Module6Unit1AletterofsuggestionSamplewriting1DearCommitteeMembers,Iwishtomakeasuggestionaboutakindofarttoputintoournewartgallery.Ourdistrictiswell-knownforpaper-cuttingandthepeopleareveryskilledatit.Atthemomentthesepeopledonothaveanywheretodisplaythevarietyandskilloftheircraftsmanship.Iftheskillislost,theremaybenorecordofit.Thegallerywould

providethemwithanopportunitytopreservethisskill.Ifyouweretoallowthemtodisplaytheirexpertisehere,Ibelievewecouldmakeourdistrictfamousandencouragemoretouriststocomehere.Ihopeyouwillconsidermysuggestionfavorably.

Yoursfaithfully***Ourdistrictiswell-knownforpaper-cuttingandthepeopleareveryskilledatit.---1.skillofworkersAtthemomentthesepeopledonothaveanywheretodisplaythevarietyandskilloftheircraftsmanship.---2.noothergalleryIftheskillislost,theremaybenorecordofit.---3.theremaybenorecord1、2、3點(diǎn)強(qiáng)調(diào)建藝術(shù)館的必要性Thegallerywouldprovidethemwithanopportunitytopreservethisskill.---4.preservetheskillIfyouweretoallowthemtodisplaytheirexpertisehere,Ibelievewecouldmakeourdistrictfamousandencouragemoretouriststocomehere.---5.famous&moretourists4、5點(diǎn)強(qiáng)調(diào)建藝術(shù)館的益處Samplewriting2DearCommitteeMembers,Iwishtomakeasuggestionaboutthekindofartworkthatshouldgointoournewgallery.AsIhavecarefullyresearchedthesubjectandhavehadmanydiscussionswithresidentsinourdistrict,Ibelievemysuggestionwillbepopularwithmostpeople.Ihavediscoveredthatwehavemanyfineartistsinourdistrict.Wehavemanypainters,bothmodernandtraditional,somesculptorsandafewexcellentpotters.Wealsohaveagroupofpeoplewhomeetregularlytopractisetraditionalfolkart.Atpresent,noneofthesegroupshaveaplacetodisplaytheirwork.Thegallerywouldprovidesuchaplaceandwouldhelppeopleinthedistricttolearnmoreaboutourartists.Ibelieveagalleryoflocalartcraftwouldencouragetheartistsandwouldalsomakeothersproudofourlocaltalent.Idohopeyouwillconsidermysuggestion.Yoursfaithfully,一、篇章結(jié)構(gòu)及內(nèi)容（一）首段：表明寫作意圖。簡潔、精煉。（二）主體段落：1.要點(diǎn)全面：包括給出的（和要求擴(kuò)展的）建議內(nèi)容和理由。2.條理清晰：要點(diǎn)清晰，順序合理，之間要有連接詞或過渡語；理由充分，與建議內(nèi)容之間有必然的因果關(guān)系。3.合情合理：建議內(nèi)容要入情入理，有合理性和說服力。4.禮貌得體：語言要委婉禮貌，使人易于接受，不能寫成批評、命令或投訴信。（三）尾段：希望對方接受建議，并能對其有所幫助。二、時態(tài)：多用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時。

常用套語A．建議信開頭常用句式

1.Iamwritingtoyouforthepurposeof…2.Youhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardto…andI’lltrytomakesomeconductivesuggestions.3.Iknowyouhavetroublein…afterreadingyourletter.4.Iwishtomakeasuggestionabout…B.表達(dá)建議（body）1.first,firstofall,firstly，secondly…then,afterthat,intheend,finally;Meanwhile,what’smore/besides/moreover…Consequently/therefore,asaconsequence/asaresult...2.Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould…3.Iwouldliketosuggest/recommendthatyou(should)…4.IfIwereyou,Iwould…5.Inmyopinion,itwouldbewiseto…6.Whenitcomestosuchasituation,Iwouldliketosuggestthatyou(should)…7.Itwouldbeagoodideaifyoucould…C.建議信結(jié)尾常用句式

1.Thankyouforyourconsideration.Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals/suggestions/practical/useful/helpful/beneficial.2.Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceintoaccount/consideration.3.Iwillbemorethanhappytoseeimprovementsinthisregard.4.Ifeelthatitwouldbebeneficialifyousticktoit.假如你叫孫軍，是恩施高中的學(xué)生，要給市長寫一封信，反映學(xué)校門前交通擁擠現(xiàn)象，包括以下要點(diǎn)：參考詞匯:穿行threadone’sway天橋overpass問題建議學(xué)校和一所小學(xué)毗鄰，對著大街，高峰期交通繁忙；加之孩子小,家長接送。交通更擁擠；學(xué)生過街在車輛中穿行危險。政府應(yīng)采取措施,如修天橋等。第一步：審題養(yǎng)成重視審題的習(xí)慣。雖然基礎(chǔ)寫作題是半封閉性的，但審題仍然十分重要。現(xiàn)以樣題為例，談?wù)勅绾螌忣}：思考的問題樣題分析第幾人稱？（person）文章的題材是什么？要寫的文章主題是什么(topic)怎樣安排信息點(diǎn)的順序？

