1、專題19應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作講解【練習(xí)】2022年初升高英語(yǔ)無(wú)憂銜接（通用版）1.假定你是李華，你從網(wǎng)上得知你的英國(guó)好友Tom所在的城市愛(ài)丁堡遭到了颶風(fēng)的襲擊。請(qǐng)你給他發(fā)送 封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1）得知颶風(fēng)信息；2）詢問(wèn)他及家人情況；3）給予撫慰。注意：1）詞數(shù)80左右；2）可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。.假定你是李華，計(jì)劃在你校組建健身俱樂(lè)部，請(qǐng)寫(xiě)封郵件給你的交換生朋友Oliver,尋求他的意見(jiàn)和建 議。內(nèi)容包括：1）寫(xiě)郵件的目的；2）希望得到的幫助和支持；3）表示感謝。注意：寫(xiě)作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右。.假定你是李華，你的好友John最近與朋友發(fā)生了一點(diǎn)沖突而大吵了一架，他的朋友因此不理他，這讓他很是煩惱

2、。請(qǐng)你給他寫(xiě)一封郵件就他所遇到的問(wèn)題給他一些建議，內(nèi)容包括：1）給予他撫慰；For one thing, except for wearing a mask and keeping distance when going out, paying attention to what we have everyday is of great importance. In order to get enough energy and nutrients, we need a balanced diet, especially we should eat more fresh fruit and ve

3、getables. For another, taking physical exercise regularly is a must to help keep fit. For example, you can play basketball or take a walk after school. Last but not least, being positive and hopeful is necessary. You should have the confidence that the human being will finally get over of it.All in

4、all, I do hope you and your family can be safe and sound. Td appreciate it very much if you can find these suggestions helpful.Yours, Li Hua【解析】此題是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李華的身份寫(xiě)一封郵件提些建議。寫(xiě)作背景：你的美國(guó)筆友Jack 來(lái)信向你詢問(wèn)疫情期間如何保持健康。寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出，屬于提綱類作文，內(nèi)容包括：1）合理飲食；2） 加強(qiáng)鍛煉；3）保持好心態(tài)。提示中的內(nèi)容比擬泛泛，需要適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充。此題對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高， 要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的

5、能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括。 寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注 意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次?！军c(diǎn)評(píng)】本篇作文要點(diǎn)齊全，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，條理清晰，應(yīng)用了較多的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯，熟練地使用了語(yǔ)句間 的連接成分，使整個(gè)文章結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，很好地完成了寫(xiě)作任務(wù)。例如：For one thing, except for wearing a mask and keeping distance when going out, paying attention to what we have everyday

6、is of great importance. 運(yùn)用 了 時(shí) 間狀語(yǔ)從句的省略，現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語(yǔ)，賓語(yǔ)從句；In order to get enough energy and nutrients, we need a balanced diet, especially we should eat more fresh fruit and vegetables. 運(yùn)用 了不定式作 目 的狀語(yǔ)；Last but not least, being positive and hopeful is necessary, 運(yùn)用 了 動(dòng)名詞作主語(yǔ)； You should have the confidence

7、 that the human being will finally get over of it.運(yùn)用 了 同位語(yǔ)從句； All in all, I do hope you and your family can be safe and sound. 運(yùn) 用 T 強(qiáng)調(diào)， 賓語(yǔ)從句；Id appreciate it very much if you can find these suggestions helpful.運(yùn)用 了 Id appreciate it if固定句式。Dear Tom,How is everything going?Fm writing to share with yo

8、u my unforgettable experience of the sports meeting held last month.Before the meeting, my teacher and classmates made a detailed plan. We were all very excited to give advice and provide anything needed. At the same time, the athletes made full preparations, running and jumping in their spare time.

9、 During the meeting, the athletes competed fairly on the playground with the other students cheering around. What a great time!I think our class has become more united after the sports meeting. In addition, the classmates know more about each other and become closer. As a result, we are more hopeful

10、 of the colorful school life.I would appreciate it if you could reply soon.Yours,Li Hua【解析】此題是一篇英文信件，要求考生以高一同學(xué)李華的身份給你的英國(guó)筆友Tom寫(xiě)一封信，介紹學(xué)校 運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)。寫(xiě)作背景：上個(gè)月你校舉辦運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)。寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出，屬于提綱類作文，內(nèi)容包括：1）運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì) 前的準(zhǔn)備工作；2）運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)期間的表現(xiàn)；3）運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)的感想。提示中的內(nèi)容比擬泛泛，需要適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充。本 題對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。需要注意緊扣文 章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)

