1、進出口類商業(yè)書信寫作實例進由口類商業(yè)書信寫作實例1. 向顧客推銷商品DearSirs:May1,2001Inquiriesregardingournewproduct,theDeerMountainBike,havebeencominginfromallpartsoftheworld.Reportsfromusersconfirmwhatweknewbeforeitwasputonthemarket-thatitisthebestmountainbikeavailable.Enclosedisourbrochure.Yoursfaithfully2. 提出詢價DearSirs:Jun.1,20

2、01Wereceivedyourpromotionalletterandbrochuretoday.WebelievethatyourwoulddowellhereintheU.S.A.Kindlysendusfurtherdetailsofyourpricesandtermsofsale.Weaskyoutomakeeveryefforttoquoteatcompetitivepricesinordertosecureourbusiness.Welookforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Truly3. 迅速提供報價Gentlemen:June4,2001Thankyou

3、foryourinquiryofJunethe1stconcerningtheDeerMountainBike.Itgivesusgreatpleasuretosendalongthetechnicalinformationonthemodeltogetherwiththecatalogandpricelist.Afterstudyingthepricesandtermsoftrade,youwillunderstandwhyweareworkingtocapacitytomeetthedemand.Welookforwardtotheopportunityofbeingofserviceof

4、you.4.如何討價還價Gentlemen:June8,2001Wehavereceivedyourpricelistsandhavestudieditcarefully.However,thepricelevelinyourquotationistoohighforthismarket,Ifyouarepreparedtograntusadiscountof10%foraquantityof200,wewouldagreetoyouroffer.Youshouldnotethatsomepricecutwilljustifyitselfbyanincreaseinbusiness.Wehop

5、etohearfromyousoon.Yourstruly5-1同意進口商的還價DearSirs:June12,2001ThankyouforyourletterofJunethe8th.Wehaveacceptedyourofferonthetermssuggested.Enclosedourwillfindaspecialpricelistthatwebelievewillmeetyourideasofprices.Youshouldnotethattherecentadvancesinrawmaterialshaveaffectedthecostofthisproductunfavora

6、bly.However,foryourorderwehavekeptourpricesdown.Sincerely5-2拒絕進口商的還價DearSirs:June12,2001ThankyouforyourletterofJunethe8th.Weregretthatwecannotmeetyourterms.Wemustpointoutthatthefallingmarkethereleavesuslittleornomarginofprofit.Wemustaskyouforakeenerpriceinrespecttofutureorders.Atpresentthebestdiscou

7、ntofferedforaquantityof200is5%.Ourcurrentsituationleavesuslittleroomtobargain.Wehopeyouwillreconsidertheoffer.Truly6.正式提出訂單Gentlemen:June15,2001Wehavediscussedyourofferof5%andacceptitonthetermsquoted.Wearepreparedtogiveyourproductatrial,providedyoucanguaranteedeliveryonorbeforethe20thofSeptember.The

8、enclosedorderisgivenstrictlyonthiscondition.Wreservetherightofrefusalofdeliveryand/orcancellationoftheorderafterthisdate.Truly7. 確認訂單Gentlemen:June20,2001ThankyouverymuchforyourorderofJune15for200DeerMountainBikes.Wewillmakeeverypossibleefforttoofthedateofdispatch.Weareatyourserviceatalltimes.speed

9、up delivery.We will advise youSincerely8. 請求開立信用證Gentlemen:June18,2001ThankyouforyourorderNo.599.Inordertoexecuteit,pleaseopenanirrevocableL/CfortheamountofUS$50,000inourfavor.ThisaccountshallbeavailableuntilSep.20.UponarrivaloftheL/Cwewillpackandshiptheorderasrequested.Sincerely9. 通知已開立信用證DearSirs:

10、June24,2001ThankyouforyourletterofJune18enclosingdetailsofyourterms.AccordingtoyourrequestforopeninganirrevocableL/C,wehaveinstructedtheBeijingCityCommercialBanktoopenacreditforUS$50,000inyourfavor,validuntilSep.20.Pleaseadviseusbyfaxwhentheorderhasbeenexecuted.Sincerely10. 請求信用證延期Gentlemen:Sep.1,20

11、01Wearesorrytoreportthatinspiteofoureffort,weareunabletoguaranteeshipmentbytheagreeddateduetoastrikeatourfactory.WeareafraidthatyourL/Cwillbeexpirebeforeshipment.Therefore,pleaseexplainoursituationtoyourcustomersandsecuretheirconsenttoextendtheL/CtoSept.30.Sincerely11. 同意更改信用證Gentlemen:Sept.5,2001Wereceivedyourlettertodayandha