1、文檔編碼 : CH9M4C9K5W1 HU3O10E9D4D10 ZQ3M2W9I2Y1英語考試作文如何在托福寫作中以簡潔的表達取勝在托福寫作中,很多同學會認為托福寫作中運用長句、 難句或復雜句能夠提升托福文章的語言質(zhì)量,呈現(xiàn)自己深厚的語言功底, 并因此獲得更高的分數(shù)； 因此他們在備考托福時也花了很多精力在長句的練習上,托福考試時也會盡量使用長句；這種想法的確有確定的道理, 由于新托福的寫作科目評分標準中的確有從語法或用詞的多樣性等角度考察語言質(zhì)量的評分項目,同學們假如能夠嫻熟地運用各種句式寫出杰出的長句,的確能給文章增色不少；然而在托福寫作中一味地追求句子的長度有時反而會犧牲句子的可讀性,

2、特別是對一些基礎一般的同學來說,有時生硬地追求長句反而破壞了句子的句法精確性； 本文將為同學們帶來如何在托福寫作中以簡潔的表達取勝并給出如何修改的建議：建議一：托福寫作中防止空洞的單詞和詞組1. 一些空洞的單詞或詞組根本不能為句子帶來任何相關的或重要的信息,完全可以被刪掉；比如下面的句子：When all things are considered, young adults of today live more satisfying lives than those of their parents, in my opinion. 這句話當中的“when all things are con

3、sidered ” 和“in my opinion “ 都顯得余外；完全可以去掉；改為：Young adults of today live more satisfying lives than their parents. 2. 有些空洞和繁瑣的表達方式可以進行替換,例如：Due to the fact that our grandparents were under an obligation to help their parents, they did not have the options that young people have at this point in time.

4、“ due to the fact that” 就是一個很典型的繁瑣的表達方式的例子,可以替換,簡化為下面的表達方式：Because our grandparents were obligated to help their parents, they did not have the options that young people have now. 建議二：托福寫作中防止重復 1. 盡量防止重復使用同樣的詞匯； 或者有的時候雖然詞匯 沒有重復, 但意思卻有重復； 這時候可以做一些簡化的工作；例如下 面這個例子： : The farm my grandfather grew up on

5、was large in size. large 對一個 farm 來說就是 size 方面的 large ,所以 in size 可以去掉,改為：The farm my grandfather grew up on was large. 托福寫作中更簡潔的表達方式為：My grandfather grew up on a large farm. 2. 有時一個詞組可以用一個更簡潔的單詞來替換,例如：My grandfather has said over and over again that he had to work on his parents farm. 這里的 over and over again 得更為簡潔：就可以改為 repeatedly ,顯My grandfather has said repeatedly that he