11、用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。盡量使用 自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次?！军c(diǎn)評(píng)】本篇作文要點(diǎn)齊全，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，條理清晰，應(yīng)用了較多的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯，熟練地使用了語(yǔ)句問(wèn) 的連接成分，使整個(gè)文章結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，很好地完成了寫(xiě)作任務(wù)。例如：We were all very excited to give advice and provide anything needed. 運(yùn)用了 不定式作原因狀語(yǔ)； During the meeting, the athletes competed fairly on the playground with the oth

12、er students cheering around,運(yùn)用 了 with 的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)；What a great time!運(yùn)用 了感嘆句； I think our class has become more united after the sports meeting.運(yùn)用 了 賓語(yǔ)從句；I would appreciate it if you could reply soon.運(yùn)用 了 I would appreciate it if固定句式。Dear Tom,I am very glad to learn from the Internet that you are looking f

13、or a friend from China. I have never been to your country, but I would be very happy to be your friend.First, let me introduce myself. Tm 15 years old. Pm a freshman in senior high school. My favorite subject is biology. I want to go to college and finally become a doctor. I like to play football an

14、d basketball. My other hobbies are singing and dancing.It can*t be more happy to receive your e-mail talking about yourself. Trn looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua【解析】此題是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李華的身份寫(xiě)封信。寫(xiě)作背景：你從網(wǎng)上看到一個(gè)名叫Tom的 澳大利亞男孩想交一個(gè)中國(guó)的網(wǎng)友。寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出，屬于提綱類作文，內(nèi)容包括：1）很樂(lè)意和他交朋 友;2）介紹自己;3）希望得到回復(fù)。提示中的內(nèi)容比擬泛

15、泛，需要適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充。此題對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求 較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要 包括。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí) 也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次?！军c(diǎn)評(píng)】本篇作文要點(diǎn)齊全，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，條理清晰，應(yīng)用了較多的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯，熟練地使用了語(yǔ)句間 的連接成分，使整個(gè)文章結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，很好地完成了寫(xiě)作任務(wù)。例如：I am very glad to learn from the Internet that you are looking for a friend from

16、China.運(yùn)用 了不定式作原因狀語(yǔ)，賓語(yǔ)從句；I have never been to your country, but I would be very happy to be your friend.運(yùn)用 了轉(zhuǎn)折并列句；First, let me introduce myself.運(yùn)用 了祈使句；It cant be more happy to receive your e-mail talking about yourself. 運(yùn)用 了 it 作形式主語(yǔ)。Dear David,Hope this letter finds you well. Knowing that you are

17、coming to China next month, I am writing to recommend a city to you.Recognized as Venice in the east, Shaoxing attracts tens of thousands of tourists from home and abroad every year. A -minute drive will take you from Xiaoshan International Airport to the ancient city to explore its beauty. What wil

18、l amaze you most are the ancient buildings and bridges dating back to over 3,000 years. Having a taste of local cuisine and wandering along the ancient allies will be an unforgettable experience for you.Hopefully, my recommendation will be helpful. Wish you a pleasant journey in China!Yours,Li Hua【解

19、析】此題是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李華的身份寫(xiě)一封信，推薦一個(gè)適合英國(guó)朋友David旅游度假 的城市。寫(xiě)作背景：你得知英國(guó)朋友David將于下個(gè)月來(lái)中國(guó)旅游。寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出，屬于提綱類作文， 內(nèi)容包括：1）推薦城市；2）推薦理由。提示中的內(nèi)容比擬泛泛，需要適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充。此題對(duì)于考生的綜合能 力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn) 都需要包括。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式， 同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。【點(diǎn)評(píng)】本篇作文要點(diǎn)齊全，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，條理清晰，應(yīng)用了較多的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)

20、和詞匯，熟練地使用了語(yǔ)句間 的連接成分，使整個(gè)文章結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，很好地完成了寫(xiě)作任務(wù)。例如：Knowing that you are coming to China next month, I am writing to recommend a city to you,運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞作原因狀語(yǔ)，賓語(yǔ)從句；What will amaze you most are the ancient buildings and bridges dating back to over 300 years. 運(yùn)用 了 主語(yǔ)從句,Having a taste of local cuisine and wandering

21、 along the ancient allies will be an unforgettable experience for you.運(yùn)用 了動(dòng)名詞作主語(yǔ)。 10.Have a Wonderful School LifeWith exchange students becoming new members, our school has taken on a new look. However, they are facing a number of challenges, like feeling lonely, worrying about schoolwork and being

