1、淘花/百度專用1掌握寫作技巧掌握寫作技巧 增添表達亮點增添表達亮點青島十七中青島十七中 李景新李景新 淘花/百度專用2 2009年山東省高考英語作文各檔次的給分范圍和要求年山東省高考英語作文各檔次的給分范圍和要求第一檔（優(yōu)秀）第一檔（優(yōu)秀）26分分-29分分 緊扣主題；覆蓋所有要點，內容充實；語法結構多樣，詞匯緊扣主題；覆蓋所有要點，內容充實；語法結構多樣，詞匯豐富，有效使用連接成分，顯示出較強的語言運用表達能力；語豐富，有效使用連接成分，顯示出較強的語言運用表達能力；語言小錯不超過言小錯不超過4個，不能有一處大錯。個，不能有一處大錯。第二檔（良好）第二檔（良好）22分分-25分分 緊扣主題，

2、覆蓋所有要點，內容較充實，語言有少量錯誤，緊扣主題，覆蓋所有要點，內容較充實，語言有少量錯誤，但基本不影響意思表達；大錯不超過但基本不影響意思表達；大錯不超過3個。個。第三檔（一般）第三檔（一般）18分分-21分分 緊扣主題，基本覆蓋所有要點，能夠表達基本內容；語言錯緊扣主題，基本覆蓋所有要點，能夠表達基本內容；語言錯誤已影響了部分意思的表達，但多數句子基本正確。誤已影響了部分意思的表達，但多數句子基本正確。淘花/百度專用3Dear Tom , It has been a long time since I met you last time . I miss you very much .

3、How are you ? Im very grateful to you for your help with my English when I studied in your country . I wouldnt speak English so fluently now without you . So now I cant thank you enough . By the way , do you keep in touch with Mr. Smith ? Is he fit ? Im very concerned about him . If you could visit

4、him , please remember me to him . Furthermore , would you mind making me know how to contact him ? Eventually, Im glad to tell you our Spring Festival , the most important one in China , is coming . And I remember you once told me you like China . Would you like to come here and enjoy the Chinese tr

5、aditional customs and culture ? I will expect your coming . Best wishes ! Yours, Li Hua淘花/百度專用4Group I like reading while my brother likes watching television.I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television.Group There will be an increase in the number of peoples jobs There will be an inc

6、rease in the number of jobs for people in Beijing.available淘花/百度專用5Group It will have an important effect on the development of Beijing.It will have a(n) effect on the development of Beijing.Group It is very useful to practise English every day .It is to practise English every day .of great value /o

7、f great help /of great importancesignificant /far-reaching /profound / vitalof great/vital use淘花/百度專用6Group 5 He told me that the question was now being discussed.He told me that the question was now .Group 6Suddenly I had a good idea.Suddenly I a good idea. A good idea me.came up withoccurred tound

8、er discussion. under repair / control /consideration/construction淘花/百度專用7Group 7He has decided to be a teacher when he grows up. He has to be a teacher when he grows up.Group 8 Last Sunday we had a good time in the parkLast Sunday we in the parkenjoyed ourselves / had funmade up his mind /determined

9、淘花/百度專用8At noon we had a picnic lunch in the sunshine. Then we had a short rest. Then we sang and danced. We played happily. At noon we had a picnic lunch in the sunshine. After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing.have fun doing淘花/百度專用92.他站在那兒，什么也不干。他站在那兒，什么也不干。 He stood there doing n

10、othing .He stood there and (he) did nothing .淘花/百度專用103.人們說人們說中國每年有中國每年有成千上萬成千上萬的人的人死于吸煙死于吸煙. People say that tens of thousands of people die from smoking every year in China .（賓語從句）（賓語從句）Tens of thousands of people are said to die from smoking every year in China .（被動語態(tài)）（被動語態(tài)）Its said that tens of

11、thousands of people die from smoking every year in China . （主語從句）（主語從句）淘花/百度專用114.4.青島是一個美麗的城市青島是一個美麗的城市, , 它它有百年的歷史有百年的歷史. .Qingdao is a beautiful city and it has a history of one hundred years. （并列句）（并列句） Qingdao is a beautiful city, which has a history of one hundred years.（非限制性定語從句）（非限制性定語從句）Qin

12、gdao is a beautiful city with a history of one hundred years. （with +賓語）賓語）Qingdao is a beautiful city （dating back to/dating from) one hundred years ago.（非謂語）非謂語） 淘花/百度專用12Voices from experts 閱卷老師在評閱時最注重的是文章中的閱卷老師在評閱時最注重的是文章中的亮點，根據語言使用情況，亮點的多少而定亮點，根據語言使用情況，亮點的多少而定出檔次，所以考生在書面表達上的亮點是取出檔次，所以考生在書面表達上的亮

