高一英語(yǔ)文改錯(cuò)系列二）原創(chuàng)精華(有案解析）第一篇DearLily,I’mveryhappilygetletter.Ireceiveitafterschooltoday,andnowmetellyousomethingaboutmyhobbies.IlikeIswimeveryinYouEnglandrealhot.IlikeIreadkind.Ireadtwothreebooksaweek.Ilikefor，Mickey.isbiglotofweekendsweoftengoforlongwalklakenearmyWellarehobbies.mfowardsoon.,Mary第二篇DearIwillintroduceSunshineforIttowninBeijng.Itonly40gothecenterbysubway.TherelittleairpollutiontherethaninotherofisshoppingmallsinSunshineYoufindkindsthere.IfwantStarShoppingbuttherearewesternIfyoulikeBeijingOpera,yougotheWhatdolikeSunshineMom?IyouandDadwillforavisitsomeandstaythere.BestYours,Tom第三篇Petertwo-SammyAnnie.lovesverytoomuchandusuallytoher,butsometimessomethinghappymayOneSaturdaySammyandAnnieareinthegarden.TheirmotherSuddenlybegantocryranintothekitchenwithbrokentoyMrs”Whyarecrying,Annie?“Sammyit,Anniecrying“didhe”herasked.Anniestoppednotanswerfora.Thenshe”Ihimonwithit.Hear,Mrswhole第四篇Thehaveparentsfortripforthewithfriends.TheyFridaymorning,lefthome.Thateveningthefathercarseemovie.TheyAftermovie,theybacktothecar.TheyatTheywerefixtheTheirparentsbackSundaythetabouttoo.Theoutincar.heback,hewassurpringfamily,“droveintothebackofcaronThursdayitisfixedwell!第五篇1

thereaboynamingSimaheplayedwithsomebiginofboywantedhimselfintank.thoughtsomebodycouldfindhimifhidinAnddidntknowthewasfullofwater.Whenclimbedtop,intobank.TheboysButSimaGuangt.stoodhegoodidea.abreaktank.Inthisway,SimaGuang第六篇LastIaanimalhospitaldoctorsthere.Ihospitalinthemorning,therealreadymuchthefoodwater,andevengivingkissesonheads.Atfirst,lookedwithfrightingeyes.Asaytothem,teverythingwillbeOK.IdogIworkedtsureIdidnthurthim.Ihewerejusttryinghelphim.Itwasadayandworkmademetired,andIveryIknewIAndtheIlovedhimenjoyedwithlove!第七篇youMogreatwriterfromChina?theman.Heisshorttall.reallyGuanMopenItmean“”.HewasShangdonginFebruarylivesinBeijing.HejoinedinPLAin1976.Hewritinghewas26storiesverywell.Andhishandwrite.Hehasmanytheyverywininin2012.areallhim.第八篇TomfishtoodaybroughtfishhomeandwentWhenwifefish,himself“Ieinthethefishwasntwifesaid,yourateit.ButshegaveTomforTomwasveryangrily.hewentashopwithhiswife.Heweighedthecatshophiswifeand,“fishweighcatkiloMyfishsee,whereis”第九篇tellyousomethingaboutmydogSnoopySnoopyanAmericanisveryHeatstrangers.Itsgreatfunplaywithhim.IteachplayNowheplaymanykindgames.IfIsay“goto”,hegoesbedliesdown.IfI“playbasketball,hegoescatchaballandputitintoabasket.If“dancewithus”hemusic.“singsong?”askOfcoursehecan.hedoessingin.Sowhensings,canhim.