22、unfamiliar with campus.As the chairman of the Students* Union, Id like to give some suggestions. To overcome the difficulties, on the one hand, it would be better for exchange students to make friends with their Chinese classmates, sign up for some school communities, so that they will get used to t

23、he new environment. On the other hand, Chinese Salon is a good place for them to visit in their spare time.We do hope every exchange student can lead a fantastic and wonderful life in our school.【解析】此題是一篇應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作，要求考生以校學(xué)生會(huì)主席李華的身份在校英語(yǔ)報(bào)上發(fā)表一篇英語(yǔ)文章。 寫(xiě)作背景：這學(xué)期，你校來(lái)了一些英美國(guó)家的交換生，由于語(yǔ)言文化方面的差異，他們還不太能適應(yīng)新的 學(xué)習(xí)生活環(huán)境。寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)

24、已經(jīng)給出，屬于提綱類作文，內(nèi)容包括：1）交換生目前面臨的困難：感覺(jué)孤獨(dú), 擔(dān)憂學(xué)業(yè)，對(duì)校園不熟悉等等；2）提出合理建議：和中國(guó)學(xué)生交朋友，加入學(xué)校社團(tuán)，課余時(shí)間參加漢語(yǔ) 沙龍等；3）期望。提示中的內(nèi)容比擬泛泛，需要適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充。此題對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生 有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注 意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高 級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次【點(diǎn)評(píng)】本篇作文要點(diǎn)齊全，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，條理清晰，應(yīng)用了較多的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯，熟練地使用了語(yǔ)句間 的連接成分，使整個(gè)

25、文章結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，很好地完成了寫(xiě)作任務(wù)。例如：With exchange students becoming new members, our school has taken on a new look,運(yùn)用 了 with 的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)； To overcome the difficulties, on the one hand, it would be better for exchange students to make friends with their Chinese classmates, sign up for some school communities, so that th

26、ey will get used to the new environment. 運(yùn)用 了 it 作形式主語(yǔ)， 目 的狀語(yǔ)從句； We do hope every exchange student can lead a fantastic and wonderful life in our school.運(yùn)用 了 賓語(yǔ)從句，強(qiáng)調(diào)。2）給他提出一些合理的建議；3）祝愿他生活、學(xué)習(xí)愉快。注意：1）詞數(shù)80左右；2）可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。.假設(shè)你是某大學(xué)的學(xué)生李津，你校英語(yǔ)俱樂(lè)部將選舉新一屆副主席，負(fù)責(zé)規(guī)劃、組織俱樂(lè)部的相關(guān)活動(dòng)。 你想報(bào)名參選。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，寫(xiě)一篇競(jìng)選演講稿。1）個(gè)人優(yōu)

27、勢(shì)介紹（如性格、特長(zhǎng)等）；2）組織校內(nèi)活動(dòng)的設(shè)想（如舉辦講座）；3）組織校際交流活動(dòng)的設(shè)想（如舉辦辯論賽）；4）表達(dá)中選的愿望。注意：1）詞數(shù)80左右；2）請(qǐng)勿提及真實(shí)學(xué)校名稱；3）可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫；4）開(kāi)頭、結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：副主席 vice president競(jìng)選run forGood afternoon, my dear friends, My name is Li Jin.Thank you.假定你是李華，學(xué)生會(huì)主席。你校學(xué)生會(huì)邀請(qǐng)美國(guó)外教N(yùn)ancy參加即將舉辦的中秋節(jié)晚會(huì)。請(qǐng)給她 寫(xiě)一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1）邀請(qǐng)出席2）時(shí)間：下周五晚上6:00o

28、3）地點(diǎn)：演講大廳（lecture hall）o4）晚會(huì)內(nèi)容。注意：1）詞數(shù)80左右。2）可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。.假定你是李華，你的美國(guó)筆友Jack來(lái)信向你詢問(wèn)疫情期間（COVID-19 pandemic）如何保持健康。請(qǐng)你 根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給他寫(xiě)一封郵件提些建議。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：1）合理飲食；2）加強(qiáng)鍛煉；3）保持好心態(tài)。注意：1）詞數(shù)：100左右；2）可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3）郵件的開(kāi)頭已寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dear Jack,Im so glad to hear from you! In your letter, you asked me how to keep health