13、點是取得優(yōu)秀的關鍵，亮點主要包括：一、語言地得優(yōu)秀的關鍵，亮點主要包括：一、語言地道、詞匯豐富；二、語法結構多樣；三、文道、詞匯豐富；二、語法結構多樣；三、文章連貫自然。章連貫自然。淘花/百度專用13* *不要刻意追求高級詞匯和復雜結構。不要刻意追求高級詞匯和復雜結構。注意注意Experts:Experts:個別考生片面追求花哨文字，結果造個別考生片面追求花哨文字，結果造出一些錯誤百出的句子，這是寫作的一大忌。高考出一些錯誤百出的句子，這是寫作的一大忌。高考寫作時應盡可能運用自己熟悉的詞匯和句式，盡量寫作時應盡可能運用自己熟悉的詞匯和句式，盡量避免錯誤的出現(xiàn)。一篇文章即便用的詞匯再高級、避免錯

14、誤的出現(xiàn)。一篇文章即便用的詞匯再高級、語法結構再復雜，若是滿篇小錯，閱卷老師也不會語法結構再復雜，若是滿篇小錯，閱卷老師也不會給文章一個較高檔次的分值的。給文章一個較高檔次的分值的。淘花/百度專用14the China Pavilion淘花/百度專用15 20102010年世博會將于年世博會將于5 5月月1 1日日-10-10月月3131日上海召開，請根據以下要日上海召開，請根據以下要點描述上海有關情況。（請用一句話描述每一個要點）點描述上海有關情況。（請用一句話描述每一個要點）1 1、上海是一座有著、上海是一座有著700700多年歷史的城市，多年歷史的城市，占地面積占地面積為為6340634

15、0平方公里，平方公里，是我國最大的城市。是我國最大的城市。2 2、上海位于黃埔江畔、上海位于黃埔江畔 ，交通便利。，交通便利。3 3、中國館由中國國家館、中國地區(qū)館、港澳臺館三部分組成，是、中國館由中國國家館、中國地區(qū)館、港澳臺館三部分組成，是世博園中世博園中最引人注目最引人注目的建筑。的建筑。4 4、上海、上海市民市民正正積極準備迎接積極準備迎接全世界人民的到來。全世界人民的到來。參考詞匯：參考詞匯：世博園：世博園：the Expo Site 中國館中國館 ： the China Pavilion 中國國家館中國國家館: theChineseNationalPavilion 中國地區(qū)館中國地

16、區(qū)館: the ChineseProvincesPavilion 港澳臺館港澳臺館: the Pavilion0fHongKong、MacaoandTaiwan市民：市民：citizen 淘花/百度專用161 1、上海是一座、上海是一座有著有著700700多年歷史多年歷史的城市，的城市，占地面占地面積積為為63406340平方公里，是我國平方公里，是我國最大的最大的城市。城市。Shanghai , the largest city of China , which covers an area of 6,340 square kilometers , has a history of more

17、 than 700 years .淘花/百度專用17 2 2 、 上 海、 上 海 位 于位 于 黃 埔 江 畔黃 埔 江 畔 ， 交 通 便 利 。， 交 通 便 利 。 Shanghai lies on the Huangpu River , making /which makes it convenient for people to arrive .Shanghai lies on the Huangpu River with a convenient transportation.淘花/百度專用183 3、中國館、中國館由由中國國家館、中國地區(qū)館、港澳臺館中國國家館、中國地區(qū)館、港澳

18、臺館三部分三部分組成組成, , 是世博園中最引人注目的建筑是世博園中最引人注目的建筑 。The China Pavilion, the most attractive building in the Expo Site ,is made up of / consists of / comprises the Chinese National Pavilion、the Chinese Provinces Pavilion and Hongkong,Macao andTaiwan.淘花/百度專用194 4、上海市民正、上海市民正積極準備迎接積極準備迎接全世界人民的到來。全世界人民的到來。Shang

19、hai citizens are doing what they can to welcome the people from all over the world .Shanghai citizens are doing all / everything they can to welcome the people from all over the world .淘花/百度專用202009 陜西卷陜西卷 假定你是李華。在一個英文網絡論壇上，你看到一個名假定你是李華。在一個英文網絡論壇上，你看到一個名叫叫Grown-up 中學生發(fā)帖（中學生發(fā)帖（post）尋求幫助。請根據帖子內容、）尋求幫助