第十篇rules.IninAsia,canttalkaloud.IninAmericalookforwell.Theyshouldcovertheoneruleisthehavewearuniformsweekday.Howerer,manystudentsdontlikeschooluniformssotheythinkmostuglyinworld.TheschoolsdonttheirownatSomestudentsbeautifulpicturesortheirstarsondontwantthesameclothes.dothinkofuniform?短文改錯(cuò)答案：第一篇第句happily改happy.動(dòng)詞后用形容詞作表語(yǔ)2第句receive改為由間狀語(yǔ)可知，表示的作發(fā)生在過(guò)，故用一般過(guò)去時(shí)3第句：去掉to.let為使役動(dòng)詞跟不帶的不定式作賓語(yǔ)補(bǔ)足語(yǔ)sb.sth.讓人做某事第句改really.2

修飾形容詞用詞。第句kind改此處是可數(shù)名詞有different修復(fù)數(shù)。第句改or.“two可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)”是固定用法，意為“兩.處示“我一周讀兩三本書(shū)第句：for改為with.with..“與.玩耍固定用法。第句前afor散，是固定短語(yǔ)。第十句改為my.由句可知此處表示“我”的愛(ài)好，故第二句改Looktosth.“盼做某事”是固定用法。第二篇第句for改sb.為人介紹”是定用法。2第三句去第二個(gè)后表示交通工具的名詞用第句little改由后面的than可知用比較級(jí)第句改為本句be句動(dòng)的形式應(yīng)與其后主語(yǔ)shoppingmalls致are.第句：souvenir改可名詞souvenir前kinds修用數(shù)。6第句want后加to.wanttosth.“要做某事”是固定用法7第句：but改為逗后的句子進(jìn)一步講述StarShoppingMall的情況，故用連詞and.第句：改Howyoulike...?你為怎樣？”是固定句式。第句改為此應(yīng)與全文時(shí)一致，用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。第十句：real改為修動(dòng)詞用詞。第三篇第句：去掉“非常固短語(yǔ)too余。2第句：happy改為由but可知，此處表示“但有時(shí)候會(huì)發(fā)生不開(kāi)心的事第句改為由間狀語(yǔ)Saturdaymorning可去進(jìn)行時(shí)第句改to與是兩個(gè)相繼發(fā)生的動(dòng)作，故用第句sad改sadly.此處表示“傷心地哭飾動(dòng)詞crying副詞第句them改it.此處指代上文提到的toyhorse,用第句cry改crying.“停止做某事”是固定用法。第句：second改可數(shù)名詞前afew修，用復(fù)數(shù)。第十句head前the.表“打人的身體某部位”時(shí)，表示身體部位的名詞前要the.第一句：Hear改Hearing.MrsPeter與hear是動(dòng)關(guān)系故用現(xiàn)在分詞。第四篇第句：去掉第一個(gè)trip“旅行”是固定短語(yǔ)，多。第三句：earlier改此處沒(méi)有比較意義，只表早早出”故用原級(jí)。第句改此處表“們父親的車(chē)故用名詞所有格形式第句：改此afer是介詞，后跟動(dòng)名詞形式。5第句：第一個(gè)the改泛指“一個(gè)大洞定冠詞6第八句：fix前to.todo”要求某人做某事”是固定用法7第句come改講過(guò)去發(fā)生的事情時(shí)，用一般過(guò)去時(shí)。第句so改為because,他們很害怕”是“沒(méi)有告訴父母”的原因，故用because引導(dǎo)從句。9第一句：改surprised.主語(yǔ)是人表人感到驚奇的用意“令人驚奇的10第一句改為my.這句話是父親說(shuō)的，所以應(yīng)是有人撞了“我的”車(chē)尾部，故用my.第五篇第句掉where.本句是一個(gè)there句where多。2第句改boy與是被動(dòng)關(guān)系，故用過(guò)去分詞。3第句：boy改boys.后跟可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)4第句a改為the,特指前面提到的tank,用5第句：改有下文可知，此處表示“沒(méi)有人能找到他用nobody.6第五句：And改為But.此表示“但是他不知道缸里面盛滿了水”前后句是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，故用7第七句：ask后for.askforhelp“求幫助”是固定短語(yǔ)第句hardly改為hard.修動(dòng)think用詞表示“仔細(xì)考慮”意義hardly意“幾乎不，幾乎沒(méi)有9第一句：改broke.And連接兩個(gè)并列謂語(yǔ)，形式應(yīng)一致；由pickedup可，用broke.第十三句：How改What.感句的中心詞是名詞，故用what引。第六篇第句a改第句：改為第句：frightening改為frightened4第五句：say為第句改為carefully第句前第句：第二個(gè)改