29、y during the COVID-19 pandemic.Yours,Li Hua.假如你是高一同學(xué)李華，上個(gè)月你校舉辦運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，給你的英國(guó)筆友Tom寫(xiě)一封信，介紹學(xué)校運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)。主要內(nèi)容包括以下要點(diǎn)：1）運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)前的準(zhǔn)備工作；2）運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)期間的表現(xiàn)；3）運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)的感想。注意：1）可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)，行文連貫;2）詞數(shù)在80詞左右。.假定你是李華，你從網(wǎng)上看到一個(gè)名叫Tom的澳大利亞男孩想交一個(gè)中國(guó)的網(wǎng)友。請(qǐng)你給他寫(xiě)封信,內(nèi)容包括：1）很樂(lè)意和他交朋友；2）介紹自己；3）希望得到回復(fù)。注意：1）詞數(shù)100左右；2）可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。9,假定你是李華，得知你的英國(guó)朋友

30、David將于下個(gè)月來(lái)中國(guó)旅游。請(qǐng)你給他寫(xiě)一封信，推薦一個(gè)適合 他旅游度假的城市。內(nèi)容包括：1）推薦城市2）推薦理由注意：1）詞數(shù)80字左右；2）可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。10.假定你是校學(xué)生會(huì)主席李華。這學(xué)期，你校來(lái)了一些英美國(guó)家的交換生，由于語(yǔ)言文化方面的差異，他們還不太能適應(yīng)新的學(xué)習(xí)生活環(huán)境。針對(duì)這種情況，你打算在校英語(yǔ)報(bào)上發(fā)表一篇英語(yǔ)文章，內(nèi)容包括:1）交換生目前面臨的困難：感覺(jué)孤獨(dú)，擔(dān)憂學(xué)業(yè)，對(duì)校園不熟悉等等；2）提出合理建議：和中國(guó)學(xué)生交朋友，加入學(xué)校社團(tuán)，課余時(shí)間參加漢語(yǔ)沙龍等；3）期望。注意：1）標(biāo)題已給出；2）適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫：3）字?jǐn)?shù)：80詞Have a W

31、onderful School Life參考范文及解析局部Dear Tom,How are you and your family doing? I feel really sad to learn the news from the Internet that a terrible hurricane struck your city and caused damage.It is reported that a large number of houses now lie in ruins. I am really concerned for everything with you and

32、 your family. Please let me know about your condition as soon as possible. And if you need any help, please let me know. Dont worry, and everything will be fine.Fm looking forward to your early reply.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【解析】此題是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李華的身份寫(xiě)一封郵件。寫(xiě)作背景：你從網(wǎng)上得知你的英國(guó)好 友Tom所在的城市愛(ài)丁堡遭到了颶風(fēng)的襲擊。寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出，屬

33、于提綱類作文，內(nèi)容包括：1）得知颶 風(fēng)信息；2）詢問(wèn)他及家人情況；3）給予撫慰。提示中的內(nèi)容比擬泛泛，需要適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充。此題對(duì)于考生 的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給 出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。盡量使用自己熟悉的 單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。【點(diǎn)評(píng)】本篇作文要點(diǎn)齊全，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，條理清晰，應(yīng)用了較多的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯，熟練地使用了語(yǔ)句間 的連接成分，使整個(gè)文章結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，很好地完成了寫(xiě)作任務(wù)。例如：I feel really sad to learn the n

34、ews from the Internet that a terrible hurricane struck your city and caused damage.運(yùn)用 了 不定式作原因狀語(yǔ)，同位語(yǔ)從句；It is reported that a large number of houses now lie in ruins.運(yùn)用 了 主語(yǔ)從句；Please let me know about your condition as soon as possible.運(yùn)用 了 祈使句；And if you need any help, please let me know.運(yùn)用 了 條件狀語(yǔ)從句

35、，祈使 句；Dont worry, and everything will be fine.運(yùn)用 了祈使句,并列句。Dear Oliver,How is everything going?Im writing to ask for your suggestions and help because Im planning to start a fitness club in our school. I know you were in charge of the fitness club in your school and have rich experience in starting a

36、nd running a club. Would you please tell me how to start our club? What club events could we hold? I hope you will help my team bygiving us your valuable ideas.Thank you so much for your time and support in advance. Fm looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【解析】此題是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李華的身份寫(xiě)封郵件給你的交換生朋友Oli

37、ver,尋求他的意見(jiàn)和 建議。寫(xiě)作背景：你計(jì)劃在你校組建健身俱樂(lè)部。寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出，屬于提綱類作文，內(nèi)容包括：1）寫(xiě) 郵件的目的；2）希望得到的幫助和支持；3）表示感謝。提示中的內(nèi)容比擬泛泛，需要適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充。此題對(duì) 于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。需要注意緊扣文章主 題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。盡量使用自己 熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次?！军c(diǎn)評(píng)】本篇作文要點(diǎn)齊全，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，條理清晰，應(yīng)用了較多的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯，熟練地使用了語(yǔ)句間 的連接成分，使整個(gè)文章結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，

