敬佩她。作為學(xué)校英文報(bào)刊記者，你對(duì)她進(jìn)行了采訪。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的采訪筆記寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于她的報(bào)道。要求：1. 語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫， 語(yǔ)法正確，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；2. 必須包含所給提示，并做適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3. 行文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名、校名或地名；4. 詞數(shù) 80 左右。（短文的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)） Liang Lingsomething about hersomething we can learn:face difficulties, from a poor family Liang Ling, a 14-year-old girl, is a student in Class 1, Grade 9. She comes from_She is great. Lets wish her a better future.2017年海南中考作文與近幾年相比，在考試形式上沒(méi)有什么特殊的變化，文體都為議論文，根據(jù)題目提供的信息，介紹梁玲。話題仍貼近學(xué)生的實(shí)際生活，讓學(xué)生有話可說(shuō)。體現(xiàn)了2017海南中考英語(yǔ)作文注重學(xué)生的道德素養(yǎng)，鼓勵(lì)學(xué)生全面發(fā)展的人文主義價(jià)值觀，描寫(xiě)人物類(lèi)的作文時(shí)中考?？嫉淖魑脑掝}之一。所以本文的難度一般，學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意圍繞文章主題，介紹梁玲的情況，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。Liang Ling，a 14-year-old girl，is a student in Class 1，Grade 9She comes from a poor familySince she was a little girl，she has cared for her familyEvery day Liang Ling helps with the cooking，cleaning and washing. I asked her whether she was tired of doing so much houseworkNot reallyShe smiledIve got used to itThough she is busy，she studies hard and gets good gradesWhats more，she is always ready to help othersEveryone likes her because of her kindnessIn our eyes，she always faces difficulties bravelyNo matter how hard the life is，she never gives up She is greatLets wish her a better future【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】本篇寫(xiě)作需注意要求中所提供的要點(diǎn)介紹梁玲同學(xué)，“她家境貧寒，但她勇于面對(duì)困難、主動(dòng)承擔(dān)家 務(wù)且刻苦學(xué)習(xí)”。另外要根據(jù)所給的英文提示展開(kāi)描述，介紹梁玲基本信息（something about her）,我們從她身上學(xué)到的優(yōu)點(diǎn)（something we can learn:face difficulties），寫(xiě)作中注意不可遺漏，語(yǔ)義通順，需用到在平時(shí)積累相關(guān)的詞匯