20、。請根據帖子內容、寫作要點和要求回帖。寫作要點和要求回帖。Grown-up Post at 18-5-2009 20:08 1Hi , everyone, Im 17 years old and I am going to university this autumn . But my mother continues to treat me as a seven-year old kid .What should I do ? TOP(last topic / next topic) + Reply + New 寫作要點：寫作要點：1、告訴、告訴Grown-up要理解父母；要理解父母；2、給

21、、給Grown-up 提出解提出解決問題的具體建議。決問題的具體建議。淘花/百度專用21 Version 1Hello , Grown-up, Im sorry to know that you have difficulty in getting along with your mother . But I can understand you just because the problem you are facing is very common among our teenagers Version 2Hello , Grown-up, After reading your post

22、 , I understand your trouble because Im also a boy of your age . Its necessary to do something to solve the problem between you and your mother . Here are some suggestions for you .范文開頭句范文開頭句 淘花/百度專用22 范文結尾句范文結尾句Version 1I believe you will send us the good news that you are expecting before long if

23、you follow my advice .Version 2Good luck to you !Version 3Try your best and Im sure you will get on well with your parents . 淘花/百度專用23 好的開頭和好的結尾會首先吸引閱卷好的開頭和好的結尾會首先吸引閱卷老師的注意。老師的注意。 1.開頭要緊扣主題，開門見山。開頭要緊扣主題，開門見山。 2. 盡量用一到兩句話引出主體部分。盡量用一到兩句話引出主體部分。 3.結尾要短但要具有鼓舞、激勵或建設性。結尾要短但要具有鼓舞、激勵或建設性。 如果中間內容抓住要點表述正確，再恰如

24、果中間內容抓住要點表述正確，再恰當地使用一些過渡性詞語，使文章結構嚴當地使用一些過渡性詞語，使文章結構嚴謹、自然流暢，文章的總體檔次就上去了。謹、自然流暢，文章的總體檔次就上去了。Voices from experts淘花/百度專用2409年全國各地高考范文開頭句統(tǒng)計年全國各地高考范文開頭句統(tǒng)計09江西江西Everyone knows that a good mood is very important for us whoever we are or wherever we are .09湖南湖南1How eager Im to share my experience of my first

25、 class in the middle school .09湖南湖南2I cant wait to tell you my experience of my first class as a teacher .09福建福建Im very glad to receive our letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well .淘花/百度專用2509湖北湖北Im writing to you for the mobile phone I bought on 20th April ,2008 at Tele Mall .09全國全

26、國Thank you for your letter asking about the rebuilt Qianmen Street . Here is something about it . 09重慶重慶Im a Chinese student from Xin Hua Middle School , and I have learnt your website is collecting topics .淘花/百度專用2609年全國各地高考范文結尾句統(tǒng)計年全國各地高考范文結尾句統(tǒng)計 09全國全國1Try your best ,and Im looking forward to your

27、outstanding performance .09江蘇江蘇To make matter even worse ,it might also have a bad influence on our health . 09北京北京Are you happy for me ?Im looking forward to hearing from you .淘花/百度專用2709安徽安徽1Boys and girls ,lets communicate with our parents right now and create a harmonious family . 09安徽安徽2As for

28、me ,we children should communicate with our parents more frequently to let them know that we have grown up and need more respect . Im sure they will understand us .09湖北湖北Take into account all these factors above , I require the company should have a change of it for me as soon as possible . 淘花/百度專用2

29、8What have you got from the lesson ?淘花/百度專用29 Practice makes perfect 淘花/百度專用301.Finish the passage above paying attention to the skills in writing .2.Try to sum up many more skills in writing in different ways and share them with your classmates .淘花/百度專用31Thanks for your kind attendance!淘花/百度專用32 中國

30、每年都會有中國每年都會有幾十萬幾十萬起交通事故，許多起交通事故，許多人都人都因此因此而喪生。而喪生。據據2009年有關部門統(tǒng)計年有關部門統(tǒng)計，中，中國的交通事故還在成倍地國的交通事故還在成倍地上升上升。請針對這一社。請針對這一社會問題談談會問題談談造成造成這種狀況的這種狀況的主要原因主要原因并提出并提出解解決的方法決的方法。 注意：注意： 1、詞數、詞數120-150； 2、可適當發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫；、可適當發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫； 3、參考詞匯：、參考詞匯：drunk driving醉酒駕駛；醉酒駕駛；the speed limit限速限速 ？Extended 淘花/百度專用33 No one could have failed to notice the fact that thousands of people lost t