38、很好地完成了寫(xiě)作任務(wù)。例如：Im writing to ask for your suggestions and help because Im planning to start a fitness club in our school. 運(yùn)用 了 原因狀語(yǔ)從句；I know you were in charge of the fitness club in your school and have rich experience in starting and running a club. 運(yùn)用 了 賓語(yǔ)從句； I hope you will help my team by giving

39、 us your valuable ideas.運(yùn)用 了 賓語(yǔ)從句； Thank you so much for your time and support in advance. 運(yùn)用 了祈使句。Dear John,Its normal that we meet with some problems while getting along with others. Fd like to give you some advice on it.Firstly, you should keep calm whenever meeting with something unpleasant. Thi

40、s can help you make right decisions and avoid making things worse. Secondly, I think you can offer to say sorry to your friend if you value your friendship. Im sure he will be thankful to you and youll become better friends.Hope this advice will be helpful to you and wish you a happy life and study.

41、Yours,Li Hua【解析】此題是一篇英文信件,要求考生以李華的身份寫(xiě)一封郵件就好友John所遇到的問(wèn)題給他一些建議。 寫(xiě)作背景：John最近與朋友發(fā)生了一點(diǎn)沖突而大吵了一架，他的朋友因此不理他，這讓他很是煩惱。寫(xiě)作 要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出，屬于提綱類作文，內(nèi)容包括：1）給予他撫慰；2）給他提出一些合理的建議；3）祝愿他生活、學(xué)習(xí)愉快。提示中的內(nèi)容比擬泛泛，需要適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充。此題對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有 很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意 準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)

42、詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次?！军c(diǎn)評(píng)】本篇作文要點(diǎn)齊全，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，條理清晰，應(yīng)用了較多的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯，熟練地使用了語(yǔ)句間 的連接成分，使整個(gè)文章結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，很好地完成了寫(xiě)作任務(wù)。例如：ts normal that we meet with some problems while getting along with others. 運(yùn)用 了主語(yǔ)從句, 省略；Firstly, you should keep calm whenever meeting with something unpleasant. 運(yùn)用 了 時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句；Secondly, I think you can offer

43、to say sorry to your friend if you value your friendship.運(yùn)用 了 賓語(yǔ)從句,條件狀語(yǔ)從句；Im sure he will be thankful to you and youll become better friends.運(yùn)用 了 名詞t生從句, 并歹U句；Hope this advice will be helpful to you and wish you a happy life and study.運(yùn)用了賓語(yǔ)從句，并列句。Good afternoon, my dear friends,My name is Li Jin. I

44、am a person with an outgoing personality. Fd like to run for vice president of the English club.Outgoing and confident, I once served as monitor in high school, so Im expert at management. Im experienced in organising all sorts of activities through which students can exchange ideas and share storie

45、s. To make life on campus more colorful, I plan to hold lectures on learning strategies which can help organise everything in your mind. What*s more, I shall hold some competitions, such as a debate.Fd appreciate it if I could be chosen; I look forward to being chosen as vice president.Thank you.【解析

46、】此題是一篇應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作，要求考生以某大學(xué)的學(xué)生李津的身份寫(xiě)一篇競(jìng)選演講稿。寫(xiě)作背景：你 校英語(yǔ)俱樂(lè)部將選舉新一屆副主席，負(fù)責(zé)規(guī)劃、組織俱樂(lè)部的相關(guān)活動(dòng)。你想報(bào)名參選。寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給 出，屬于提綱類作文，內(nèi)容包括：1）個(gè)人優(yōu)勢(shì)介紹（如性格、特長(zhǎng)等）;2）組織校內(nèi)活動(dòng)的設(shè)想（如舉辦講座）;3） 組織校際交流活動(dòng)的設(shè)想（如舉辦辯論賽）;4）表達(dá)中選的愿望。此題對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考 生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括。寫(xiě)作時(shí) 注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用 高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。【點(diǎn)評(píng)】本篇作文要點(diǎn)齊全，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，條理清晰，應(yīng)用了較多的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯，熟練地使用了語(yǔ)句間 的連接成分，使整個(gè)文章結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，很好地完成了寫(xiě)作任務(wù)。例如：Outgoing and confident, I once served as monitor in high school, so Pm expert at management.運(yùn)用 了形容詞作狀語(yǔ)，因果并列句；Em experienced in organising all sorts of activities through which students can exchange ideas and sh