(order)動作是什么時候發(fā)生的？(時態(tài))(when)第一人稱建議信建議原因建議內(nèi)容說理邏輯性一般現(xiàn)在時適當(dāng)運(yùn)用模板DearBob, I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowto

(引出主題). Hereareafewsuggestions.First,itisimportantto

.Then,italsohelpsto

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.(此四句不同的句式提出建議) Asto

,Isuggest

(有時根據(jù)需要具體到某一反面).Inaddition,

(其他建議).I'msure

(預(yù)測可能的結(jié)果，給對方以行動的信心和決心). I'mlookingforwardto

(表達(dá)愿望).Sincerelyyours,LiHua第二步：搜索相關(guān)詞組或句型

問題建議1.學(xué)校和一所小學(xué)毗鄰，對著大街，高峰期交通繁忙；2.加之孩子小,家長接送，交通更擁擠；3.學(xué)生過街在車輛中穿行危險。政府應(yīng)采取措施,如修天橋等。

學(xué)校與一所小學(xué)毗鄰,對著大街standnextto…primary…face/befacedwith…themainstreet…Ourschoolstandsnexttoaprimaryschool,facedwiththemainstreet.推薦句型：非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)Standing/Locatednexttoaprimaryschool,ourschoolisfacedwith/facesthemainstreet.Next

toaprimaryschoolstandsourschool,facedwith/facingamainstreet.倒裝It’scrammedwithcarsduringtherushhours.高峰期交通繁忙…..traffic….duringtherushhoursDuringtherushhours,therearesomanycarsandbusesgoingontheroadthat…Duringtherushhours,thereisalotoftraffic.so….that…with結(jié)構(gòu)Withsomanycarsandbusesgoingontheroad,…

加之孩子小,家長接送,交通更擁擠send…to…,fetch….,

非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)….Manyparentssendtheiryoungchildrentoschoolandfetchthemhome,whichmakesthetrafficheavier.Manyparentssendtheiryoungchildrentoschoolandfetchthemhome,makingthesituationmoreserious.,which….加之孩子小，家長接送，交通更擁擠What’smore,…pickup….make….Tomakethings

worse/what’sworse,manyparentscomingtopickuptheirchildrenmakethestreetmorecrowded.Inaddition/Additionally/What’smore,parentsoftenattendtheirkidstoschool,resultinginmoreserioustrafficjams.Whatmakesthingsworseisthatchildrenhavetobepickedupbytheirparentsowingtotheiryoungage.

學(xué)生過街在車輛中穿行危險threadone’sway，whendoingItisdangerousforthestudentstothreadtheirwayamongbusesandcarswhencrossingtheroad.固定句型Itis+adj.for…todo….Studentsarerisking

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tothreadtheirwayamongcars.潤色小建議2.Someareexposedtodangerwhencrossingtheocean/seaofcars.

靈活運(yùn)用其它的短語進(jìn)行意譯：

適當(dāng)增加形容詞和副詞：itisextremelydangerous，itisofgreatdanger政府應(yīng)采取措施,如修天橋等。suggest/suggestion,

takesteps/measures/actiontodo…suchasMysuggestionisthatthegovernmentshould…表語從句固定句型Itishightimethat…(虛擬語氣)Itishightimethatrelevantauthoritiestooksomemeasureslikebuilding…Isuggestthatthegovernmentshouldtakemeasuressuchasbuildinganoverpass.簡單句1.Inordertoreleasethestressoftrafficproblems,…潤色小建議2.Aimedatsolvingtheseproblems,thegovernmentshould…A.適當(dāng)添加一些意思（過渡句）3.Seeingthesematters,neverwillIstopurgingourgovernmenttotakesomemeasures.Forthesakeofimprovingthequalityoftraffic,itissignificanttobuild…B.添加形容詞和副詞Istronglysuggest…,active/effectivemeasures第三步.連句成文但要注意：篇章的連貫性Nexttoaprimaryschoolstandsourschool,facingamainstreet.___________,it’scrammedwithcarsduringtherushhour._______________childrenhavetobepickedupbytheirparentsowingtotheiryoungage.___________,it’sofgreatdangerforthestudentstogothroughthetraffic._________________,itishightimethatrelevantauthoritiestooksomemeasureslikebuildinganoverpass.A.AsaconsequenceB.AccordingtothephenomenonstatedaboveC.WhenitcomestotrafficjamsD.WhatmakesthingsworseisthatA.C.D.B.反面范例反面范例反面范例不推薦字體優(yōu)秀作文范例優(yōu)點(diǎn)：運(yùn)用therebe句型，介詞短語，從句，非謂語，套用句式等來提亮句子，使得文章更彰顯內(nèi)涵和語言功底。優(yōu)秀作文范例優(yōu)點(diǎn)：該考生最大的特色是運(yùn)用了大量的高級詞匯等來提亮句子，使得文章更彰顯深厚的語言底蘊(yùn)。

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